Sorage55 10 Posted May 7, 2010 its cuz his names kevin and he was trying to be funny I was? T_T Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Sarrin 100 Posted May 26, 2010 i really hope he continues this story it was an inspiration to my fan-fics two Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
heartless101 83 Posted May 27, 2010 DeathSkull3000, was an inspiration of writing my fan fic so I hope that he keeps on writing Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Tom 437 Posted May 27, 2010 Don't worry guys, I'll keep writing. I kind of lost inspiration to write KH stories, but you can always try to read Dragonforce and Warrior of the Twilight. I am working on those two Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
heartless101 83 Posted May 29, 2010 r u going to write a sequel to this? Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Tom 437 Posted May 30, 2010 Sequel...er....I don't think so. I haven't thought about that. The way the story ends doesn't really offer a sequel. I mean, in my head, it might offer up a sequel (due to a certain event that will happen at the end as well), but I do not intend to continue The Lost Star as a multi-part series. All the Kingdom Hearts stories I thought up and written, don't usually have any sequels. However, as for regular non-KH stories, I do want to create more than one story, and extend it to the fullest of my imagination and creativity. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Sorage55 10 Posted May 30, 2010 Sequel...er....I don't think so. I haven't thought about that. The way the story ends doesn't really offer a sequel. I mean, in my head, it might offer up a sequel (due to a certain event that will happen at the end as well), but I do not intend to continue The Lost Star as a multi-part series. All the Kingdom Hearts stories I thought up and written, don't usually have any sequels. However, as for regular non-KH stories, I do want to create more than one story, and extend it to the fullest of my imagination and creativity. Hmm, sounds alot like me. Only I really pretty much despise fanfics, only a select few do I concider interesting, like your fanfics for example, better than others that I have read. (I wonder if this would hurt anyone's feelings? Oh well.) Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Sorasblade524 0 Posted June 12, 2010 Aww How much longer ?! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
heartless101 83 Posted June 12, 2010 DeathSkull3000 will start writing again once he gains his intrest again in writing Kingdom Hearts fan fics again. Look at the bright side, he is still writing good stories like Warrior of the Twilight and Dragonforce Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Sorasblade524 0 Posted June 12, 2010 yea your right I should be patient. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
heartless101 83 Posted June 12, 2010 plus theres The Dark Era of Sora which is a truly magnificent story unless you've read it already Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Sorasblade524 0 Posted June 12, 2010 I'v read it already.:dodgy: Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
heartless101 83 Posted June 12, 2010 oh, well theres the story Sora's Darkness written by me Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Sorasblade524 0 Posted June 12, 2010 Hmmmmmm sounds good i'll read it. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Sarrin 100 Posted August 31, 2010 such a good story with no ending Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
heartless101 83 Posted August 31, 2010 X_X I want to find out the ending Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Xblade Aaron 11 Posted September 1, 2010 MOARRR!!! Please continue this masterpiece! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Tom 437 Posted October 3, 2010 Chapter 10 - The Adventure Begins! Graduation hits once again. After prom night, here comes graduation. And this time, it's the final graduation. Kevin, Ryusei and Crystal are ready to graduate and become Keyblade Masters. The graduation is the same as all the other graduations. Master Miller went on stage and called the names. But since this is the Senior Graduation, they dress in the outfits and wear silly hats. Not only that, they get certificates and get off stage, and into the rows of seats in the Auditorium where they would clap for their fellow graduates. There's only one problem: Master Miller isn't here. When graduation began, everyone looked around Master Miller. He was nowhere to be seen. It was strange, since he always hosts graduation every year. But alas, they had to get another master to do the job. It was a shame the record broke. The graduates were happy to get their certificates, even the trio. They were not regonized as Keyblade Apprenitices or Keyblade Warriors anymore, they were regonized as Keyblade Masters. They would then find their destiny and become successful. Kevin, Ryusei, and Crystal walked out of the Auditorium, holding their certificates in victory, with big white smiles on their faces. They finally finish their training and their learning. All that's left is destiny... As Ryusei unrolled the certificate, a gold piece of paper fell out of it. He looked down and saw the paper, questioning why it was in his certificate. Ryusei picked it up and read it. He got an uneasy feeling. "Hey guys...unroll your certificates," said Ryusei. Concerned, the two did the same and two gold pieces of paper showed up. It was the same as Ryusei. He then continued, "Its a message from Master Miller. Something's not right..." The two looked at each other and nodded. At Master Miller's training hall, Master Miller happened to be there, with a magical glowing orb, containing a black mysterious face. He was having a converstation, but stopped when the trio waltz in. He sighed as the orb turned to normal. He turned around, saying to the three, "I see that my new Keyblade Masters got my notice." Kevin, however, turned his statement around and made a question. "I see that my old master wasn't at our graduation. Where were you, Master Miller?" asked Kevin. Master Miller sighed once again and said, "Balance is gone, once again. We have a threat that could devestate existance-" He stopped when Tron entered the room. "Sorry I'm late. I had to stop somewhere." Master Miller starred at his direction and blinked. Although he was tardy, he still had a message to deliver. "As I was saying, we have a threat that could devestate existance. Over a hundred years ago, a horde of creatures, know as the 'Unversed' mysterious appeared. These creatures were made of negative emotions. They are like the Heartless and the Nobodies, but more evil and deadly. Now...they're back," said Master Miller. Crystal did not understand. "But master, can't we just take them on?" Ryusei looked at her and nodded his head. He continued her speech, "Yeah. I mean, I'm sure we can take them on!" Master Miller shook his head in response and said "That's technically not the problem. In order to create Unversed, a heart must be split in to two hearts, one of pure light and one of pure darkness. The heart of darkness has power of them. But here's the real problem: there's only one reason why someone would do that, and that would be to create the-" Tron once again interupted, saying, "?-blade..." Master Miller was silent for a while, but then continued. "Yes, the ?-blade. When the hearts of pure light and pure darkness combine, it will form it. It will then be used to start up the...the..." "Keyblade Wars..." Master Miller said, as he put his hands in his face. The trio looked at each other, nervously, and Tron just stood there, looking traquil. Crystal was then curious. She looked at Master Miller with her gleaming eyes, and proclaimed, "What should we do now?" Master Miller took his hands out of his face and then closed his eyes. "To send you four on a mission. I know you should be making your own destinies, but this is urgent. I need the four of you to set out to the worlds and eliminate the Unversed and find the two with the hearts of pure light and justice and return them to me. I choose you four because you have remarkable and unquie abilites and possess great strength. So now, your journey will start...now". Suddenly, a gummi ship appeared along the castle wall, hovering next to a window. Master Miller moved his arm and pointed his hand at the gummi ship. The four nodded and ran to the window. Once inside, the ship slowly ascended and flew away, while Master Miller starring at the last glimps of the ship and walled away. As the ship flew off, away from Castle of Sora, the trio looked out into space and saw the many bright worlds out there. Ryusei and Crystal smiled, while Kevin whistle at the amazing sight. Tron payed no attention to them and drove the gummi ship. They were finally going to explore worlds. Their dreams are coming true. Their adventure became a reality Soon, Tron spoke up. He said, "I found the first world to go to." The trio looked out the ship's window and saw a round world, that looked like a wasteland. Ryusei tilt his head and said, "Why here? This place doesn't look like it'll have anything there." Tron argued back, "Trust me." Ryusei shrugged. The gummi ship then drove to the world. The gummi ship landed on a solid but sandy surface. Everyone got ou and looked around. It was a complete wasteland, with with rocks, sand...but had familar objects. Kevin didn't like this. "I don't like this feeling I'm getting. Are you sure we're supposed to be in this world?" asked Kevin. Tron smiled evily. "We're excatly where we need to be," said Tron. Master Miller will regret the decision of putting Tron together with the trio. ______________________________________________________________________ Your long awaited chapter for this story has arrived. Feed your brain with the pleasure of my story writing. And as I continue this story, I want to add worlds to make the story better and feel like KH. But this would take up a lot of time, so I will be unable to do them. So is anyone interseted in doing worlds? It would be great and helpful for. It also shows us your writing abilities that others may want to read if you write stories. Just a thought. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
RoxSox 3,593 Posted October 3, 2010 I still would have liked some Mature material in the chapter before this one. /shotforneverlettingitgo But for serious... great way to kick the story back into gear. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
heartless101 83 Posted October 3, 2010 Great chapter man. And also, my grammar's bad so I would just make your chapters sound horrible if I wrote the chapters. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Think Pink 1,967 Posted October 3, 2010 I just finished catching up, haha. This is really good. (: Keep writing~ <3 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Tom 437 Posted October 8, 2010 Chapter 11 - Betrayal As Tron walked around, he starred at Crystal, then at Ryusei, then right back to Crystal, completely ignoring Kevin. The trio starred right back him, with no movement in their bodies. "I've waited so long for the seeds of my plan to grow...so long...now it's time to plant some more," said Tron. He then snapped his fingers. Master Miller drank his usual cup of coffee at his office. It's been a day since the four left, yet hasn't mark them Keyblade Masters yet. Walking around, holding their folders, he remembered the memories of them 8 years ago when Ryusei arrived, and then now. They were amazing. They were intelligent. They were special, different than most Keyblade wielders. It's just a shame that he won't be able to get a chance to see them again unless their destinies cross. Thinking of all these memories made him drop the folders, causing the papers to fly around. Master Miller cursed under his breath and picked up the papers. When he picked up Tron's, he squinted his eyes and noticed something. His name. Tron A. Hex. He had a familar feeling... Master Miller went to his mirror with a marker. He first writes Tron A. Hex. Then writes his name backwords. It spelled Xeh A. Nort. His face grew smaller. He finally rewrites the reversed name into one name. Xehanort, it spelled. "No...no...NOOO! How could I have not notice this!" screamed Master Miller. All along, a hidden clue to Tron's name was right there in front of him for so many years, but he failed to notice! Plotting his way here, plotting for eight years, plotting...for a plan to get the ?-blade, like he did a hundred years ago. Question is, how did he survive? That question, however, won't be answered. As this problem is more realized, a new problem is revealed. A beeping noise came from Master Miller's computer. He ran to the computer and checked the problem. A program popped up and showed vital signs for Ryusei, Kevin, and Crystal. Things weren't looking good. Crystal is MIA, as no signs popped up for her, Kevin was WIA, his breathing was low and heartbeat rate was lowering, and Ryusei...KIA. Master Miller was left with a blank, pale face. He picked up his phone and called Ignis. "Ignis, we have a problem. Get here ASAP." When Tron snapped his fingers, Crystal yelped in pain, falling to her knees and to the ground. The other two yelled, "CRYSTAL!!!". Ryusei, without thinking, summoned his Keyblade and ran after Tron. Tron only smiled and snapped his fingers, using the other hand. Ryusei then stopped and started to get flashbacks. Memories...that he doesn't remember. They all flashed so quickly that he couldn't see them, but Ryusei couldn't handle all the memories pouring into his head. He got on to his knees and clutched his head. Kevin looked at both Crystal and Ryusei. Tron took care of them with two snaps of his fingers. Looks like it was up to him. He summoned his Keyblade and charged Tron. Tron didn't hesitate to snap his fingers once again, this time using both. Before Kevin got to manage a striking blow on him, creatures of pure darkness appeared. He backed off and gripped his handle of the Keyblade hard. It was the Heartless. Purebloods, to be precise. A horde of them surrounded Kevin, outnumbering him. Kevin sighed and then attacked. Minutes and minutes passed as Crystal stayed in a state of unconsciousness while Ryusei in a state of shock, Kevin kept destroying more and more Heartless. He began growing weaker, tired, and bloody. After defeating the last wave of Heartless, all that was left standing was him and Tron. Tron shook his head and decided to do this himself. He summoned his Keyblade, a dark aurora of energy surging its hunger for power. Kevin ignored his pain from the last batch and let out a battle cry, running at Tron. Then, the two clashed and the war between the two has started. Kevin mostly went on the offensive, striking at him once and followed up with another strike, and throwing a punch at him to gain the advantage at this fight. However, this failed, as Tron blocked each attack and struck back with a counterstrike. Kevin knew he couldn't win this fight. But it could possibly buy time and hope help will get on the way. As Kevin continue his dispense of light, Tron blocked more and easier with each strike, then channeling the darkness and strike back him. Soon, one of Kevin's blows was stopped completely, and Tron pushed him back. A flying Kevin hit the solid rock at full force, hurting his whole body. He couldn't take the pressure anymore. As he laid on the rock, his head bleeding and filled with cuts and bruises, he dropped his Keyblade and it disappeared. He huffed and puffed as death awaited at his feet. Tron walked over to him and aimed his Keyblade at Kevin's stomach. Kevin closed his eyes and prays in his head. He pulled it back and drove it in for the final blow. But, it wasn't the final blow. When Kevin opened his eyes, he saw that he wasn't the one stabbed. It was Ryusei! Ryusei manage to break out of the flashbacks from Tron's trap. But he didn't have enough time to get Kevin out of there, so he had to take the blow for him. Ryusei coughs up lots of blood and his hands trembles and shakes. Tron was furious. He moved his Keyblade away from Kevin pushed it out of Ryusei."You've been interfearing with my plans, and this is the last time you do it. I'll make sure this time I'll put out of your misery. For good," said Tron. Ryusei said nothing, but spit blood at him. Tron wiped his face and charged his Keyblade with strong orange energy. Onced it was complete, he aimed his Keyblade up in the air and then- CLING! The Keyblade made a metal noise and then silence grew back. Ryusei didn't move from his spot or move at all. A pool of blood surrounded him. Kevin looked in digust, fear, and rage. He witnessed his friend murdered by the hands of supposed ally. But he betrayed them. He was never their ally. Just a guy who's evil. Tron wiped the blood off his Keyblade and turned to Kevin. He walked slowly again, but this time, slouched down and began to spare Kevin, saying, "I used most of my strength fighting you and killing him. So I decided to let you live, for the time being. Besides, you won't be able to stop me now". He began to walk away, but stopped and and turn around. He aimed his Keyblade at Kevin, which then shot a beam of light at Kevin's heart. After it was gone, Kevin's pupils disappeared and he looked as him he wasn't living at all. But Tron explains, "I locked your heart so that you can loose the connections between your friend, Crystal, so you can't track her. I'll be needing her for my...experiments" He grabs Crystal and opens up a portal of darkness. Before he goes in it, he states his lasts words to Kevin. "By the way, you can call me Xehanort. I'm sure you know me," said Xehanort. Xehanort then walked into the dark dimensions. Kevin just sat there, brain dead, starring at Ryusei's lifeless body. Later, as Kevin still sits without control of his body, a man appeared out of nowhere. He was wearing a black robe with a hood over. He looks around but finally finds Ryusei on the ground. He picks him up and walks away. Kevin wanted to say something, but he couldn't. Instead, his eyes moved down slowly, and when his eyelids covered his eyes, Kevin was no longer active. Eventually, Ignis appears with Nero and Cartes. The three look in horror they only see Kevin here and not the other two. Ignis goes down to Kevin's level and shakes him. "Kevin! KEVIN! What happened?!? Talk to me Kevin!," cried Ignis. All hope is lost for the trio. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Space Cowboy 1,392 Posted October 8, 2010 Another exciting chapter! Tron = Xehanort. Who would have guessed. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
heartless101 83 Posted October 8, 2010 Nice job man ^^ I like the twist. Tron=Xehanort Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
RoxSox 3,593 Posted October 8, 2010 . . . Holy shit. o.o Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites