RoxSox 3,593 Posted October 21, 2010 For the first question my guess will be Goofy (as I know he has at least two movies, both featuring him and his son). You're getting a cookie. Get another cookie for the son's name. That would be Max. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Tom 437 Posted October 21, 2010 And the second cookie goes to RoxSox. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
RoxSox 3,593 Posted October 21, 2010 And the second cookie goes to RoxSox. I have a peave for people handing me things... I can steal that cookie from you, though. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Tom 437 Posted October 21, 2010 And the second cookie goes to RoxSox. I have a peave for people handing me things... I can steal that cookie from you, though. Attempt to steal it, and I'll eat it myself. How do you like them apples? Ok, enough spam. Here is the deal: Two people figured out that the first character is infact Max, the son of Goofy. That part is cleared up. And Vincent Valentine gets majority of the votes (I also too vote for him ), so he will be the second character. Now this makes things a lot easier for the next chapter. Be sure to read the upcoming chapter Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Tom 437 Posted October 28, 2010 Chapter 15 - The TRUE Adventure Begins! Within the next couple of days, everything was quiet. Ignis walked around the castle with nothing to do, Master Miller was kept locked up in his office, and Kevin slept most of the time. The wait for the two seem like forever... But, they did arrived soon enough. The silent day was broken when a loud noise appeared in the sky. Some people walked out of the castle to see it, while others looked out the window. They pointed and starred at a ship that flew around the giant castle. However, the view was done when the ship disappeared behind the castle. A figure popped out of the ship and into a window of Master Miller's office. The person smiled and said, "I have arrived, sir." Master Miller shook his head and said, "You could of used the front door." The person shrugged. Ignis, still kept walking around the castle, and still had nothing to do. He signed and bend down while walking. "Won't anything good finally come?" cried Ignis. The phone in his pocket buzzed and it a text message from Master Miller. He smiled. Maybe something good will come up. He walked to Kevin's room and saw Kevin asleep, snoring. Ignis made a cute looking face and said, "Aww, princess here is still taking his beauty nap." He then put his hand under the matress and heated up the bed with Fire. Kevin did nothing but after five seconds, he opened his eyes and felt the heat, immdediantly getting off the bed. Ignis laughed and snorted at Kevin, while Kevin turned his very hot back to him. Ignis walked over to him and helped him out, grabbing his hand and pulling him up. "Kevin, they're here." The two walked together at Master Miller's office. Upon opening the door, they saw Master Miller along with someone else. "Ah Kevin. Good to see you in shape again", greeted Master Miller. Kevin crossed his arms and said, "Im fine. So this is the guy you were talking about?" The person nodded. "I'm Max, your friendly neighborhood knight at your service!" Max extended his hand. Kevin looked at it for a second and then smiled and extended his hand too and both shook their hands. Ignis then looked around for the other one. "Ummm...didn't you say there would be two?" asked Ignis. Master Miller nodded. "There should be one more. Now where can he be?" Everyone looked everywhere but no one could find him. A voice spoke out right behind Kevin and Ignis, saying, "I'm here." Kevin and Ignis jumped and turned around slowly. It was a man with a red coat, with guns in his pocket. He was as pale as the moon and looked like he would be a murderer. He starred at Kevin and said, "Vincent. Vincent Valetine." Kevin was a little creeped out by him. But he ignored his feelings and extended his hand, saying, "Kevin. Nice to meet you?" Vincent did the same thing as Kevin when introduced by Max. But Vincent sighed and extended his hand, shaking it. He walked to Max and Master Miller stood by him. Master Miller then delivered another speach to him: "Kevin...I know Crystal and Ryusei are your friends, and mean so much to you, but you need to keep your eyes on the prize. Your new destiny will be to stop Xehanort at all cost. If he is able to unlock Kingdom Hearts once again, then the Keyblade Wars will start again...and you'll in the middle of it. Travel the worlds ang gain information, to see if you can find Xehanort's whereabouts, and to stop anything he does in those worlds. If we're lucky, and Ryusei's heart was released, then it's possible to get him back. But...getting him back will be the hard part. If you can get defeat Xehanort, then you'll be able to rescue Crystal. I'm sorry to say this, but you do have a tine limit. You have an entire year to gather information if Xehanort cannot be found. Because with enough data, we'll able to pinpoin his location and invade the world he's on. The Unversed is also another problem we need to solve, so get ready to deal with them. I only one request when you're gone...stay alive please. I already had to loose another pupil..." Kevin nodded in silence. Max snapped his fingers and the ship he had moved next the window. Max and Vincent walked to it and went inside. Kevin began walking but Master Miller stopped him one last time. "Kevin?" said Master Miller. Kevin stopped walking and turned around. "Yeah?" asked Kevin. Master Miller walked up to him and patted him on the shoulder. "You'll find them. Trust me." Kevin smiled and said, "I know I will." We walked to the ship and went inside, and the hatch closed. The ship fired its thrusters and it flew away, drifiting away from the castle and into the sun. Kevin, Max, and Vincent's adventure to defeat Xehanort has begun! ______________________________________________________________________ I have a quick question. Do people want to do the world chapters or do you just want me to advance the story? I know I said this but I want to make everyone is fine with this and see if it's ok to do or not. It's your call. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
RoxSox 3,593 Posted November 1, 2010 Uhh... I couldn't tell you... Awesome chapter btw Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Tom 437 Posted November 1, 2010 Well I'll make a deal with everyone. If people just want me to go right back into the plot, and then once it's finished, MAYBE a sequal for the story can be made. But I'm not making promises though. Or someone(s) can do world chapters to make the story more intersesting, but no sequal will be made if I choose to. Seems fair, hmmm? Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
RoxSox 3,593 Posted November 1, 2010 I say you go right back into story... Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Sarrin 100 Posted November 2, 2010 stik to story Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Tom 437 Posted November 6, 2010 Majority of the people has spoken: Stick to the story. So the climax should be coming soon. And then the story will end within 10 chapters. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
DragonMaster 1,166 Posted November 7, 2010 Nice chapter. Can'w wait to see what comes next. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Sarrin 100 Posted November 8, 2010 yes finally the conclusion! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
fallout48 0 Posted November 14, 2010 Hi just signed up i read your last 2 stories within say the last 4 hours i love them you're a great writer if all goes as planned i'll be checking this forum daily you've gained a new fan seriously keep up the good work! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Tom 437 Posted November 16, 2010 Chapter 16 - Heartless After a year's worth of traveling to many worlds, we find our heroes resting for an important event... The gummi ship flew aroumd mindlessly in the Lanes Between. The gang have traveled across the worlds, searching for information on Xehanort, and perhaps finding Ryusei if he isn't dead. Sadly, they only found out that Xehanort's been creating experiments, and using them to eradicate the gang. But they fell to the hands of the heores, thus failing. Xehanort's whereabouts is still unknown. And there has been no signs of Ryusei, not even a Heartless or a Nobody. Everything went the same. Everything went smoothly. Everything except now... Kevin and Max slept back to back, while Vincent stood there, with his eyes closed. Beep beep beep. A noise occured from the monitor that made Vincent open his eyes. Something was going on. "Kevin," said Vincent. Kevin awkoe with a surpise. Vincent pointed at the monitor, and Kevin's eyes opened. He got up, making Max crash into the ground and waking him up. After the two made it to Vincent, they looked at the monitor and a red dot appeared on their radar. It was a world. A world they haven't visited. Yet, there was disturbence within it. Kevin looked from the monitor to the actual world, and then stayed quiet, while looking down. Max looked over to him and became concerned. "Kevin, what's wrong?" asked Max. Kevin looked up and then to Max. "It's my homeworld...Destiny Islands..." The ship flew to the world. Upon landing, Kevin, Max, and Vincent took a big look around the view. It was spectacular. The trees looked fresh and green. The water was heathly, and had a smooth sound when the waves went along the shore. The air was warm, with a nice breeze. "You guys check the other side of the island, I'll check here," said Kevin. Max and Vincent looked at each other, and followed orders. When the duo disappeared, Kevin walked around. He checked the shed, finding nothing. He walked out and saw a ladder. He went up the ladder and was a on a deck. He saw clothes, that would fit a child. He held his head, when he saw flashbacks of him, a boy, and two girls playing here. He looked to his right to find a room. Inside was blankets and pillows. More flashbacks occured, where the four kids had sleepovers in the room, having pillow fights, telling scary stories, etc. His memeories are haunting him. He walked out of there and back to the beach. By the small waterfall, he saw a cave. Then his nightmare days ago came back. Kevin widen his eyes. "The cave...the cave....the cave!" He ran over to the cave and crawled inside. Entering it, the cave was dark as always. Walking along the walls, it started to get brighter and brighter. It was clear that it was just like his nightmare. When he reach the main room, there were drawings and straight from him was a door, with light coming through the hedges. His expression went from blank to depressed, as he looked down. "Kyle..." he muttered. But his expression changed again. Upon looking up, a keyhole appeared on the door. He jumped. He summonded his Keyblade and aimed it at the keyhole. The Keyblade didn't do anything for a few seconds, but then light appeared from the tip. And it shot right into the keyhole, making a clicking noise. The door slowly opened and light burst out. Kevin covered his eyes and backed away. The light was very strong. Light wasn't the only thing that came out of that door. As Kevin tried to walk further to the door, a black object flew out of the door and Kevin ducked. The door automatically closed fast, and Kevin turned around. "What...the..." He was speechless. But whatever that was, it wasn't supposed to be in there. Kevin ran out of the cave. Once out of the cave, Kevin looked around for that unidentified black object. Looking left and right, he couldn't find it. It wasn't until he looked at the minature island where something stood on it. Kevin looked at it and then went to it. While trying to cross the bridge, he sees the thing, but it wasn't that black object...it was a boy. Instead of running, he walked to him and knelt down. "Are you lost?" asked Kevin softly. The boy's back was facing him and it stayed like that. The boy responded, "Yes. Lost....like him...." Kevin looked at him strange and said, "What?" He wiped his eyes, and when he looked at him again, the boy was no more. Rather, there was the black object again. It too had it's back towards Kevin. But it was now humaniod, and it's presence made Kevin's stomach uneasy. The thing moved a little, and then revealed one of his yellow eyes to him. Kevin looked at the eye and muttered, "Heartless..." Kevin then summonded his Keyblade and was ready to fight it. The Heartless only starred at him, then turning his back to him again. The Heartless roses his arms in the air and a ball of darkness covered it. The ball then flew into air and grew bigger. It grew as big as the minature island, and then it stopped. It then started to grow limbs, four growing from each corner. A small circle grew from the top, identifying its head. The head grew black long string-like hair, and big yellow eyes popped on the face. And for the last of its transformation, a giant hole appeared in the middle of the body. It then shaped into a heart. Kevin then finally knew what he was dealing with. A Darkside. Kevin heard footsteps behind him, and he turned around, only to find Max and Vincent running to him. When they caught up, Max said, "Is this a Heartless?" Kevin nodded. Vincent also joined in the conversation. "This is a big Heartess. Whoever's Heartless this is must have a lot of darkness in his heart." Kevin nodded to that as well. As Max pulled out his sword and shield and Vincent pulling out his guns, Kevin yelled out, "The three of us can take it!" the three readied for combat. Someone else, however, wanted to join in as well. As the trio ran towards the Darkside, creatures popped up. They were a blue color and a emblem different to Heartless and Nobodies. They were..."The Unversed?!? What do they want?" Kevin cried out. While he said this, the creatures wanted the Darkside. Unversed flew towards the giant creature and began dissolving in to it. More also popped up and repeated the same thing. Kevin was struck dumb. It's like the Unversed was attracted to the Heartless... It was then what was happening told him something. "Guys...I know what's going on. This Heartless is attracting Unversed. This can only mean the the person's heart is full of darkness...he's the one who created them! His heart is supposed to be used to create the X-Blade!" The Darkside was completely transformed. It stars the same but was blue instead, its eyes was now red, and the heart in the middle curved to look like the Unversed emblem. The trio took no time to stand around. They ran after this Heartless-Unversed fusion, and hope to defeat this monstrocity. Who is this person's heart of darkness? Is he/she one of Xehanort's experiments...or is he/she someone familar? Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Space Cowboy 1,392 Posted November 16, 2010 Whoa. A Darkside-Unverse fusion. That's pretty cool, great chapter man. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
RoxSox 3,593 Posted November 17, 2010 -ejaculation- PERFECT! 8D Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
fallout48 0 Posted November 17, 2010 that was pretty good i certainly didn't expect that an unversed darkside since you came up with it I guess that means you get to name it Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
DragonMaster 1,166 Posted November 20, 2010 Interesting. I look forward to seeing how the rest of the story plays out. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
WolfTheDemon 414 Posted November 22, 2010 This is awsome! I read all of your story's and their off the hook! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
heartless101 83 Posted November 23, 2010 Woah, that was awesome: a unversed-darkside! Please keep on writing more Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Tom 437 Posted November 23, 2010 I see that many people liked the Unversed-Darkside fusion thingy. I liked it too 8D And for the next chapter, I will address it as Darkversed, so if anyone is confused with the name, then there you go. Also, I got some good news. After this story is done, I plan on working some more stuff for this. Turns out, it's going to be a series. YAY! Next part of this series is the origins, and this is basically before Kingdom Hearts: The Lost Star, explaining details of the past, in viewpoints of different characters. This will also fully explain some events that will be later shown in TLS as I write it, as there will be really confusing parts. It might hold some secrets and truths that will make you Perhaps...a sequal may arise from this. But that's all I will say for now. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
heartless101 83 Posted November 23, 2010 Wow that's awesome DeathSkull 8D can't wait for the next chapter and the next story to this series Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Tom 437 Posted November 23, 2010 Next chapter should be up within today to a couple of days. It entirely depends on how much time I'll have. But Thanksgiving is Thursday so I have no idea if it will be bumped to a week Yeah, I hope everyone is excited for TLS series. I decided on this after realizing how popular it got (I honestly didn't think it would be THAT popular ). It's has the second highest replies for a story, The 'To Do' List beats this by 10, or should I say 9 when I post this. I'm hoping I can beat the score. Not for bragging or trying to be the very best, I just want to get the highest to set the standards > I am still planning out a possible sequal, so don't get too excited. Plus, I'll be working on an Avatar fanfic (yes, the Last Airbender one) and it will be finished before any sequal come up. Be sure to read that one. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
WolfTheDemon 414 Posted November 25, 2010 That was so awsome Deathskull and even your story about Sora being possed by Vanitas was awsome too. You make so many awsome story's! Oh yea I'm also making a story of my own. Also good luck with trying to be the best! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
JesusFreak 41 Posted November 30, 2010 Next chapter should be up within today to a couple of days. It entirely depends on how much time I'll have. But Thanksgiving is Thursday so I have no idea if it will be bumped to a week Yeah, I hope everyone is excited for TLS series. I decided on this after realizing how popular it got (I honestly didn't think it would be THAT popular ). It's has the second highest replies for a story, The 'To Do' List beats this by 10, or should I say 9 when I post this. I'm hoping I can beat the score. Not for bragging or trying to be the very best, I just want to get the highest to set the standards > I am still planning out a possible sequal, so don't get too excited. Plus, I'll be working on an Avatar fanfic (yes, the Last Airbender one) and it will be finished before any sequal come up. Be sure to read that one. Tom, have I ever told you how much I love you? Your stories are my favorite next to The To Do list. (: I cannot wait for that Avatar fanfic! And I'm glad your making a TLS series. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
