scrawlx101 1 Posted April 5, 2012 (edited) I am going to make a fanfic on here but i was wondering wat side eg ;ight,darkness,nothingness,or light and darkness would this person belong to and what keyblade would suit them: Name:Niwdog allignment:Unsre about wat to put here Keyblade:Unsure about wat to put here Personality:Quiet,Quick to anger,Kind and Caring,very undecisive(cant make decisions on his own),starts conversations often between friends. Element:Unsure about wat to put here Eye Colour and Hair colour:Black for both Share your suggestions including wat clothes u think he should wear PS this is my main character All Ideas welcome and can some1 tell me: why is Lea being a Keyblade Wielder SOOOO amazing???Kari I can understand but Common.... Some things i have already answered,Thnks All! Edited April 5, 2012 by Doctor Ivan Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Protoman 1,974 Posted April 5, 2012 First, if you want to write, use the wonders of any spelling/grammar check makes thinks easier for me and you. Second of all, your character you have there is just really vague. I mean, it's barely even plotted out. You have the base layers of his personality, why not branch out from that and show us more about his character? Better yet, why does he even have an element? What is he some sort of avatar-keyblader hybrid or something? Of course, if you want him to have some sort of main-element, then make sure you balance out his abilities. On branching out his personality, since this is your main character, you should probably try to develop him into an interesting character. You should also think about how you want the story to end up so you can decide what his alignment is. Remember, you write what you want to write. Does he exhibit being kind and caring often? Or is he more often portrayed as a hot-head? Pay attention to his personality to also choose his alignment. Remember to make him a balanced character, and make sure that he makes sense. Practice writing how he acts in different situations. As for the keyblade, maybe you should design your own. That makes you more open in your choices. Just make sure that it makes sense. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
scrawlx101 1 Posted April 5, 2012 oky thnks protoman really helpfull!any other tips? PS this is not really how i write just the way i write on forums etc would it be intresting if Niwdog was a Nobody created by Kingdom Hearts itself? Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Protoman 1,974 Posted April 5, 2012 Well, when you look into it, your character also has to conform to being canon to the games mechanics. To be honest, I don't really like nobody fan-characters. This is due to the fact that it is very rare for anyone to become a more 'human' nobody, and that they usually have some sort of organization-XIII arc along with them. Which is just giving the finger to the game's already complicated plot and stomping all over canon. They also become very over-powered, but hey, it isn't my story, just my honest opinion. It also depends on where it is set. For example, how many years away is it from the original story? Does it take place in an alternate universe? Or does it take place in some far-off galaxy within the kingdom hearts world? Parallel dimension? Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
scrawlx101 1 Posted April 5, 2012 oky so heres an idea along with the above: He is part of a group called:Excaliburn which is similar to Organization 13 except they aim to create peace but he gets kicked out for defiance by the leader,Derrick.My MC(main char) is tossed away into the Keyblade Graveyard and meets King Mickey who is scouting for the upcoming battle with Xehanort's Organisation.Plz Explain Xehanorts Orginisation thing..time travel makes this confusing,anyway Heartless and Nobodies appear and a keyblade from the graveyard floats to my MC who fights with Mickey but during the fight my MC has flashback of Aqua and Larxene.(He was trained by them).After this the Keyblade transforms into a new Keyblade.Need help with weapon design.This Good so far?I have decided that my player will be alligned with Nothingness,he will constantly change sides.Keyblade will be called:Memorytide. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
replika13 455 Posted April 5, 2012 oky thnks protoman really helpfull!any other tips? PS this is not really how i write just the way i write on forums etc would it be intresting if Niwdog was a Nobody created by Kingdom Hearts itself? Well if you find interesting way how he got created by kingdom hearts, then yes And also, before y start writing y should plan yr stories first too or they might fail Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
scrawlx101 1 Posted April 5, 2012 It's set in Parrel Universe similar to KH universe but with different things: Nobodies are almost non-existent Yen Sid turned Evil Sora,Riku turned evil,MX corrupted them. Kari is alive somewhere Xion was revived and Roxas fully fused with Sora. TAV sacrificed themselves to save Disney Castle. This is just the planning stage not the real deal.This is just practice.Im only 14 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
scrawlx101 1 Posted April 5, 2012 Donald and Goofy protecting Mickey now. Can anyone tell me the weaknesses of my plot etc.and stuff ive missed out? Any other characters who have a great significance in the KH series you think is too influnectial to miss out? Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
