Giginha 22 Posted March 6, 2010 I'm again bored,don't have nothing to do,so I'll continue my other story. Willian wakes up in a white room,he recognise it as a hospital.He didn't know he went there,and what happened,he couldn't remember anything,no matter how much effort he did,there wasn't a single thing that he could remember. A nurse went in the room "So,you're awake.Are you alright?"she asked with a smile "Yes,but I want to ask something,why am I here?" she looked at him "Don't you remember?We found you in the destroyied city." Willian looked at the nurse confused "Ok,but,when will I get out of here?" the nurse looked at Willian "As soon as the doctor let you" the nurse left Willian's lunch there and got out of the room I'm just begining Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Sorage55 10 Posted March 6, 2010 Hmm it sound like Willian has amnesia from the impact of the explosion. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Antrium 10 Posted March 7, 2010 Sounds very interesting indeed. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Giginha 22 Posted March 7, 2010 Chapter 2 A few days later the doctor let Willian go out,he didn't need to stay at the hospital anymore. "Where will I go now?I can't even remember if I had a family.Ok,I can leave on my own."thought Willian looking at the city. Lost in hist thought Willian walked through the city,when he bumped into someone "Sorry,I didn't see you."said Willian helping the girl get her things,she looked carefuly at Willian "I can't believe,I found you!I'm so glad you're ok Willian."she said hugging Willian "Wait minute,who are you?" he asked trying to recognize the girls face. "Don't you remember me?Joana,the one that helped you to get rid of the creatures."she said looking disapointed "Let me see,sorry,I don't think I know anyone called Joana."said Willian "How could you forget?!Come with me,I'll make you remember.Those creatures,what could they do to you that you got like this."said Joana angry pulling Willian to Alberts house where she was staying. *I'll be finishing later* Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Sorage55 10 Posted March 7, 2010 A good segment of the story indeed. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Giginha 22 Posted March 8, 2010 Chapter 3 "Why did you bring me here.I don't even know."said Willian looking at the house. "Wait just a minute."said Joana going in "Albert!Look who is here!It's Willian." called Joana looking for Albert. "How could he possibly be here,I don't even believe that he survived..."said the ex-scientist looking at the door "I can't believe you're here Willian,how did you survive that explosion?" "Sorry but.I don't think I know you mister."said Willian looking confused "Of course you know me,I'm Albert the scientist that helped you back at the creature's city." he looked carefully at Albert's face and answered "Sorry,I don't remember you." "Something must have happened with that explosion,it was pretty violent.come in.We'll take a look."said Albert inviting Willian into the house. *I'm thinking of more,so maybe I'll edit this post later* Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Sorage55 10 Posted March 9, 2010 cool. I would call this type of a segemt in stories as a "filler" as in its not as important a process in the story but needs to be said. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Giginha 22 Posted March 9, 2010 I think the same Chapter 5 Albert made some examinations in Willian,but nothing was found for his memory lapse,they now were thinking that it was because of the strong explosion,but at least Willian survived. Some weeks later,Willian was trying to get used to his new routine,even if he tried he couldn't remember anyone,but as Albert and Joana were friendly he didn't bothered with that. One night Joana went out to a party with some friends of hers,she invited Willian but he didn't want to go because of a headache.When she came back,Joana went to look for Willian at his roon to tell how much he missed for not going.When she got in the room,Willian wasn't in,she looked at the whole house,and asked Albert if Willian went out.Nothing found,around the house there was no sign,Willian had desapeared. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Giginha 22 Posted March 29, 2010 *sorry for double postin* My sister is begging for me to continue this story,so here it goes. Chapter 6 Willian was at his room,Joana had just went out,he was thinking of how he got there and why couldn't he remember his past,when suddenly he heard a noise comming from the backyard.He got up and went to the front door,he searched for the key but he found out that Joana took it and he had to find another way. Willian went back to his room,oppened the window and carefully got down,when he got there he saw a strange being,the creature looked at him and runned away,Willian went after the creature to find out what it was. Everything was very dark,so he couldn't see anything,the creature went in a nearby forest,Willian tryed to follow it,but he could just trust in his audition. The sound of the steps stoped,Willian tryed to hear it,but he couldn't slowly he walked through the dark forest,suddenly he slipped and felt from a cliff. *Don't know why I'm doing this,no one will read anyway.* Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Naminé15 0 Posted March 30, 2010 cool!!!now I don't need to beg anymore. please continue. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites