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Just a small update for the ones who are following this story; I am still continuing it, but I haven't had time to write as of late. I'm also in the process in watching the Disney movies which I will include in the story eventually. I hope you all will be patient. No promises, but I hope to get another chapter up before February 1st.

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This chapter is quite long, over 32 pages, I believe, but I made breaks somewhere in the middle of it. I tried to stick with the original story as much as I could, but still having Kingdom Hearts elements in it. If you want, I'd appreciate a small review if you want to. It doesn't need to be a paragraph even, just a part you liked/didn't like or something. You don't need to, but criticism lets me know how I'm doing and helps me improve. I'm not the best writer in the world, but enjoy this next chapter anyway.

 

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Chapter 3

 

 

Being a toy turned out to be harder than expected, or at least pretending to be; the trio stayed in this world for a few days, trying to fix the order of it by having Woody accept and make friends with Buzz Lightyear. There was little success. Sora had a theory that Woody was the one who attracted the Heartless on their first day here, and it would only get worse should they ignore it. The gang’s primary mission was to focus on only Xehanort, but Sora just couldn’t abandon someone in need. It would be dreadful to see someone who was truthfully a good person be sucked into the darkness they accidentally lead themselves to.

 

The situation wasn’t getting any better, either. As the days went by, Sora, Donald, and Goofy witnessed the theme of the room changing from having Woody-themed blankets and posters to Buzz-themed. It was having a definite effect on the cowboy, and was slowly beginning to become harder to reason with him. Sora was beginning to run out of ideas as to how to clear Woody’s mind, and to get him to become more acquainted with Buzz Lightyear and to see that he was only overreacting. Woody wouldn’t listen to them, and the more they asked, the more Woody began to ignore them. After all, Sora and the others gained as much popularity as Buzz.

 

That was the biggest problem they were experiencing. The other was the fact the toys needed to remain motionless each time their owner Andy, or anybody else of normal size, came into the room, as people were apparently not suppose to know toys were actually alive. It was a confusing law of this world, but laws aren’t suppose to be broke, as the consequences could be dire. Sora made sure he and his two friends weren’t ever noticed by Andy, since Sora’s biggest concern with becoming a favorite of Andy’s would be knowing he would be heartbroken when the time to leave would come.

 

Whatever minor thoughts he had were deafened with finding a solution to this world’s problem, and decided for now that he would keep an eye on Woody from afar until the right time to once again confront him arrived. When that would be, Sora hoped it would be soon, as it he has been here for longer than they should have been.

 

“Poor Woody.” Sora said aloud to himself, his voice filled with worry. “He’s been taking everything so hard, and it’s starting to show. He hardly talks to anybody, and he spends most of his time yelling at Buzz. Do you guys think he’ll be okay in the end.”

 

“Checkmate.” Donald triumphantly shouted at Goofy, moving his chess piece one last time.

 

“Gawrsh, you’re really good at this.” Goofy complimented, although this was Donald’s only victory out of all their previous rounds of the game. “How about one more game?”

 

“Guys!”

 

Donald and Goofy turned their attention to Sora, being oblivious of his words. Goofy scratched his head apologetically. “Sorry, Sora. Didya say somethin’?”

 

“This is serious, you two!” Sora exclaimed, urging the importance of solving Woody’s dilemma. “If we wait too long, it’ll be too late to save Woody. He might turn into a Heartless!”

 

“We haven’t forgotten, if that’s what you’re shouting about.” Donald reassured Sora as he waved his hand at him. “Things have been really slow, and no Heartless aside from that first batch haven’t appeared in forever. That should mean everything is fine for now.”

 

“Yeah, for now.” Sora emphasized. “What happens when they DO start popping up again? We have to act now before it’s too late. We aren’t staying her for a vacation.”

 

“We know that. There isn’t a whole lot to do when you’re pretending to be an action figure; everything is bigger than you.” Donald wasn’t concerned about anything at the moment, but Sora was right about needing to solve this problem that was now on their shoulders. It should be a regular routine by this point, now that the magician thought about it. It was good that they had met Sora, as he was both his and Goofy’s motivator. They might have given up their quest to find King Mickey long ago had it not been for Sora being at their side when he was most needed, and that was the entire journey. The same could be said for Donald and Goofy being Sora’s motivator as well.

 

“But you have a point.” Donald finally admitted, now helping Goofy put away the chess pieces now that their next goal was set. “Go on ahead and see what Woody is up to. We’ll catch up.”

 

Sora nodded to confirm him. He turned around and began walking pass the other toys in the room, noticing a few having some supplies in their hands. They disappeared around the corner of the bed, and came back into few without them. Suspecting these were loyal helpers of Buzz, Sora knew Woody couldn’t be that far behind. He went from a quick walk to a light jog as he made his way to the location, and sure enough there was Woody about to begin another argument with Buzz.

 

Buzz appeared to be trying to repair something, that something looking like a cardboard spaceship. Sora then saw Woody pull him out from underneath it by the small skateboard the space ranger was using to work under the ship. Sora didn’t interfere for now, but he would eventually step in if they couldn’t, for once, solve their dispute peacefully.

 

“You listen here, Buzz Lightyear.” Woody stated firmly, pointing his finger at Buzz. “You stay away from Andy, do you hear me? No one, especially you, is going to take him away from me.”

 

Buzz had both a confused and an annoyed expression. He was most likely tired of him constantly picking on him and accusing him of false assumptions. “What are you taking about?”

 

“Are you that blind? Can’t you see it? Are you not paying attention to anything?” Woody exclaimed, his voice slowly becoming louder. “Andy is beginning to think you are the better toy, but he’s known me longer than you. I want you to stop! Now, do we have to do this the easy way, or the hard way?”

 

Buzz swung his legs off of the skateboard and quickly stood himself up, and afterwards spun his body to face towards Woody. “Don’t even think about it, cowboy.”

 

“Oh yeah, tough guy!?” Woody slapped a button on the side of Buzz’s helmet, causing it to retract into his suit. Immediately, Buzz began to choke, and looked like he couldn’t breathe. Normally, Sora would’ve instantly taken action at the scene, but looking at Woody’s expression at it took place, he thought otherwise. Woody had a face in a manner that he couldn’t believe that Buzz was even doing this, and Sora understood why; they were toys, and toys didn’t need to breathe to begin with.

 

Still, the scene lasted for another few seconds until Buzz realized that he wasn’t in danger. He looked puzzled for a moment before standing back up from the ground and glaring at Woody angrily. “How dare you open a spaceman’s helmet on an uncharted planet! My eyeballs could have been sucked from their sockets!”

 

Still glaring at Woody, Buzz summoned his helmet again, with Woody looking at him in astonishment. “Do you really believe that you’re the Buzz Lightyear? Oh, and I thought it was an act this entire time! Hey look, everybody, it’s the real Buzz Lightyear!”

 

Buzz cocked an eyebrow at him, picking up that the cowboy was clearly making fun of him. “You’re mocking me, aren’t you?”

 

“Oh, of course not. Why would I do such a-Buzz look, an alien!”

 

“Where?” Buzz spun around, suspecting trouble where Woody pointed, only to here the toy burst into hysterical laughter, clutching his side as he tried to stop himself from laughing too much. Buzz wasn’t amused in the slightest. He looked at Woody as he rolled on the floor, and was about to take action on his immaturity, but everyone was interrupted by the sound of more laughter, a more sinister laughter.

 

Sora took note that everyone around him shuttered in fear, some huddling with others for comfort. Why they were so scared by the sound of this voice wasn’t a mystery, as Sora didn’t even know who or where the laughter was coming from, yet he too couldn’t help but felt uneasy listening to it.

 

“It’s Sid.” Sora suddenly heard Slinky announce in a frightened tone, all of the toys now beginning to gather around the window that was above the dresser in the room. Sora, Donald, and Goofy joined them as well, so to see exactly who this character was. Sora himself was expecting to see a truly intimidating person, an appearance to match the voice. While his mind pieced the image in his head, it was quickly ripped apart as he focused his sight at a small backyard, where the other toys were looking. There he saw a boy throwing rocks as an object he couldn’t make out, a dog parking at the same object and tied to a leash. They boy did indeed look intimidating, but didn’t seem as harmless as everyone was making him out to be by behaving like they were in danger. After all, he looked like a normal kid playing, at first glance.

 

“Who is it this time?” Mr. Potato Head asked Woody, who was squinting to see if he could make out the object down below.

 

“I can’t tell. Where’s Lenny?” Woody asked, requesting the assistance of said toy.

 

“Right here, Woody.” Replied a small, blue pair of binoculars, waddling his way to the cowboy. He picked him up and began to observe with better sight at the scene outside. Once finally finding out the identity of the object down below, Woody voiced his concern. “Oh, no. Not another toy soldier.”

 

“What do you mean? What’s he doing to him?” Sora asked, just as much worried as everyone else.

 

“What’s happening up here?” Buzz suddenly asked as well, pushing Sora aside before his question was answered. Woody was reluctant to answer Buzz.

 

“Nothing that has to do with you, just us toys.” Woody grumbled at him, once again looking through the binoculars. Buzz ignored his rejection, taking the binoculars and puling them away from Woody to look through it himself. Scanning the area as well, he too became aware of the situation. “Why is that soldier strapped to an explosive device?”

 

“That’s why. Sid.” Woody began to explain, moving his sight to focus on the child below.

 

“Well, he sure is a hairy fella.”

 

“No, that’s Scud, you idiot! That is Sid.”

 

Woody helped Buzz focus from the dog to the boy, which Buzz no seemed to question their fright. “He sure seems like a happy child.”

 

“He’s anything but one.” Rex chattered as he stepped forward a little. “He tortures toys, just for fun!”

 

“What!? Why would someone want to do that to anybody!” Sora exclaimed. The pure evil in wanting to harm anything for their own desire just begged for ones heart to be engulfed in darkness. Sora could surely guess that Sid’s was stained with it, and at such a young age, as well. Perhaps Sid was beginning to be influenced by Master Xehanort’s darkness? This was the only thought that made Sora even have any hope for this kid. Destroying the life on anybody sickened Sora. “Can’t we go down there and save that toy?”

 

“Yeah, I’d like to see you try.” Woody said rather sarcastically, having no doubt that the toy was doomed. This surely wasn’t the only time they would witness the death of a fellow toy such as themselves.

 

“He’s lighting the fuse!” Lenny suddenly exclaimed, witnessing Sid holding a match up to the rocket tapped on the toy down below. “Hit the deck!”

 

With a few screams, everyone standing at the windowsill jumped away from it, some covering their heads as a loud explosion was heard. Sora’s heart felt like it was stabbed when the noise rang out, guilt of not being able to do anything and sadness knowing that toy was now gone filling it. Everyone lay motionless for a moment, then they all picked themselves up and went to look at the damaged. Sora, looking for any glimmer of hope, tried to see if anything remained from the soldier. Nothing. There was only a small, blackened ditch where the toy once stood.

 

“He’s…gone.” Sora whimpered, staring in disbelieve as Sid once again began to laugh once more. “Not even his heart is there.”

 

“His heart?” Mr. Potato Head questioned, finding such a thought strange to bring up as he and the other toys began to sulk off and mourn to themselves. “Of course there is no heart; toys don’t got any. We’re toys. We’re made of nothing by plastic and string. I don’t even think Sid has one, now that you mention it.”

 

Sora disregarded the statement, as he knew the toy was wrong. Everything could grow a heart if you gave it time. Even Nobodies had them, as he came to learn. Thinking about it, he felt guilty for helping those Organization XIII members further believe that they did not have anything inside them, and that they were emotionless. It wasn’t his fault, as Xemnas was the monster that convinced every single one of them to follow him, in hopes of getting a heart. It made him feel angry knowing they were all deceived, and were taking advantage of to be used for such a horrible plan. Knowing they were just tossed aside as each one fell, Sora at least hoped they were able to regain their normal lives once their Nobodies were slain.

 

Thought everyone was shook up by the event, they tried to move on with their day. Most likely adding another scar to their minds seeing another fallen victim of Sid’s, it was probably hard to not think about it. Still, everyone seemed to be handling it rather well, being used to these events by now. Sora, on the other hand, kept wishing he could have done something, anything, to even give that toy a chance to escape.

 

Later during the day, Andy had come up to play with his toys, more specifically with Woody and Buzz. This didn’t last very long as his mother came up to tell him they were about to go to a place named Pizza Planet, something Andy got excited about. Placing down both of the toys on the dresser, Andy ran out to prepare for the small trip, only to be disappointed when his mother told him he was only allowed to bring one toy once he asked about it. Woody picked up on this quickly, he himself now sitting up with disappointment.

 

“One toy?” he said to himself quietly. It was obvious whom Andy would pick. Sora down below heard this as well, and knew the inevitable would happen just as much as Woody.

 

“Why can’t Andy bring the both of them? I don’t think it would be that much of a problem.” Sora asked, looking up at the dresser, unable to see either toy up top.

 

“Maybe his mom doesn’t want him to loose one of them.” Goofy theorized. “I’m sure that Andy would be quite upset if he found out one of his favorite toys were to disappear when he came back. It’s kinda hard for a kid his age to keep track of two things at once.”

 

“That makes sense. Still, Woody isn’t gonna take it well when Buzz gets picked.” Sora voiced his uneasiness. “Maybe after this, we’ll go talk to him officially. We have to make him understand. C’mon.”

 

The trio began to climb up and make their way to Woody, in hopes of talking some sense into him once everything unfolded. Being chosen to go somewhere outside the house must be a great privilege for any toy, as he rarely seen any of them leave the room. Sora couldn’t relate, but being heartbroken once finding out someone has pushed you aside for someone else just because they seem better must feel horrible. Surely, though, Andy still loved Woody, and if he didn’t he wouldn’t have played with him after getting Buzz, and he was just now playing with the both of them. That could at least tell Woody he still cared.

 

But would Woody listen? He would try to retort to this by saying the despite that, Andy played with Buzz better, and then point out the change of scenery in the room. Andy even removed all of his drawings of the cowboy and replaced them with ones of Buzz. Sora had to try, or the order here might never get fixed.

 

As he reached near the top, Sora could now visibly spot Woody. He was holding a green controller of sorts, something he was about to operate. Beside him, a sleeping RC car of the same color slowly started to wake up as his front wheels were beginning to move slightly. “I don’t see anything.” Buzz called out to Woody, scanning for something behind the dresser.

 

“He’s there, Buzz. Just keep looking.” Woody said in a mischievous way, the RC car suddenly springing to life and zooming towards Buzz. Sora was startled, as he quickly put two and two together; Woody was planning to knock Buzz behind the dresser, so once Andy came back he would only find Woody and bring him along for the ride instead. Sora never would have thought the toy would even think about trying to pull out a plan as devious as this. He could only watch from the sidelines, as he wouldn’t be able to make it in time.

 

However, the attempt failed, as Buzz was able to react in time and roll out of the way, causing the RC car to run into the cork board. Several tacks landed around Buzz, but again escaped harm. A chain reaction now began to happen as the board slowly tipped over, bashing into the globe in front of it and causing that to become loose from its hinges. The globe began to roll towards Buzz, making him scurry back to his feet and run away, only to be stopped by a line of pencils. He lost his balance and fell down, though again he avoided any injury as he moved out of the way. As things seemed to be over, the globe rolled passed Woody and hit the lamp that was to the right of him, causing it to swing around. Woody was able to duck, but Buzz was unaware of it and was smacked by it, making him fall out of the open window.

 

The toys that looked up at this moment gasped and called Buzz’s name in shock, including Woody. In only a few seconds, most of them were gathered around the windowsill, looking down in hopes of seeing Buzz fine down below. They only saw a bush, with Buzz out of sight.

 

They began to panic, and voiced any kind of scenario about the fate of Buzz, the worse one being the possibility that he ended up in Sid’s own yard. If that were indeed true, then he needed to definitely be saved before he was seen there. As they jabbered in worried statements, the RC car revved its wheels to gain the attention of everybody, to tell them what really happened. Rex was the first to notice, and called the others to pay attention to the green car. “Look! I think RC is trying to say something.”

 

“What is he saying?” Slinky asked, Mr. Potato Head stepping in to answer.

 

“He’s sayin’ this was no accident.” Mr. Potato Head said sternly, his eyebrows narrowed. This came as a shock to everybody, several requesting of the toy to further explain. “Buzz didn’t fall down by himself. He was pushed…by Woody!”

 

All of the toys looked over at Woody, who was just as stunned as them when he was accused of this act. He raised his hands up in defense, trying to convince them he didn’t do this on purpose. “Now, now, come on. Do you really think I meant to knock him out the window, Potato Head?”

 

“That’s Mr. Potato Head to you, you jealous buffoon!” the toy barked back, not accepting any casual exchange at this moment of time.

 

“Guys, really. It was an accident. Why can’t you believe me?”

 

Sora stepped in now, trying to save Woody from the rage and to back him up. Even though he saw everything unfold himself, he couldn’t let this happen. After all, while he did try to get rid of Buzz, he didn’t try to get rid of him permanently. “I believe in Woody. You guys have known Woody for so long, and you know he isn’t the type of person to do this kind of thing. There has to be somebody here who still has some faith in him.”

 

“I do!” Slinky announced, only to earn a few glares from the others. Looking for some kind of support, he looked over at Rex. “Right Rex?”

 

Rex nervously rubbed his hands together, not enjoying the spotlight being put on him. “Um, I, uh…I don’t like confrontations.”

 

“It seems to me that Woody just couldn’t stand Buzz anymore.” Mr. Potato Head began. Sora tried to stop him from going on, being that he would convince the toys that Woody was a true bad guy. He would just ignore Sora with his stubbornness. “He couldn’t handle the fact that Andy found a new favorite toy, so you decided to get rid of him. Well, what if he starts to play with me more? You gonna knock me outta the window too?”

 

“I don’t think we should give him the chance.” The piggybank Hamm firmly suggested, toys now beginning to gang up on Woody. Sora didn’t want to do it, but it was his first reaction; he summoned his Keyblade and stood in front of Woody defensively, determined to make everyone back off. He wouldn’t allow friends to hurt friends, no matter the situation.

 

“I can’t believe you guys are going to toss him away like this! You don’t even know the truth, and you’re ready to believe the first thing that comes to your head!” Sora exclaimed at them. “Can’t we all just settle down and figure out what really happened? It isn’t fair to accuse someone for something without proof they did it.”

 

“Proof? Woody was the only one up here with Buzz.” Mr. Potato Head pointed out. “I think that’s all the proof that you need. Unless Buzz himself comes back and tells us what happened, that is the…”

 

A bigger stir was made as Andy was heard calling to his mother, telling her he was going to fetch Buzz before they left. Everyone scattered into hiding, all except Woody who laid back down where Andy had originally placed him. Sora peaked out to observe the scene and watched what was happening. He didn’t want to, as he knew Andy would be devastated after he figured out Buzz was gone. Someone he cared about out of sight, possibly forever. Sora had felt that pain, and was more familiar with it more than he wanted to be. After checking several places around the room, Andy frowned and instead took Woody.

 

Sora had seen it himself; while Woody did intend to get rid of Buzz, he didn’t aim to permanently get rid of him. It really was an accident. He needed to prove that to everyone. But first, he wanted to speak with Woody. “Guys, c’mon. We’re going with them.”

 

“How the heck are we suppose to do that?” Donald asked the boy. “We’re too small to be fast enough. They’ll be gone by the time we get down there.”

 

“Can’t you use some magic? I’m sure you have at least one teleportation spell you learned.” Sora pleaded the magician.

 

“Nothing as advanced that will instantly get you where you want. Only a few feet, and it’s used for protection. I never used it before, though.”

 

“Then use it now!”

 

Donald didn’t hesitate any longer, swinging his wand into the air now and engulfing him, Sora, and Goofy in a ball of light. They instantly were transferred from the small hiding spot they were huddled in to the hallway outside. There, they heard Andy and his mother downstairs, making final preparations before leaving.

 

“They haven’t officially left yet!” Sora told his friends. “We still have time. We just need to get down the stairs and outside, and we should be fine.”

 

He didn’t tell them how they would end up at the bottom of the steps, and simply acted, knowing they would catch on quickly. Running to the base of the railing, he sat down on the part that was jutting out. While a simple pattern for those normal sized, right now it was a perfect way to slide all the way down. Sora had reached the first floor in only a short few seconds, Donald and Goofy following suit. The door was just a crack open, but was wide enough to just barely squeeze through. Someone must have opened it only to go back inside, and thankfully it didn’t completely shut.

 

“Yes! Just a little bit further.” Sora grinned.

 

“Here they come! Hurry!” Goofy announced in a panicked shriek, Andy and his mother being heard heading for the door.

 

No more time to stall. It was now or never, and never wasn’t an option in Sora’s eyes. All they needed to do was make it to the car, wait for someone to open one of the doors, and jump in at the perfect time, without being seen or heard. That would be quite a challenge, as jumping in while someone was still staring at the door would surely mean being spotted. No one can be looking at the door when the three of them enter inside the car. It was the best way.

 

The trio dashed as fast as their legs could carry them, just barely making it under the vehicle and getting out of site as the family behind them exited the house. They waited, keeping a close eye on them as they came closer and began to get themselves situated. Andy hopped inside as his mother prepared to strap in his baby sister, Molly. Sora couldn’t find the opening that he needed. Andy’s door was closed, and his mother was right in front of the other one. They needed a distraction, maybe, but could they do while so small?

 

“Excuse me ma’am!” someone suddenly called, causing Sora to whiz around in the direction of the source. It was Goofy, all the way out in the open. He had thought of a plan, apparently, to get the mother away from the door for a short amount of time. It indeed worked, as she turned her body towards Goofy’s voice. Even better, she began to walk away from the door! Sora and Donald took this chance to run for it, as this opportunity would last only a few seconds. Sora quickly realized something, however, stopping him in his tracks; Goofy wouldn’t make it in time to come with them.

 

Looking back at him, Sora desperately waved for him to join him, avoiding yelling to not bring Andy’s mom back. Goofy merely smiled and motioned Sora to go on without him. It didn’t feel good to just abandon his friend, but Goofy was giving them a chance to complete their mission, while sacrificing his own chance to help. This would only be temporary, but Sora didn’t feel happy about it either way. Still, he didn’t want to ruin Goofy’s plan, and jumped into the car to join Donald.

 

They both hid under the seats, now listening as the door was now shut and the car began to rev on. Goofy was left standing in the now empty driveway, watching as they disappeared out of his sight. He smiled once more, happy to know that his idea didn’t go in vain. Now waiting for their return, Goofy proceeded to return to Andy’s room with the other toys.

 

Only a couple minutes later, the car suddenly stopped, Sora and Donald hearing them say they needed to fill the car with more gas before heading any further, the door being left open. This was perfect, as now they could finally talk to Woody and ask about what happened at the bedroom. They hopped up to the backseats, seeing Woody lying there with his hand on his forehead.

 

“Hey there.” Sora greeted, making themselves known. This caused Woody to look up at them, only to look back up at the opened window on the ceiling. He didn’t seem pleased to see them.

 

“Why are you guys here?” Woody groaned. “You aren’t making anything better around here ever since you came. You guys aren’t nearly as bad as Buzz, but…back at the bedroom; why did you try to defend me? I didn’t do anything for you. We hardly know each other.”

 

“I saw what happened.” Sora began to explain. “I saw you trying to hit Buzz behind the dresser. While I don’t approve of that at all, I did see Buzz get knocked out the window by accident. You wouldn’t harm somebody like that, but your thoughts towards Buzz clouded your judgment. I know someone else that allowed himself to be mislead and walk down the wrong path, and it seemed impossible for him to get back on the right one. He was almost taken by the darkness. He did find the right road to travel, with a little bit of my help, but I don’t want to see that happen to another friend.”

 

“You really consider me as a friend, even after everything I’ve said and done?” Woody asked, sounding more relaxed at hearing he finally had someone who believed in him. “Even though the guys back home like you like they do Buzz, they’ll think you are trying to cover for me. They’re too stubborn to listen. We need Buzz himself to…”

 

As if on cue, Woody saw Buzz’s head peak over the side of the window above, and called out his name in excited relief. Sora was just as surprised to see the toy still alive and well, watching as he joined them all down below. Woody instantly hopped to his feet, thinking he would finally get out of the dilemma he was in, but the look on Buzz’s face suggested otherwise.

 

“You’re okay!” Woody shouted with glee as he held his hands out in disbelief. “Oh, thank goodness! I’m saved! All we need to do is go back to the house and tell everyone what happened, and that it was all a huge misunderstanding! Right, Buzz? Pal…buddy?”

 

“Just so you know, despite your attempt to terminate me, revenge is not something we enforce on my planet.” Buzz told Woody as he ignored his cries of relief. That was certainly good news that Buzz was still handling things maturely as usual, Sora thought to himself. Woody himself sighed in hearing this as well, until Buzz pulled him closer to his helmet. “But we’re not on my planet, are we?”

 

In a timid tone, Woody responded with a quiet, “No?”

 

More quickly than Sora or Donald could react, Buzz tackled Woody out of the opened car, and rolled underneath it in a struggled fight. Sora and Donald followed the brawl, hoping to stop this. Buzz’s suit began to make various electronic sounds as the buttons on his suit were pressed. Buzz succeeded in throwing Woody off of him and into a tire, but Woody wasn’t finished. He only got back up with already exhausted breath and raised fists, intending to settle their antagonistic battle with one another. Sora stepped in now, holding back Woody as Donald held back Buzz.

 

“Cut it out, you two!” Donald demanded of the toys.

 

“Yeah, c’mon! You can’t even talk this out?” Sora added.

 

“What is there to talk about for the toy who stole Andy from me!?” Woody asked in a furious tone.

 

“I have nothing to say either to the person who tried to get rid of my existence.” Buzz continued, only serving to stir up their emotions even more. Everyone suddenly stopped when they heard Andy’s voice announce them finally going to Pizza Planet, and the only way inside the car being slammed shut. They had no more time to react as the car began to drive away. Woody desperately called out to Andy and ran for the car, but figured out quickly it would be impossible to catch up. His arms slumped to the side, knowing that they have been abandoned.

 

Buzz seemed anything but worried, possibly thinking that this was a minor problem with being a space ranger. Sora and Donald felt Woody’s pain, however, as they too had no easy way to return to Goofy back at Andy’s home.

 

“How are we…?” Sora couldn’t finish his sentence, as things have officially gone from bad to horrible, completely skipping worse. Their Gummi ship was back with Goofy as well, and unless he knew what was going on and where they were, there was no way he could find him. Eventually, Yen Sid might send out Riku or even Axel to return him, but not being able to leave the world wasn’t his concern; not being able to help Woody now was.

 

“Aw, phooey…” Donald groaned slouching down beside Sora. “This really wasn’t what we had in mind when we decided to come along and help…”

 

Woody let his emotions get the best of him again, turning around to glare at the unaware Buzz Lightyear, who was speaking into a fake voice recorder. “Great going, Buzz Lameyear! Now, because of you, we’re lost in the middle of nowhere, and Andy moves from his house in two days! This is all your fault!”

 

“My fault!? Well, if you wouldn’t have pushed me out of the window in the first place…!” Buzz instantaneously retorted.

 

“Oh yeah? If you hadn’t showed up in your fancy cardboard box and taken everything important away from me…!”

 

“Don’t you talk to me like that about importance! You jeopardized my entire mission with Star Command!”

 

“You! Are! A! Toy! You aren’t a space ranger fighting evil, you’re just a toy, something a child plays with!”

 

Sora couldn’t stand to this worthless arguing to continue further. Nothing was getting resolved by letting their hate for one another grow any more. He was just as upset about being left all alone at a gas station, but he knew by experience to not let his emotions have a negative effect on someone’s life, especially his own. He now stood between the two of them, planning to end this violent conversation.

 

“Both of you knock it off!” Sora exclaimed, getting right to the point. “What do you think screaming your lungs out at one another is going to solve? Nothing! You’re both wasting your breath with something so pointless that the only thing you’ll end up doing is fighting some more! You two need to peacefully work out your problems, and go from there! Now, let’s calm down and…”

 

Sora looked through the space between two gas pumps and saw an old-looking car. It wasn’t the car that caught his attention, but more the thing attached to the top of it; it was a white rocket, and in red letters it read…

 

“Pizza Planet!” Sora suddenly announced, pointing towards the car. “It can lead us to Andy, and them we can go with him and ride back home!”

 

“Yes! We’re saved!” Woody joyfully cheered along with Sora. “C’mon guys, we have no time to loose now!”

 

“I refuse to tag along with your shenanigans any longer.” Buzz said to them, his statement sounding final. “Now, if you’ll excuse me, I need to continue my mission on my own…without any of you.”

 

This wasn’t good for neither Woody or Buzz. They needed to convince him to join them quickly, and if they took too long the car would eventually drive away. But what could they say that could make him change his mind?

 

“Your space ship is at Andy’s house.” Donald piped up. “You need it to fly back to your planet, right? The only way you can get to it fast is to find Andy, and to get to him you have to come with us and ride to the place Andy went. This car here is the only way to get to him.”

 

Buzz had stopped to listen as soon as Donald mentioned his ship. He raised valid points, as walking back would take much, much longer than it would if something fast (like the car Sora showed everyone) to transport him instead. “I suppose you are correct. In that case, we can’t stall any longer.”

 

Sora’s friend helped him once again. There wasn’t any amount of thanks he could express to both Donald and Goofy to tell them how much he really meant to them. He really would be weak had it not been for the aid of his friends.

 

All four of them dashed for the car, both Sora and Buzz were preparing to climb up the side of the car and sit in the passenger’s seat, while Woody and Donald thought it to be more logical to jump into the back of the car to avoid detection. They had no time to question one another’s motives as they suddenly heard the vehicle spring to life, their decisions becoming final as they split up for now.

 

Sora and Buzz ended up being the ones who picked the right choice, as the entire way to Pizza Planet, the various loose objects in the back ended up sliding all over the place and injuring Woody and Donald. Thankfully for those two, and the high speed the driver was going, the pain didn’t last long as the car was parked. Buzz was in awe when he saw the outside feature of the place have a huge rocket, thinking it to be a real one. Unbuckling him and Sora, he slid open the small window leading to the back of the car to check on Woody and Donald.

 

“Sheriff, strange duck. You two back here?” Buzz called out. He spotted the two clearly dizzy from constant collision with the objects surrounding them, the both of them falling over. “The entrance appears to he heavily guarded. We need to find a way to…”

 

Before he could finish, both Woody and Donald lifted themselves up, but were covered with empty cups and containers. This sparked an idea from Buzz, suggesting they all disguise themselves with these and wait for the moment of opportunity to arrive to enter inside the building. It was surely the easiest and best plan to get inside.

 

They waited beside some debris littered around the area, where they were the least suspicious. As someone walked by the automatic doors a few minutes later, all four of them rushed inside, staying in a straight line to avoid any collision with one another and to not get lost. They occasionally stopped when they heard a pair of children walk by, but for the most part they remained undetected by any wandering eyes.

 

As they made their way to the main area, where the arcade games and prize machines were all lined up, they snuck in between where they were the most dense, only then taking off their disguises. This was when everyone took the chance to see what Pizza Planet was like, and it was no question why Andy was so excited to come here; everything you looked at was full of life, and there was nothing that didn’t have something flashy to get one’s attention. Even things as simplistic as the drink dispensers were creatively made to grab your interest and simply use it, if not to actually drink the beverage. It looked like a spaceport.

 

“Wow!” Sora said in awe, observing almost every detail of the place. “If I could, I’d play ALL of these games! I don’t think that is even possible, just look at how many things there are to play with.”

 

“We’re here to look for Andy.” Woody quickly reminded them. “He has to be around here somewhere.”

 

“Oh yeah. I didn’t forget…” Sora chuckled as he rubbed the back of his head. 

“The sooner the better; this place is too loud.” Donald complained.

 

“There he is!” Woody called to the others, all four of them able to see through the line of arcades and spotting Andy with his mother. “This is perfect! We just have to get him, jump into the basket, and we’ll be set.”

 

Buzz had more important things on his mind; now his own pretend ship that was at Andy’s seemed to be worthless with the amount of rockets present here. “I have no need to locate your chief anymore; there are rockets here that I can use instead. Surely one of them is in a much better condition than my own.”

 

“Buzz, what are you…” Woody had no time to react as Buzz ran off, he, Sora, and Donald giving chase to him. Buzz didn’t know all of these spaceships he was seeing were all merely decorations and designs for the games, but the toy wouldn’t believe them.

 

As they ran, Buzz again stopped to stare in amazement at yet another rocket in the form of a crane machine, only this one caught his eye more than the rest. Just above it, there were flashing letters that said, “Ready for Launch!”. Not bothering to look for any passing people and too eager to get inside the machine, he made a dash for it. Woody followed suit, just barely avoiding someone walking by. Buzz climbed in first, and Woody trailed behind.

 

Sora and Donald had lost them for a few seconds, but managed to find them in time to figure out where they had gone. They, too, were planning to follow behind, only to halt when they seen a sight that instantly spelled eventual trouble. “Sid’s here!” Sora cried out. “We have to warn Woody and Buzz. He might end up…”

 

As Sid walked closer to them, an all too familiar group of enemies showed their dark mugs once again; the Heartless. These creatures had not appeared since their first day in this world, and had almost forgotten about them. Sora couldn’t figure out why they had appeared the first time, but he had thought about the possibility that Sid’s heart was filled with darkness. With that thought, and the Heartless standing before Sora and Donald, it couldn’t have been coincidence for Sid to not attract them.

 

Questions were held off for now, as the Heartless wouldn’t wait for him to compose his thoughts. As swiftly as ever, Sora began to dodge each swipe and reduce some into mere black mists. Donald was able to clear several with his magic. Again, it was like a normal routine for them, second nature even. It was when more powerful versions began to pop up when things started to get slightly rough.

 

“Sid’s darkness is stronger than I thought it would be.” Sora said to himself as he stood for only a few moments, sounding almost sad. “Even if he does hurt people for fun, seeing someone as young as him having any kind of darkness just shows that it can effect anybody.”

 

As the last Heartless was struck down, they stopped appearing only due to Sid walking away from them, and right to the prize machine where Woody and Buzz were inside of. There was no way to warn them about him, but they wouldn’t have any trouble figuring out the danger they were in.

 

“We can’t do anything now.” Sora said to Donald. Although impossible situations have been solved for the boy within only a few short time spans, this time was different. Merely watching, they could only hope that they could remain hidden from Sid. Their wishes were denied, however, as Sora and Donald witnessed both Buzz and Woody being dangled into the air by the electronic claw inside, an excited Sid grabbing them both once they fell into the prize bin.

 

“Oh no…” Sora uttered. They seemed defeated now, but while Sid had found the two toys, an idea came into Sora’s head as he studied what Sid was doing; he was placing them in a bag, something he didn’t bother to zip close after placing the newly claimed toys within it.

 

“Donald, we can run for it and jump into the bag!” Sora quickly informed his friend, who gladly nodded at the boy as the magician tagged along. With just enough time, Sora and Donald joined the two toys inside as Sid prepared to close up his bag, though leaving just enough space to pier outside.

 

“Woody! Buzz!” Sora said, sighing in relief in being reunited with the two toys.

 

“Sora? Did Sid find you too?” Woody asked the boy, his teeth chattering in fright.

 

“No, we came with you guys to make sure you two were safe.” Sora explained to him.

 

“Then I hope you don’t mind seeing the light of day then, cuz once we reach Sid’s house, we aren’t coming back out.” Woody muttered as he crossed his arms in an attempt to stop his shivering.

 

They were all silent the rest of the way, the anticipation of entering the home which belonged to this cruel child not allowing one another to speak. Only when Sid opened the door to his house did they begin to speak again, only instead of words they gasped in terror at what they saw first.

 

A vicious dog began to bark ferociously at Sid’s bag, Sid ordering him to back off and to sit. “Whoa there, Scud.” Sid began, now fumbling through his bag, grabbing a squeaky toy he had won as a prize at Pizza Planet. The dog obediently remained still as Sid placed the toy on his snout. Sid counted down, and when he said go, Scud bit into the toy with one swift movement and violently tore into the poor toy, though went out of sight before the group in the bag could determine the fate of the toy.

 

They had stared with horror at witnessing the annihilation of the toy, only able to remain silent and to sit still. Sora had seen horrible things done to people, but this would be one that would be hard to forget. Sid suddenly shouted for someone named Hanna, which a little girl younger than Sid appeared, holding a doll.

 

“Did my package come yet?” Sid asked rudely to Hanna, who began to play with the doll’s hair.

 

“I dunno.” She quietly answered, in a tone that expressed her disinterest to speak with Sid.

 

“Whaddya mean you don’t know?”

 

“I don’t know.”

 

Being angry at the response, Sid grabbed the doll from Hanna and began to run upstairs, Hanna being heard giving chase and crying out to Sid to give the doll back to her. The boy only ignored her, and soon ran into presumably his bedroom, then slammed it behind him and locked the door. He then heaved the bag onto the bed to leave Sora and the others to watch what Sid would do next.

 

“He’s getting stuff that doctors use.” Sora said aloud.

 

“Time for an…operation.” Sid announced in a sinister tone as he reached for a toy that was lying near him. His body blocked their view, but judging by the noises he was making, he was doing something surgical to the toys, and knowing the nature of the boy the result wouldn’t be good.

 

“Oh, Hanna.” Sid then called out in a singsong, opening the door to show the girl what he had done. It was a grotesque combination of the doll’s body attached to the head of a pterodactyl, something that caused Hanna to scream in horror and then call out to their mother. Sid gave chase to avoid getting into trouble.

 

The four in the bag were left in silence. They couldn’t stay there for long, but they didn’t know what possible dangers were within Sid’s room. By the amount of disturbing posters and decorations scattered about the bedroom, what they would find down below wouldn’t be pleasant.

 

“We’re doomed.” Woody squeaked in fear, being the first to brave the chances of being attacked by whatever lied within the depths of the evil boy’s sanctuary. “I’m getting out of here.”

 

“Woody, wait!” Sora tried to stop the cowboy from going on, but he was already making his way to the door. The toy jumped up and attempted to open the door again, only to find out it was locked. Sora jumped out after him, Donald and Buzz following.

 

At the same time as Woody, they stared at the various toys begin to come into view, each shaped into disturbing features and attached to things that clearly wasn’t theirs to begin with. They were definitely not Heartless, but just as frightening. Even Buzz stood with his mouth gaping in disbelieve. Woody screamed in terror as be scurried back on the bed and gripped onto Sora. “S-S-S-Soraaa!”

 

Sid’s toys began to gather the pieces of the toys the boy had experimented on, beginning to drag each into various directions. It was unknown what they would do to them, but the possible thoughts were best to be left in the back of their heads.

 

Woody couldn’t take it anymore, crawling his way back to the bag to hide. It was the best idea to avoid being seen by any of them and to get dragged off as well. This was their only protection for now, as anywhere else could spell their doom, it now seemed. It was inevitable that the risk of Sid having their way with them would eventually come. They were in mortal danger.

 

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The toys at Andy’s house could only stand at the windowsill as they attempted to search for Buzz, to find some kind of sign that he was okay. They were using a flashlight to help see down below, passing the beam by a bush that began to shuffle. “Buzz! Is that you?” Rex shouted down to the bush, only to be answered by a startled meow of a cat. Frustrated, Rex shouted. “Get out of here Whiskers! You’re interrupting the search-and-rescue!”

 

When the cat was gone, the toys decided to stop for the night, having been searching for Buzz ever since Andy left. “Oh, it’s hopeless. Buzz must really be gone for good.”

 

“Don’t worry, Rex. You can’t give up until you are positive there is no other way.” Goofy reassured, trying to lift the spirits of the dinosaur. Goofy was the one who first suggested in looking for Buzz, with the idea of keeping them occupied until Sora returned with Woody. He believed in them, and knew his friends would return with the answers everyone here needed. “Me, Sora, and Donald have been on many adventures together, and every time it looked like we weren’t gonna make it, we got out a-okay.”

 

“Just forget it.” Mr. Potato Head interrupted the knight, crossing his arms in disapproval. “Why can’t we just face the truth that Buzz is history and Woody is the culprit? We’ve been searching for hours and nothing has turned up. You better be right at your pal Sora going to see what’s up, or else I’m…”

 

All conversations were instantly silenced by the sound of a car, which turned out to be Andy returning home. They had suspected him to come running back in the house, but those thoughts were dashed away when Andy told his mother he couldn’t find Woody. Shock filled the toys, not wanting to think of the possible fate of the cowboy.

 

“Woody’s…gone?” Bo Peep whispered in concern, being in complete disbelieve that perhaps Woody ran away to avoid any more conflict regarding Buzz, and that this could possibly prove Woody really did push him out of the window.

 

“Yah see? I told you he was guilty.” Mr. Potato Head said, no surprise in his voice. “He just couldn’t handle the consequences and ran off. I betcha Sora helped him out too.”

 

As the toys began to walk away, only three remained; Bo Peep, Slinky, and Goofy were the only ones who still had hope for Woody and Sora. Still, they were upset in learning they were nowhere to be found. “I hope he’s okay. Sora too.” Slinky voiced his worry.

 

“We can’t give up on them yet.” Goofy said confidently despite the situation. “There hasn’t been a time where I thought Sora couldn’t do something. He’s out there still, and I bet yah he found both Woody and Buzz. He’ll come back and fix everything.”

 

“I can only wish that you’re right for now.” Bo Peep spoke in a depressed tone, she and Slinky now walking off with the rest. Goofy stood by himself for a few seconds; he would never think about the possibility that Sora was gone. He wasn’t that kind of person. If needed, Goofy would venture out to find the boy himself. It wouldn’t matter how many times he would save Sora, as the payment would simply be being reunited with his dear friend.

 

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Sid didn’t hesitate to begin playing with his new toys, having shot Buzz with a suction-cup gun and burning Woody’s forehead. Sora and Donald had left the bag early in the morning to avoid such injuries. Sora felt guilty in just leaving them, but trying to remain unseen from anybody aside from the toys was one of his main concerns. Neither he nor Donald were toys themselves, so they were unable to coup with the rough handling of being played with.

 

Sid was thankfully called down for breakfast, allowing them to regroup. Woody worriedly poked at his forehead, which now flashed a tiny black dot. Buzz was pulling off each dart shot at him, each coming off with a loud pop.

 

“Good going, Sheriff; any normal-minded man would have broke under that torture.” Buzz complimented.

 

“Yeah, gee, thanks.” Woody replied sarcastically.

 

“You two okay?” Donald asked the both of them.

 

“I’ll survive.” The cowboy answered first. His eyes widened, seeing something spectacular; in the reflection of the spoon he was using as a mirror, he saw the door was left open! This was their chance to escape, and there was no better time to. “The door, look! We can finally get out of here.”

 

“But we don’t know what’s out there Woody.” Buzz warned. “We shouldn’t just rush out.”

 

“You can stay here then. I’m outta h-waaah!” Woody was stopped in his tracks as the toys from last night appeared before them, blocking their only exit. Sora ran in front of him and summoned his Keyblade, while Donald held out his wand.

 

“Don’t make us use this!” Donald warned them all. They were intimidated by them, for some odd reason despite having them outnumbered. As they tried to make their way out the door, the deformed toys inched away from the group until they made it pass them.

 

“Haha! No dinner for you guys!” Woody mocked as he now ran across the hallway and down the steps. Sora only shook his head, but couldn’t blame the toy; he was scared, and just wanted to go home. Sora himself wanted to go back to reunite with Goofy, since by how long they’ve been away, his friend must be worried about him and Donald.

 

Sora and the others followed Woody, but once again halted their path when the low rumbling of a sleeping Scud was heard on the steps. Woody was already proceeding to walk slowly back up the stairs, a frightened frown etched on his face. Buzz grabbed the cowboy and pulled him out of view, causing Woody to groan in defeat.

 

“Come on. Let’s find somewhere else to escape.” Buzz suggested in a whisper, everyone nodding in agreement. Buzz took the lead now, the group tiptoeing across the hall now. They were all unnerved hearing the beast below them snore loudly; if he was awoken, their lives would be in immediate danger. They seemed to be out of the clear, until Woody’s pull string was accidentally caught on the metal railing beside him, causing his voice box to go off.

 

Scud’s eyes snapped open, grunting in alarm. Although in a groggily manner, he walked up the stairs to investigate the sound. “Everyone split up!” Buzz quickly ordered, everyone listening without question. They all ran into four different locations to decrease the chances of every one of them being found. Sora himself ended up in a room filled with pink, this obviously Hanna’s room. There was no time to be picky about the surroundings, now scurrying underneath the bed.

 

Sora hid there for presumably ten minutes, keeping everything, including his own breathing, as silent as possible. One sound could possibly alert the dog out there where he was, and he could possibly corner Sora under the bed. It was very quiet out there, however, as he couldn’t even hear the snarling breathes of Scud anymore. Perhaps he finally moved on?

 

The silence was broken when Hanna called out to her mother, but Sora couldn’t make out what she was saying. It was a good idea to remain hidden, though, as the girl began to make her way up the stairs. She walked into her room, talking to somebody, most likely one of her own toys. “You are going to have so much fun here, Mrs. Nesbit!” the girl chirped, placing said toy down at a pretend tea table.

 

Sora decided to crawl out just enough to remain out of sight, but just enough to see what was going on. Hanna just finished dressing this new doll of hers, only it looked all too familiar to the boy; this “Mrs. Nesbit” was actually Buzz, dressed in clothing clearly made for female toys. While that was a disturbing sight by itself, what really caught his attention was the space ranger was missing an arm, and that arm was lying right in front of him on the table.

 

“Did Scud get to him?” Sora asked himself, feeling bad to know that could have been Buzz’s fate. Aside from that, he didn’t seem too badly damaged. No teeth marks that would indicate the dog attacking him.

 

There wasn’t any way to get to Buzz and rescue him. He heard someone outside of her room suddenly call her just a few moments after this thought, as if on cue. Hanna gladly got herself off the floor to find out who it was, which when she was gone Woody ran into the room. Sora joined him to meet Buzz as well.

 

“Buzz, what happened to you?” Woody voiced his concern, sounding sympathetic towards Buzz for once.

 

“Gone!” Buzz wailed in despair, quite loudly too. “It’s all gone! One moment, you’re saving the galaxy, then the next you figure out you are just a shame and begin to drink tea with some headless dolls!”

 

“I think Buzz had had enough to drink.” Sora said to Woody, Buzz’s behavior beginning to make him feel weird.

 

“I am not Buzz anymore! You see this hat? I am Mrs. Nesbit!” Buzz began to laugh almost like a maniac. What in the world could have changed Buzz so much within just a few minutes must have be very traumatizing for the toy. Woody quickly got him back to his right set of mind by removing his helmet and slapping him with his own arm. This caused the space ranger to blink a few times as he came back to reality.

 

“I’m…I apologize. I’m just a little depressed now, that’s all.” Buzz managed to say, everyone walking out of Hanna’s room. Donald joined them, as he must have sensed the coast was clear, immediately picking up on the situation at hand.

 

“What happened to your arm?” Donald asked with concern, Woody and Sora wondering the same question.

 

“I saw something on the TV in that room over there, and I now realize I really am just a toy.” Buzz began to explain, his voice being monotone yet very upset. “I tried to test myself out, to see if it was really true. I ended up falling, and here I am. I’m no space ranger. I can’t even fly out the window.”

 

“Window.” Woody echoed, but in a quizzical way. An idea had struck in his head. He only had to look to his left to look back in Sid’s room, and saw something he hadn’t realized before; Sid’s window was opened, and being that he lived right beside Andy’s house, they could easily escape there! “Buzz, that is a great idea! I saw some Christmas lights in the closet over here. We can use those to get back to Andy’s house. Sora, go grab them.”

 

“Yessir!” Sora obliged, doing as he was told.

 

The group ran to the window, Sora, Donald, and Woody helping one another slide it open. Andy’s own bedroom window was opened as well, and they could see both Hamm and Mr. Potato Head playing a game. They immediately began calling out to them.

 

“Son of a building block.” Mr. Potato Head said in astonishment. “It’s Woody.”

 

“And those other two, Sora and Donald.” Hamm added on. “Hey guys, check this out. Woody and the others are here.”

 

The toys began to gather around the window to see for themselves, every one of them happy to see their friends once again. Goofy had pushed through the crowd to get in the front, beginning to wave at Sora and Donald once seeing that his thoughts were confirmed. He didn’t doubt for a second that they were harmed. “Heya, fellas! How’d you end up in over there?”

 

“It’s a long story.” Woody answered Goofy. “We’ll explain everything. Just…here, catch this!”

 

With the help of Sora, they tossed the Christmas lights over to the other toys, Slinky catching the end with success. “I caught it, Woody!”

 

“Great! Now just tie in on something and we’ll be…”

 

“I got a better idea.” Mr. Potato Head interrupted. “How ‘bout we don’t.”

 

The toys shouted his name in annoyance, but Mr. Potato Head hadn’t forgotten what Woody had done, or what they still thought he did. “You guys clearly don’t remember what Woody did to Buzz, it seems. We can’t just let him back over here to do it again!”

 

“No, Buzz it fine!” Sora tried to convince them. “We found him. He’s safe as safe can be.”

 

“Don’t you try to cover for that criminal, Sora.” Mr. Potato Head snapped, shaking the makeshift rope angrily.

 

“He isn’t lying. He’s right here.” Donald shouted back in the same tone as the toy, getting worked up at his stubbornness. “Why can’t you listen for just one sec?”

 

“Buzz, get up here and give us a hand.” Woody called down to the toy, only for him to cleverly toss up his disconnected arm. Buzz only sat down below to sulk in his depression. He wasn’t even thinking about going home, only about the life he thought he once had. They were running out of time, so they needed to improvise. Taking Buzz’s arm, Woody quickly told Sora and Donald his plan to trick the other toys, just long enough to get Buzz to follow them.

 

Woody hid the arm he was holding Buzz’s with just behind the edge of the window frame, Sora and Donald standing beside him and ready to back him up. “Look guys, it’s Buzz.” Woody began, now extending the severed arm out enough to have it be convincing, but hidden at just the right amount to not immediately scare them off.

 

“Hi, fellas. To infinity and beyond!” Woody tried his best to mock Buzz’s voice, but while some of them believed the act, the others had a suspicious look upon their faces.

 

“You look awfully lively there, Buzz.” Sora added on, having more than one person pretend to talk to the make-believe Buzz hopefully adding to the act.

 

“You bet.” Woody continued to mimic. “Woody and I are even best buds now.”

 

Woody made the arm hug him, and Woody falsely did so back. Still, even with support, Mr. Potato Head was still not totally convinced. “Wait just a minute. What’re you tryin’ tah pull?”

 

“Nothing.” Woody shrugged, only to accidentally reveal the arm. The devastation of Woody’s mistake hit the three of them like a ton of bricks. There was no way to get back to Andy’s room now, not with the other’s help. They screamed and gasped in horror, their first happy attitude towards seeing the three now turning into shock and anguish toward the though of Buzz’s demise.

 

“You murder! All of you!” Mr. Potato Head yelled at them, even he not being able to coup with the sick thoughts about Buzz’s fate.

 

“No, it’s not what you think! Honest!” Sora desperately told them. “You have to believe us that this is just a big misunderstanding!”

 

“Save your breath, cretins!” Mr. Potato Head retorted, letting go of the rope and allowing it to fall into the yard below. “I hope Sid blows you all to bits. It’ll be the least you guys deserve.”

 

Woody was absolutely devastated as he could only watch his friends begin to walk away, either enraged at him or officially giving up hope on the cowboy. The toy couldn’t coup with this, wailing to the last toy that went out of view. All there was left was Goofy, who Woody was confused as to why he decided to stay.

 

“Why aren’t you going, too?” Woody moaned to him in sadness, not wanting his pain to be added to the sheer amount already present.

 

“Because I believe you.” Goofy confidently said. “I’m sure you guys wouldn’t hurt Buzz, especially Sora. He wouldn’t allow anything bad happen to his friends, and I certainly won’t let that happen either. I’m coming over.”

 

“No Goofy. It’s too dangerous here.” Sora warned, urging Goofy to remain in the safety of Andy’s room.

 

“Not a chance. I’m not gonna sit here let my pals become outcasts.” Goofy confidentially stated. “I’m gonna save you guys whether you like it or not.”

 

Sora couldn’t help but smile at the knight. Anything Goofy said seemed to never fail at uplifting his heart, and giving him and Donald the confidence they needed. Even at the end of each of their journeys, Goofy was the single bravest one amongst everyone else, and that what was unique about him. “You’d better hurry, then.” Sora called back to Goofy.

 

“You can count on it.” Goofy said with a thumbs up, walking out of view to prepare himself for his rescue mission.

 

The small glimmer of hope that entered their minds was interrupted by noises down below with Buzz. The toys from before caused them, all surrounding Buzz and preparing to do something to him. “Buzz!” Woody shouted to him, jumping down and trying to pull them off. One of them took Buzz’s arm away from Woody, who then joined back with the huddle.

 

Sora and Donald tried to aid Woody, but to no avail as the toys kept getting back in the pile as they were tossed away and constantly shoving them backwards. Eventually, however, they backed off Buzz, revealing that his arm was now fixed. They were all shocked, thinking the toys were attempting to take Buzz away.

 

“They fixed your arm.” Woody muttered. “But why? We saw them take away those other…”

 

Woody was interrupted as the deformed toys motioned them to look over where they were. Standing amongst them were the two toys Sid mutilated, completely fixed and seeming like nothing happened to them to begin with. Everyone’s mouths opened slightly in disbelieve. They had no time to ask any questions about this, as all of them became startled by the sound of Sid’s voice.

 

“Buzz, come on!” Sora said to Buzz, both him and Woody attempting to drag him into safety. They had no time, however, and unfortunately had to leave him in the open. They only hoped Sid would luckily look right passed him.

 

The boy burst into the room, a large package in hand and exclaiming about how it finally arrived. This must have been something quite special, as Sid didn’t stall to rip open the box and pull out the contents inside. It contained a very large firework, labeled The Big One. The look on Sid’s face expressed his instant desire to set it off. “What am I gonna blow up with this? Maybe that one dumb cowboy doll.”

 

Sora gasped from where he hid, seeing the toy himself underneath a grate and shivering in fear. Woody was smart enough to hold onto the top of the grate as Sid lifted it. The boy was fooled, and soon began to look elsewhere. With Buzz lying in the middle of the floor, Sid stepped on his arm, causing his laser to go off and begin to beep. It instantly caught the little mad man’s attention, bending down to pick him up.

 

Placing the grate on his worktable and putting his toolbox on top of it, Sid fumbled around in it until he found a roll of tape. Woody, have been knocked down by the force of the toolbox, covered himself with a sheet of paper that was fortunate enough to be with him, watching as Sid securely fastened Buzz onto the rocket.

 

Sora was getting ready to run out there to save Buzz, and at this point didn’t care if Sid would see him. Sora would go to almost any length to save his friends. Fortunately, thunder cracked with a boom outside, and a downpour of rain followed behind it. Sid became disappointed that he could not test out his newly delivered explosive, but soon thought about the positives; he could just do it in the morning tomorrow once the rain stopped.

 

Sid placed Buzz down on the bench, and then set his alarm clock to wake him up as early as possible. He then flopped into his bed, preparing for the event the next day. Sora and Donald waited until they were positive Sid was asleep, then quietly made their way to Woody and Buzz. They first attempted to push the toolbox off of the grate just enough for Woody to escape for quite a few hours, attempting many methods of doing so, but in their current sizes it was far too heavy to do by themselves. They needed an extra person.

 

“Buzz. Can you come over here?” Sora whispered over the toy. “An extra hand would be useful right about now.”

 

Buzz looked up at the three, a look of despair etched on his face. He sighed, then looked back down at the ground, having absolutely no motivation to even get up. Buzz was still torn over the fact that he really was just a toy, and not the cool, galaxy-traveling space ranger he thought he was in the beginning.

 

“Please, Buzz.” Woody begged the toy, stepping in and trying to coax him to aid the group. “We can’t do this with out you. We need your help….I need your help.”

 

“I can’t help.” Buzz responded after a few moments of silence. “I can’t help anybody.”

 

“Of course you can, Buzz.” Sora tried to encourage. “If you help us save Woody, we can get that rocket off you and we can return to Andy’s house. It’ll take no time at all.”

 

“Andy’s house, Sid’s house…what difference does it make?” Buzz questioned him.

 

“What do you mean?” Woody asked the toy. “You must not be thinking clearly.”

 

“No Woody.” Buzz replied, not able to take any words that were trying to cheer him up. “For the first time I am thinking clearly. You were right all along. I’m just a toy, A stupid, little, insignificant toy.”

 

“That isn’t true at all.” Sora tried to convince Buzz. “You can’t keep thinking so negatively. You just need to look inside yourself, and see what your heart is trying to say to you.”

 

“Yeah right.” Buzz said as he slowly shook his head. “Toys don’t have hearts. Didn’t you hear them from before? We’re nothing but artificial action figures and dolls.”

 

“Again, you’re wrong.” Sora hopped down from the grate and began to walk over to Buzz. They would get nowhere if Buzz kept beating himself up. Sora needed to prove to him that nothing was impossible. “Anything and everything has a heart, no matter where they come from. Andy is waiting for you and Woody to come back home. He’s probably upset that he can’t find you, and you’re just going to sit here? He doesn’t like you because you are a space ranger, or because you have a cool laser gun. He likes you because you are his toy.”

 

“But why me? Why can’t he pick someone else to play with?”

 

“Are you kidding me?” Woody suddenly spoke, surprised that Buzz had not picked up at all that Andy had even decorated his own room in honor of Buzz himself. “You are Buzz Lightyear. Any other toy would give up anything to be you. You have wings, you glow in the dark, your suit talks! If that isn’t cool enough for someone, then I don’t know what is.”

 

Woody’s words struck Buzz, finally beginning to push aside the cloud over his head and to soak in what he was saying. He did raise valid points, but was that enough to change his mind completely? He watched as Woody began to slump back to the floor, in a similar fashion as Buzz was sitting in right now. Fishing his words, Woody added, “As of matter of fact, you’re too cool. I mean, what kind of chance do I have against you. I’ll I have is a pull string. Why would Andy ever want me back when he has you?”

 

A spark lit the sad thoughts in Buzz’s head, as if the friction of Woody’s words collided with his mind to set off the realization, and more things became clear; the reason Woody was being antagonistic when they first met was because he was taking away the years of attention from Woody. His owner, Andy, began to favor him over Woody whenever the chance arose. Buzz no longer cared about the cowboy’s attempt to get rid of him, and soon began to instead feel guilty for ruining Woody’s life within the short few days Buzz was here.

 

Sora himself could see Woody’s change of heart. He was very proud of Woody finally accepting Buzz, and realizing his mistakes. Having the two toys finally warm up to the other was the first thing he needed to do to restore this world’s peace and order, and finally that was accomplished.

 

To add onto this, Woody wasn’t finished speaking. “I should be strapped to that rocket, not you. I deserve it more than anybody. Just go on without me. Staying here is the best punishment I can think of.”

 

The kick-start Buzz needed finally came; he wouldn’t leave his friend behind to rot in the darkness present in this room. He let go of the grudges he once had towards the cowboy, now motioning Sora to join back with Donald and begin to help push off the toolbox.

 

“Buzz, what are you doing?” Woody asked him, wondering why he, Sora, and Donald didn’t leave him like he requested.

 

“Sora’s right; we can’t have Andy wait any longer.” Buzz said.

 

Woody grinned up at them, gladly beginning to help by pushing the grate he was trapped in. They were shortly interrupted by the sound of a truck coming to a stop nearby. Looking out the window, they saw it was the moving truck meant to help pack up everything in Andy’s house. Sora informed Woody of it down below. “We don’t have much time left. They’re getting ready to move everything.”

 

With the extra motivation, everything began to slowly inch off of the worktable. Woody soon had an opening to escape from, and hoped down to the floor. “Alright, you guys. I’m out.”

 

They didn’t hear him the first time, and continued to push the toolbox with all of their might. It now began to lean off the edge, Woody’s eyes widened as he watched it crash down on him. Sora and the others looked down in concern, and then up to Sid to make sure his sleep was not disturbed. The boy snorted and turned his head, but remained in his slumber. They sighed in relieve, but the alarm clock suddenly went off, causing Sid to slowly sit up. Woody hid down below, and Sora and Donald ran behind something up on the table. Buzz, on the other hand, became motionless again on the table where Sid had left him.

 

Sid blinked a few times to rid of his tiredness, but was jolted awake when the first thing he saw was Buzz. He swung his feet over the bed and hopped off it, and then grabbed Buzz and ran out of his room. The door was slowly closing, but Woody ran towards it and stopped it with his arm just in time. He looked out to make sure the coast was clear, but Scud snapped his head towards the toy. Woody was forced to shut the door to avoid the dog from getting in.

 

“How are we getting out now?” Donald asked Woody as he and Sora approached him. He didn’t expect an answer.

 

“I don’t know.” Woody replied. “Come on, guys, we need to think of something q…”

 

Sid’s toys were beginning to make themselves known once again. They witnessed Sid take away Buzz, and being that they knew what it was like to be in here, he would soon meet his end. They came out to investigate the remaining group and to see if they were alright as well.

 

“Maybe they can help.” Sora suggested. They all disappeared in a flash, not liking the idea of putting themselves in danger.

 

“No, wait! Come back!” Donald tried to call to them.

 

“We need your help.” Woody then pleaded. “There’s a good toy down there, and he’s going to be blown to bits if we don’t do something, and it’s all my fault. He gotta save him, but we need your help. ”

 

The toys could hear the pain in Woody’s voice, one by one coming out from hiding. Sora was touched by Woody’s words as well. Although the toy already proved that he was now loyal to Buzz, he now was willing to risk his life to get him back. He no longer wished to get rid of him, but now to make sure he stays alive.

 

One of the toys crawled out from behind the bedpost the group was standing beside. Though unable to make facial expressions, it stared at them in sympathy. It was like it was telling Woody it felt his pain, something that struck him right in its chest. Woody reached out a hand to it, urging this toy and the rest to come out and join him. “Please, he’s my friend. He’s the best one I’ll ever had.”

 

The toys quickly decided what they were going to do; the one near Sora, Donald, and Woody began to tap its metal claw on the bedpost, alerting all of the other toys. It was signaling them to reveal themselves. Each one was ready to do what was needed to save Buzz, filled with confidence that they could pull this off. Sora looked at Woody with a grin, and Woody did the same.

 

“Thank you, all of you.” Woody said as he bent down on one knee. “Now, gather around. We’re gonna have to break a few rules, but if everything works out, we’ll have Buzz back in no time.”

 

Woody began to layout a makeshift map of the house, telling everyone what his or her jobs will be in order to complete this heist. He pointed at each spot as he told what toy would go where and what they will be doing. “Alright, I need Pumpboy here, and Ducky here. Legs, you’re with Ducky. Sora and Donald will help you both through the ventilation shafts until you are over the porch outside. Roller Bob and I don’t move until we get the signal. Is everyone clear?”

 

Everyone confirmed they indeed memorized the plan, now getting into position. Some of the toys positioned themselves at the door, ready to open it once given the okay. They were going to lead Scud away from the door so Woody and some other toys could escape the room, but they had to wait for Sora and his small group to get through the vents.

 

So far, everything was going as planned. Sora memorized the turns he needed to make, and Donald stayed in the back to make sure no one got lost. A few bangs were heard in the vents aside from their own walking, but figured it as nothing but fans beginning to kick on. A small light was eventually seen, this being the way outside. “There it is. Hurry up and let’s…”

 

Sora was interrupted by more strange noises, only they were now right around the corner. Emerging from the darkness came two yellow eyes, and they were large. It crept towards the group, antennas now visibly feeling the air. It form was now shown; it was a Heartless, but in the shape of a cockroach. It was brown like a normal one, but a large symbol that was etched onto each Emblem Heartless was present across its back. By the looks of it, it didn’t plan on letting them by.

 

“Legs, Ducky, try to find another route.” Sora ordered the toys as he summoned his Keyblade. “We’ll handle this guy. Woody is going to have to wait for a few minutes.”

 

Ducky saluted his hand at Sora, now leading himself and the other toy back where they came to find another path. When they both were out of site, the cockroach scurried its way towards Sora and headbutted him to the ground. Sora grunted as he tried to push it off, drooling mandibles snapping only inches away from his face. Donald rescued the boy with a fire spell, burning its side and making it screech. From where the fire spell landed, a small stream of smoke was coming of the Heartless. It now went for Donald, the magician casting a few more fireballs in its direction.

 

The Heartless tried to ward off the pain it was suffering. Lifting its head, it began to spray a haze of dust out if its mouth, causing the vents to be congested. Coughing loudly, Sora called out to Donald. “Where are you? We can’t stay here anymore. Forget about the Heart…”

 

Sora yelped as his back was suddenly collided with the Heartless’ head, again pinning it to the ground. It slowly began to lower its head down to Sora, ready to bite into his head. Donald was nowhere to be seen this time, and the dust wasn’t helping in giving Sora the proper air he needed to recover his breath.

 

Sora looked behind him, gripping his Keyblade. For a moment, he flipped it backwards and gripped it in the opposite direction he normally held it in. He swung back, only to have his arm instantly pinned down. Something suddenly whizzed by Sora’s vision, looking like a Frisbee. It knocked the Heartless back and stunned it, giving Sora time to figure out where the object had come from. Along with Donald, Goofy came through the dust, a triumphant smile stretched to both of his ears.

 

“Goofy!” Sora shouted as he tackled his friend into a hug. “How’d you find us?”

 

“It wasn’t easy.” Goofy began as he scratched his head. “I’ve been climbing around in here all morning looking for you guys. I checked just about every room these lead me to. Then I heard some commotion, and here I am.”

 

“We were trying to rescue Buzz.” Sora began to explain to Goofy, telling him about the mission they were on. “Woody planned out this big heist to go get Buzz from Sid. This Heartless suddenly came and interrupted us, and we had to think of a plan B. There were other toys with us, but they went another way.”

 

“I think we aughta go back to Woody and tell him what happened then.” Goofy suggested, Sora and Donald agreeing. They hurried back before the Heartless recovered from its daze, ready to share the news.

 

“What are you guys back here? What happened to the other toys?” Woody asked in concern.

 

“Don’t worry.” Sora reassured. “We had a bit of trouble, but they’ll give us the signal soon.”

 

The plan was slightly changed, but only for the part of who would be going with Woody. Aside from that, everything went as scheduled. The doorbell was suddenly heard, their anticipation ceasing as the door was pulled open. “Now!” Woody shouted.

 

A toy frog suddenly zoomed out of the room and went down the stairs, Scud giving chase to it. Everyone gathered onto the skateboard-racer man hybrid, Roller Bob, and began to push themselves out into the hall as well. When the doorbell had sounded, Hanna made her way to the front door to see who has rung it, only to find no one. The toy frog raced past her legs, and Scud collided with her, causing the girl to fall over. Ducky and Legs outside managed to get the toy frog and reel back up into the vents in the opening they made, completely avoiding the attention of Hanna. Angry at Scud, Hanna closed the door before he could get back in. One of the obstacles were now gone, and now the toys just needed to get outside.

 

As the toys were riding along, Sora looked back to make sure nobody was left behind. Instead of seeing that, he saw something they rather should leave behind; the cockroach Heartless was making its way towards the toys, and was catching up.

 

“Woody!” Sora warned the cowboy. Woody looked back at Sora and instantly saw the Heartless trying to catch them.

 

“Hurry, hurry! We have an unexpected problem now!” Woody told Roller Bob. The skateboard understood the urgency, and sped up. They went down both sets of stairs, but the Heartless just wouldn’t stop. It was like it had an infinite amount of energy, as it showed no signs of slowing down. They were almost outside, and they just needed to make one more turn.

 

Riding into the kitchen, they saw the one exit they were looking for; the dog door. Roller Bob leaned back, to make sure he would be able to fit through it and not collide with the door. Everyone braced themselves as the door drew closer and closer. Soon, they were all launched outside and into the bushes.

 

The Heartless, on the other hand, was unable to stop itself in time, hitting the door instead of the toys. Again in a daze, it tried to walk away and escape back into the vents. Sid’s mother appeared, however, and saw the cockroach Heartless at her feet. Making a grimace, she said, “Ugh! Disgusting vermin” and crushed it with her foot. As she left, a heart appeared where the cockroach once stood, and began to float up into the sky.

 

The group looked through the bushes to see what Sid was doing, and thankfully saw him still preparing for the launch. Woody motioned everyone to split up, everyone soon hidden in various areas in the yard. Sora and Woody went towards Buzz, who was more than happy to see them again. “Woody, Sora! What’re you…?”

 

Sora shushed him, not wanting to alert Sid they were here. Once hearing Sid coming back, however, both Woody and Sora laid on the ground motionless. Buzz was confused what they were doing, but remained inanimate as well as Sid came out of the shed he was looking in.

 

He went to light a match, but stopped once seeing Sora and Woody in the open. Sid was baffled about how Woody could have gone from his room to out here, and he didn’t remember bringing him. “How’d you get out here? And what’s this toy? Never seen him before. Oh, well. Maybe I’ll have a barbeque after this.”

 

Sid placed Woody and Sora on a grill, then went back to Buzz and lit the match he was planning to use before. He held the match near the fuse of the rocket Buzz was tapped to, and began to count down, “Ten, nine, eight, seven, six, five, four, three, two, one…”

 

Sid backed off when he heard Woody’s voicebox suddenly speak, causing the boy to put out the match and investigate. Sora began to speak too, though his mouth wasn’t moving. Sid was baffled at how they could be talking on their own, but didn’t think much about them as he picked them up. “They’re busted.” Sid shrugged as he went to toss them away.

 

“Who you calling busted, buster?” Woody suddenly snapped before Sid could do so. Startled, Sid slowly turned his head to look at Woody. As he expected, the toys face was motionless, but he didn’t think such a line was meant to be in his voicebox. Woody spoke again, his mouth still not moving. “That’s right. I’m talking to you, Sid Phillip.”

 

Sid was spooked now, but of course scaring him a little wasn’t the idea here. It was to outright terrify him. Sora now played along, his face as motionless as Woody. “We don’t like you blowing up toys, Sid. We don’t like anything done to harm us toys.”

 

“We?” Sid muttered, not able to figure out how this was happening.

 

“That’s right.” Woody confirmed. “Your toys.”

 

This cued other toys surrounding Sid to suddenly come out, some of them neglected and left in the mud, some rising from the ground after being buried, and also the ones that were in the boy’s room and helped plan this operation, all of which began to slowly surround Sid to make sure he couldn’t escape. The boy was too frightened to move, looking in all directions and horrified seeing that toys were actually alive.

 

“For now on, you must take care of your toys.” Woody said in a sinister tone.

 

“And if you don’t, we’ll find out, Sid.” Sora finished in with the same speech.

 

Sid looked down at both Woody and Sora to see them both slowly rotating their heads around, while Woody said the phrase, “We toys can see everythiiiing.”

 

They had succeeded in completely traumatizing Sid. His hands began to tremble, and he began to sweet in fear. He would have nightmares about this event for weeks. He deserved it, though, as for the longest time he had been constantly torturing toys that were actual, living beings. Had these toys not done something, perhaps Sid would move on from toys to bigger things, and his heart would be completely lost in the darkness. That would no longer be the case.

 

As their heads finished rotating, both Sora and Woody simultaneously uttered with full expressions, “So play nice.”

 

Sid tossed his arms in the air and screeched in sheer horror, causing Woody and Sora to fall to the ground. He ran back into his house as fast as his legs could carry him, being heard crying for his mother. Their mission was a success, and everybody began to cheer. Woody began to compliment everyone at their methods of revealing themselves to Sid.

 

Donald and Goofy came out and joined them, being that they were needed to stay hidden. When Sora saw Donald, he wrapped his arm around the duck’s neck. “That was awesome, Donald! The way you used your magic to make me look like a toy too really did the trick for scaring the pants off Sid.”

 

“Aw, it was easy, really.” Donald chuckled.

 

Things weren’t over just yet, as Buzz called out to Woody. He helped him climb up to the platform he was stationed on, and shook his hand to thank him. With this simple gesture, Woody looked down at his other friends. “Thank you, Sora, Donald, and Goofy. Without your guy’s help, I don’t think I’d ever stop messing with Buzz. Thank you for making me realize my mistakes.”

 

“Any time, Woody.” Sora responded as he crossed his arms.

 

“Now make sure you guys stay outta trouble, yah hear? No more fallin’ outta windows and pushin’ people through them.” Goofy requested the two toys, both of them laughing and nodding afterwards.

 

Both of the toys hopped down of the platform, preparing to head back home. They were startled when Andy was suddenly heard entering his mother’s car. “Woody, the van!” Buzz exclaimed to Buzz. Woody tried to tear off the rocket, but it was on too tight. It wasn’t important right now, as now the both of them began to run off to a broken part of the fence separating the houses. They came to a stop when they realized Sora, Donald, and Goofy weren’t following.

 

“Aren’t you guys coming?” Woody asked the trio.

 

“We can’t.” Goofy told the cowboy, though wasn’t happy to break the news to them.

 

“Yeah, we have to go help other people.” Sora explained to them. “Go back to Andy, but don’t worry; we won’t forget you. Not a chance. But before you guys go, tell the others we’ll miss them too, and that our hearts will always be connected.”

 

“Of course.” Woody said with a smile. “Goodbye, you guys. And thank you again.”

 

Woody and Buzz turned to officially make their leave. As Sora, Donald, and Goofy were waving to them, they suddenly noticed something begin to glow on the back of the rocket Buzz was still strapped to. A keyhole then flashed brilliantly, ready to be locked and to make sure order will stay even after their departure. Sora summoned his Keyblade, and then held it straight at the keyhole. A stream of light beamed its way towards it, and after a few moments a click was heard, followed by the keyhole disappearing.

 

Another world was now protected from darkness. The group no longer had to worry about this world, as it was now safe. Though sad about leaving yet another set of friends, they knew what their actual quest was. They went to find the Gummi ship, and once finding where they hid it, they zoomed off, their next destination unknown.

 

It was nice to help worlds in need, but they found nothing about Xehanort’s whereabouts here, aside from the presence of darkness. They couldn’t waste anymore time. Eventually, the dark being would engulf worlds even with locked keyholes. All of their work in the past will be for nothing, so now they searched for yet another world where darkness may linger. This time, they would focus on the task at hand.

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OH DAYUM that was long xD

Anyway great chapter! :D I enjoyed it a lot. You did a pretty good job of sticking to the events also. :) Can't wait to see more of this! Keep it up!

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I *finally* got around to reading this!  It really looks like an excellent sequel thus far.  I'm impressed at how well you built onto Dream Drop Distance to deliver a sequel that holds many of the same elements--as well as themes--from the other installments.  So far I've only read the first chapter, though I will be editing this post and/or posting another review as I read through more.  (Uh, am I allowed to double-post in the writing section if it's not my thread?)

 

I really enjoyed the opening scene, and loved the suspense you created building up to the conversation between Isa and Xehanort.  I also enjoyed the way that you kept Isa's identity secret till he lowered his hood.  Gauging by the initial description, I'd actually assumed it was the Young Master Xehanort.  So, that was a pretty pleasant surprise.  Each of these characters sounded very much like their canon-selves, which is fantastic.  Master Xehanort seemed generous--for lack of a better word--though it could merely be the game he's playing at, and nothing more.

 

Your description is superb, particularly in the opening scene!  I was pleasantly surprised to see how vividly you described the emotions and surroundings observed by Isa.  The only qualm I had, however, would be an excessive use of description in some scenarios.  Let me provide a couple examples:

 

Without any expression on his face, the man responded. “I will.”

Possibly rephrase to: Expressionless, the man responded, "I will."

 

Almost on cue, Sora himself casually walked into the room with the three others

Possibly rephrase to: As if on cue, Sora himself casually walked in.

 

It's not that big of a deal, really, though in general you'll want to describe a setting with as few of words as possible with the optimum meaning.  It's also something that takes a great deal of practice, but it does become handy in the long scheme of things. ;)

 

Your grammar was also fantastic!  There were a couple of awkwardly phrased sentences (such as heart boil when I believe you'd meant blood boil) though beyond that it looked pretty great.  Well done on that account!

 

I really enjoyed where you decided to take the chapter and, as I mentioned previously, I love the way that you're building on all the blocks presented in Dream Drop Distance.  It feels like a true continuation, and I cannot say the same for every Kingdom Hearts III story I've encountered.  You set the stage nicely by presenting Kairi's training, along with the quick, brief recap of DDD and their future mission.  One thing that I really liked is that you also didn't prolong the beginning, as I cannot tell you how frustrating it is to read a story only to wait for it to *go* for 20-30,000 words!  But yes, this was very nice: you provided a sufficient intro, yet continued a forward momentum.

 

And lastly, your characterizations.  I must commend you for giving Kairi more character than I thought possible.  Really, she's a Mary-Sue in the series, and has very little character development whatsoever.  I was very pleasantly surprised to see that you gave her depth and personality.  I'm very eager to see where you take her from here.  Sora seemed his happy-go-lucky self, and Yen Sid seemed as serious and grave as ever.  I also thought his dialogue sounded pretty much right on, so excellent job all around.

 

I know you were primarily concerned about immersing the Disney Worlds into the Kingdom Hearts series while not making it a simple recap of the original films, and I'm very sorry I didn't cover that here.  I'm hoping to read another chapter of your story very soon, and will definitely cover what I thought of those areas then.  Overall, though, you did an amazing job with this story!  I am truly impressed, and greatly look forward to seeing where you take it.  Good luck!

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Even though I've thanked you before MysticsApprentice, your review still gives me a warm feeling when reading it again. And you haven't technically finished the review. xD

 

As well, whether or not you're commenting, thanks for this one thousand or so views everyone has given this story. It's the most popular any of my work has ever gotten. Just as a small update, I currently have four pages of chapter 5 written, but it's a slow process. I haven't had much inspiration/time to write any faster. I'm getting there, though.

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