RikuLove416 23 Posted September 18, 2012 This Story Truly Touched My Heart *Snifs* Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Scamper 4 Posted September 18, 2012 (edited) ...But it wasn't broken. The spelling and grammar is in a way. Edited September 18, 2012 by fonoly Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Queen Tery 4,591 Posted September 18, 2012 (edited) The spelling and grammar is Says the person who didn't put a period at the end of their sentence. Your sentence also doesn't have a predicate. Edited September 18, 2012 by Ertyx 1 XIIISwords reacted to this Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Jim 2,990 Posted September 18, 2012 7 TheApprenticeofKingMickey, Yang, Queen Tery and 4 others reacted to this Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Scamper 4 Posted September 18, 2012 Says the person who didn't put a period at the end of their sentence. Your sentence also doesn't have a predicate. Are happy now?Because I'm not (I'm not going to change post 22 because that is supposed to be mostly in his words). Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Queen Tery 4,591 Posted September 18, 2012 Are happy now? Because I'm not (I'm not going to change post 22 because that is supposed to be mostly in his words). I'm just saying. lol If you're going to correct someone's grammar then you should use proper grammar, as well. 1 Kirux reacted to this Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Weiss 8,279 Posted September 18, 2012 I wuvs tis storae. Et is sew amezink I mit cri. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kirux 1,224 Posted September 18, 2012 Are happy now? You're missing a subject in that one, dear. 4 Queen Tery, Jim, Weiss and 1 other reacted to this Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Jim 2,990 Posted September 18, 2012 This is hilariously ironic, the way the conversation's going. 3 Kirux, Weiss and XIIISwords reacted to this Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kirux 1,224 Posted September 18, 2012 This is hilariously ironic, the way the conversation's going. I think I spent 3/4ths of my likes in this thread today. 2 Queen Tery and XIIISwords reacted to this Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Jim 2,990 Posted September 19, 2012 bles dis tred tank u foar ur blesing iz veri kind ov u 1 Yang reacted to this Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Scamper 4 Posted September 19, 2012 Why do a lot of people not use proper grammar and spelling? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Dracozombie 4,554 Posted September 19, 2012 Why do a lot of people not use proper grammar and spelling? To annoy the people who can't tell when something's supposed to be a joke literary masterpiece. 4 Kirux, Jim, VanitasisKirby and 1 other reacted to this Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Jim 2,990 Posted September 19, 2012 Why do a lot of people not use proper grammar and spelling? *facepalm* I make an effort to use proper grammar and spelling with most of the stuff I write. I don't know how you haven't figured it out by now, but this story was clearly supposed to have poor grammar and spelling. Ever heard of "The Poptart Tragedy"? Or, possibly, Dolan Duck? Or, how about this one: "this-is-the-random-section-so-don't-take-it-seriously"? I don't understand why you feel the need to continuously point out the obvious fact that this story doesn't have good grammar. If you want quality stories with proper grammar, go to the writing section or look for some other quality fanfictions all over the web. Thank you, and have a nice day. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shana09 5,769 Posted September 19, 2012 Finished correcting this mess. Are happy now? Because I'm not (I'm not going to change post 22 because that is supposed to be mostly in his words). You misspelled "ting" while you are trying to correct it. 2 Jim and Akihiko reacted to this Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Jim 2,990 Posted September 20, 2012 (edited) hai gaiz, iz jim u gaiz ben vry soportiv of mee an mai storis. becuz uv dat, i deesidud 2 maek dis thred so dat me kan writ mani traajhic stori n we kan all crai togethur 5ever. frum nao on, mai many storiz wil stei in dis tupic, so dat i not maek many toopics and ahnoy d3chiuuuuch. i wil poest neu storiz en communts wen i rite dem, k? furst storiz kan b fuond abov no neu storeez yet, bt ei wil maek neu stori suun. if u dont liek mai speling n gramur, no h9 pls tank u al 4 ur suport n i hoep wii enjoi mani sadd stori togethur, i liek to haer poztiv komment, so leev construcktiv kritisizm pls Edited September 20, 2012 by Jim 3 Zola, VanitasisKirby and Kirux reacted to this Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Weiss 8,279 Posted September 20, 2012 Wow. So... this is acutally continuing? Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Jim 2,990 Posted September 20, 2012 Wow. So... this is acutally continuing? If people want it to, it can. If I feel like you guys still want quality stories, I'll keep trying to come up with more. 2 Weiss and Kirux reacted to this Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kirux 1,224 Posted September 20, 2012 Just rereading them made me cry all over again! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Pyrrha Nikos 1,162 Posted September 20, 2012 OMG the broken grammar X'D Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kirux 1,224 Posted September 20, 2012 OMG the broken grammar X'D SIL. COME ON. DON'T BE ONE OF THEM. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Pyrrha Nikos 1,162 Posted September 20, 2012 SIL. COME ON. DON'T BE ONE OF THEM. duut eye m lyc dem :< Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
King Riku 2,063 Posted September 20, 2012 1 Pyrrha Nikos reacted to this Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Weiss 8,279 Posted September 20, 2012 SIL. COME ON. DON'T BE ONE OF THEM. Looks like we're the only ones to support this. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
