Image Fire Lillie

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[Giginha 22]

What's that?

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Just a simple sig made out of boredom.

[Chronic Tumor 149]

You cut the girl out quite badly and the flow isn't any good.

The girl is rather low quality compared to the flower and that's distracting. Also, competing focal points take away from the effectiveness.

[Giginha 22]

Stop saying things to others,you should mind your own business,try to make one yourself it's pretty difficult

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Mhm. Thank you. I am absolutely horrible with cutting and colouring, still. I'm going to make a few more versions, if you don't mind. Try and follow your advice.

[Chronic Tumor 149]

Stop saying things to others,you should mind your own business,try to make one yourself it's pretty difficult

 

What?

 

What?

WHAT?

 

 

I do

[R?x?s 0]

Stop saying things to others,you should mind your own business,try to make one yourself it's pretty difficult

 

E-eeto... I asked for critisism, darling.

 

attempt 2

also, CT, you're good with vectors. :0

[Chronic Tumor 149]

gracias.

 

Well, the red overlay doesn't help it much. I dunno what to do to make it better. Probably find backgrounds with the same liney style as the girl

[Sorage55 10]

The flower and the girl are fine i their forms, but the background needs some change of tone or a complete change altogether. But still what do I know? I'm the animator guy...

[Clueless 75]

Gizelita, she asked for cnc which is critique and critism, where others give opinions and advice to those who ask. So please, do not think that hes being mean, and watch out before you say things like that to others members please.

Thanks

I like your new attempt ;D i think the sharp redness as the skin should be lighter though, but thats my opinion