Text Kingdom Hearts: The Lost Star

[Think Pink 1,967]

Whoa the...

 

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Morezzz

[Tom 437]

RoxSox, you wanted more mature and I gave it to you.

 

And yes, holy shit for huge plot twist. Now you'll see some more plot twists as the story progresses.

 

By the way, world writers. I think I asked SK3, so there's one. Anyone (I don't care if you aren't good at writing) want to do it? It's something to consider before I go ahead and pull the story into the climax in maybe 5 chapters.

[RoxSox 3,593]

RoxSox, you wanted more mature and I gave it to you.

 

And yes, holy shit for huge plot twist. Now you'll see some more plot twists as the story progresses.

 

By the way, world writers. I think I asked SK3, so there's one. Anyone (I don't care if you aren't good at writing) want to do it? It's something to consider before I go ahead and pull the story into the climax in maybe 5 chapters.

 

Do what? o.o Is there something I missed?

[Tom 437]

Chapter 12 - Twin

 

"Hey Kevin, wake up."

 

A young tone of voice awoken Kevin from his deep slumber. He opened his eyes to see a reflextion of himself, standing above him, over a beach. He smiled and said, "Hey Kyle. Are we going to explore the cave today?" Kyle nodded his head and replied, "Glad you didn't forget." Kyle extended his hand and Kevin grabbed it, and Kyle pulled him up. Today, the nine year olds Kevin and Kyle were going to explore the cave, although they were told not to.

 

As they run to the other side of the island, the scene starts to become fuzzy slightly, then stopped. Once there, Kyle led Kevin to the really small waterfall, where the cave was located. They both proned and crawled inside.

 

The cave was as dark as the night sky. It was hard to see where they were going, so they hung by the walls for guidance. Soon, it began to lighten up when the two reached a part of a cave. They looked everywhere, seeing carvings of pictures to a door. Kyle went to one carving and said, "Check this out." Kevin looked over his shoulder and said, "Is that a paopu fruit?" Kyle nodded and said, "Yeah. Looks like these two were in love. Kind of like you and Crystal." Kevin blushed. "HEY! We're not in love! Just friends," yelled Kevin, as he crossed his arms. Kyle rolled his eyes and then starred at something that was supposed to be there. "A door...in a cave? That's a little odd," said Kyle. He went up to it and touched the door. Light was coming out of it, making the place bright.

 

Something happened.

 

While Kyle was touching it, the door moved slightly back, and more light popped out. To his surpised, he pushed it more and it was like the sun in there. The light was so bright that it even burned their little eyes. Kevin closed them immediantly. But tension on his eyes grew down as he saw the door closing. Kyle vanished when Kevin began to see, looking for him. He looked left. He looked right. Kyle was nowhere to be seen. This all changed when Kevin looked through the door. Kyle was standing there, behind it, scared. As the door kept closing, a hooded man suddenly appeared behind Kyle, putting his hand on his shoulder. Right before the door closed, he smiled at Kevin, who clearly saw, and began to remove the hood. It was, however, too late for Kevin to see anything but the smile.

 

Darkness filled the small room. "KYLE!!!" Kevin screamed. Then darkness turned into completely fuzzy, black and white flashing everywhere.

 

Kyle, Kevin's twin brother, was gone. Forever.

[Tom 437]

 

RoxSox, you wanted more mature and I gave it to you.

 

And yes, holy shit for huge plot twist. Now you'll see some more plot twists as the story progresses.

 

By the way, world writers. I think I asked SK3, so there's one. Anyone (I don't care if you aren't good at writing) want to do it? It's something to consider before I go ahead and pull the story into the climax in maybe 5 chapters.

 

Do what? o.o Is there something I missed?

 

 

I still would have liked some Mature material in the chapter before this one. /shotforneverlettingitgo

 

But for serious... great way to kick the story back into gear.

 

This. Maybe not what you expected but still mature content, so that's what I was talking about.

 

And stop thinking about Ryusei and Crystal having sex. It's wrong.

[RoxSox 3,593]

 

 

RoxSox, you wanted more mature and I gave it to you.

 

And yes, holy shit for huge plot twist. Now you'll see some more plot twists as the story progresses.

 

By the way, world writers. I think I asked SK3, so there's one. Anyone (I don't care if you aren't good at writing) want to do it? It's something to consider before I go ahead and pull the story into the climax in maybe 5 chapters.

 

Do what? o.o Is there something I missed?

 

 

I still would have liked some Mature material in the chapter before this one. /shotforneverlettingitgo

 

But for serious... great way to kick the story back into gear.

 

This. Maybe not what you expected but still mature content, so that's what I was talking about.

 

And stop thinking about Ryusei and Crystal having sex. It's wrong.

 

No, No, I meant this:

 

 

By the way, world writers. I think I asked SK3, so there's one. Anyone (I don't care if you aren't good at writing) want to do it? It's something to consider before I go ahead and pull the story into the climax in maybe 5 chapters.

 

 

Do what?

[Tom 437]

 

 

 

RoxSox, you wanted more mature and I gave it to you.

 

And yes, holy shit for huge plot twist. Now you'll see some more plot twists as the story progresses.

 

By the way, world writers. I think I asked SK3, so there's one. Anyone (I don't care if you aren't good at writing) want to do it? It's something to consider before I go ahead and pull the story into the climax in maybe 5 chapters.

 

Do what? o.o Is there something I missed?

 

 

I still would have liked some Mature material in the chapter before this one. /shotforneverlettingitgo

 

But for serious... great way to kick the story back into gear.

 

This. Maybe not what you expected but still mature content, so that's what I was talking about.

 

And stop thinking about Ryusei and Crystal having sex. It's wrong.

 

No, No, I meant this:

 

 

By the way, world writers. I think I asked SK3, so there's one. Anyone (I don't care if you aren't good at writing) want to do it? It's something to consider before I go ahead and pull the story into the climax in maybe 5 chapters.

 

 

Do what?

 

Oh that. Totally ignore what I said >.>

 

Anyway, I wanted to include worlds that would make this story contain a KH feel to it, keep it intersesting, and long enough. But I really don't want to do the worlds myself, as I just want to get right into the climax and finish this, so I can move onto my other stories. So I'm wondering who would want to write them up. I have this posted in Chapter 10:

 

And as I continue this story, I want to add worlds to make the story better and feel like KH. But this would take up a lot of time, so I will be unable to do them. So is anyone interseted in doing worlds? It would be great and helpful for. It also shows us your writing abilities that others may want to read if you write stories. Just a thought.

But if no one wants to do it, then I'll just move on and have the story progress. I know some people whined like a baby for finishing The Dark Era of Sora so quickly, so it's an option up for anyone intersested.

[Protoman 1,974]

Could I maybepossibly do it?

[Tom 437]

I'm so glad you asked. Anyone can do it. Even you.

 

But I hope you brushed up on some movies, since I'll be giving the worlds and stuff.

[Tom 437]

Chapter 13 - Sadness

 

"AHHHHHHH," screamed Kevin, as he awakened from his terrifying nightmare. He huffed and puffed, as his heart raced. He was shirtless, covered with bandages. He sweated like a pig, his oder reaked of bad stink. His vision blurred. "Finally awake, huh?" Kevin looked by the door to find Ignis standing there. A pale Kevin had said nothing in response. Ignis sighed and said, "We're taking a trip. Put on a shirt."

 

Ignis held Kevin on his shoulder, since Kevin was extremely weak from his last battle, unable to walk on his own. He summoned his Keyblade and opened up a portal of light. He walked in there and light completely filled everything.

 

When the light disappeared, the both were on a clock tower, in the middle of a small town. Ignis set Kevin down and thrn sat himself. Kevin looked around, seeing an amazing horizan. Breaking free from his silence, he asked, "Where are we?" Ignis pulled out a pair of ice cream and handed one to Kevin. "Twilight Town", said Ignis, as he smiled. Kevin was dumbfounded, but took the ice cream and the both started eating it. Kevin, after one bite, looked strangely at his ice cream and said, "Salty...but sweet at the same time." Ignis nodded and replied back, "Everyone says that their first time." After a while, Kevin finished his ice cream and turned to Ignis. "What is your true purpous in bringing me here?" asked Kevin. Ignis' face turned serious. He said, "To talk about what happened yesterday. And I need answers now." Kevin said nothing for a while, but soon sighed. And he eventually said, "Alright, here's what happened..."

 

After a long talk, Ignis put his hands on his face. Everything went wrong. Crystal is kidnapped and Ryusei is dead. After the long silence, Ignis said, "Ryusei can't be dead. I have a feeling he's not." Kevin shook his head. "He was stabbed through the stomach and struck down, and wasn't breathing for at least an hour while I sat there. I don't feel anything from him," said Kevin. Ignis nodded in defeat. Ryusei was gone forever. "So what are you going to do now?" said Ignis. Kevin lowered his head, then got up with all his strength. Holding the wall, he declared, "I'm goin to get back Crystal alone." But his energy disappeared, as he collasped, falling from the tower. Ignis, in shock, summoned his Keyblade and it transformed in a vechical like ride. He got on it and flew towards the bottom and caught Kevin. He smiled and said, "The first thing you need to do is get your strength back." Then he grew serious. "But you're not doing this alone." Kevin said nothing and closed his eyes.

 

He is alone. He has been for a long time and even now.

 

How do you feel?

"I feel sad."

Hmmm...why?

"Because you did this to me."

You are just going to have to deal with it.

"Let me go."

I'm afraid I can't do that.

"Then please...if you won't let me go, then end me."

[heartless101 83]

Nice chapter man ^^

[DragonMaster 1,166]

Great job. Major twist with Tron being Xehanort. And you know, its funny, my uncles are twins and their names are Kevin and Kyle. Anyway, look forward to the next chapters. I already have my predictions on what might happen.

[Tom 437]

OMG, this is the second coincidence that's happened in this story...

 

I think I'm going crazy.

[Protoman 1,974]

Or the people of this forum are drawn here because of your psychic powers.

Just sayin' Not really

[Tom 437]

Chapter 14 - Allies

 

"That's it?"

"That's all Kevin said."

"So Crystal is captured and Ryusei is dead, yes?"

"That's correct."

 

Master Miller walked back and forth, still taking all the distrubing information into his thick head. Ignis starred at Master Miller until a question popped up. "What are we going to do now? I mean, Kevin wants to rescue Crystal by himself and-" Ignis wanted to continue but Master Miller slammed his hand on the table. "NO! We can not lose Kevin," said Master Miller. "The legend will come true if he dies!" Ignis cross his arms and said, "Yes, but Kevin has to do this. We're not going to babysit him. He has to defeat Xehanort. He's the one who can save us all." Master Millet nodded and continued walking back and forth. He thought and he thought until an idea sprang into his head. He stopped and said, "Kevin can do his part, but he's not doing this by himself. I know two people will will fill the other parts..."

 

He walked towards his compter and began typing. After a while, he stopped and turned around smiling. "I've gotten in touch with the two. Thy should be here in a couple of days," said Master Miller. Ignis nodded and said, "Enough time to get Kevin back in shape."

 

Ignis began walking away but stopped and then wondered who the two were. "Master Miller, about those two people...who are they?" Master Miller walked up to Ignis and proclaimed, "Two people that I can trust. One of them is the son of a old friend of Sora's, and the other one is...well, you'll see. The two are trained, powerful, and they will be vital to Kevin."

 

A black coat hooded man stood at a distance, watching the two talk. He opened his mouth and spoke words that no one can hear, "You can give Kevin as many allies as you want, but in the end, Kevin will not save us all. He will fall."

 

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Ok, so here's a minigame. The first part I want you to think of is who the son of an old friend of Sora's is and the his father. Basically, tell me the father first and then tell me who the son's name (Hint: The father had two movies and his son appeared in the both).

 

The second part is who do you want the second person to be? Do you want it to be a character from Disney or Final Fantasy? You decide. My vote is on Snow, from Final Fantasy XIII.

[Space Cowboy 1,392]

Nice chapter man.

 

I have to think about the first question lol. My brain is too clear right now.

 

And for the second question, I vote Vincent Valentine.

[Tom 437]

Keep thinking then. You might get his name.

 

Ah, Vincent Valentine. Good choice.

[RoxSox 3,593]

I ain't got a clue...

 

And, I'd say Vincent Valentine as well.

[Tom 437]

...Really? You guys are clueless

 

I'll give you another hint: the father is an ally of Sora in every KH game that had Sora as the main character. He's pretty weird and random. I know this should get some brains thinking.

 

Vincent seems to be a popular guy...by two votes lol. I think he would fit nice as an ally.

[RoxSox 3,593]

Ally, like, actually a party member at some point?

[Tom 437]

Yep. Party member next chapter, in fact.

[Protoman 1,974]

I havent played through KH1 completely yet. Pretty much because I suck at gaming.

 

FINAL FANTASY...

I like Vincent. I know theres alot of other characters, but I'm guilty for only playing FF12. Yeahh.

[DragonMaster 1,166]

For the first question my guess will be Goofy (as I know he has at least two movies, both featuring him and his son).

 

As for the second, I don't really know. Never played a FF game and can't think of a good Disney character for the role.

[RoxSox 3,593]

For the first question my guess will be Goofy (as I know he has at least two movies, both featuring him and his son).

 

As for the second, I don't really know. Never played a FF game and can't think of a good Disney character for the role.

 

-Infinity facepalm-

Duh

[Tom 437]

For the first question my guess will be Goofy (as I know he has at least two movies, both featuring him and his son).

 

You're getting a cookie.

 

Get another cookie for the son's name.