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[AverageGoddess 163]

Okay, so I tried to write a poem. This is my first poem in YEARS! so go easy on me. I tried to write it from a KH character's view. Well, I dont really think its my best but I want to know what you people think sooo....


At first I was babysitting
But soon it became fitting
To call you my best friend
And sit up on that tower
Eating ice cream for an hour
But then I had to go
And you thought I was gone
But I am too strong
To end up like the weaklings
So I came back
And it ended up being the three of us who got to snack
On sea salt ice cream
It became a regular thing
The three of us were inseparable
Careless I was
Got too attached
And the both of you latched
On to me, us three friends
But then it had to choke
And we broke
All the days
Gone through the wind, world's away
Never to be seen or heard from again
Memories faded, friendship lost
Only to be found through a new beginning
In which I am not myself and you two are the same
Stuck in a prison, tied in a chain
Me, back to "myself" and you, also back to "yourself"
So different, yet exactly the same
And you do not remember me, and all our pain
Lost in he heart of which you were born
And as I promised:
I will bring you back
For our favorite snack
Maybe it can never be the same again
Bur I am still me, and you are still you
So get ready, for a life which will be new



Like it? Hate it?

[Roxie 71]

like it!

[FMKingdomHearts 7]

Love it it's BEAUTIFUL and ART :wub: :P :lol: :rolleyes: I love it (oops said it twice)

[Kinode 3,056]

hi axel

[Roxas_Axel_Xion 42]

You have been one of the few people whose art have brought me to tearing up.............................

[Namine` 28]

I like it! Some parts aren't exactly something that makes you cry and get all teary, but I think this perfectly describes Axel's, Roxas's,( and a little of Xion's) friendship. You can still write wondeful poems!

Edited May 31, 2012 by Namine`

[NightfallXIII 68]

This was great! I think that this perfectly describes Axel's point of view of his friendship with Roxas and Xion. Didn't make me cry, but it was a beautiful poem.

[Xalaru 445]

Considering I've never been a big fan of poetry, nice job in getting me to actually like a poem for once; this is really nice/sad and describes it all so well.