KinataKeyblade 4 Posted August 5, 2012 WHat if sonic has a Nobody .....and the Noboy joined Organization XII??!!! hope ya like it! I awoke lying on the ground. The sun was setting. I could tell because the sky was a mix of orange, red, and yellow. Not a cloud was seen, so it couldn't obstruct the view of the sky. But...where was I? I got up and looked at my surroundings. I was in front of an alter that held an enormous green gem. It glowed with a mysterious light, making it stand out from the rest of demolished ruins. Why did this place seem familiar to me? But more importantly... Who am I? This place feels familiar, but I've never been here before. I sighed as I looked down at the ground. I saw that I was wearing bright red shoes with vertical, white stripes going across them. My hands were clad in pure white gloves. I started walking down the stairs. As soon as I hit the very last step, a sound breaks the tranquility of the area and I look for the cause. Then some kind of Portal appeared...and a person stepped out of it...i can only see....the person was a man, has yellow eyes....he walks torward's me..i wasnt afraid...i felt nothing...and the man say.. "You seek answers," he stated simply. i dint say anything.....because ...i cant feel anything..... "i can give purpose"he said.he held out his hand and five letter appeared in front of me...saying...'Sonic'. then the man Moved his hands,making the letters begin circling around ..and then..it made a new word... "Xinocs..." I muttered, looking over the name. "That is right, the new you," the man said. I couldn't see his face, but I could tell he was grinning under that hood. I don't know why he was grinning, but I tossed the thought away. He pulled out a black coat, much like his own, and handed it to me. I put it on with no objection. After all, I had nowhere to go. He opened another dark portal, which led to an enormous castle. The midnight black sky was so different in contrast to the warm, bright colors of the sky near those ruins. I was led to another man, who looked like he would take nonsense from no one. His light blue hair complemented his icy golden eyes. A distinct X-shaped scar was visible on his face. "Superior. Is he..." the scar-faced man said. "Yes. Welcome the newest member of the Organization," the man next to me said. "Number XV." 1 Sandra_Nedelcheva1998 reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Destiny_of_a_Key_Bearer 82 Posted August 5, 2012 Wow http://kh13.com/forum/public/style_emoticons/default/ohmy.png thats a lot to read, but I read it( even though I'm really not the reading type) Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
KinataKeyblade 4 Posted August 5, 2012 Hope Aeveryone Likes it.... To The Next Story X3 Chapter 2I and a person i do not know was in the castle .The Round Room ..there was 13 people in there....they were talking...laughing....but who concerns me the most was....The Boy with Blue eyes and Blond hair...he int do anything...all he did...is just stare in the air like he's a zombie or a puppet... "Good tidings, friends," a male voice announced. I recognized it as the man who brought me here. What was his name again? Xemnas was it? "Today is a momentous day," he continued. "I am pleased to announce that two new comrades have been chosen to wear the coat." He nodded towards us, so we stepped forward, right into the center of the room. "Numbers XIV and XV," he said. "Let us welcome them. One being one of the Keyblade's chosen." Keyblade? What's a Keyblade? I knew I didn't have a "Keyblade", so I guess the girl next to me possessed it. I scanned the room, looking over the other members. Xemnas sat atop the highest of the chairs in the room. X-Face was among them as well. I also saw a dude with dreadlocks, a lazy-looking guy with a mullet, a blonde-haired girl with a strange hair-do, someone who was playing pirate, a silver-haired teen, a skinny guy with blazing red hair, and someone who had pink hair. Pink of all colors. Why did I feel like cringing at the mention of the color pink? a Man with X-face on his head send me to my room...it was all..grey.. Xinocs's Journal Day 1 Today I was introduced to the rest of Organization XIII. Well, now I think it should be called Organization XV, since we have fifteen members now. It doesn't sound as catchy as "XIII" though. I was given the name "Xinocs" and a number. Anyways, I can't really do much right now except write. X-Face told me all about the other members. They are: Number I, Xemnas: The Superior. I don't know why he chose "Superior" as a title. I guess it sounds better than "Leader" or "Master". He wields Ethereal Blades. Number II, Xigbar: The Freeshooter. I wonder why he wears an eye-patch like a pirate all the time. I'll have to ask him how he lost his eye. He wields Arrowguns. Has power over space. Number III, Xaldin: The Whirlwind Lancer. Two questions about him: Why does he style his hair in dreadlocks and how in the world does he wield six lances at one time? Has power over wind. I like that bit about him. Number IV, Vexen: The Chilly Academic. I'm gonna like messing with him. He seems like he angers easily. He's a prefect person to match the "mad scientist" description. Why do I feel like messing with him? I don't know; it just feels like I need to mess with whoever's the scientist in this group. Wields a shield. Has power over ice. Number V, Lexaeus: The Silent Hero. I think he just looks intimidating, what with wielding a huge axe-sword and being over three times my own size. I don't think he sounds that bad. He's also very quiet. Now I know where the "silent" part of his title comes into play. Has power over earth. Number VI, Zexion: The Cloaked Schemer. He loves to read. Bleh. I'd never be able to sit that long reading a book. He wields a lexicon. I wonder how you harm enemies with a book? Has power over illusions. Number VII, Saïx: The Luna Diviner. I call him X-Face just because he has that X-shaped scar on his face. I was told not to call him that.Demyx calls him that as well sometimes. I won't say it anymore...at least in earshot. He's second in command of the Organization. If that's so, then shouldn't he be in Xigbar's place? He wields a huge claymore. He goes berserk during the full moon. I'd better stay out of his way during that time. Number VIII, Axel: The Flurry of Dancing Flames. His title seems to suit him. Apparently, he's the "odd duck" of the Organization. I don't see what a duck has to do with him. He wields chakrams. Has power over fire. No duh. Number IX, Demyx: The Melodious Nocturne. The laziest member of the Organization. Despite him wielding water as an element, I think I could get along just fine with him. I don't like water at all for some reason. He wields a sitar as a weapon. Strange. Number X, Luxord: The Gambler of Fate. Loves to gamble and play games. Need I say more? He wields playing cards as weapons. Has power over time. Number XI, Marluxia: The Graceful Assassin. He's not really the Organization's "Assassin", Axel apparently is. He's the guy with pink hair I saw in the Round Room. I don't know why, but the color pink makes me cringe. Not out of disgust, but I think it has something to do with my past. He wields a giant scythe. Number XII, Larxene: The Savage Nymph. Note to self: Do NOT piss Larxene off. It might be the last thing I ever do. She wields kunai knives. Has power over lightning. It suits her equally fierce personality. Number XIII, Roxas: The Key of Destiny. One of the youngest members of the Organization. He seems really quiet and unsure of himself. I don't know much about him. He's the first in the Organization to be chosen by the Keyblade, whatever that is. It sounds like a weapon. I wonder if I'll be able to see it for myself? Number XIV, Xion: She doesn't have a title. I really don't know much about her either, other that she's supposed to be "one of the Keyblade's chosen". I'm not sure what a Keyblade is, but it must be something very special if only she and Roxas can wield it. Number XV, Xinocs: Me. I don't have a title yet either. I honestly don't know much about myself. Other than I'm an anthropomorphic animal amongst a bunch of humans, there's nothing special about me. I don't have my own weapon and I have no powers as far as I know. I wonder if I shouldn't have gone with Xemnas. But then again, where could I have gone if I didn't? XXXI closed my diary/journal and placed it on a table near my bed. That's when I finally took notice of my appearance. In the reflection of the window near my bed, I could barely make out my face under my hood. I pulled it off to get a better look. Navy blue quills spiked out as soon as I lifted it off my head. They were somewhat messy from being stuffed in my hood all day. I had a peach muzzle and a black nose. What stood out the most to me were my eyes: pure emerald green. It contrasted greatly against my dark-colored quills. Well, that mystery is solved: I was an anthropomorphic hedgehog. Wow. I'm going to stand out even more so if I have my hood down. I already get plenty of stares, what with my oversized head and feet and my short height. I guess I'll just keep it up when I'm around the other members. I don't think anthropomorphic animals are a common sight around here. I got into bed and pulled the covers over myself and nuzzled into the fluffy pillows before sighing. Tomorrow was going to be a long first day. 1 Sandra_Nedelcheva1998 reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Hunter Hawk 392 Posted August 5, 2012 I'm not big fan of Sonic, but in this story he sounds pretty interesting. It's also very well written, good job! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Sandra_Nedelcheva1998 244 Posted August 5, 2012 Nice.. The story is great and it's written good. please make MORE of this story Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
KinataKeyblade 4 Posted August 5, 2012 lol okay Chapter 3 :Days. Xonics POVI woke up the next morning...or should it be night instead, since it's always dark outside? I shook my head. My first day in the Organization and already I'm questioning the laws of physics in this place. Why did I even bother? More importantly, why did I even care? I got of my bed and out of my room..The Castle is huge! if been wn=andering in places,Vexen's Lab..Eughh..Never want to see species being cut alive again....Marluxia's room..this guy is Seriously crazy with flowers..his room is ..Pink!.Damn That stupid X-face! When i was walking through thecorridor I ran into something—or someone. I unintentionally yelped as I stared into the face of the Superior!!!..THIS IS BAD!!! I wasn't expecting to run into him! Shoot! "Xinocs," he said in a surprisingly calm tone, despite the fact that I just ran into him. "Yes sir?" I managed to breathe out after my mini-heart attack. (A/N What he just said was ironic, wasn't it?) "Come with me," he ordered. I gulped. My first day and already I'm in trouble. Why must I stand out so much? I followed the Superior to a room that was completely empty. It sorta looked like an arena. There was a huge platfor in the middle of the room and a bunch of higher ledges leading to who-knows-where. Why was he taking me here? "Superior..." I asked awkwardly. "Why have you brought me here? Have I done something upset you?" "No," he answered. I mentally sighed. That took a load off my chest. "It is time to test your strength." Strength? Test? Uh-oh. Next thing I knew, Xemnas was on a higher balcony and these weird, jerking, white humanoid creatures started spawning. One of them nearly tried grabbing my head so I had to duck. My hood fell off and I felt somewhat exposed. But that wasn't important at the moment! I had find out someway to fight these freaks. So what better way to find out than by going into battle? After all, nothing starts until you take action, right? "Alright," I said, confidence slowly coming to me. "Bring it on!" The Creatures come after me...i just run..but..i knew ...my speed is like hell! Let Your Power Run into You! use..Chaos Control!!!! "Come on, ya pansies!" I taunted. "I can take ya!" They all started to swim/fly towards me. I embraced myself for the inevitable before a bright light appeared in my right hand. The creatures backed off somewhat and I got the chance to look at what I was holding. "Is this...?" I mumbled as I looked at the strange object in my hand. The shaft was straight and was blue. Six differently colored stripes circled around it near the guard. They had colors od Black Blue and Amethyst. The hand-guard was the shape of Black Circle. On the left half, the circle and trail were an Dark Orange . On the right, the color was red. The cross guard was a symbol of a strange blue symbol that looked sorta like me. The keychain was a diamond-cut gem that was an emerald green color. The chain connecting to the guard was gold. The teeth were shaped like my spines, only they were differently colored. "!! Bond Of Chaos..." i suddenly said...it must be their names..... i attack those creature with keyblade.They were easy when i have this weapon.... "Alright Xinocs! Go to the main room!"Said The Superior..Aw..cant i take a litt- "NOW!" he Yelled ANgrily..he has a murderour Face "IM GOING IM GOING IM GOING!!!!!"i yelled scared while running ...man..the SUperior is A MAd man when his angry.. i finally made.....There was Roxas,Axel,The Person beside me Yesterday,X-Face..grrr....,And Demyx. stupid X-Face saw me and walk torward me "Number XV,today you will have mission with Roxas as your first day-"he says like a soldier.."-Axel will accompany you'' "Wait A sec! i have to babysitting these two?" ask Axel "The Others are busy right now"he said simply "not everyone.." He said annoyed.i get him..Demyx is playing his sitar like a lazy bonehead i noticed Roxas wasn't listening the Whole thing,he was staring at the person or Number XIV... "Roxas?? what's the matter??is it the mysterious XIV?what was her name again..its..um.."Axel thinking.and Roxas didnt reply ''..Number XIV,Xion"X-Face said to Roxas "Right i knew that" he said Smiling ..Yeah sure u know .... "Alright Roxas,Xonics,.start your missions..Axel will accompany you like i said" X-Face said "alright,alright..Jeezzz.."Axel said Annoyed,he moved his hand making a portal,"cmon Guys,Lets get this show on the road!" he said XXX we ended up in a ..a...a....i dont have any idea what the heck this place is! WHen we just came..i summonedmy Keyblade...ROxas looked at it and summoned his Keyblade..but his blade is different..its like a normal key but the holding was Yellow and the chain was mouse head "Okay Guys i want you to get a treasure chest!"Axel Yelled happily..what is this? Treasure Game???? Then a black creature appeared and attacked Axel "axel!" Roxas Yelled' "For the love of..." I muttered as moved forward to help the redhead. "Roxas, move your butt alrea-" "Done.."he said simply...he's right..he moves so fast...the heartless was gone a pink thing...appeare floating Thats A heart if you know.ALright let get moving!!!"Axel yelled "....."i muttered under my breathe..."Cmon Roxas!" i said to him.. ...he looks like a zombie again....This is gonna be though if he's like that.. "...Lets go..Xonics"he said looking at me...i knew it he wasnt a zombie! "Right" I said simply we looked the place..we sometimes ended up with a wall...wow...i never knew this is a pain in the neck... "Finally i...we got it!"I panted happily....roxas just stared like it was nothing..what is he a super Boy?? "lets go its done right Axel??" Roxas asked "uh..ROxas...There are stuff in it-" Uh DUh??"You gotta open it '' "...'' Me and Roxas look at each other "yours" he said "okay''i opened the chest obtained...a... Potion... "alright mission accomlish now would you care leading the way back?or should i say RTC?" Axel asked... aw man.... ...... "hah hah hah..." i panted...we got lost 3 times... "alright nothing beat work then Icing on The Cake!" he said "icing on The Cake??" ROxas Asked "dont we have to RTC?" he asked "Cmon! Its on me!'' he said making a portal XXXWe were in a clock tower....sunset....It was beautfull... "Here'' axel said handing us ice cream "its salty..but sweet too" Roxas said.. "yeah...Its taste's good" i said eating the ice-cream "its called Sea-Salt Ice Cream! Got IT Memorized??"he asked "yeah.."ME and roxas Said simulationly we laughed....roxas was laughing as well...this is nice... . 1 Sandra_Nedelcheva1998 reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites