Larxene12 86 Posted March 10, 2010 [align=center] Darkness in you heart; Swallows you up; You may not know who you you even are; It will change you; The person you used to be is nowhere to be seen; The darkness has already eaten you up; No-one to go too; People tick you off more often; No-one hears you out; People who used to make you happy; Make you mad; Darkness makes you hurt yourself; Darkness has already gotten you.[/align] Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Sorage55 10 Posted March 10, 2010 *squeel* EXCELLENT PIECE OF LITERATURE!!! IT INSPIRES ME TO WRITE MY OWN! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Antrium 10 Posted March 10, 2010 That is so true, you win in my book! 5 stars, two thumbs up, applause, A++++. I think you get the point. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Eterna 274 Posted March 10, 2010 how beautiful......dont get me feeling Larxie...or I keel u.... I'm only joking of course, nice poem <3 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Larxene12 86 Posted March 10, 2010 o.o errrr I thought this was bad; I just wrote down how I've been feeling lately... then put it in center alignment and in dark purple... <.> thank you all though~! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Antrium 10 Posted March 10, 2010 o.o errrr I thought this was bad; I just wrote down how I've been feeling lately... then put it in center alignment and in dark purple... <.> thank you all though~! Ok if you find this crappy! This is the best poem I have read in a long time. It like pwns what I do, what Sorage55 does, what everybody does. Sorry it just does. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Larxene12 86 Posted March 10, 2010 awww~! thank you <3 but; I wouldn't say that it 'pwns' what you and sorage55 does! My poem is in the same pool with everyone else's, we are all good in our own way~! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Sorage55 10 Posted March 11, 2010 Well if it leads to pwning then I guess the Shakespeare sonnet I found in my readings was the most ancient KH pwn of all -_- its posted in the writing section of course. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites