replika13 455 Posted May 25, 2012 Here gos again I dont own Kingdom Hearts, keyblades or any of realms. Characters, worlds and some of powers are created by me and they dont have anything to do with acctual series. This story is fourth in KH Ancient series. MAIN CHARACTERS Stories of KH Ancients follows three wielders of keyblade, Kuma, Gake and Shabon. Kumas mother Crace and twinbrother Umbra are their common enemies. Also, heart of Shiryo the Spirit Master is trapped inside Kumas heart. An mysterious "group" of masked peoples are threatning the worlds. Suna= 15 year old boy who lives in MoonRise city or at least he thinks so. Soon he would learn who he truly is and that his life so far has been a lie. Drew= mysterious young man, seemingly working on the Group. Story so far. KH Ancients= After Kuma, Gake and Shabon realised that worlds are in danger, they are separated by fate during this journey. At some time Gake realises he has DayFader called Nile, who he is determined to destroy in order to get rest of his heart back. After defeating Zenwae, leader of DayFaders, his darkness moved into Gakes heart and Shabon had to sacrifice herself in order to save her friends from explosion of powerful keyblade. Realm of Spiritians= Kuma is determined to save Shabon from forbidden realm while Umbra has an mission to find nine spirit fragments. While Gake is fighting his darkness, twins meet man called Shiryo the Spirit master, who later tooks control of Kuma. Kuma however realises that Shiryos sadness wont heal if he dont take his heart to his own. Soon Shabon, Kuma and Umbra have able to escape from the realm. Dark Quest= As darkness is growing every second in his heart, Gake travels alone into Shadowless tower, where he haf to face Groups members, leaded by Hariwe, Gake is able to beat them all and defeat his darkness with help of mysterious girl named Maya. and now... friends are united by sleep... You can find rest of the stories from here: http://kh13.com/forum/user/30385-replika13/ CHAPTER ONE BORN FROM THE DREAM Suna woke up in his room. His bizzare dream was over once again. And once again he dreamt about boy named Gake and his friends. Suna felt weird about these dreams and last night he started hesitating of going to sleep. But now was not the time to think about Gake or dreams as MoonRise citys festivals were drawing one more day closer. Suna putted his jacket and shoes on and runned outside, toward skyscraper. There he used elevator to get to the rooftop. Sky was always starry in MoonRise city. An dark blue sky with sun never rising on it. It felt good. City had day light beyond the mountains as sun always rised there and set there. At top he met his friends, Kyler, Menth, Jinx and Heidi. They all looked tired while Suna himself felt himself being full of energy. "Morning guys!" Suna smiled. "Morning..." Kyler said grumpy. "Whats the matter?" Suna asked and sat to the edge. "What do you think? Whole city is blaming us about those accidents." Menth said. "Yeah. Broken city train that caused injuries and local damage to the jewelry shop for example." Jinx said. "Not to mention that how three little kids were kidnapped for one day and found locked inside the windmill and how someone has been changing maps of underground tunnels." Heidi counted. Suna immediatly remembered those. "Yeah... it really makes me mad that Ryanz isnt really helping. Instead he told city hall that we were ones who painted those threatnings on the doors." Kyler said and crossed his arms. Suna then stood up and looked toward city below them. "Then we haf to clear our names. Lets go and find real culprits!" Suna said. Girls and Menth smiled, but Kyler didnt look sure. "What about Ryanz?" Kyler asked. "We can deal with him later! Lets get going already." Suna said and all five left the rooftop and entered back to streets. "So where do we head first?" Jinx asked. "I have a map. This is big city." Menth said and took an map and red pencil. "Lets go to the accident places first." Heidi suggested and Menth drawed an red circle around market street. They then took bikes in order to drive faster to there. Masked figure then looked their going from dark alley. "I finally found you... Suna." While asking around from market area of city mal, they found out that train was still being moved away from broken area. They also found out that nearly half of shop keepers were against them while other half was defending them. Angry shop keepers tried to attack them, but others moved between them and Sunas friends, forming an barrigade. "Move away! These guys are resbonsible that my wife almost got killed in that accident!" Owner of decoration shop shouted. "No! They arent resbonsible of it! Five kids cant broke one city train that easily!" Beautiful and young owner of book-shop answered. All shop keepers started arguing and Suna couldnt hear a single word from there. He then chose to push himself into middle of them. He took deep breath and shouted. "STOP!" And shop keepers went quiet. "Look! We didnt make it happen! We dont wanna hurt peoples or cause damage to the city itself just like that!" He said. Angry shop keepers didnt look so angry anymore. "So how do you explain it happened?" Hat shops keeper asked. "I cant. All i know that we are blaming wrong peoples, while real culprits are running out there free! We need to find them and bring them to justice!" As Suna finished everyone clapped to him. Shop keepers that were angry now cheered on him and apologized him and his friends. However, no one havent seen sight of anyone suspicious, except one little girl. "I saw an scary masked guy at Ryanzs territory! Do you think they have something to do with this?" She asked. "Thanks. We will see!" Suna said and Menth drawed an red cross to the city mal and drawed new circle on Ryanzs alleys. After that With Kylers lead they headed to the west side of city. Ryanzs alleys were builded under the bridge. An small way of alleys leaded to there from main streets and small stairs leaded down to their usual hangout place. Ryanz was there with his minions, Hiro and Tinah. Also daughter of mayor was there, propably just to visit Ryanz. Her name was Naomé. Every boy in city wanted to be her boyfriend. Suna immediatly felt a little embarrassed. "Well, well, well. Looks like troublemakers came to visit. What are you gonna do? Destroy our hangout spot? Burn it down? Perhaps you wanna drill some holes into walls so river would flood in?" Ryanz laughed. Naomé laughed a bit but not so loud as Hiro and Tinah. "Seriously. You guys are losers even if city hall doesnt banish you now." "Grrr..." "Come on! Bow to me losers. Show your place to the society!" Ryanz said. As Suna, Kyler and others glared at him, Suna soon walked in front of Ryanz and bowed. "Seriously? Suna?" Ryanz said, making his gang laugh again. But when he didnt look, Suna pulled an small soften dagger (One of four weapons that can be used on citys tournaments) and striked him right under the chin, making boy fall down to barrels. "That my friend... was LOW!" Ryanz shouted and Hiro throwed an soften hammer to him. He stood up and charced toward Suna. Suna dodged his attack by rolling to Ryanz right and then doing an "stabbing-move" toward him. He then performed two more normal strikes and made Ryanz fall again. "Seriously? Stop fooling arou-" Ryanz freezed. Everyone around him freezed. Suna looked them, but then suddenly an darkness appeared below his feet, flooding in from floor like water and then swallowed Suna in. Suna opened his eyes. He was lying down on the platform. He then saw a girl, floating in darkness. Girl formed an "shush" with her finger. "My name is Maya." She said friendly and walked through air to him. "What is this place?" Suna asked. "Theres not much time for now. You need to use the keyblade when they come. After that there is enough time." Maya said and opened an dark corridor. "Who are coming?" Suna asked. "DisDarks." Maya said and vanished. Immediatly weird creatures appeared from darkness and they charced toward Suna. Punching and kicking him and throwing him around platfom. Suna felt weird, but he didnt see any weapons there. Then suddenly an key shaped sword appeared from flash of light to his hand. "What? What is this thing?" Suna asked and sword automatically moved his body toward monsters and struck them down into darkness. Suna looked the sword until it dissappeared into explosion that throwed Suna out of platform. As he was falling into darkness an hand reached him and pulled him into light. He was now in ordinary looking bedroom. Maya was sitting on the table. "Its nice to meet you Suna. I haf to warn you." She said. "Warn me about what?" Suna asked and glared at girl. "Youve been having strange dreams right?" "Yeah... about boy named Gake..." Suddenly door opened and masked figure walked in. "We were aware of your hasty plans Maya. You are not going to tell him the truth." Man said and took grasp from Sunas arm and opened dark corridor. "Hey! You are that masked guy? Aaagh!" Suna shouted as he felled through darkness again. "He is waking up." Heidi said and Suna opened his eyes. "Where am i?" Suna asked. "Our spot. You lost consciousness while we were training to tomorrows festivals." Kyler said. "What! What about Ryanz? Or accidents thats been happening?" Suna asked. "What accidents? There has been no accidents. And we havent seen Ryanz for two days remember? Day when Naomé slapped him for being rude?" Jinx asked. "I-i dont... know..." Suna said confusingly. Was his mind just making things up...? 3 Kirie, Hunter Hawk and coolwings reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Hunter Hawk 392 Posted May 25, 2012 Awsome chapter bro! Beginning of the KH2 in KH Ancients version!!! 1 replika13 reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
replika13 455 Posted May 27, 2012 (edited) CHAPTER TWO ECLIPSE FESTIVALS "Keyblade..." Suna muttered in his dreams just before waking up. "Huh? Keyblade?" He repeated and putted his hand to air, but nothing happened. He was still confused about yesterday. He putted cloths on and runned back to outside. He was suppose to be at Central Park, where festivals of moon eclipse were held. Every year at this time of year, moon eclipse happened. It happened at one o´clock and tournament would be held an hour before it. Final round was fought during the eclipse that lasted ten minutes. As he crossed the bridge he had an headache. An huge headache. He started to hold his head and walk blindly toward edge of bridge and then he felled to water. An images started to come into his mind... Umbra was sitting on chair of an laboratory. Crace came in with lab coat dressed up on her body. She took an needle from table. "Do we really haf to do this?" Umbra asked. Kiya cam out from shadows and glared at Crace as woman came closer to Umbra. "You know there is no other way to do this part of plan." Crace smiled. Umbra sighed, nodded and took of his jacket and shirt. Crace then injected needle to his chest and needle started to fill with black liquid. "Whats that?" Kiya asked. "That my dear... is darkness... darkness that creates something new for my plans..." Crace laughed and looked how small needle quickly filled with darkness. Suna opened his eyes. He was lying at under the tree not far away from bridge. He then stood up and saw masked figure staring on him. But he soon walked away and vanished into celebrating crowd. Suna didnt wanna bother himself with that by now. Instead he went to find his friends from the crowd. "I wonder where she is..." Heidi said. "Morning everyone!" Suna said and again everyone seemed worried, but not toward him. "Whats wrong now?" "Its Naomé. She is missing. And she is suppose to enter citys beauty contest again this year." Menth said and crossed his arms. Suna sighed. "Maybe she just didnt make it? Maybe she is sick?" Suna suggested. "No. We saw her couple of minutes ago. And contest is just about to start..." Jinx said. Heidi looked nervous. "Well, at least Heidi dont have any real competition there." Kyler said. And Naomé didnt show up during beauty contest either. Heidi won it easily. She looked a bit proud when carrying trophy and small tiara . "Look at the bright side, you are now most good-looking girl in whole city." Jinx joked and Kyler and Suna laughed a bit. "Its tournament time. Hope you got ready for it." Menth said to Kyler and Suna, who nodded. Tournament game was fought with soften weapons. They were dagger, staff, hammer and sword. Players must fight each others in order to collect opponents medaljong. It can be done by using spell stones that citys magicians have made up. Fire spells were marked on orange color, ice with cyan, water with blue, earth with green, air with grey and electric spells were yellow. Stones appear to arena and player must pick it up and break the stone. They may use their hands to control spell until its out. Medaljongs can be ripped off from opponents neck also, but that was dangerous as opponent could die when small chain strangles him or her. It was much easier (though slower) to knock opponent out. If one falls outside the arena (even accidently) he or she will be disqualified. There was twelve competitors so far. Suna, Kyler and Ryanz won first round, but during second round, Suna and Kyler were opponents. Kyler though Suna was going to give up, but for his suprise, Suna attacked him immediatly when bell rang. Due the suprising attack, Kyler stepped accidently outside the arena and losed. Next round was final round, where was three opponents. Suna, Ryanz and one of citys ladies, Nonio. As round started Ryanz was immediatly knocked out by Nonios strong attack. Nonio took his medaljong and kicked him outside the arena. Suna looked shocked. "Whats the matter cutie-boy?" Nonio asked. "Cutie-boy?" Suna repeated and felt how his face came red. Nonio walked to him and Suna didnt have able to attack her. He was completely freezed by womans charm. She putted her hand to his shoulder, but Suna felt how her hand slithered toward her neck where was his medaljong. Suna quickly recovered and throwed ice-spell to her face and grabbed both medaljongs. Suddenly Nonio vanished and peoples around him freezed. "Bravo, Suna! I knew you could make it as always!" Someone yelled. Suna saw masked man at rooftop. He jumped down to the arena. "Who are you?" Suna asked. "Oh come on... Its me, Drew." Drew said and revealed his face from behind the mask. He had blond spiky hair. Suna wasnt sure who this guy was, but he felt familiar... "I see he got you all tricked. This city is perfect replica from original one. Not that you really live in there or her anyways." Drew said. "What? Your making no sense..." Suna said. "Oh am i not? As for resbondation i shall give you an demonstration." Drew said and darkness appeared to his right arm. When it faded, Suna saw Naomé. Girl didnt move and her face was covered by blood. "Naomé? WHAT DID YOU DO TO HER?!!" "Nothing. Look." Drew said and summoned an small sickle to his hand. He ripped Naomés hand and it falled to the floor. But no blood came out of it. Instead of that there was weird green bits coming out of girls body. "See? Its a fake! Like everything else in here. Suna, you have been tricked, BIG time!" Drew said, throwing Naomés body to outside the arena. He then walked closer and offered his hand to Suna. "Come with me. Others are waiting." Drew said. "No! I dont know who you are, but your not taking me anywhere!" Suna shouted. Drew sighed. "I always feared that i haf to do this on hard way..." He said and took an small ball out of his pocket. He crawled down and pushed ball inside the ground with both of his hands. An flash of light came out of his hands and it flooded toward Sunas shoes. An ropes growed up from floor and tied Sunas arms together, then tied them against his body. Then Suna falled down as ropes tied his feet. "Nngggh! Get away from me!" Suna shouted, but Drew only smiled and carried him to his shoulder. "Dont worry. Im not gonna hurt you my friend." Drew said and started walking outside of tournament area. "What about Naomé?" Suna asked. "Pffth! That girl is a fake. Blood in her face is just an artificial reaction as for resbondation to my attacks." Drew opened dark corridor. Suna then managed to free his legs and so he kicked Drew to his waist. Drew dropped him and he felled to his feet. Without hesitating Suna started to run and squirm against ropes, but they were too tight. "No you dont!" Drew shouted and throwed his sickle through ground, making Suna to fall down. When Drew tried to grab him, Suna kicked him to face and rolled down the street. When he was against staircase he was able to stood up again, but Drew runned toward him again. "Seriously, Suna! Your really starting to annoy me!" He shouted and summoned his sickles and attacked. As he striked, Suna dodged and ropes were cutted off by sickle. Suna then turned around and hardly dodged another attack that cutted ropes around his wrists. Now being free, Suna runned away from Drew. Drew however took bike and rided after him. "Your not escaping from me this time!" Man shouted and summoned sickle, ready to knock out Suna. Suna runned, but Drew was faster. Suddenly Maya jumped out from alley and shouted: "STOP!" and Drew freezed. "There is not much time. We must head to the observatory!" She said and took grasp from Sunas hand. "Wait! What?" Suna shouted back but he was already running behind girl as she hold his hand too tight. PS: Suna is japanese word for "sand" similiar way that Gake means "cliff". Resbondation means something or someone resbonding to actions of others. Edited May 27, 2012 by replika13 2 Kirie and coolwings reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Hunter Hawk 392 Posted May 27, 2012 Wow that sure is a good changed version of KH2 beginning! Kinda funny Maya took the role of Diz And oh yeah Drew is back!!! Bet he looks like blond haired Axel, could you do a drawing of him by any chance? 1 replika13 reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
replika13 455 Posted May 27, 2012 Wow that sure is a good changed version of KH2 beginning! Kinda funny Maya took the role of Diz And oh yeah Drew is back!!! Bet he looks like blond haired Axel, could you do a drawing of him by any chance? I was plannin to do picture of him and Suna http://kh13.com/forum/public/style_emoticons/default/happy.png Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
replika13 455 Posted May 27, 2012 (edited) CHAPTER THREE OBSERVATORY Crace looked into giant pipe made of glass. Inside glass, an purpless of darkness was flooding like an boiling water. Inside it, Crace could see an shadowed figure. "Its nearly complete." She said to Kiya. "You have weird taste of creations." Girl said and Crace bowed sarcastically. "I wonder if i should take over the Order of the Keyblade. Magmas school doesnt feel good catch after nine months..." Crace said and walked to her working table. "Oh come on! If you fill your manor with those guys you surely will loose manor as well the prison for our enemies. To remind you that Magma and his 10 pupils are there too." Kiya said. "Pah... such an arguement. Mark my words dear. I-am-greatest-keyblade-master alive..." Crace said. "Yeah. But to be honest your plans are hasty. I mean, where is Kuma? After nine months of searching he seems to have dissappeared for good." "Dont worry... Kuma will appear sooner or later and i have feeling that time is sooner..." "What makes you think so." "Mother-stuff. Nothing that spiritian like you is ever gonna understand." Crace said. Umbra appeared to door. "Kiya. Lets go already." He said. "Where are you two heading?" Crace asked angrily. "For dinner. Umbra and i have been eating dinner in nice restaurant at DayDawn town." Kiya said and tried to hide her enjoyment of Craces face. "We are not dating mom. We are friends, remember." Umbra said and took grasp from Kiyas wrist and pulled her out from room. "Seeya later Big Mommy." She shouted from corridors. Crace tried to hide his anger. "WHat is this place?" Suna asked from Maya. Even though he knew that this was abandoned observatory, deep in the woods. Maya knocked to door and masked man came out from it. "Nile! DisDarks are coming!" She shouted and man immediatly summoned keyblade and walked toward door. But he then stopped on Sunas right side. "Do you feel Gakes sleep?" Nile asked and walked to door, leaving Suna wonder what he meant. Then DisDarks started to fly through door inside. "Maya! Take Suna to secret lab!" Nile shouted. Maya and Suna runned up stairs and opened door to balcony of backyard. There they runned across balcony to other door and Maya opened it. "Quickly! Get in!" She said and Suna runned in. There Maya sat down to chair and Suna did the same. "Now then... Its nice to meet you again Suna. All though i would hope to have more time with you..." "What do you mean? What did that guy mean? Who are they?" Suna asked. "We are, Suna. You, me and Drew are DisDarks. We are another half of persons soul along with DayFaders. As for Nile, he was same as you but only differently." "You mean... Gake?" Suna suggested and Maya nodded sadly. "You and Nile. Together you form Gakes soul and heart. Nile is DayFader and you are DisDark. Nile has returned his powers to Gake, but in order for Gake to wake up, you must sacrifice your existence to him." "What about Nile? Doesnt he haf to do that?" "You two exist differently. DayFaders are natural to re-exist if they are strong enough to do that. But DisDarks like you and me... we are fated to vanish and suffer in endless darkness." After that Maya cried a bit. "After you are gone... i will follow. And because Gake and my origins are not connected, i wonder if we will ever meet again." "Maya! Time has come!" An white masked man said when coming in from dark corridor. He pulled his hand and Maya simply flied through air to it. As girl squirmed against mans iron cloves power, Suna stood up with keyblade in his hand. "Let her go!" He said. "Or what? You will force me to? I am far too powerful for a beings like you." Man said and pointed his finger to the floor and floor vanished. Man and Maya vanished into darkness while SUna falled down to the basements. "I waited for you..." Drew said. "Drew?" "Im so dissapointed... i though you would wanna good old days back, but you just keep on running away from them..." He said sadly and summoned his sickles. "I have no choice but to eliminate you..." He attacked toward Suna. But Nile eventually jumped down to room and blocked Drews attack. "Go! Go to Gake!" He commanded and pointed toward door. SUna nodded and runned through it to room where was mysterious glowing green light. He looked how path leaded to platform that floated in that light. There was four peoples sleeping inside an bubbles. "Kuma... Shabon... Choku..." He whispered when looking to red haired boy, purple haired girl and small little kid. "Are you there little brother?" He asked quietly from Choku. Boy smiled in his dream like he would wake up soon. Suna smiled a bit and walked toward last bubble. "Gake..." He said and stepped inside the bubble. "My life is a lie... yours is the truth. I guess i will be happier this way..." He said and started vanishing into flashes of light as he returned to Gake. "Your already too late Drew." Nile said to tired Drew, who looked amused. "Im never too late. Group will find Gake and free Suna..." "No. Thats not gonna happen even if they do find him. Maybe you should do the same as Suna and leave the group." "Hmph. What for?" "I can make a deal with you..." Nile said. "Its ready..." Crace said to her son and his friend. "Allow me to introduce your sister Umbra. Her name is Nox." Umbra and Nox looked to each others. He didnt see anything that would make her to be his clone... "How is she suppose to be better choice to capture Nile than me?" He asked. "Because she has born from the darkness and you are not. You only have Kumas darkness inside you, while Kuma has your light." Crace said and gave more cloths to Nox. "Mother..." Nox said and Crace almost cried. It was like first time Umbra started talking. More painful was that she never heard Kumas first words, which made her to set tears. "Yes dear?" Crace asked. "May i... kill this Nile-guy? Rip his heart off?" "Why yes my dear girl!" Crace cried and hugged her daughter. Kiya and Umbra felt startled. "I think im going to puke." Kiya said and walked toward door. "Me too..." Umbra said and followed. "At least you haf to admit one thing of her." Kiya said. "Whats that?" "She is more evil than you. I always remember you being such a softy sweetie when we first met." "What? Your gonna regret that!" Umbra shouted and started to chase after Kiya, who laughed a little. PS: Nox is latin and means "night" or "darkness. Similiar way that Umbra is latin and means "shadow". If anyone wondered Niles name is also name of worlds largest river. Since Nile-river and Nile of KH Ancients are both related to reptiles somehow. Edited May 27, 2012 by replika13 1 Kirie reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kirie 3,489 Posted May 27, 2012 Good intro and story bro x3 2 The Transcendent Key and replika13 reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
replika13 455 Posted June 1, 2012 CHAPTER FOUR WAKING HEROES, SLEEPING HEARTS "Kuma... are you there?" Kuma opened his eyes and landed on platform. He immediatly saw Shiryos figure, standing in front of him. He was no longer an child. He looked much more like he looked when he was posessed by Dark Spiritian. His teenager self. "Shiryo?" Kuma said. "I think im ready. My sleep is almost over." Boy said to Kuma and smiled. "Glad to hear that. How do you think im gonna free you then? Your body was destroyed by Dark Spiritian..." "Listen Kuma. Somewhere out there, should be an door. This specific door holds all nightmares inside it, until those nightmares gain an form and are released to this realm. I have wondered that... maybe my body is behind this door." "An door which holds nightmares inside..." Kuma repeated and felt weird. "Thats right. Door to Malice." Shiryo said. "I have heard about that... peoples say that door will appear and open when human does something really bad to heart with darkness... no one havent told me anything, except that Order of the Keyblade should know much more about this door..." Kuma said. Suddenly platform started to glow and fog slowly separated Kuma from Shiryo. "It seems you will wake up now. I wish you luck on searching this door. See you again, friend." "Ummh...?" Kuma opened his eyes and stretched his arms. He then stood up from floor and saw Shabon, who was waking Choku up. Gake was there too, but he was sleeping as well. "Gake? YOUR BACK!" Kuma shouted and runned to his friend. Gake opened his eyes and smiled. "Kuma... Shabon... good to see you again." He said and smiled as all three hugged him. "It feels like an eternity since we last saw each others." Shabon said. "Yeah... even though it was just two weeks." Choku said. Kuma then looked around. "Hey... where are we? This doesnt look anything like your homeworld Shabon. Did we land on another world?" He asked. "I dont think we did. Last thing i remember was to leave my father alone... Then this weird bug stinged me..." "Really? That bug also attacked Kuma. I was going to get some help when it stinged me too." Choku explained. Gake also remembered weird mosquito stinging him. "I dont get it... if i was stinged too, should Ken be here as well?" He though. "Well, we should try to find out where we are. Sitting around here wont do anything useful for us." Shabon said and stood up. Others did that too and together they walked to corridors. "So its an city? MoonRise City according to this guide book i bought..." Shabon said. They were walking through city mal. "Never heard of this..." Kuma said. "To be honest DayDawn town is much better place. There is much more sunlight." "I think... ive been here before..." Gake said and stopped to look down to park from window. "its like theres been an festivals recently." Kuma said, pointing to decorations and stages on park. "Its called an eclipse festivals. Every year at this same time they cxelebrate their spirits of the sun, during eclipse. Festival contains many games and contests around city parks and festival ends to tournament which is fought through one hour before festivals and final round is fought during the eclipse." Shabon explained from her guide book. "Sounds cool." Kuma said. "Aaah!" Choku shouted when weird monsters appeared. "DayFaders?" Kuma suggested and summoned his keyblade along with Gake. Choku runned to one of shops in order to prevent getting any damage since he couldnt defend himself. "No. These doesnt feel the same... they feel less darker..." Gake said. One of the monsters immediatly attacked him, easily dodging his strike and kicking him down. "Whoa! They surely are fast!" Kuma shouted when one of them knocked keyblade from his hand and subdued him against wall. "Guys! Focus!" Shabon shouted while striking down two of monsters with single strike. Gake stood up and throwed his keyblade, annihilating monster that was holding Kuma. Keyblade stopped right next to Kumas face. "You almost got me Gake!" Kuma shouted and summoned his keyblade back and immediatly slayed one of the monsters. But they just kept coming out of nowhere. Then Gake saw four peoples running toward them, escaping from more creatures. He charged and used an pair of fast chain attacks and in a second monsters after them were gone. "This way!" One of boys said and dragged Gake with them. Kuma and Shabon saw what was happening. "Get Choku! I go after them!" Kuma said to Shabon and runned after peoples who were dragging Gake with them. "Here is safe." One of girls said when they were on hangar, full of small boats. "Im Jinx. These are Kyler, Heidi and Menth." Jinx introduced to Gake. "Nice to meet you. Im Gake and that one over ther is Kuma." Gake said and pointed to Kuma who runned to them. "Okay! Why did you kidnap Gake?" Kuma asked tiredly. "Relax. They helped me away from those monsters." Gake explained. Shabon and Choku arrived. Choku was holding an piece of paper in his hands. "An small boy in a mask wanted me to give this to you." He said and gave paper to Gake. "Its from Ken. He wishes us to take boat to Cynthias castle. She has something to tell us." Gake said and looked photo of boat. "So your leaving already?" Kyler asked. "Yeah. Duty calls." Kuma said and jumped to boat with Choku. Shabon also climbed in and untied the rope. When Gake was about to step inside, he felt sad and shed tear. They waved farewells to gang and boat slowly started to move itself toward sea. Gake looked at gang who were far away already. "i dont know how but... i feel sad..." He said. "We can always come here again you know." Shabon said. Gake smiled and nodded. "Hey Choku? What is that thing?" Kuma asked. Boy was playing with somesorta soft dagger. Kuma took it. "Where did you get this?" He asked. "From Ken of course. He said i can keep it." Choku said but then Kuma sa small letters being writed to daggers holder. "It says Nile Is Back." Kuma readed. 2 coolwings and Kirie reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Hunter Hawk 392 Posted June 1, 2012 Awsome!!!! Except for the train they went on the boat! Awww so nice all three are together! Nile is back? Epic bro! 1 replika13 reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
replika13 455 Posted June 1, 2012 (edited) CHAPTER FIVE CONNECTED JOURNEY "So, you have arrived at last." Cynthia said when Kuma, Gake, Shabon and Choku stepped into his room. Woman was meditating again as always. Kuma remembered last time he visited her. He and Umbra were there together and they jumped into Realm of Spiritians. "First i haf to ask from you, where have you been these nine months? "Cynthia asked, stood up and walked to her table. "Nine months?" Kuma said and freezed from being shocked. "Is it really that long? We were away from home for two weeks." Shabon said. Cynthia looked worried like she should tell them something or shouldnt tell. She then took deep breath. "Look, while you were away, many things have been changed... for example, Crace took over your school and banished Magma to her manor. I have tried my best, but manor is surrounded with supernatural forces. Crace used a lot of power to enchant manor into escapeproof prison." Cynthia said. "Mom..." Kuma whispered. "I cant believe this! We should go back to home and reconquer it back!" Shabon suggested. "You could do that, but not yet. Crace isnt only problem around here. Let me explain this." Cynthia said and created an hologram of normal DayFader. "As you already know, DayFaders are forces of darkness. They seek light from hearts and ways to take it down from there. Their main goal has always been searching for worlds Keyholes of Sun and World." Cynthia said and made DayFader dissappear. "When people looses light to DayFader, darkness of that person fades out, creating DisDark." And she created an monster from before. "Such a DayFaders and DisDarks who have strong will and heart can take an form of human. They born differently and they can build an personality and mind to themselves. Like Nile for example." Then Cynthia created many masked figures. "These are part of this so called "Group". An small crowd of human DisDarks. They have been taking actions since Kuma returned from Realm of Spiritians." Cynthia said. "An Group? It sounds familiar..." Gake muttered. "Lady Cynthia?" Kuma asked and master nodded. "I wanna ask you about Heart-Tenebrae." "An dangerous power of creations? Im afraid im not right person to tell you anything. That is worldwidely forbidden subject. And besides you need darkness to perform it, but you dont really have any in your heart Kuma. Why are asking me about this?" "Because there is a friend of mine who needs body for his heart. I was thinking if Heart-Tenebrae would be right answer." Kuma explained. "Kuma listen. there could be another way to your friend to regain his body." Cynthia said, but Kuma turned around. "If you refuse to help me, i find someone who will!" Boy shouted and runned away from room. "Kuma!" "Let him go." Cynthia said. Shabon looked suprised. "Im sure he can come up with right solution." "And besides, he dont own armor or have able to use Spirit windows. Where would he go?" Gake asked. Kuma walked to yard. Since he met with Nile and Diana, he has been having an weird ability to be connected to cosmic light and travel through it to other worlds. Its been a long time since he tried it. And this time he knew where he was going... He closed his eyes and let light to fade him away into rays. "You two need to go to this dangerous mission. Once Kuma is ready i will send him to you too." Cynthia said. She waved her hand and two bags appeared to table. "Here is new travelling cloths for you. They will grant you new powers when you discover a way to use them." Gake immediatly took his bag and opened his belt. "Gake!" Shabon shouted. "What?" "Go change your cloths to somewhere else! Im not interested to see your underwears!" Shabon said and Gake felt embarrassed. "There is changing rooms in that room." Cynthia said and created an door to wall. Gake quickly took his bag and runned to there. Cynthia created another door and Shabon bowed and went in there. After changing, both were already in love to their new cloths. "I think this makes me look cooler." Gake said. "I appreciate your hard work master Cynthia." Shabon said. "Now, Choku. You will be good and listen Cynthia, ok?" Gake asked from his little brother. "I wanna go with you." Choku said. "No. Too dangerous for you. Its dangerous for us as well. Im not risking to loose you too Choku and you know it." Gake said and hugged Choku. Boy cried a little but he nodded to his older brother. "Have a safe journey you both. Dont worry, i will take care of Choku meanwhile." Cynthia said. "Just dont grant keyblade to him okay? I wanna do that myself when im master." Gake said and Cynthia smiled. Shabon opened Spirit window and they both jumped in after waving farewells to Cynthia and Choku. Umbra walked to his new room. It was more roomy and better than one in the Black Manor. Even after nine months he wasnt still used to it though. When he was about to jump to his bed, someone shut the door. "Whos there?" He asked. "Long time no see, brother." Kuma said and snapped his fingers in order to put lights on. "Kuma..." Umbra muttered. "Lets not talk for mom about this dont we? I need your help." Kuma said. "Really?" "Yup. Tell me what do you know about Heart-Tenebrae..." PS: Tenebrae is latin and simply means darkness Edited June 1, 2012 by replika13 2 Kirie and coolwings reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Hunter Hawk 392 Posted June 1, 2012 LOL! Kuma played Vanitas's role in BBS! 1 replika13 reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
replika13 455 Posted July 2, 2012 (edited) CHAPTER SIX KINGDOM Of NIAGORFIA http-~~-//www.youtube.com/watch?v=YEAwmHR6FG8 "You see them Blood?" An hooded woman asked from small empty eyed boy she had with her. She was pointing to Shabon and Gake who just appeared to Niagorfias streets. "Foolish keyblade wielders... so poor tools for us to use..." Woman said. "Heres your drink miss. Anything for your son?" An young waitress asked. Woman looked to Blood and smiled coldly. "Maybe he can pick his drink himself thank you." Woman said and waitress allowed Blood to come with her inside. Woman stared at Shabon and Gake, while smiling for horrific things Blood would soon do to waitress. "Eeeeek!" "Pity..." She whispered when Blood came out from cafe, having his cloths covered into waitress blood. "Your crazy are you?" Umbra laughed, but Kuma looked serious. "Look, heart-tenebrae is dangerous piece of magic and science. What were you planning to do anyways? Ressurection?" Umbra suggested. "Ressurection?" Kuma repeated. "Thats right. An mistake me and mom made in past. When mom lost dad in that battle... she tried to call his soul back... i tried it alone when i was nine years old. Luckily i survived without any scratch. But mom wasnt so lucky... she... well... i better not say." Umbra said like it would have been painfulliest thing to talk about. Kuma looked out of window. "I just wanna... create a body." He said. "Thats dangerous too you know. What for are you gonna do with body anyways?" "My friends heart needs one. You need to help me..." Kuma said. Umbra smiled a bit... brotherly. "Ill help you, but just because i dont wanna you to loose your own body in process." Umbra said and vanished into darkness and soon reappeared with book in hand. "This book is one of very rare ones. Order of the Keyblade banned it because heart-tenebrae is forbidden form of nature. Some peoples say that its even worse than being swallowed by darkness. Of course i say that darkness suits peoples, because my heart is filled with it." Umbra laughed a little and throwed "Laws of heart-tenebrae" to Kuma, who looked weird but also cool looking silver symbol, drawen inside golden circle with six pronze stars on it. "Lets do it... brother..." "Look everything here. Its so great. Castles bigger than ever and towns grown larger since last time." Shabon said. Magma along with his six strongest pupils once saved Niagorfia from being swallowed by darkness. Gake stopped on edge of street to look for lake below the town and castle. An misty valley surrounded lake, though trees of forest could be seem from there. "Lets go check if Ryan and others are still here somewhere." Shabon suggested and Gake followed her down the stairs to down town. "Lets see now..." An man named Taylor said while fixing giant computer. "I told you to connect with inner server instead of outer number 45-R." An cloaked lady named Hildegard said and made facepalm when smoke came out of computers back. "If you wouldnt be such a hag and leave me alone, i could get this thing fixed in time." Taylor complained as his face wqs covered by ash. Ryan and his friend, Katlen came down the stairs. "Is everything ready yet?" He asked, but then saw Taylor and Hildegard being ready to fight each others. "Umm... guys?" Katleen asked. "I had enough of this witch! Shes awfully annoying me!" Taylor shouted and picked biggest wrench of his tool box. "I cant stand you either, lad." Hildegard said and took katana sword from the wall. "Guys! Stop it!" Ryan shouted in horror when wrench and katana clashed together. Suddenly door opened. Everyone went quiet. "Umm... hi there." Shabon said. Taylor and Hildegard looked embarrassed. "Hi there Shabon. Long time no see." Ryan said. "About two years. Its not that long." Shabon said back. "Something seems to be wrong with your computer." Gake said and Taylor immediatly went fixing it. "Guys, this is Gake. He was here too two years ago." Shabon introduced and Gake grinned while bowing. "Luckily you came. We have been having though time since those DayFaders appeared many months ago." Ryan said, showing pictures from monitors. DayFaders appeared around town, attacking peoples. "But there is also a new threath going on. New monsters of some sort..." "Those things are called DisDarks. They are leaded by this Group and..." "You called?" An deep voice echoed. Shabon and others went quickly outside and saw line of masked figures in front of them. http-~~-//www.youtube.com/watch?v=E0R9KBIhRjk "Mix dark powder to bright powder and then drop small amount of it to candles. Light the candles and then make the spell." Umbra readed and Kuma did as he was told. Six candles, safety circles in each walls, three bottles of dark liquid with sea-salt and orichalcium being mixed in and one jar full of 47 different elements. Umbra then summoned darkness and Kuma summoned light and together they drawed an half of human body to floor. "Were ready to cast the spell to create an safe body for a heart. Your ready?" Umbra asked. Kuma gulped but then smiled and nodded. Edited July 2, 2012 by replika13 1 Kirie reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
StarStruck 78 Posted July 2, 2012 Great job!!! It's AWSOME!!!!! 1 replika13 reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
replika13 455 Posted July 2, 2012 (edited) CHAPTER SEVEN GROUP "You are the Group?!" Shabon shouted and summoned her keyblade. Middlest man stepped two steps forward. "Indeed we are. We are DisDarks leaders. An Group of peoples covering their mysterious past behind the masks of revelations." He said. "What do you want?" Gake asked angrily. Man laughed coldly. "That is none of your concern. Just keep releasing light DayFaders have been releasing. We take care of the rest." Man said and all but one masked person dissappeared. "You do look like your father... but you also look like him as well." Man said, sounding really amused and looking to Gake. "Excuse me?" Gake said. "Be good boy Suna. We know you wont let us down." Man laughed and vanished. Suddenly area was swarming of DayFaders. "Katlen! Help Taylor with computer! Me and Hilda can take care of this!" Ryan shouted and Katlen nodded. "We will help!" Gake shouted and he and Shabon prepared to fight with keyblades. "Isnt that delightful Blood?" Woman asked. "Im still thirsty." Blood whined. Woman rolled her eyes. "I am not going to look anyone other for you right now. You just ripped an waitress, isnt that enough for one hour?" Woman said angrily. "But i need to drink." Blood said sadly. Suddenly three DayFaders appeared and Blood immediatly jumped on them. "That will do..." Woman smiled coldly. "Hey! No visitors are allowed here!" Guard shouted. Woman took piece of her hair. "Uuugh!" Woman stabbed guards chest with piece of hair that looked now more like brown needle. Guard falled down. "I guess you got something to drink after all Blood." Woman smiled and turned around when Blood jumped on guards dying body. "Finally." Shabon said when area was clear from DayFaders. Gake looked a bit ill. "Whats wrong?" Shabon asked. "I just feel a little weird. No worries..." Gake said weakly and stood up. "We must follow them! Hurry up Gake!" Shabon shouted and opened Spirit Window. "Your leaving already?" Ryan asked. "Yeah. Duty calls. But we will be back." Gake said and entered Window with Shabon. "Have a safe journey." Ryan said before window closed and two keyblade wielders were vanished. Kuma and Umbra took long deep breath and summoned their keyblades. They strucked keyblades inside the spell circle. "Power of darkness. Power of light. It is power of heart that we are summoning through." Kuma casted. "Potestate tenebrarum. Potestatem lucis. Est potentia cordis sunt accito per." Umbra repeated in different language. They clapped their hands together and then slowly stepped to opposite sides of each others in circle. Kuma slowly removed his hands farther, releasing bright energy between them. Umbra did the same and raw dark energy tried to escape from his hands. "Its working..." Kuma whispered when body started to form from light. "Form a body! Balanced and heartless... an shelter to lost light." Kuma said. "Formare corpus! Libratum et excors ... an umbraculum ad perdidit lux." Umbra said. It works! It really works! "Whats happening Umbra?" Kuma asked when presence of room started to turn colder and darker. "Uhh..." "Umbra...?" "Kuma! Take a shelter! Spell is backfiring!" Umbra shouted and stopped doing the spell and tried to push his twin away, but lightnings of their artificial body paralyzed him. "Umbra!" Kuma screamed when an portals opened into safety circles and their keyblades vanished into fragments. "No! Kuma!" Umbra shouted and tried hardly to grab Kumas hand when he was about to get sucked into one of portals. "This cant be happening... everything was fine with instructions... or was it?" Umbras mind said inside boys head. Edited July 2, 2012 by replika13 1 Kirie reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
replika13 455 Posted July 3, 2012 (edited) CHAPTER EIGHT PUNISHMENT "Ummh... where am i?" Kuma asked and opened his eyes. He felt weird. Acctually weirder than ever. "AAAGH! I have... a tail?" He gasped when seeing red furry cat tail his spirit formation had. He tried to touch tail with his hand but then he noticed his hand was furry too. From the shock he noticed big cat ears he had and that his nose was darker (Luckily still human like). He then remembered Umbra and looked for him. His twin brother was laying against wall in the corner. "I...i managed to save you..." He said weakly. "Umbra..." "Look..." He said and showed his left hand. It didnt have skin in it. It was just black veins of muscle. His fingers didnt move at all. "What happened to us Umbra?" Kuma asked. "We were punished by using this spell. You loosed your full humanity and im afraid you loosed half of your soul too... I in turn loosed half of my heart and ability to control my left hand. Its nothing more than just muscle now... burned, dark and dead muscle..." "Im sorry." "You better be. I saved your life. Before your soul would have fully vanished i activated your spirit formation and thanks to that, spirit protected rest of yyour soul from vanishing." Then they heard voices coming from corridor and door opened. Kiya and Crace were both there and looked shocked. "What happened here? Kuma? What are you doing here?" Crace asked. "Umm..." "We used heart-tenebrae mom." Umbra said and weakly stood up. Crace looked furious. Kiya immediatly went to Umbra and lifted him to his hands. Kuma stood up much more easily, but interestingly, he couldnt feel the floor under his feet. "Mom. You haf to give the school back to Magma." Kuma said. "Not now dear. Umbra needs help. You wait here or show me where hospital room is." Crace said. Kuma sighed and walked down the corridors, leading his mother, brother and Kiya to hospital room. http://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=fvwrel&NR=1&v=lxRIxovS7nQ "Maybe we find a way for you to use your arm." Kiya said for Umbr. "We can always cut it off." Miss Sibylla,one of castles servants said sarcastically. "How can you even suggest it?!" Crace shouted. Kuma was sitting outside the room. He didnt listen what everyone said. He was blaming himself from what happened to him and what was going to happen Umbra. His stupid attempt to create body for Shiryos heart... just helping an friend. Kuma always believed that doing good things would make destiny reward that person, but now it turned out to be wrong. Horribly wrong. What would Shabon or Gake say to him when they find out? Why he had to be so good? "Im sorry Shiryo..." He whispered. "You tried to help me..." Shiryos heart answered. "Remember? You taught me that darkness is wrong path and you even opened your heart to my dying one... you did right choice. You have made right choices always, Kuma. Always, when there is people in need of help and friends, you have come to their aid. Their greatful for that and so am i." "But i failed..." "Maybe. But we all make mistakes in our lives. No ones perfect." "Thank you Shiryo..." Shiryo was right... Only he could help Umbra. Umbra was his brother, no matter what! He opened the door and walked to table, where Umbra was lying down. "Kuma? Go back to corridor!" Crace commanded, but Kuma stared at Umbras arm and ouched it with both of his hands. He closed his eyes and focused. Light inside the cosmos, travelled through his hand to Umbras arm. Crace and Kiya saw an small glow that soon shined strongly, making them both to cover their eyes. Light healed Umbras arm, so Umbra would use it whenever he uses his keyblade. Light faded out and Umbra moved his fingers. Brothers stared to each others. Crace did the same and she cried a bit. Kiya smiled and went out from room, where Nox was standing. "Yuk! I just hate my little goody goody brother..." She said like it would have been worst thing she would ever see. "You know you got something on your head. Oh my, it was your ugly hair. How silly of me." Kiya said, expressing her dislike on Nox and walked away. "I HAVE NOT AN UGLY HAIR!" Nox screamed after her, but Kiya smiled secretly from satisfaction of Umbra being all right and that she managed to annoy Nox. What a perfect evening... Edited July 3, 2012 by replika13 2 Hunter Hawk and Kirie reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
coolwings 1,546 Posted July 3, 2012 I love this story! I feel like I am reading a different version of KH2! 1 replika13 reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Hunter Hawk 392 Posted July 3, 2012 YAY!!!! More of KH in FMA version!!!! Simply love it! But did Kuma entirely became kitty or he just has some kitty features? 1 replika13 reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
replika13 455 Posted July 3, 2012 YAY!!!! More of KH in FMA version!!!! Simply love it! But did Kuma entirely became kitty or he just has some kitty features? He just has some features like ears and tail and darker nose. He is still human shaped not to mention his arms,legs and neck is furless Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
replika13 455 Posted July 3, 2012 (edited) CHAPTER NINE ROYAL GATE "Look around you Gake. This is piece of most awesome culture of whole Realm of Light. Hakodas city!" Shabon introduced to Gake. City was located between sea and desert. It was huge. And it got huger and huger between outer wall and palace tower. Streets were full of happy looking people. No matter were they orphans or homeless people, everyone smiled and had good time. Except guards. They looked grumpy and tried to cause misfortune for normal peoples. "So, what are we here for?" Gake asked. "I sense darkness here. LOOK!" She shouted and pointed to growd. An masked person looked at them. "Who´oh." "Group! Lets get him!" Gake shouted and runned after masked man, who runned down to severs. "Wait!" Shabon shouted after him. "How pathetic... they play tag with DisDarks while they could help us get what we want..." An hooded woman said. "I need something to drink. Please." Blood said. Woman ignored what he said and walked to the fountain. "We shouldnt be following them. I wish Shock would do following for us." She muttered. "I cant see why we are following them when theres a bunch of other wielders too." Blood said and putted her mouth to the fountain. "Me either. They say that those twin boys are important key for our plans, but i dont see yet how..." "Hey boy! That water isnt for drink!" Guard shouted. "Should i take care of him?" Blood asked. "It would be nice of you, but theres too many peoples around. Lets just go to river so i can get rid of you for a second." Woman said and dragged Blood with her. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LNd2DP4MB_c&feature=related "There he is! Hold it!" Gake commanded. Masked stranger laughed. "Come on Suna. Is that a way to treat old friends?" He said and took of his mak, revealing hair, that is white and spiky. Man had yellow eyes and scar covered his nose and left eye. "Who are you?" Shabon asked. "Why i am Nezbrow. Hail of the bronze." Nezbrow said. Gake attacked, but Nezbrow turned water into liquified bronze and shooted it to air, where it whirled down into hundreds of bronze bullets. "Reflega!" Shabon casted an forcefield around her and Gake. Bronze bullets were still too much for them. "Now lets see. Im sure the seed is over her somewhere..." Nezbrow said and strted to investigate an door of vault in front of him. He simply liquified door away and went in. "No! He is escaping!" Gake shouted. Suddenly small boy runned out from vault and he was holding something grey, tile shaped stone in his hands. "You little brat!" Nezbrow shouted and summoned liquified bronze and tried to grab boy, but didnt manage to. "Shabon, explode the shield, now!" Gake commanded. "Blast!" Shabon casted and shield blasted, causing Nezbrow to fall down to water. Boy was much farther on bridge now. Suddenly liquified bronze rised from water and trapped boys feet on bridge. "Oh no!" "There you are! Hand over the seed, now!" Nezbrow shouted when jumping to air and gliding to boy. "Its not yours!" Boy shouted and started to hit bronze around his feet with stone he had. "Fool! Your destroying the seed!" "Firaga!" Gake casted and Nezbrow falled down from the hit of spell. Shabon was down there in water. She simply waved her keyblade and Nezbrow falled to water. "What... No..." He said and started to vanish into darkness. "NOOO!" "So that guy was after this, seed?" Shabon asked. Boy, named Seruo nodded. "One of his friends hided it to castle, but i removed it to vault. I saw him today, so i hided into vault too and kept eye on this, because i know it was valuable." Seruo explained. "Well, our job here is done. Lets move on." Gake said and stretched his arms. "Can we take this seed with us. Those guys wont be bothering you in the future then." Shabon said. "Sure. Its not mine after all." Seruo said and handed stone to Shabon. She felt mystic energy running through it. An mystic and dark. What was those guys after? What for Group is going to need this seed? They should ask Cynthia for this." Edited July 3, 2012 by replika13 3 Kirie, coolwings and Hunter Hawk reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
replika13 455 Posted July 3, 2012 CHAPTER NINE TOKO RAINWEL "Stop it Kiya! That feels good but it isnt funny!" Kuma said, when Kiya was yet again rubbing behind his cat ear. "I cant help it. Your just so cute now." Kiya said and looked terribly amused. "Yeah but they are my ears!" Kuma shouted and went farther. "Here kitty kitty!" Kiya joked, stood up and left Kuma alone into the room. Kuma was able to get used to his tail and ears, but darker nose surely looked more annoying. He was at entrance hall, where magma and pupils usually had training and breakfast. Now everything was different and darker thanks to his mother. Someone knocked to front door and Kuma was wondering who it was. He stood up and went opening the door, only to see a man, who was wet from the rain at outside. "Good day, my name is Toko Rainwel." He said, like expecting Kuma to know who he was. "Umm..." It was a little awkward moment, when Toko stared at Kumas face, ears and tail. "What kind of creature are you? I´ve never seen one like you before?" "Im not a creature. I just had a little incident with some spell." Kuma said and let man inside. "Who are you again?" Kuma asked. "Your kidding right?" Toko answered. "No seriously." "im Toko Rainwel. You know, famous Toko Rainwel from Order of the Keyblade." "Never heard of..." Kuma said and Toko looked deeply hurted. Fact was, that Magma never spoke or taught about Order, because Order was just big house full of jerk keyblade wielders, who boss peoples around. Kuma didnt wanna mention that to Toko though. "Is Lady Crace here. I have something to say for her." toko said. "Sure, this way." Kuma said, leading toko to Craces common room. "Come in." Crace said when Kuma knocked to door. Umbra was lying down at her sofa, while Kiya readed an book named Dark knight, Bright Angel to him. "Mom. you have a visitor here." Kuma said. Crace looked suprised and turned around. Her face turned shocked and she summoned her keyblade, when seeing uniform Toko was wearing. "Dont worry Lady Crace. im not here to arrest you. All though Order is seriously thinking of that. For your luck we dont have evidences for Magmas dissappearance and that its connected to you." Toko said and walked into middle of room. "First of all, i must ask you to move away from this castle. it belongs to Magma, but since its keyblade training school, it also belongs to Order. Now that i managed to get inside through your defense spell thanks to this young man, i will tell you that you have three months time to move out. if you fail to do so, you are arrested and all your belongings will be feeded to dragons." "Im not leaving anywhere! i like it here, not to mention im master too. Master Magma left this school for my possession after leaving with his pupils." Crace lied. "How do you explain then that no one has entered in or out your manor, which also is surrounded by strong defense spells." toko asked. "I will pass the Manor down to my son once he is old enough. Order doesnt own my manor anyways so buzz off!" Crace answered angrily. Toko smiled a bit and saw how Nox came inside the room too. He felt strong dark presence inside her. "then there is other thing. My calculations prove that during this night, heart-tenebrae was formed inside this castle. Is it true? Because if it is, i have permission to arrest you for that, since its forbidden by law." "Me or any of my servants havent formed heart-tenebrae inside this castle." Crace answered. Toko smiled again and turned his eyes to Umbras hand and Kumas face. "How about your sons then?" "Huh?" "I see... now this is interesting..." Toko said and started to look closer Umbras hand. Startled Umbra took his hand farther. "Whats your problem?" He asked angrily and glared at man. "Its not my problem, its pretty much your problem lad." "Dont call me lad." Umbra said murderously. Toko stood up. "So... two kids, forming something so dangerous as heart-tenebrae? This makes an deep exception to the law... i must think of this and ask from my boss what he thinks of this." He turned around and called Kiya to him. "Can you make me some tea?" He asked. "With pleasure sir." Kiya answered and they both went outside the room. "You young lady should brush your hair sometime." He said calmly to Nox when passing by her. Kuma quickly grabbed Noxs hands, when girl was about to attack Rainwel. "MY HAIR IS PERFECT YOU MISERABLE TEA-LICKING SEWER HOUND!" She shouted and struggled against Kumas grip. "It seems my friends that Drew has betrayed us!" Masked man said. Masked persons were sitting around triangle shaped table. One side was for leader members, other one was for special members and third one was for weak or minor members. Two chairs in that side, which belonged to Suna and Drew were empty. Also six other chairs were empty. Five of them were members, eliminated in Shadowless Tower nine months ago, while one of them belonged to Nezbrow. "Wheres Nezbrow? He promised to help me fixing my toy." Little masked girl said. "Silence Kwimp. Nezbrow is dead, so deal with that." One woman said. "Speak for yourself! You left him alone and he lost the seed because of that!" "He told me that he can take care of himself, so i went shopping." "Yes. You defyed Group again Raogwen. You blewed up the mission, went spend free time AND you disrobed your jacket and mask." "But..." "Enough of this nonsense. Im sure Raogwen will have her seed ready am i right." Leader man asked. "It takes a little time. I managed to fool couple of kids to make seed stronger through mutation process, Yolew studied, before his demise in Shadowless Tower." Raogwen said and stood up. "But dont worry. Seed is already in my hands, my lord. trust me." PS: Raogwen is anagram from color of Orange and Kwimp is anagram from Pink with W being added to name. 3 Hunter Hawk, Kirie and coolwings reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
replika13 455 Posted July 6, 2012 (edited) CHAPTER ELEVEN SEED OF DARKLESS part 1/2 Stopping into an tropical island kingdom was good idea for Gake. At least it was first. "Go away keyblade wielder! We dont need you guys around here!" Peoples shouted to him. "I told you not to expose yourself." Shabon sighed. Peoples treated her much more nicely, because she didnt tell them anything about her powers. "How should i know this whole kingdom hates keyblade wielders..." Gake muttered when seeing peoples pointing and shouting at him. Shabon held seed-stone in her hands and wondered what for it was... negativity inside it... and why Group was after it...? "Do you think we should go?" Gake asked. "No. My instings tell me that this is place to be right now." "Right..." Gake sighed. He wondered if using spirit formation would hide him. "You ready yet?" Raogwen asked from two teenagers. Other one was boy and other one was girl. "It takes time. Its not anything easy to do." Girl explained. "It better be sugar queen... or should i remind you that your brother will loose more than his finger this time." Raogwen said nicely. "But..." "We´ll make it ready for tonight." Boy said. Raogwen smiled. "Thats the spirit. But are you sure you wanna make dull promises?" She laughed and vanished into darkness. "Good going brother." "I have an idea already. Lets use my body on tests." Boy said. "What? Shouldtn we just ask some servant to do that?" "No... i think test fails if we use non-keyblade wielder." "Bro..." "Lets just do it! Even if i die, we get our brother back..." Shabon putted seed to her pocket and saw crowd on one of the shops. She immediatly went asking about it from old lady. "Excuse me? Whats going on there?" "Why, most on this island are suffering from sickness. We dont know what causes it, but we need medicine all the time. Soon this world runs out of it and peoples start dying..." Lady said and continued walking. "Sounds bad..." Gake said and walked to crowd. "Hey thats the keyblade wielder!" "Get out of here!" "Curaga!" Gake casted and huge green light surrounded crowd. Everyone looked and felt much better. "I cured you all out of your sickness! Is there anyone else who needs curing?" Gake asked and crowd started to look much more excited. "My daughter needs you! " "No, my whole family must be healed right now!" "One at the time please..." Gake grinned. "Do you wanna heal peoples instead of finding source of this sickness?" Shabon asked. "The first one." Gake answered. "But if source cant be found, these peoples just get sick again. You dont wanna spend your life as doctor dont you?" Gake looked from Shabon to crowd and back. "Im keyblade wielder. These peoples need me." "Ugh... fine..." Shabon muttered and walked away, while peoples tried to pull Gake to different directions. "Careful or i end up being handless!" "This water..." Shabon though when seeing how small river looked. It looked somehow more... black? She took empty potion bottle and filled it with water and then casted an spell around it. Spell helped her to check what was wrong with water. And then she saw it. Masked person was walking through forest. Group! She followed this masked person deeper to the forest. Deeper they went, darker it got. Shabon feared that she would need to use light spells, which would expose her to enemy. Finally Shabon saw an cave in front of them and Masked person went inside. Shabon waited that person would come out, so she would check what was inside the cave. Luckily it didtn take more than half of minute and person came back to outside and vanished. Shabon runned inside the cave and followed an tunnel to deep underground. "Hmmm!" She heard and runned down until she comfronted an door. She easily unlocked it with her keyblade and went inside, but it was dark there. "Light!" She casted and shining ball flied up to roof and lightened whole room. At there back of the chamber was something lying down against floor. As Shabon walked closer, she saw it was small boy, being tied up around his wrists and ankles. He was gagged with black cloth. "Mmmh!" He whimpered. "Dont worry. I wont hurt you." Shabon said friendly and took cloth away. "Watch out!" Boy yelled. "Huh?" Shabon quickly turned round and saw masked person, who punched him to back of head and Shabon felt unconscious. "Uugh..." Shabon muttered. Her head hurted. "Finally your awake." Masked woman said. Shabon noticed she was chained up into chair. "Allow me to introduce myself. My name is Raogwen. Second of Sunset." Woman said and her mask faded way. Shabon saw that she was no longer inside the chamber. This was laboratory of some sort. Door opened and two teenagers came inside. "You called us?" Boy answered. "Yeah. I found a test subject for you." Raogwen said. "What? But we are supposed to use keyblade wielder." Girl shouted, looking shocked to see Shabon chained up. "I know. She IS the keyblade wielder." "We already decided to use me!" Boy shouted. "And take the risk it doesnt work? You do as i say or your brother will be sorry to be your brother!" Raogwen commanded. "Your using an little child as hostage? Your pathetic sicko!" Shabon shouted. "Yeah and your through... really soon key-girl." Raogwen snapped her fingers and walked out of the door, passing by the siblins. Boy sighed. "All right sister... you heard her." Boy said and took an vaccine needle from his pocket. It was filled with same black liquid that was mixed to water. "No!" Shabon screamed and tried to struggle free. "Gag her." "Wait! I know where your brother is! Please!" Shabon shouted. "And you dont think that guy doesnt hide him elsewhere? She did that before when we found him once. She cutted finger from him to show us she can hurt him." Boy shouted and putted an protecting mask to cover his under face. "This wont hurt a bit." He said calmly. Gake was tired, but he was also worried. Shabon was nowhere to be found. He has been looking for her hours. Where could she be? Then he saw masked person, running to forest. "Hey!" Gake shouted and runned after her. Masked person runned deeper and deeper to woods and Gake was following her until she jumped into an bush. Gake did the same and faled down to ground from bushes as there was big crater like square at forests. "Hmm!" Gake turned his head and saw small boy, being tied up at middle of square and runned to him. When Gaje removed cloth, covering his mouth, boy looked terryfied. "This is a trap! Run!" He shouted. "Indeed!" Raogwen said. She was walking toward them with ten, wolf like DisDarks appearing around area. Gake quickly cutted opes around boys wrists and ankles with one sweep of keyblade. "Stay close to me!" He said and boy nodded and stood up. "How stupid of you. Do you really think you can protect him from these guys?" Raogwen laughed. "Look! I dont know what game you are playing, but i aint falling any deeper on it!" Gake shouted with keyblade being ready for attack. "You dont haf to. This farther you cant go. Boy is useless to me now and i wont be needing you for a long either, so please, give seed back to me..." "Seed?" "Thats right! Give me back Nezbrows piece of Seed of Darkless!" "Sorry but you are asking it from wrong person." Gake laughed. "What!" "Its with Shabon." Gake said. "Very well then. You WERE useless after all..." Raogwen sighed and vanished. "Im Gake by the way!" Gake said to boy. "Umm, Aorin." Boy stuttered. Gake sighed. Would he be able to defeat all these creatures and keep Aorin safe at same time. Would he be having enough time to save Shabon? Edited July 6, 2012 by replika13 2 Kirie and coolwings reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
replika13 455 Posted August 5, 2012 Its been a while again since i made any updates. So here they are again http://kh13.com/forum/public/style_emoticons/default/happy.png CHAPTER TWELVE SEED OF DARKLESS PART 2/2 "You cant do this!" Shabon screamed and struggled, but boy putted vaccination needle inside her shoulder. "Dont worry. Mutation doesnt hurt." Girl whispered. "STOP!" "Huh?" "Ken!" Shabon shouted. Small keyblade wielder boy was standing at window. He jumped down to floor and pointed keyblade to teenagers. "If anyone touches her, im gonna make you perish for that!" Ken shouted. "Hm..." Boy grinned, closed his eyes and summoned an keyblade. He then opened his eyes and dashed toward Ken. Ken jumped over stabbing strike and tried to hit boy from air, but boy crawled and rolled right. When Ken landed to table, boy stood up and cutted table from middle. Shabon saw her opportunity and managed to catch small ash-rock from her back-pocket. She then used it to scratch an cross into lock of chains. She snapped her fingers and iron chains melted into clay. "Huh?" Girl gasped and dodged Shabons quick strike of keyblade. "Stop! Im not keyblade wielder!" She screamed. "No matter..." Shabon grinned. Teenagers were close enough now. "Bind!" Shabon casted and golden electric sphere surrounded them, paralyzing them and then it turned into material torus and it shrinked down around their bodies. "Release us!" Boy shouted. "Not a change. Tell us whats going on!" Shabon said, but when she looked to Ken, he was nowhere to be found. "Ken? Ken!" "Your friend took off and dissappeared then?" "I guess... but that doesnt change anything! What are you guys up to?" Shabon asked again. Boy sighed. "This woman wants us to create perfect mutation... for her Seed of Darkless. We have been studying it for weeks, eventually causing water of city to get toxic... we didnt wanna do it this way, but Raogwen kidnapped Aorin and threatned to kill him if we dont help her." "Mutation...? She must be really desperate. Mutation to objects changes their power. It turns magic into something else. For a Seed like this..." Shabon said taking seed from the pocket. "It could be fatal. Not only the seed would be destroyed, but also whole environment of one world too..." "What?" "Thats right. Youve been tricked big time. You almost destroyed this world and everyone on it. Including yourselves and your brother." "No..." Girl whispered sadly. "But there is an way to fix this. You just need to stop, show me where is source of your mutation water and destroy it." "We cant... Aorin is..." "Safe." Gake said and Aorin stepped forward from behind Gakes back. "Aorin!" Boy shouted and Shabon broke the binding-spell. As three siblins hugged, Shabon turned her attention to Gake. "Where have you been?" "You know me. Fighting bad guys, saving other peoples from bloodthirsty monsters... nothing out of ordinary..." Gake grinned. "Right. I know now what causes the sickness to this world." Shabon said and three siblins looked at her. "Source of the black mutation-water is in here." Boy, Reni said, while leading them down the tunnel to deep underground. "Raogwen used seed to multiply water." Girl, Hikae said. Soon they came across with end of cave and there it was. An tile shaped stone, was cracked into wall. Under it was a web and water inside the mountain runned through that web, making water black. "Lets do this!" Gake said and he and Shabon rised their keyblades. But then someone jumped from shadows and tried to scratch him with sharp object, but Gake managed to jump over it. "Long time no see Suna." Raogwen said. "Not again! My name is Gake!" Gake shouted and attacked. Raogwen jumped to his keyblade and forced it to ground and then kicked him to chin. "You have always been so slow. But im sure without your keyblade you will be quite harmless." She said, took Gakes keyblade and snapped it from the middle, much more others shock. "So you ARE DisDark then..." Gake said. "Thats right! An ultimate being between light and darkness. As you can see i snapped an real keyblade from the middle. How about i try your neck next then?" Raogwen said and jumped toward Gake. Shabon came between them and striked Raogwen against the fountain, making seed to fly off from the wall. "I got it!" Hikae shouted and captured seed. "Foolish childs... you made me destroy black water... now i must kill you..." Raogwen said and putted her head down the black water. Her body growed and her jacket ripped off. "Shes drinking mutation-water!" Shabon shouted in horror. Raogwen started to grow fur. Silver spikes growed to her ankles, ripping off her shoes. Her fingers claws growed and hair went all black. As she rised her head, she was no DisDark anymore, she was an artificial animal. An mindless monster. Raogwen roared and cave started to rumble. "We better get out of here!" Aorin shouted. "You go! We hold her off!" Shabon shouted and trio runned back to the tunnel. "Shes huge! Do you think we can take her down like this?" Gake asked. "If only we would have Kuma. Three of us are unbeatable together!" Shabon shouted and shooted beam of light to Raogwens eyes. "Gake! Use your earth-powers and dig us another tunnel!" Shabon said. "Sure!" Gake said, clapped his hands and kicked the wall, making rocks to go farther inside the wall and forming an little tunnel. "Okay Raogwen... Drink some more of this!" Shabon shouted, clapped her hands and controlled black water toward Raogwen, washing her against the wall. Shabon then jumped and used Meteoraga spell to make cave collapse. She quickly runned to tunnel Gake made, when rocks started to bury Raogwen alive. "You saved us! Mutation water is completely gone now!"Aorin said happily. Gake rubbed back of his head and grinned. "It was no sweat. Acctually it was quite fun!" "Im suprised an whimp like you can even hold a keyblade." Reni said and Gakes smile turned into rage. He turned around with his fists pulled out. "What do you mean whimp?" He shouted. "Yeah... i always though keyblade wielders have muscles." Hikae annoyed. "You wanna see some muscle?!" Gake asked angrily. Shabon knocked Gake down to ground. "Behave yourself." She said. "No fair..." Gake muttered when Shabon sat on his back, unabling him to get up. Aorin handed over the seed to Shabon. "I think you should keep it." He said. "Thanks. Ill keep it safe from guys like Raogwen." Shabon smiled. She then pulled Gake up from ground. "Lets head to another world then." She said. CHAPTER THIRTEEN LEADERSHIP DEPTH Kuma and Umbra were brought to United City, into Order of Keyblades headquarter. Toko Reinwel was convinced that Kiya was master of making tea, so he brough her too. Crace didnt come, allthough it would have been necessary. Kuma and Umbra were both sitting on chairs in office full of bookcases and keychains. "I feel ridicilous..." Kuma whispered under his helmet. Helmet was made to cover his kitty face from others. Though Crace was nice and made holes for his cat ears, Kuma still hated her for this. And since his hands were like hairy paws, he had to use cloves. He also had to put tail into his pants. Umbra was using Shiryos old jacket they got from Realm of Spiritians. It was quite big for him since Shiryo was three years older than him, but it was great way to hide his arm. "Just be quiet... its your vault we are here..." Umbra muttered. "You cant blame me after i fixed your arm..." "Shut up..." "Now then. You two are ones?" Someone asked. As twins turned around they saw old but strong looking man. "And you are?" Kuma asked. "Oh im sorry lad. My name is leadership Depth. I rule over Order of the Keyblade as well as those worlds under Orders protection. We can say that im also owner of your castle Kuma, but to be honest i dont take care of Orders properties." Depth said and walked across the room to his chair and sat down. "Officer Rainwel told me that you two survived from using heart-tenebrae. Also He stated that you two are only ones to escape from Realm of Spiritians during last 9 years." Depth said. "Well, i dont wanna brag..." Umbra said. "Not to mention that both of your parents were powerful keyblade masters. Your father was also part of Order but he soon left after discovering this isnt job he likes." "Our father was part of this?" Kuma repeated. "Thats right. Our resbonsibility is to keep all worlds in all realms safe and under law and justice." "Are you gonna arrest us now?" Umbra asked. "No. I have something different in mind. I was wondering if you Umbra wanna join Order." "Huh?" "You have a lot of potential. You side with darkness but you dont act like darkness." "Im determined of my own fate." "Yes. You dont wanna conquer nor steal power. I sense strong heart burning inside you." "Thanks but no thanks." Umbra answered and stood up. "Well, come back anytime when you change your mind then." Depth smiled and boys bowed to him before leaving the room. As they left the room, Kuma turned his face toward Umbra. "Now what?" He asked. "Now what what?" Umbra asked back. "Were free from mom right now. Do you think we should go looking for Shabon and Gake?" "Hmph! I say we need to find an way to fix this instead of waisting time for your friends..." Umbra said and started walking toward corridor. Kuma followed him, though his heavy helmet and hidden tail made his ability to keep balance worse while walking. "But everyone knows that you cant fix problems caused by heart-tenebrae! Its almost impossible as creating legendary keyblade!" "Been there, done that. Well mom did, but thats not the point! Ever heard of Queen Serum?" Umbra asked and stopped walking. "Queen serum? You mean legendary serum that Ancient keyblade wielders tried to create through their keyblades? But Umbra... thats just a story!" "It is not! Ancients exist! Remember? Mom forged one of their keyblades by stealing hope of peoples hearts through using Xioblivians!" Umbra shouted. He quickly silenced himself when one of Orders members passed them. When they looked his going they saw three other members coming to them with Toko Rainwel. Umbra immediatly recognized blond haired woman. "Mothe...mmmph!" Umbra whimpered when Kuma gagged his mouth with his hand. Blond haired woman was indeed their mother, Crace. Kuma almost didnt recognize her, because of the hair-cut, magic coloured (green) eyes and uniform. "Excuse me?" Man member asked. "I mean... there was a moth on the air... eheehe..." Umbra said nervously. "And why do you care?" Woman member asked. "I hate flying bugs thats all. I like spiders better." "Sorry to interupt your bugging conversation, but allow me to introduce you two to your two guardians and server." Toko said and pointed his hand to man member. "Hiro Maromo. He is your personal guardian Umbra." "I dont need a babysitter!" "No one asked you anyways... "Why you...!" Umbra said and almost dashed to Toko so he could punch him, but Kuma held him. "And this is Amelia Helios. Shes your personal guardian Kuma." Toko said, introducing woman one. Crace looked somewhat angry when Toko came to her. "This is your server. She will serve your food, supplies and munny. Her name is Uma Kubra." Toko said and Crace bowed with forced smile of pleasure. Kuma tried to not laugh for Craces cover name. It was ridicilous but also combination of his and Umbras names. "Why do you help us?" Umbra asked. "You know why. We both know." Toko smiled and walked away. "Escort them to their apartment." He said for Hiro and Amelia. "There they are! More DisDarks!" Shabon shouted. They followed normal DisDark creatures to the dark forest. They were extremely fast, not to mention that they moved weirdly. In fact they were controlled. "Good Blood. Keep up. They will soon learn the truth of those pitiful creatures. And when they do, Group is history." Hooded lady smiled coldly and took sniff of rose in her hand. "Im trying! Creatures are hard to control. They kick too much." Blood said and hardly moved his fingers like he would have tried to pull invisible strings or play invisible piano. Lady smiled and rose in her hand melted and turned to dust into wind. "And another step for destruction of Group has been taken..." 1 Kirie reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Hunter Hawk 392 Posted August 6, 2012 Yay! More of FMA! I nearly died laughing at Crace's new name! 1 replika13 reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kirie 3,489 Posted August 6, 2012 I read all of the chapter I didn read...Phew you should take a brake or something good story tho. owo 2 The Transcendent Key and replika13 reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
replika13 455 Posted August 6, 2012 I read all of the chapter I didn read...Phew you should take a brake or something good story tho. owo I have been having three week break here Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
