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A Burden to Bear~Feelings left Unchecked

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Human emotions have more power over a person than you may think. In this world, a semi-futuristic society that has many great advancements but still very much like modern times, when a person's emotions are left unchecked, like say they have no control over their anger, or let their jealousy control their life, these emotions can become a force that overwhelms the person, and grant powers to that person.

 

These, Burdens, amplify the persons emotions, namely the one that they are having problems with, to the point where their emotions become a tangible force, giving that person some ability or power. Normally, hosts of these Burdens have become unstable and cannot control their emotions, but some have shown that they can control their Burden. Every Burden is connected to an object that the host possess and values or treasures, that acts a median through which these powers are used.

 

With these Burdens showing up here and there at an alarming rate, chaos and havoc ensue, lead the way for someone to take advantage of this chaos for their own intentions. When a Burden is allowed to exist for a prolonged period of time, the host's unbalanced emotion becomes the only thing they feel, and all other emotions shed away, leaving the physical body and becoming a Burden Fragment, these Fragments are a key part of an evil plot. This can be avoided if the host of a Burden is able to resolve their uncontrolled emotions, restoring their emotions and lifting their Burden. Just as Burdens can be reversed, a Burden can be made with enough coercion, which is what the villains are doing.

 

The antagonists of the story are using the Burden Fragments to create the ultimate Burden, a weapon made with the lost emotions held in the Burden Fragments. This weapon would have such a cataclysmic power that only someone with complete and ultimate control over all of their emotions would be able to wield it. That character will be one I make later on when I post my characters after some other people post. If anyone wants to assume the role of this character PM me before you do so, it'll be first fine first serve and if you want to after I've made that character already you're still welcome to do so, the same for the main villain.

 

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Rules:

- The basic KH13 roleplay guidelines

- No killing or controlling other people's characters w/o permission

- No god-modding

- Use proper grammar

- Cursing is allowed, but don't go crazy

 

Character Sheet:

Name:

Age:

Appearance:

Personality/Bio:

Alignment(good or evil):

Burden-

-The ability:

-The emotion that is unchecked:

-The object:

at least two of these things need to have a sort of connection. Try to avoid using actual weapons as the Burdens object, as your going to gain some sort of ability anyway and seeing as were not in the middle of a war. If you do use a weapon, make your ability one that makes you focus less on the actual weapon. Also, you don't need to be one of the people who have control over their emotions and can control their Burden, include this detail in your bio. Post "Feelings left unchecked" to show you've read the rules.

 

Like I said earlier, I'll post my characters after a couple of other people do.

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I would not like to be the main antagonist.

 

Character Sheet:

Name: Lumi

Age: 14

Appearance:Posted Image

Personality/Bio: Personality: Rude, Sad, sharp with words. Bio: Since bulling has circled around her and squeezed her to bits and her family of three sisters and both of her parents just swept her up and threw her in the trash. She is the second oldest and has anger lingering around her.

Alignment(good or evil): Good, surprisingly

Burden- Anger

-The ability: Takes over her mind leaving her eyes emotionless able to kill,or K-O someone in an instant. But she also works with it to protect people.

-The emotion that is unchecked: Sadness

-The object: her eyes or mind

 

 

(ahhh I'm SO sorry if I got this COMPLETELY misunderstood :( )

 

"Feelings left unchecked."

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I would not like to be the main antagonist.

 

Character Sheet:

Name: Lumi

Age: 14

Appearance:Posted Image

Personality/Bio: Personality: Rude, Sad, sharp with words. Bio: Since bulling has circled around her and squeezed her to bits and her family of three sisters and both of her parents just swept her up and threw her in the trash. She is the second oldest and has anger lingering around her.

Alignment(good or evil): Good, surprisingly

Burden- Anger

-The ability: Takes over her mind leaving her eyes emotionless able to kill,or K-O someone in an instant. But she also works with it to protect people.

-The emotion that is unchecked: Sadness

-The object: her eyes or mind

 

 

(ahhh I'm SO sorry if I got this COMPLETELY misunderstood :( )

 

"Feelings left unchecked."

 

If you could please clarify what your ability actually does, all your saying is that you can kill someone with it plus its a little op, fix that and your good.

 

Eyes are good for the Burden object, but I should clarify for other people that it should be something that'snot a body part

Edited by WerXand-XV

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Name-Chase

Age-17

Personality-Pridefully, eager teen who doesn't know how to ask for help.

bio-At a young age Chase has had an answer to everything never able to admit his flaws or mistakes always thinking that his was their superior which lead him to hate anyone he deemed worthless.

Alignment-Good

Burden-Pride

The ability-creates a golden veil which surrounds his body protecting him from damage.

the unchecked emotion-Hatred

the object- headphones with mp4 player

Appearance-

 

 

 

''feelings left unchecked''

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Edited by VaxidXIV

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If you could please clarify what your ability actually does, all your saying is that you can kill someone with it plus its a little op, fix that and your good.

 

Eyes are good for the Burden object, but I should clarify for other people that it should be something that'snot a body part

 

. Thank you, I am leaving in a second I will fix it later.

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