Larxene12 86 Posted February 19, 2010 here is the quick sample of the book im writing! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Sorage55 10 Posted February 19, 2010 Its interesting. I was a bit confused on the characters and background story but I feel it rolls itself out. The queens of darkness and light are fighting, you are controlling over the element of fire, etc. etc. it sound SO interesting! But I have no idea who or what your talking about. Give history on everyone and everything important to the story. -this has been a brutal review (rofl) Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Larxene12 86 Posted February 19, 2010 lol, its supposed to be confusing at first~ ^~^ that was my plan~! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Sorage55 10 Posted February 19, 2010 Ingenius then. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Larxene12 86 Posted February 20, 2010 lol ty~! im adding the next parts on my Word right now~ Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
emmett69 0 Posted February 21, 2010 that's really good! I would never have been able to come up with smoething like that! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
