Madara Uchiha 50 Posted July 2, 2012 So I have a tenant who lives downstairs right ? He was outside talking to his gf left his keys and the oven on. We went to go pick up my mom and so we lock the door. Then were almost there and he calls us panicking saying he left the stove and the house could go on fire We hurry back and we find our windows destroyed cause he panicked but he turned off the stove and my house is ok . What are your opinion on this guys Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Queen Tery 4,591 Posted July 2, 2012 It needs more periods. It could use some grammar editing, as well. 6 Kinode, Shana09, Xalaru and 3 others reacted to this Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Yang 1,859 Posted July 2, 2012 (edited) I don't really follow. . . Oh wait I get it now Yeah I think that guy needs some common sense. . . Edited July 2, 2012 by Impersisfluff Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
King Riku 2,063 Posted July 2, 2012 ...I say that guy needs to use his brain more. Honestly, even my 7 year old brother knows not to leave a stove on. 1 Queen Tery reacted to this Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Madara Uchiha 50 Posted July 2, 2012 It needs more periods. It could use some grammar editing, as well. I know it was a little rushed sorry about that If it was hard to understand Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Madara Uchiha 50 Posted July 2, 2012 ...I say that guy needs to use his brain more. Honestly, even my 7 year old brother knows not to leave a stove on. Agreed he broke my windows Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shana09 5,769 Posted July 2, 2012 It needs more periods. It could use some grammar editing, as well. ilu 1 Queen Tery reacted to this Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
teh lazy prince Xylek 1,559 Posted July 2, 2012 It needs more periods. It could use some grammar editing, as well. made my day 1 Queen Tery reacted to this Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
