KinataKeyblade 4 Posted October 8, 2012 Normal POV i was a nice day in Whale Island( i got it from HunterXHunter.)... "HEY GET BACK HERE YOU BASTARD!" Said a crowd chasing a teen Girl ..Well...not exactly nice day... "No Way!!" said The Teen running away even Faster... The Girl was Hikari Moshiro (ah.. i know the name is kinda Japan.sorry). she is a delinquent in her Island.she has long blond and kinda brown hair ,she has Blue eyes and she always wears a a Black jacket . the collar is Grey ,she wears long blue jeans and use fighting glove only in her right hand . Her shirt is Red . and she wears black shoes. HIkari dashes running away from the angry mob and hides behind a barrel .. "Psst!! Hikari!! Over here!!" shouted a boy's voice making her suprised..she looks up in a big tree where the voice comes from, SHe smiles "Thankyou Frost!" She whispered as she jumped to the tree's branch and sits while letting a sigh of relief "Can you not do any trouble for one day??" said the boys voice again she looks to her left .where a Teen boy was leaning on the tree's branch, he has short light Blue hair and he also wears a jacket only its Brown with weird symbols on it. he wears White shoes and Long black Jeans. "hehe...sorry" She said nervously whiile in a defend position ."what am i gonna do attack you knucklehead??" Frost asked sarcasticly . "We are FINALLY GOING OFF THIS ISLAND!!" hikari Shouted and she regreted what she said.. cuz the angry mob goes under the tree looking for her "you idiot!'' whispered Frost Hitting her head "Ouch!" she whispered. "whaddaya wanna do? make them find us?!" Frost whispered angrily "hey im just glad in a ew more days were off this island with our Big Boat!" She whispered happily Frost facepalms ..."oh why do i do this ??" he thinked . suddenly a figure jumos to the tree branch . suprising Frost and Hikari "ow man..." hikari said"Frost.." Hikari said while looking at him 'Yeah i know" Frost said HIkari and Frost dashes to the forest running away from the figure, they hid behind trees and also hiding their tracks "hosh hosh..We got away..i think.." Hikari panted and sitting On the ground"not yet.." Frost said Calmly..hikari looks Frost in disbelieve.."Ur not tired?? we run over 10 Kilometes damnit!!! and that person is still tracking us?? uh..i always hated that guy..." HIkari grouled angrily "hehe ..i had run 2 kilometers every day squinty" he pronounced proudly ,HIkari elbowed him making him shrieked "oh Shut up droopy eyes!" she said "HEy guys!" said a voice . they both search for the voice when a person suddenly jumps and lands in front of them . it was a teen boy that had short red hair (Note : he is not like Axel !see in Tales of The Abyss Luke )and Grey eyes . he wears a white shirt he also wears and A short Blue Jacket,wears Orange Short's an Blue Shoes. "Oh ...KRono...we have situas-' hikari was cutted by Krono "i know..its him right??" he asked seriously."..Yeah....i" She whispered sadly. Sorry if its short..im not a good writer sorry ! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
soniplushie 49 Posted October 8, 2012 its nice just improve da Englishes in a Edit. that's pretty much it Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
KinataKeyblade 4 Posted October 9, 2012 ah i see thx for advise Next Episode In another place... "Sora!Kairi! lunch is ready!!" Roxas called Sora and Kairi. Sora was helping Kairi searching for pretty seashells In This Story Roxas and Namine was out in Sora and Kairi's body and out of Darkness. Because Roxas and Namine's Heart (i think nobodies had hearts..) was pure they got out. and what bout Axel?? he is in Hollow Bastion or should i say Radiant Garden. (and Xion?? Sorry but Xion wont be in the story...) "Yeah were coming Roxas!!" Sora Said to him as Sora and Kairi walks to Roxas. "Thankyou for the food!" Sora,KAiri,Roxas,Riku , Donald and Goofy Said as they all Dig in . "Roxas!! The Meat is SUPPERB!!" Sora shouted as he digs up his food fast ."really? Thanks" ROxas said Cheerfully ,glad by the comment . "Yeah!-OH! ng! oh i just love the Mash Potato!" Gladfully Kairi said gladfully eating her mash . "...This maybe the best Cake i have ever eaten.." Namine and Riku said Within a shocked and Glad FAce "NYAM NYAM NYAM!!! i just love the roast meat! what the meat?!" Donald asked "Duck" ROxas said simply. Donald became paled white as a sheeted and then raise in anger "GRAWAWAWA!! Dont ROAST DUCK! GRAWAWA IM GONNA GET Y-" DOnald said furiosly but was hold back by Goofy . Roxas just stared in confusion and suprised by the bursted Duck . ''Gawsh Roxas.... Donald deosnt like roasted uck or cooked duck " Goofy exclaimed. "haha...yeah ..sorry DOnald" Roxas apologised nervously . "HMPH!" DOnlad turn away from Roxas "Haha Looks like u made an enemy Roxas!" Sora said. "At Least i dont even forget how do swim!" Roxas take backs him. "ow Cmon! it was 2 months ago!'' Sora cried out loud. Everyone laughed Now in another place "is he still tracking us??" Hikari asked while running with the others Frost closes his eyes concentrates on the sound . ".....Sadly...Yes..he's still tracking us and he's coming fast!" frost exclaimed hurr. "alright! we split up! by 7 pm meet at our hide out alright?? " Krono suggested. "Deal" they aall agreed. and they split up Frost's POV we Split up in a sec. Kinata goes ahea, Frost goes West and i Go East .i ran in a fast speed ;' i hope we dont meet them again..' i thinked. after 3 hpurs of running i got tired . and i saw a clean watery fountain. "AH! finallyy.... something to drink!" i said hapily . hurry to the fountain and fills up my bottle and drink in a hurry "ahh...i feel so good .." i said to myself. after taking a nap for 1 hour i woke up . i started walk to my hide out. Suddenly a figure has jumped infront of me . i knew that smell... its.. "did u really think humans like you can get away from Destiny?" asked the figure.i groweled . I summoned my long sword . ready to battle . "NO WAY YOUR GONNA TAKE HIKARI , ME , FROST BACK TO THAT HELL!" I shoute at him furiosly . The figure laughed. "Foolish humans " he said. i angered. i quickly slashed him but he dodged. "I have improved than the last time .Ferxas.." i said as the figure opened his hood revealing a man (..like Axel or XIgbar perhaps) he had black hair and Purple eyes. He has a little scar on his right cheek . "YEs you have..but your still not strong enough .." ferxas said as he pointed his finger on me , the finger started to glow dark. SUddenly i felt no air "Ukh!" i twitched . i couldn't breathed . "the others wil join you so dont worry" Ferxas said as he walked torwards me. "No..dont take them..." i said . after that everything went Dark Frost's POV i suddenly felt Krono's is in trouble but we agreed to split until 7pm. i was sitting under a tree laying on the tree . i remembered the things that those people done to us...we were finally going away on this dreaded island...can't we have our freedom? Suddenly 2 figures got in front of me . the other was Ferxas i know does people in dark coats then i take out my blade .Then i noticed Krono was passed out in Frexas's arm (like Xemnas carrying Xion ) . i got angry "Let him go! why do you peoplo do this to us?! we havent done anything bad to you damnit!" i shouted angrily as i dashed and slashed the figures arm releasing Krono , and then i quickly got him and fleed. "i need to tell this to Hikari or she'll be in danger" i said as pulled out my cellphone pressing the number but then my cell got snatched by the figures. "looking for this?" as the hooded figure crushe my phone . ow man! i just got that cell phone!. The hooded reveale himself. he was a teen boy ages as me ,krono and kinata. he had Black short hair and red eyes. "tch tch tch Frost. you dont think Xorcas would just do nothing right? " Xorcas said to me. i twitched in disgust. "Why cant you just leave us alone?" iasked him angrily. he laughed." we have to same destiny Frost.. to be used as weapons to kill. ah..i remember Hikari was the top killer in our p-" Xorcas said bringing terrible memories but i stopped him. "dont you dare say that to me...and especially to HIkari you jerk" i hissed with hatred and venom in my words.he then chuckled and Dashed at me. he punched me my a tree. i growled in pain. i saw Krono laying on the ground hurted. "lets fight later in the Arena Battle alright?" as he summoned a snake bitting me. i frowled in pain . i was paralized and poisoned . i Screamed hurted then slept into the deep sea of darkness. Hope you liked it Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Jason1 105 Posted October 17, 2012 Oooohh yeah. I love it! Please keep up the great work Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
KinataKeyblade 4 Posted October 19, 2012 (edited) Oooohh yeah. I love it! Please keep up the great work Thanks! and i read your kairi 358/2 days it is really awesome especially u added some pics perfectly matched with the story !NOW OF WITH THE STORY!! Sora : Dude, Kinata! this story has had a new chapter for ....THAT LONG?! Me : SOrry sorry ! i-i was busy with homework (That was lamest excuse ..) Sora & Roxas : Liar! ME : OK Ok OK! sheesh...*Cough* grampas *Cough* Sora: HEY!! ME :*Pushes SOra away* i hope you will enjoy the new chapter! HIkari's POV i heard Frost's screamed, i shivered and i know that means he's in trouble..i suddenly rmembered all of those awull memories... screams...blood in my hand..i killed thousands of innocent people.. the blood, the sword, the stabs, everything. SUddenly "HIKARI!" i heard Krono yelled. i saw him running torwards me. "Krono!!" i said suprised.wait..he.. "Cmon Hikari! lets get outta here! there's no more time!" he said. "BUt we promised we be in the base and what bout Fr-" " Forget bout him! we have to go now!" he said to me and grabbed my arm. i suddenly remembered something. I quickly grab a kunai in my pocket and satb him in the chest. he cursed of pain and lied on the ground. i then pointed my kunai at his troat. "HIkari? why are y-" " Your not Krono" i said simply. " Krono would never leave his friend or break a deal. and besides...why would Krono smell like fish so badly?he hates fish " i mockingly said bout fish.Krono would never eat something if its F-I-S0H.. he then get angry "SO WHAT?!" The imposter said to me. HE quickly slashed me with his sword but i dodged it.i cut a little of my hair though. Then He Revealed his true self. i knew it was him..Zero.He had White Short hair (NOT RIKU!) and he weared a cloak..."Zero tell me why are you here??" i asked at him while quickly wear a red glove on my left hand. "To Get you back to there. HIkari . And besides-" he said as he punched me in the gut , i hissed. "-. You must remember..him." i SNaped and punched with my red glove so hard., his head got hit by a tree. "DOnt you ever speak bout him...AND I HATE HIM! HE"S THE ONE THAT MADE MISERY TO SORCRUS EMPIRE!!HE KILLED BILLIONS OF PEOPLE! YOU EXPECT ME TO FORGIVE HIM AFTER WHAT HE HAS DONE TO ALL OF US?! :" i Yelled as i stabbed his hands with my knifes..right in the shoulder. He then screamed in pain. i stared at him coldly. i never forgived all of them.... he looked at me with scared eyes "you havent emproved Hikari." SOmeone sais. i snaped at looked around. Suddenly someone stood infront me. His face was seen . HE then punched me in the stomach and kicked me and pinned me to the tree.i groweld.i then chuckle. "WHats so funny?! your gonna be taken idiot!" Zero said mockingly. i smiled. Oscurità e Luce ... Per favore dammi il tuo potere "Checkmate" A Light pillar burst out in the woods. making villagers gasping all round. i got sucked by some kind of wormhole.blanked Sora's POV Me and RIku were walking on the each taking resh air. Donald is still mad becauze Roxas cooked Ducks (LOL). then we saw three light just from the sky fall directly to the ocean. "Wowowowow! what was that?!?!" i asked stunned. "Beats me. ill go check it. Sora,call the others" RIku said while using glide to the ocean . i quickly ran into the house. when we got outside. Riku was on the ocean.pulling something i guess. so i,MIckey used glide. "Man this person is thin as a stick but wigh as an elephant! Sora help me!" RIku said pulling something in the ocean. i helped him pulled. it was a teen boy. "GUys !! i found 2!!" MIckey said pulling a teen girl and a teen boy. when we got back to the bach. it was 2 boys and 1girl. the girl had many scars and bruises. "OH god this is bad!!" Kairi said about to cast cure on her but RIku stopped her."Kairi, we dont even know these people" he said."BUt we should still help her" Namine butted in glaring at him. RIku sighed and Kairi casted cure on her "nngg.." The Girl said. she opened her eyes sitting up and scracthing her back head/ then he looked at us at DOnald Goofy and Mickey. her eyes widened... well i cant blame her for not being suprised. She quickly got up and summoned her sword." who are you and what do you want?" SHe asked She then looked at 2 boys and look back at us with a death glare. "DId you hurt them? answer me now" she said with a dark tone. i shivered i got scared. "Well you just...fall from the sky" i said nervously. She raised her eyebrow "well....you people did cure me." She said looking her arm healed. She bowed "im sorry for startling you" she said. she's so polite... She quickly goes to the 2 boys and slapped the Blunette's face. he then snaped. "HUwa!! oh HIkari! wait...wasnt i captured??" he asked. "Well...i use...it" The girl named HIkari said in a nervous tone. The boys eyes widened. " ARE YOU INSANE?!" HE said shaking her.he then looked at us and snarled. "Hikari you have to stop trusting people so much" he said. "ohcmon FRost their good people! they took care of my wounds!" Hikari shouted at the boy "Well...alright....thankyou for doing this to us. my names Hikari and this is FRost. over there is Krono." she said pointing at the sleeping boy HIkari's POV well their nice i can tell...but i still need to keep my cautions... "Im SOra!" the brunette said to me cheerfully"The grampa haired boy is RIku!" he said pointing at the silvernette. RIku glared him."ANd thats my girlfriend Kairi!' he said pointing at the redhead. she smiled at me "im Roxas and this is Namine" The blond boy said to me and pointed at the blond girl. "The names Mickey mouse! over there are Donald and Goofy!" The Mouse said . then he pointed at the duck and the tall-dog-thing... Then they set up firewood since it night. we ate fish that RIku and Sora caught. suddenly Kairi asked "Um so.... how did you and your friends fall out from the sky?" she asked "Uh...well....we were just sleeeping.." i lied . "Hey what did you guys do in childhood?" SHe asked. i , Krono, and Frost stopped. there was silence. we three had a sad face. "i wanna get some fresh air." i said sadly and ran to the woods Roxas's POV i noticed when KAiri asked Hikari she had a sad face and ran to the woods. "i-um.. sorry did i say something wrong?" Kairi asked..Uh...duh? "Well its just that.... we didnt get a good childhood" Krono said hesitated. i noticed he got paled after being questioned.frost looked annoyed. " maybe we should check on her. Roxas you go!" Sora said "Hey why me!?!" i asked suprised "Kairi's need to set the food and riku ,DOnald,Goofy, and Ki- i mean Mickey are gonna get more wood!" he said....uhh...whaddabout you?! "Alright fine" i said in defeat i then run to woods.i searched and searched and saw Hikari she was sitting on a palm tree and looking at the view. it was beatifull. the moon was light as kingdom hearts. and not to mention the ocean reflected the moon . "I finally found you" i said exhausted sitting on the same plam tree she is. "Im sorry" she said then she grab a coconut and slished the top with a dagger from her pocket..TIP : NEver Try to attack her without caution. "Here" she said giving me coco but she didnt looked at me anymore she looked at the view. i quickly drinked it.i then looked at her. " can you tell me your childhood?" i asked "...you woudnt believe me even if i told you" she said simply.i narrowed "i was never supposed to exist" i said . she didnt eye widened but looked at me. she stared at me and sighed. "i...never had family..since i was only 5 years old.. i was assigned as a battle slave.." she said in a dark tone. my eyes widened. okay...i was never existed...but i rather be like that than being like her. " for 10 years ive been doing is just killing thousands of innocent people..i didnt know what to do because i was always given hunderds of missions" she said.. i didnt know what do either when i was in the organization 13 ..i had nothing to do but finishing missions. "Then when my test to be a official soldier....at noon suddenly the prisoners attacked and killed the elite soldiers..one of them was a giant monster.. and he killed my best friend" she said .. i lost Xion back in the organization... "i got angry and killed all of them... blood stained in my hand...there were no possibly to redeem my sins.." she said with no life in her tone.. i looked at her..she shed a single tear. she wiped it off. "Well...you happy to know?" she asked. i just stared when she patted my back and run ahead. i ran behind her. i grabbed her hand so we didnt get lost. we walked slowly to the others. ...she's kind but has a blade in her heart..she looks nice and gentle warm..but...her hands are cold...i wish i could do something.her hnds need to be holded by someone else....She's like me...but even worse. "im sorry..."i said to her. "Its alright!" she said cheerfully. i looked back at her. her sad face turned to a happy cheerfull face. "even though my childhood is bad...i know many othre people has worsed"she said. i stopped. i looked at her. sshe smiled. "you mean you know?" i asked stunned. " you look very similar to Sora, not to mention Namine is similar to Kairi, and i know about heartless,nobodies. everything." she said. "How do you know this ?" i asked. she chuckled. "you'll know when times comes buddy": She said simply. RIku's POV me and the others are still waiting for Roxas and Hikari. well Roxas hasnt gone to the woods yet...and so Hikari. i wonder if their alright. then they came back. They were holding hands. "Sorry to worry you guys " she apologized "Ahh its all my fault! i Krono told me you had a bad childhood! i so sorry!!" KAiri said worrying "No its okay haha..." she said nervously.. kairi kairi always worrying people "Hye Hikari what did you do in the woods?" i asked.she looked at me. "oh i wanted to see the view better so i sit at a palm tree." she said "hey guys lets tell ghost stories!!" Sora said. we all stared at him. Then Hikari mouthed something to Roxas but i didnt understand.he then wanted to laugh. "HIkari!" Sora said then he throw a flashlight at her. she grabbed it. "but...im not really good at telling one.." she said unconfident. " just tell one you know" Frost said.she thinked and her eyes sparkles. she then turns on the flashlight making her face hollow. "alright...200 years ago Rotsu Gakuen highschool was an ancient shrine for demons. but then the humans finally fight them and took their base.the . a skeleton was buried on that ground, the demons asked them to buried it as an agreement if the humans bury the skeleton they will leave. then 190 years later as in 10 years ago. a architect build a school on that same ground, they dispose the skelton. then 7 years laters there were reported missing people on that school. especially janitors and teacher. finally, 3 kids decided to go to the high school. when they go to the class. suddenly a skeleton and grabbed one of them . the rrost said.Fest run. while the captured one got devouired by the skeleton. the skeleton used the kid's body and there was screams everywhere from the school. in the morning. police arrived and also reporters to see all of the kids body found on the classroom, the cafeteria, and the teacher's room. then the school was closed. and the one that goes in...never cames out. THE END!" she said with a happy face .....Kairi was hugging Sora to death of scared and also Sora was paled white he shivered in fear. Donald and Goofy was hiding behind Mickey. Mickey shivered a little. Namine was eyes widened. but me,Roxas,Frost ,Krono were.... frozen. who knew a girl as her could have such a story. "dude...Hikari...you the heck did you come up with that idea?!" Sora asked her with a scared voice. "well...my seni-i mean friends told me bout it." she said. then i noticed Roxas stared a her with a weird face "Weve troubled you enough." She said. "Dont worry!" Sora said as he goes in the gummi-ship "Kairi and Namine..you'll stay here alright?"Sora said. They nods "You should Stay here!" said Namine.Hikari was suprised "No we sh-"she was cutted by Donald."Cmon its lots of fun!'' He said.HIkari sighed in deeat"Alright alright" Edited November 13, 2012 by KinataKeyblade Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
