Ultimate Oblivion 52 Posted May 6, 2012 hi guys, just wnna make a story if lea didnt save sora in time chapter 1 riku and mickey were pinned down.xehanort aimed his keyblade at sora, hoping that there will be no interruptions. xehanort fired. NOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!! shouted riku and mickey. the blast hit sora. there was a blinding flash of light. after the light was gone, it wastoo late. sora, please wake up said riku.heheheheh, riku, i have always been awake from the start said sora. what!!!! said mickey. sora stand up and opened his eyes. it glowed dark in intensity. well come sora as the thirteen member said xehanort as sora unlease the Oblivion keyblade. AHAHAHAHAHAHAHA laughed sora as the place rumbled in intensity. We were too lare said mickey hi guys, just wnna make a story if lea didnt save sora in time chapter 1 riku and mickey were pinned down.xehanort aimed his keyblade at sora, hoping that there will be no interruptions. xehanort fired. NOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!! shouted riku and mickey. the blast hit sora. there was a blinding flash of light. after the light was gone, it wastoo late. sora, please wake up said riku.heheheheh, riku, i have always been awake from the start said sora. what!!!! said mickey. sora stand up and opened his eyes. it glowed dark in intensity. well come sora as the thirteen member said xehanort as sora unlease the Oblivion keyblade. AHAHAHAHAHAHAHA laughed sora as the place rumbled in intensity. We were too late said mickey Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
EdeaKramer 32 Posted May 6, 2012 please tag this as a spoiler this for all other people 1 Jim reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Nweintraub 630 Posted May 6, 2012 I got an Idea too, what if...he looked like Vanitas, except his hair was still dirty brown, & his eyes were still blue, & he had Riku's dark mode suit, & if he had a version of Soul Eater that was more like Soul Edge, in appearance & nature? Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Xalaru 445 Posted May 6, 2012 Wow, spoilers much. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
4Everbee 1,365 Posted May 6, 2012 Guys calm your tits. Ain't a big deal. Anyways. A few little tiny tips. Use Grammar. Snow ain't here to fix the grammar this time. Oh and when somebody talking put '' at the start and end of it. Other then that. It was a good story. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Queen Tery 4,591 Posted May 6, 2012 Guys calm your tits. Ain't a big deal. Anyways. A few little tiny tips. Use Grammar. Snow ain't here to fix the grammar this time. Oh and when somebody talking put '' at the start and end of it. Other then that. It was a good story. it is a big deal. some people don't want to be spoiled. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
4Everbee 1,365 Posted May 6, 2012 it is a big deal. some people don't want to be spoiled. Yeah but no need to go nuts over it. Sorry I just don't see the big deal of it. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Queen Tery 4,591 Posted May 6, 2012 Yeah but no need to go nuts over it. Sorry I just don't see the big deal of it. they're only getting upset, because it ruins the story of a game that they love. hence, why they joined this site. lol as some people say: "What has been seen, cannot be unseen." lol i personally am fine with spoilers. but, many people aren't and i understand that. the least people could do is put up some spoiler tags, out of consideration for those people. 2 Jim and Xalaru reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Junko 2,815 Posted May 6, 2012 Nice story although it needed a spoiler tag, i really dont care about spoilers anymore since the game is almost here Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Ultimate Oblivion 52 Posted May 6, 2012 I got an Idea too, what if...he looked like Vanitas, except his hair was still dirty brown, & his eyes were still blue, & he had Riku's dark mode suit, & if he had a version of Soul Eater that was more like Soul Edge, in appearance & nature? i thought of that too but it wouldnt fit Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Nweintraub 630 Posted May 6, 2012 i thought of that too but it wouldnt fit WHAT?!? How the he** could it not fit?!? I find it perfect. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Koko 3,944 Posted May 7, 2012 WHAT?!? How the he** could it not fit?!? I find it perfect. It's his story, let him do what he pleases. Also, I'm editing a spoiler warning into the title. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Nweintraub 630 Posted May 7, 2012 Don't delete my post! I find that irritating! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
4Everbee 1,365 Posted May 7, 2012 Don't delete my post! I find that irritating! ........ -Facepalm.- Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kirie 3,489 Posted May 7, 2012 This doesn't seem like a spoiler. o.O 2 The Transcendent Key and 4Everbee reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
