Tom 437 Posted January 26, 2010 Kingdom Hearts: The Dark Era of Sora [CONTAINS SPOILERS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!]What would happen when if you were being controlled by someone of darkness. Well you can guess with this story. The story of Sora, and the fight for his body and mind from a man of darkness and negative emotions.....Vanitas.The story begins in the quiet Destiny Islands, in altenative timeline where Sora does not recieve the letter from King Mickey. Sora, Kairi and Riku now live in peace as Xehanort's reign of terror ends, along with the Organization. However, one enemy Sora and the gang don't know still exisit, Vanitas. At the end of the BBS in Ventus' ending, Vanitas was defeated by Ventus and fused with him, restoring the darkness of Ventus' heart, however setting him in a coma. And after the events of BBS, Ventus' heart went into Sora and he became one with Sora. However, Vanitas was never truely destroyed. Or at least not in this story....So, when Vanitas can't not take being the darkness of Ventus' (techincally Sora's) heart, he takes over Sora's body, and tries to use his body to bring back his old master, start a new Keyblade War, and swallow all the worlds in darkness. HOWEVER, Sora only takes the characteristics: Black hair, golden eyes, and his black red suit, while still being able to control the body and his will. But he starts to lose both slowly. The only people that can help him is his two best friends and a person he hasn't met...in years.As Sora starts to lose his mind and body, he can't understand anything. Unversed start appearing, attacking many worlds and his friends, but not him. Sora is scared and afraid. Will he be able to see the light in the darkness once again, or shall darkness finally consume him?_____________________________________________________________What's posted so far:Introduction - DoneExposition:Chapter 1: The Signs - DoneChapter 2: The Worries - DoneChapter 3: The Unversed - DoneChapter 4: The Inner Voice - DoneChapter 5: The Transformation - DoneRising Action:Chapter 6: Boy with the Hearts of Three - DoneChapter 7: Vanitas Takes Over - DoneChapter 8: Time to Stop Sora - DoneChapter 9: Keyblade Graveyard - DoneChapter 10: Familar People - DoneClimax:Chapter 11: The Ultimate Showdown - DoneFalling Action:Chapter 12: Sora's a Bomb - DoneChapter 13: A Replica's Fight - DoneChapter 14: Vanitas' Last Stand - DoneResolution:Chapter 15: Sora Awakens...Again - DoneEpilougeAltenative Ending - Done, can be seen after the Epilouge. Secret Ending - Click here to read it! As of March 8th, 2010, Kingdom Hearts: The Dark Era of Sora is offically over. New story is Kingdom Hearts: The Lost Star, the introduction is up, and you can easily get to the thread by clicking the link, KH: The Lost Star, in my signature ^_^ 1 pokefan289 reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
DigiMoon93 2 Posted January 26, 2010 sounds good (and a fellow Death Note fan knows how to spice up a story!) Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Tom 437 Posted January 26, 2010 Ok, Introduction is going to be up first before Chapter One. It's going to be short and sweet. ____________________________________________________________________________ Introduction Sora sat on his favorite spot of the paopu tree, gazing at the setting horizon, smiling. He was alone, no Riku and no Kairi. But he was happy to be home, from his challenging adventure. He was also glad that the madness of Xehanort has finally ended. Everything was back to normal. Suddenly, his hand glowed with darkness and it inflicted pain to him. Sora said, "Ow!" and looked at his hand. He stared at the darkness around his hand and looked at it strange, with one eyebrow raised. The darkness went away and Sora continued staring at it for a minute. He then shrugged and looked back at the horrizan once again. What Sora doesn't expect might be his last... The story of Kingdom Hearts: The Dark Era of Sora begins... Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Tom 437 Posted February 6, 2010 Chapter 1: The Signs Sora was changing. The darkness appear more times on him. And things started....breaking. This was the first sign. It happened on a random Sunday, two days after the darkness appear. He happened to be thristy and tired. So he poured himself a glass of paopu juice. He grabbed the cup and pulled it to his mouth. But before he was able to even take a sip, darkness appears once again and destroys the glass. He backed up from the glass and cleaned it up. He shook his head and headed outside. The second sign is objects turning black as coal. This happened when Sora was catching fish, for dinner with Riku and Kairi. He had finally caught six of them in the water, two for each. As he went back to the beach, the fish growed completely black. And when Riku saw them, he said, "You sure that's fish?". Sora looked at him weird and looked at the fish. He realize that they were black. Sora replied, "I could of sworn they were fine just a minute ago." He bend over in sorry, and Kairi said, "It's ok, I have leftovers from last night, we can eat them." Kairi and Sora smiled, but Riku looked at Sora in different.... And finally, the final sign: Darkness spreading. Each day, the darkness spread. It wasn't only just on the hand. It spread through the arms. And then everywhere on Sora... Sora sat with Riku at the paopu tree, a week after the first apperence of the darkness. Riku looked over at Sora and said, "Hey, you feeling alright?" Sora shrugged and said, "Yeah, I feel fine. A little weird a week ago, but I pretty sure you think I'm weird in general." He rubbed his head and smiled. But then he was shrouded with darkness and Riku backed away from Sora. Sora looked at him and said, "Are you FEELING alright? You act like you've seen a ghost." Riku tried to act normal, but couldn't. So he ran away....away from Sora. _____________________________________________________________ Yes, all done with Chapter One. Finally. Chapter 2 will be about Riku worring about Sora, so he goes to see a good friend... I can't spoil too much, you know Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
JesusFreak 41 Posted February 9, 2010 That's pretty good. Can't wait to read chapter 2! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Tom 437 Posted February 10, 2010 Chapter 2: The Worries Since the incident, Riku was really worried about Sora. Seeing the darkness made him thought of his first adventure. The memories of his past appear, showing Riku being controlled by Ansem, or actually Xehanort's Heartless, and Sora defeating him. The memories still bugged Riku but he shrugged it off. He went into his room and found an item. King Mickey gave it to him when Sora was asleep for a year, in case there was trouble and need assistance. It was blue with yellow in the middle, and star-shaped. He grabbed it and it glowed white. It flashed the room and it teleported him. He appeared in the library, where Mickey was busy doing something along with Donald and Goofy. The gang jumped as the he appeared. Mickey squinted his eyes and saw though the light that it was Riku. When it cleared, he said, "Boy Riku, you scared us big time." Riku smiled but then grew silent and said, "Mickey, we seriously need to talk alone." He walked out of the library with Mickey. Mickey said, "What's going on Riku? Something happened?" Riku said, "No. Well sort of." Mickey said, "Well spit it out." Riku sighed and replied, "It's Sora. Something is wrong with Sora." Mickey stared at him and said, "What's wrong with Sora? I thought he is doing ok." Riku said, "He is, but I think he's falling into darkness." Mickey grew very surpised and raised both eyebrows. He said, "Sora? Falling into darkness? Explain this." Riku crossed his arms like he was angry. He said, "Ok well I saw him at our spot and he looked fine but he glowed with darkness. He was surronded by it. But he didn't notice. Not only that, when he was fishing, he turned the fish black by accident. I don't think he knows he might be in trouble." Mickey said nothing. After a long pause, he said, "Gosh Riku, I don't know what I can do. The only person who had been consumed by darkness is you, Riku. I think you should watch him daily, and try to find the source of darkness. All I know is that it can't be his heart..." Riku sighed and said, "Thank you for the advice. I will be going now." He pulled out the star-shaped object and teleported out, and back to Destiny Island. Mickey walked back into the library but stopped when he heard a familar voice. It was Jiminy. He was yelling out, "Your Majesty! Your Majesty" while running to him. He finally reached him and Mickey said, "What's up, Jiminy?" Jiminy held up his notebook and said, "I found something in my notebook. I don't think I've ever written it." Mickey took the notebook and squinted really hard. He could make out a phrase: We must return to free them from their torment. _____________________________________________________________ Ok, Chapter 2 all done. The events of Coded will be happening during the story. And when the events of Coded is done, Mickey and the gang will be back around the Falling Action of the story. I will start on Chapter 3 right away. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Tom 437 Posted February 13, 2010 Chapter 3: The Unversed The next morning, Sora woke up with a yawn, while scratching his back. He got out of bed and out of his room. He stopped when Riku was laying on the wall next to the door, with his eyes shut. Sora waved his hand in front of his eyes, which obiviously didn't work. He called out, "Riku?" and he immediantly woke up. Sora looked at him strange and said, "Why were you standing by my door. And better yet, why were you sleeping there?" Riku responded quickly, "BECAUSE...ummmm, I was waiting for you to wake up an hour ago. We need to prep up incase another adventure comes up. You got to be ready, you know." He laughed. Sora laughed as well and said, "That's true. Cmon, let's go!" He walked, but Riku stopped him. He said, "Ummmm, you going to change?" Sora looked at his clothes, and in embassasment, he went back into his room, and changed. Riku smiled but knew something was going to happen with Sora today... Riku and Sora went out to the beach, still morning time. Both of them went into position and summoned their Keyblades. Sora brought out his Kingdom Key while Riku brought out his Way of the Dawn. Kairi walked to the beach and notice them. She ran over there and said, "What are you guys doing?" Sora replied, "We're going to train. Incase a new adventure comes up." Kairi smiled and sat down, while Sora and Riku went into battle position. They ran towards each other and the force of the Keyblades clashed. During their free duel, Sora glowed with darkness. Riku's eyes widen, and Kairi stood up. He striked at Riku, which Riku blocked. However the darkness was too strong. It caused the Riku's keyblade to fly away and land in the ocean. Sora didn't strike again but looked down and dropped his Keyblade. Mysterious creatures appeared. They didn't look either like a Heartless or Nobody. Riku summoned his Keyblade back and Kairi summoned her's that Riku gave her back in their last adventure. Sora looked back up and his eyes glowed yellow, also containing an evil smile. He summoned a new Keyblade. It was red and black, and it looked like gears, and had mysteriously blue eyes on it, which looked similar to Riku's. The mysterious creatures walked towards Riku and Kairi, and attacked. Kairi defended herself while Riku striked at the them. One of them jumped on him and he grabbed it and threw it at the water. He said, "WHAT are these things?!?" The aura of darkness around Sora grew stronger and he yelled out, "THE UNVERSED!". But when Sora said it, another voice was present with his. Somebody was controlling him. Sora teleported right behind Riku, and slashed him. He felt pain and fell. Kairi looked in horror and screamed, "RIKU!" She ran to him but backed away when Sora looked at her. He evily smiled and walked towards her. She felt scared from him, and didn't realize a rock. She tripped over and hurt her knee. Sora reached her and aimed the Keyblade at her. He laughed.... Then suddenly, light appeared from Sora's chest. The darkness around Sora disappeared and emerge as light. His eyes glowed a lighter blue then his regular eyes. The dark red Keyblade he had disappeared and a new Keyblade came. It was much different than that one and his regular Keyblade. He had half a grip and how he held it was backwards. It was also shorter than the two. Riku watched slightly with his eyes half closed, seeing the lightness around Sora. He was very confused but he couldn't think why with all the pain. He closed his eyes and fainted. The Keyblade released from Sora's grip and flew around. It striked at the small Unversed. When it was done killing all the Unversed, it flew back to Sora, disolve into small light balls and went back into Sora. Sora then stopped glowing light and fell to the ground, fainted. And it was silent. Kairi looked at both Sora and Riku, on the ground, while panicking. She went to the bathroom, grabbed some first-aid and came back. She patch up Riku, and brought him to his room. She went back out and looked at Sora. Kairi knelt on her knees, groaning in pain from eariler, and flipped Sora onto his back, so he was facing up. She put her hand on his chest and said, "Sora...what has happened to you?" She brought him to his room, but stayed there and looked after Sora. What has happened to Sora? Who was the person controlling him...and was there another person there controlling him as well? As the darkness grows stronger in Sora, the light gets weaker. It looks as if Sora is running out of time. Can Sora get the help he needs...or will this new mysterious person take over his body...for his dark purpous... _____________________________________________________________ Jeez this is a long chapter. I hope you guys defintly like this one. If he didn't, then next chapter will introduce the new person, AKA Vanitas, which should change your mind...in the next chapter, The Inner Voice. Then Vanitas will appear in the next chapter after The Inner Voice, I call it, The Transformation. And after that, I believe the story should get into the Rising Action. Yes, I believed this was still the Exposition (the beginning). Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
RoxSox 3,593 Posted February 13, 2010 Whoooaaa.... That's really good! MAKE MORE... IMMEDIATELY... Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Tom 437 Posted February 13, 2010 ...I haven't even written anything for Chapter 4, lol. I will get to it for tonight and finish it tommorow. Something tells me I will have lots of chapter but will be done with the story by the end of next week since I got ALL WEEK OFF! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
RoxSox 3,593 Posted February 13, 2010 WOOT! Well... I'm lovvvinng it!" Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
sora15397 3 Posted February 13, 2010 me too .these are class Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Tom 437 Posted February 15, 2010 Chapter 4: The Inner Voice Riku woke up, groaning in pain from the strike Sora made on him, as he got up. Kairi heard him and walked into the room and said, "Hey. You all right?" Riku nodded, replying, "Yeah." Kairi made her arms cross and said, "Why did Sora act like that?" Riku only knew that he was being consumed by darkness, but he wasn't going to tell her that. It would only make her worry. "...I don't know. I really don't know," he lied. She sighed and walked out. Riku shaked his head slightly. As Sora continued to sleep, Kairi watched over him. But he may look ok on the outside, however, it is different on the inside... Sora awoke in the Awakenking. He looked down at the platform to find his own station. He looked around, trying to figure what was wrong with him. He finally reach an edge of his station and looked down. He saw a another platform far down from his. He jumped off and landed on it. This station had contain two colors, white and black. It was the lightness and darkness of his heart. He stood on the light and saw that the darkness was too much. It was unbalanced. There was little light to stand on. He rubbed his head...then a voice called out, "There's no way to stop it." Then the station disappeared and he fell. He landed on another one. But it was unfamilar. He didn't regonize it at all. It showed a strange person, laying against it. He wore an outfit, red and black, had a Keyblade that Sora summoned mysteriously, and also wore a helmet. He looked around for the voice. "Where are you? Show yourself!" The voice was silent, and after a while, a man appeared in the air. It was the same one on the station Sora is standing on. He landed softly and walked to Sora. He said, "You will be consumed by me. I am the source of the darkness. From your heart." Sora grew angry and yelled, "My heart would never let the darkness do this to me!!!" The man shook his head and said, "Not your heart." Sora looked at him strange and said, "What? Is this suppose to be a trick question!" The man walked up to him and pointed where his heart is. "There's another heart inside you. That heart is apart of yours. Try to remember 10 years ago....Ventus," said the man. He continued walking until he reached the edge and saw the black and white station. The white piece faded away and the black filled in its place. The man laughed...just like Sora. Sora backed away but then the man turned around. He removed his helmet and dropped it. He looked just like him, only he had black hair and yellow eyes. He evily smiled and teleported behind Sora. He put his hand on his shoulder and said, "Now the my plans will work. I shall resurrect my master, send all worlds into chaos and destruction, and consumed by darkness, and Kingdom Hearts...WILL BE UNDER VANITAS' ULTIMATE CONTROL!" He laughed loudly, as he annouced his plans and his name. But he stopped laughing and grew very serious. "But if I will do that, I am going to take over your body. SO LET THE TRANSFORMATION BEGIN!" Vanitas squeezed his shoulder and a bright light appeared. Sora began to show signs of conscious. He opened his eyes immediantly. But instead of being blue, they were yellow. The transformation has begun. _____________________________________________________________ Holy crap, I was doing two hours of this, probably because of watching T.V too. I don't know if this is my biggest chapter so far. Next chapter will be the transformation so Sora looks like Vanitas but something happens...which you'll see. Unless you already figured it out. Also, this is a very special announcement. After I am done with this story, I will begin a comepletely new one, and it will be the biggest, best, and plot twisting, NON-KH story I ever make. I always wanted to make it a videogame. But to keep this dream alive, I will write it on this site. And I hope every who will read it love my brand new story. And I did say non-KH so no more Sora, Donald, and Goofy and adventures and blah, blah, blah. But continue to enjoy The Dark Era of Sora until I'm done. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
RoxSox 3,593 Posted February 16, 2010 O_o That... Was... EPIC! I mean, spot on... especially the description and detail of the Awakening... Just, plain brilliant... Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Tom 437 Posted February 17, 2010 Why thanks. Due to Ventus' story in Birth By Sleep, I was able to get a better description of Awakening. But then again, due to Ventus' story, I was able to make this story happen Now next may seem short. That's because it is, as this is the end of the Exposition, the beginning. But there will be a lot of paragraphs and you will see why. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
RoxSox 3,593 Posted February 17, 2010 I dont mind short... ^^' Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Tom 437 Posted February 17, 2010 Chapter 5 - The Transformation Sora struggled out of the bed as Vanitas began taking control. Kairi heard him and went into his room. She tried to help him up but Sora pushed her away and started walking out of the room. Riku heard him and got out of his bed. He sticked his head out the door and saw Sora running away. Kairi ran out of Sora's room and followed him. Riku did the same. He reached the beach, with his hand over his heart. He knelt down and held his head. Riku and Kairi finally reached him. He didn't move, but Riku did. He put his hand on his shoulder softly, but then darkness shrouded Sora. He moved his hand away but Sora was too fast. He grabbed Riku and threw him across the beach with great strength. Suddenly, Sora's hair started to be tainted black, and a suit started growing on him. The sky turned purple and the sea grew from a sky blue to an ickly black. When it was complete, he was covered with the red and black suit, and his hair was black. His eyes were already yellow but instead of dull, they were bright yellow. It shined like the moon, that turns yellow sometimes due to the sun and its rays. Sora was no longer in control. It was Vanitas. He flew into the air and yelled out, "The transformation is complete! Now my fellow minions, wreck havoic to every world you can find, and increase my power, so I may take control of Kingdom Hearts!" The Unversed appear after his sentence and they disappeared. More appeared and disappeared. Even big ones also appeared and disappeared. Chaos was about to happen..... At the Pride Lands, Simba was happily grateful for his newborn daughter, and all the animals coming. However, the sky grew purple and the Unversed appeared. The animals grew scared and ran away. Nala took her and ran off, while Simba fought back. At Halloween Town, Jack was helping the doctor with his experiment. However, the Unversed appeared in the lab, messing with the experiment. The doctor and Jack tried to shoo them away, but they destroyed it. The doctor drived his wheelchair out of the lab, panicking, while Jack handled them. It happened to many worlds. Pride Lands, Halloween Town, Beast's Castle, Wonderland, Neverland, Port Royal, etc. Vanitas was growning stronger and stronger as the Unversed growed in each world. His plans were almost complete...when suddenly a bright light appear around Vanitas. He looked down and screamed out, "QUIT INTERFERING WITH MY PLANS, YOU UNGREATFUL BRAT!" On the inside, Vanitas pushed back somebody from Sora's heart. It was a boy, that was Sora's age and looked familiar. He tried to stop him but the boy pushed him out of the way and reached his heart. The bright light that appeared on Vanitas grew bigger and covered his body. When the light was gone, Sora/Vanitas was nowhere to be found. The boy teleported him somewhere. Where has he teleported him? Will it affect Sora and Vanitas in any way? Or is Vanitas still in control of Sora? Find out in the next chapter... _____________________________________________________________ End of exposition. Finally. Now we can get onto the Rising Action of the story. And the plot twists Oh and the new story for thoses who want to know, is coming either a week or two...or next month. But only expect a Introduction for quite a while. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
RoxSox 3,593 Posted February 17, 2010 Ho ho! That was awesome... =) Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
sora15397 3 Posted February 17, 2010 they just keep on getting better and better Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
JesusFreak 41 Posted February 17, 2010 I totally Love it! Man Tom you are a great writer!! ^^ Keep on writing. ;D Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
pierre5111 0 Posted February 22, 2010 hey um can u send me the next chapters when u finish them this is realy good Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Tom 437 Posted February 23, 2010 Chapter 6 - Boy with the Hearts of Three Sora was teleported somewhere he didn't remember. He was unconscious for a few seconds, but then was fine when he got up. He looked around but only found a castle in front of him. He rubbed his head....and realize he was back to normal. However, his thought was changed when he looked at his clothes. Well he was in control...just not himself. He was Vanitas. But it looks like his mind and body were in control. Sora ignored it and looked up in the castle. Sora may of not remembered it but something in his heart made him think it was familiar. It was Castle Oblivion. Sora walked inside the castle and saw around the white room. It was pretty big if you looked in Sora's perspective. He kept walking when he fell his his knees and held his hand. Vanitas was trying to take over. But Sora kept him away from his heart. Vanitas said, "Why do you keep me away from you? I am a apart of you. Actually, I am you." Sora still just kept pushing him away and he stood up and kept walking. He went from room to room to room and so on. On the 12th floor, Sora walked to the middle of the room. He felt a presence near by. However, he couldn't pinpoint excatly where the presence was. And there was one more room to get to. He walked a couple more steps until he stopped. This time, somebody was here. Sora turned around to see someone. And definitly was familar. It was Riku. But it was strange. He looked younger than he should be and wore a suit he had worn a year ago. Even his blade he had out was an old weapon. Sora said, "...You're not the real Riku." He summonded his Keyblade, but Vanitas' Keyblade. He looked at it and sighed. Both ran to each other and Sora striked it. The fake Riku fell to the ground and started disintergrating into darkness. Sora looked down at it and said, "A replica?" A voice called out, "Yes, a Replica. My replicas." Sora looked up and turned around. He saw a man with long blond hair. But he didn't regonize him, just like the castle. "Welcome back to Castle Oblivion, Sora. It seems you got...how should I put it, a makeover." Sora got angry and said, "Who are you? And that coat...you're part of Organization XIII!" The man chuckled and said, "What an observent of you to notice. I guess it was true when your memories were true was gone. My name would be Vexen, number 4 of Organization XIII, at your service." Vexen chuckled more. Sora scratched his head and said, "Wait, I thought Organization XIII was done for. How come you're still alive?" Vexen smacked his head and said, "I'm not really alive. I'm am just a replica, like the one you destroyed. You've taken part in destroying me last year. Now I will take revenge-" Sora teleported behind Vexen and striked him down. Sora laughed and said, "Well there's no point in having Organization XIII still alive by having his dimwit alive." He covered his mouth and said, "I can't believe I just said that." He shook his head and continued, walking up the steps to the 13th floor. On the 13th floor, he stopped and saw nothing. Why was he teleported here if there was nothing? He then just felt the presence once again. It was coming straight across. But Sora didn't see anything. It was just a wall. But he popped an idea and summoned his Keyblade. He aimed the Keyblade at the wall and it shoot a white light at the wall. He saw that while the light hit the wall a keyhole was there. A door opened and Sora went through it. Sora said, "It's definitly different than the other rooms," as he walked down a black hallway, different than the white hallways. He reached the end and saw a wall. He aimed the Keyblade and shoot the light at it. It opened and a new room was opened. He walked in and saw such strange symbols he never saw before. He then looked across and saw a boy on a chair. He was sleeping, and Sora walked to him. He bent down and waved in his face. He said, "Hello? You there or are you just going to keep sleeping?" He went to go touch him but suddenly his hand stopped. It was Vanitas. He was stopping him. Sora said, "What...what are you doing!?!" Although Vanitas wanted to take over Sora, he was just too desperate to stop Sora from touching boy. "You shall not touch Ventus. That boy's heart is apart of yours. Touching him shall return his heart and I will forever be just darkness!" said Vanitas. He had to take over Sora completely. With the last of his strength, he took over just for 30 seconds. Vanitas summonded his Keyblade and aimed the Keyblade at Sora's heart. He stabbed him and split Sora's heart into three. One was Ventus, now full of light again, Vanitas, with his new heart of darkness again, and Sora, who's heart now in ruins, as neither light or darkness are in his heart. And Ventus' heart was inactive now due to this process. And Vanitas, the only heart active, took over. Sora was forever gone. Vanitas was fully in controlled. When Vanitas left the castle, he laughed like a mad man, as he put on his helmet and went into the Strange Dimension When Vanitas was gone, another Vexen replica came out. He sighed in relief and said, "I thought he might of killed all of the replicas." He walked away but then stopped and said, "WAIT A MINUTE! I don't like the feeling of him coming here. I must investigate!" He searched everywhere. When he reached the 13th floor, he was tired of running up the stairs, but he saw a door opened. He looked at it strange and went through. He didn't remember seeing his hallway. He found another room after walking down the hallway and saw a boy sleeping. He ran over to him and observed him. He tapped his head and remembered. It was Ventus. He evily said, "I'm sorry Ventus, but I don't remember you getting here and I must study you-" He stopped when he was feeling his heart. He had no heart! Vexen panicked and yelled out, "REPILCAS! FIND THAT MAN!" Many Riku Replicas appeared and then teleported. Looks like Vexen won't stand to any mess ups to his experiments! _____________________________________________________________ Yep. No more Sora. Sora is like dead in this story. Nah, he'll be back in the end. But I'll never tell if Sora gets his body back Oh and the next two chapters=VERY SHORT. Probably the shortest. I don't know as I haven't written it yet. But expect some short chapters: Chapter 7: Vanitas Takes Control Chapter 8: Time to Stop Sora. And Chapter 9 will be longer than the two, but will be short and sweet _____________________________________________________________ In other news, I will be announcing new stories going to be started after this story is done, and in a order (New KH stories will be first): New KH Stories: Kingdom Hearts: The Lost Star - Working on a little bit. Kingdom Hearts: Heroes of the Keyblade War - Awaiting. But will feature something you will see from KH: TDEOS when it's done, which you'll see soon.... New Non-KH Stories: Dragonforce - First non-KH story. A story about dragons and not about Keyblades Project Dante - The BIG, 6 stories + 2 spin-off, series. Will be released in summer. Title will change. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
RoxSox 3,593 Posted February 23, 2010 EPIC... Just pure... unsaturated, not from concentrate EPIC Like the sound of the new stuff coming... keep it up bud.. EDIT: Vexen is beast... Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Tom 437 Posted February 26, 2010 Chapter 7 - Vanitas Takes Control Vanitas traveled through the Strange Dimension, covered in darkness. As he travaled, he watched the worlds devouring in darkness. He smiled but then saw two worlds still not covered in darkness. Destiny Island and Disney Castle. Destiny Islands he knew...but Disney Castle...time to make a stop. At Disney Castle, Mickey and the Data Sora reached Data Namine at Data Castle Oblivion. Their adventure was almost over. After Data Namine's last words, she disappeared. Mickey and Data Sora looked at each other. The Data Sora smiled and disappeared. Mickey started walking out when he felt something. A familar presence. It had Sora's presence as well. Was it the Data Sora? When he turned around, somebody was there. Mickey looked at him cleary and then his eyes widen. He summoned his Keyblade and said, "YOU! Vanitas!" Vanitas laughed and said, "How's it been since 10 years ago?" Mickey said, "You...y-you should be dead! Where's Ventus?" Vanitas ignored him and said, "Have you even seen my face before?" Mickey looked at him, in silence. Vanitas shrugged and removed his helmet. Mickey jumped and said, "Sora?!?" Vanitas laughed like a maniac and said, "No, not Sora. This is how I orginally looked 10 years ago. And when Ventus' heart went to Sora, I was stuck with him. But now, this is Sora's body. And there's nothing you can do to get me out!" Vanitas ran to him and went to strike, but Mickey was teleported out. Goofy, Donald and Chip and Dale brought him back from the Data World to the real one. Mickey ran up to them and said, "We got to get Riku!" Goofy looked at him strange and said, "Gosh Your Majesty, something wrong?" Mickey responded quickly with a, "No time to explain! Follow me," and ran off. Goofy and Donald looked at each other and followed, along with Jiminy, Chip and Dale. While they ran, they found Queen Minnie and Daisy walking in the hall. Mickey grabbed Minnie while Donald grabbed Daisy. Queen Minnie said, "What's going on, Mickey?" Mickey continued to ignore. They reached the Gummi Ship Launcher. All of them went inside the Highwind, Sora's old Gummi Ship. Mickey played with the buttons, however Unversed appeared. Donald and Goofy fended them off. When the ship was ready, with it's engine blazing, Mickey saw a switch that would let go of the ship from the crane. He summoned his Keyblade and shoot the lever with a burst of light, making it go backwards. The crane released his grips, dropping the Gummi Ship, falling. But he controled the ship, driving it through a tunnel, and got it out of world. Before leaving, Mickey turned around and watched his castle. It began to be covered with darkness. Before you knew it, it was completely shrouded in darkness. Mickey shook his head and continued off. Towards Riku's world. Before it was too late. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
sora15397 3 Posted February 26, 2010 fantasic Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
RoxSox 3,593 Posted February 28, 2010 -Applause, thunderous applause- Just..brilliant Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites