Jason1 105 Posted September 11, 2012 (edited) “I can’t see a thing in here…” “Shhh…we don’t want anyone to hear us” “Okay…you brought it right?” “Yeah, yeah…right here…woah!” “Be careful! Don’t drop it on the ground!” “I got it, I got it! Whew….Do you think we should wash it first?” “No, no…it’ll be alright” “Okay…so…I guess…now…bon appétit?” Sora let out a nervous laugh after saying that. He rubbed the back of his hair, smiling awkwardly. Kairi looked at him with a smile, and looked back down the papou fruit they both held. They were sitting inside the wooden shack that rested on the sands of the island. “You go first, Sora.” “Why me?!” “Wait….don’t we both have to take a bite at the same time?” “I don’t know…I never really knew how it worked exactly.” “Let’s just do it to be sure” “Ok…uhh…on 3?” “…..” Ignoring what he said, they both leaned in, about to take a bite. “Hey there you guys are! I’ve been looking ever-OH GOD NOT AGAIN!!” Riku threw his hands over his eyes at the sight of Sora and Kairi leaning in towards one another, remembering the last time he accidentally walked in on them kissing. “Riku!” Sora said. “It’s okay Riku. We’re just sharing a papou” Kairi said. “Ok, that’s a relief….so you guys finally got around to it, huh?” Riku said, taking a seat beside them. ______________________________________________________________________ OOC: What do you think about this? I wrote this down last night, because of how funny it was to imagine Sora and Kairi awkwardly trying to figure out how to share the papou properly, and Riku being the friend stuck in the middle of it all, haha. I'm not sure where this would go, if meant to go anywhere, but I wanted to share it with you, and I wanted to see if you had any ideas, perhaps? Anything thoughts at all, I'd love to hear it Edited September 22, 2012 by Jason1 6 Rayo_Rojo, Ultima Weapon, Scamper and 3 others reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Rayo_Rojo 253 Posted September 11, 2012 Finally! lol they better put this in one of the next games Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Aru Akise 2,540 Posted September 11, 2012 If you do not continue this story, I'll look for you all around the world to kill you! (Tsundere transaltion: Awesome story! Please, keep writing more .) Maybe you could add a prologue.. I don't know. Just make it a concrete romantic story between Sora and Kairi. *-* *-* Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Jason1 105 Posted September 11, 2012 (edited) Finally! lol they better put this in one of the next games Haha! I think about the same thing all the time. I'd love to see a scene where this happens in the next game(s) If you do not continue this story, I'll look for you all around the world to kill you! (Tsundere transaltion: Awesome story! Please, keep writing more .) Maybe you could add a prologue.. I don't know. Just make it a concrete romantic story between Sora and Kairi. *-* *-* Haha! Thank you I appreciate it, and I'm so glad you like it. I've thought about the same thing as well, about letting this lead into a romantic story, and hearing you say the same thing makes me consider it even more. We shall see.... *makes a Vexen face* Edited September 11, 2012 by Jason1 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Epic KH Fan_13 64 Posted September 11, 2012 Cool story Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Jason1 105 Posted September 15, 2012 Cool story Thank you I appreciate it, and I'm glad you like it. I'm still trying to decide whether to use this in a story, or maybe something else, if it meant to be used at all, haha 1 Epic KH Fan_13 reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
_The Door To Light_ 1,507 Posted September 15, 2012 Cute Cute ^^ Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
punchxcore 10 Posted September 17, 2012 Cute! I'm a sucker for Sora/Kairi stories, especially the romantic ones. I really hope to see more of Sora and Kairi together in KH III. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
StarStruck 78 Posted September 18, 2012 Awww it's cute^^ they finally share a Paupu^^ Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Jason1 105 Posted September 22, 2012 Cute Cute ^^ Thank you so much I'm glad you enjoyed reading it ^^ Cute! I'm a sucker for Sora/Kairi stories, especially the romantic ones. I really hope to see more of Sora and Kairi together in KH III. Thank you so much I'm the exact same way; I always love seeing the romance between Sora and Kairi And I feel the same way about KH III Awww it's cute^^ they finally share a Paupu^^ Aw thank you so much I appreciate it, and I'm glad you enjoyed reading it Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Jason1 105 Posted September 22, 2012 (edited) Thank you again for the response and support It means so much to me, and it's helped me grow closer to developing what I've written so far I've written more, incorporating this into a Post-KH II, Pre-Coded, Crossover between a television series that I don't want to reveal in this post, so it's not spoiled, haha. But what do you think about this? I'd love to hear more thoughts about this new idea, and these new sequences This takes place directly after that scene from the first post: “Hey there you guys are! I’ve been looking ever-OH GOD NOT AGAIN!!” Riku threw his hands over his eyes at the sight of Sora and Kairi leaning in towards one another, remembering the last time he accidentally walked in on them kissing. “Riku!” Sora said. “It’s okay Riku. We’re just sharing a papou” Kairi said. “Ok, that’s a relief….so you guys finally got around to it, huh?” Riku said, taking a seat beside them. "Well we were about to..." Kairi said, looking away in disappointment. "You know, they say the proper way is to-" BOOM! The floor beneath them shook. Riku jumped to his feet. "What was that?!" he said, looking around. "I don't know...it sounds like something crashed!" Kairi said. "Aw man....I dropped it!" Sora said, looking down at the ground where the papou lay. Ignoring what he said, the three rushed outside to see what happened. When they made their way to the sand, they stood with shock at the sight. Resting on the water was a large gummi ship, different from the one Donald, Goofy, Jiminy, and the King left in. "Huh? Are they back?" Sora asked. The door of the ship opened up slowly. The three of them stood there, waiting for them to come walking out. They all gave a confused look, as no one came out the ship. "That's weird...where are they?" Riku said. They slowly made their way towards the ship. "Heeey! Donald! Goofy!" Sora called out. "Mickey! You there?" Riku yelled. There was no answer. They stepped inside, looking around cautiously. The inside was completely empty. "Sora! Riku!" "Riku! Sora!" Sora and Riku both turned around in surprise, towards the front of the ship. "Huh? Is that Chip and Dale?" Sora said with a confused look. They walk over to the control panel. On the small monitor, they saw the two familiar chipmunks, jumping up and down with excitement. This takes place at a later part: Kairi wobbled to her feet. She stroked back some hair, looking around at where she was. She was surrounded by airplanes, inside a large hangar. Most of the lights were off, except for some in the center of the roof, including one directly above her. "Huh...Where am I?" she said to herself. "Hey, you there! What are you doing on private property?!" Kairi turned around, to see a man dressed in a collared shirt, with a vest and tie, looking at her with suspicion. "Huh? W-what do you mean?" she asked. "Security!" The man called out, ignoring what she said. Two men grabbed Kairi from behind. They were both wearing the identical uniform, a dark blue coat with a patrol cap. "Hey! W-What are you doing?! Let go of me!" Kairi struggled, trying to wrestle out of their grip. "What's going on here?" A soft voice called out from afar. "Mam, this girl was caught trespassing" The man in the vest said. Out of the shadows, a young woman, with long, black hair, and dark lipstick emerged. She was dressed in a dark coat, laced with red. Her green eyes looked over at Kairi. "Guys, I appreciate it...but use your eyes. This girl's obviously lost" she said. The guards let go, as the young woman stepped over to Kairi. Edited September 22, 2012 by Jason1 2 Ultima Weapon and Pyrrha Nikos reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Pyrrha Nikos 1,162 Posted September 22, 2012 Please post more Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Jason1 105 Posted September 22, 2012 (edited) Please post more Hmm.....Instead, how about I post a Kim Yoshiko comic? http://kimyoshiko.de...set=24#/d49q9ec Haha, thank you for the comment, and although it's only been a few minutes, I've decided to complete this and post it, thanks to you n___n Edited September 22, 2012 by Jason1 1 Pyrrha Nikos reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Pyrrha Nikos 1,162 Posted September 22, 2012 Hmm.....Instead, how about I post a Kim Yoshiko comic? http://kimyoshiko.de...set=24#/d49q9ec Haha, thank you for the comment, and although it's only been a few minutes, I've decided to complete this and post it, thanks to you n___n It's no problem^^ love your stories though especially Kairi's. lol that comic Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Jason1 105 Posted September 22, 2012 (edited) It's no problem^^ love your stories though especially Kairi's. lol that comic Haha, Baby Ven! ^^ Aw, thank you so much It means so much to know that, and I'm so glad you enjoy reading Kairi's Story. I've been too busy with homework to write more, sadly, but it's coming, and It's funny, I was just planning on posting my apologies on the forum http://kh13.com/forum/public/style_emoticons/default/happy.png; heh Edited September 22, 2012 by Jason1 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Pyrrha Nikos 1,162 Posted September 22, 2012 Haha, Baby Ven! ^^ Aw, thank you so much It means so much to know that, and I'm so glad you enjoy reading Kairi's Story. I've been too busy with homework to write more, sadly, but it's coming, and It's funny, I was just planning on posting my apologies on the forum http://kh13.com/forum/public/style_emoticons/default/happy.png; heh No need for apologies, school is always a priority to handle first and I will patiently wait for your stories to be posted^^ I died of laughter once I saw and read the comic strip XDDD Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Ultima Weapon 71 Posted November 1, 2012 I definitely want to read more, more!!! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Jason1 105 Posted November 5, 2012 I definitely want to read more, more!!! Thank you thank you! It's coming Very soon 1 Ultima Weapon reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
