Kirie 3,489 Posted March 4, 2012 10th grade As I sat there in English class, I stared at the girl next to me. She was my so called "best friend". I stared at her long, silky hair, and wished she was mine. But she didn't notice me like that, and I knew it. After class, she walked up to me and asked me for the notes she had missed the day before and handed them to her. She said "thanks" and gave me a kiss on the cheek. I wanted to tell her, I want her to know that I don't want to be just friends, I love her but I'm just too shy, and I don't know why. 11th grade The phone rang. On the other end, it was her. She was in tears, mumbling on and on about how her love had broke her heart. She asked me to come over because she didn't want to be alone, so I did. As I sat next to her on the sofa, I stared at her soft eyes, wishing she was mine. After 2 hours, one Drew Barrymore movie, and three bags of chips, she decided to go to sleep. She looked at me, said "thanks" and gave me a kiss on the cheek. I want to tell her, I want her to know that I don't want to be just friends, I love her but I'm just too shy, and I don't know why. Senior year The day before prom she walked to my locker. My date is sick" she said; he's not going to go well, I didn't have a date, and in 7th grade, we made a promise that if neither of us had dates, we would go together just as "best friends". So we did. Prom night, after everything was over, I was standing at her front door step. I stared at her as she smiled at me and stared at me with her crystal eyes. I want her to be mine, but she isn't think of me like that, and I know it. Then she said "I had the best time, thanks!" and gave me a kiss on the cheek. I want to tell her, I want her to know that I don't want to be just friends, I love her but I'm just too shy, and I don't know why. Graduation Day A day passed, then a week, then a month. Before I could blink, it was graduation day. I watched as her perfect body floated like an angel up on stage to get her diploma. I wanted her to be mine, but she didn't notice me like that, and I knew it. Before everyone went home, she came to me in her smock and hat, and cried as I hugged her. Then she lifted her head from my shoulder and said, "you're my best friend, thanks" and gave me a kiss on the cheek. I want to tell her, I want her to know that I don't want to be just friends, I love her but I'm just too shy, and I don't know why. A Few Years Later Now I sit in the pews of the church. That girl is getting married now. I watched her say "I do" and drive off to her new life, married to another man. I wanted her to be mine, but she didn't see me like that, and I knew it. But before she drove away, she came to me and said "you came!". She said "thanks" and kissed me on the cheek. I want to tell her, I want her to know that I don't want to be just friends, I love her but I'm just too shy, and I don't know why. Funeral Years passed, I looked down at the coffin of a girl who used to be my "best friend". At the service, they read a diary entry she had wrote in her high school years. This is what it read: I stare at him wishing he was mine, but he doesn't notice me like that, and I know it. I want to tell him, I want him to know that I don't want to be just friends, I love him but I'm just too shy, and I don't know why. I wish he would tell me he loved me! "I wish I did too..." I thought to my self, and I cried. He died a few months later........ -FIN </3 (kinda change the story at the end) the original story is the link below for more information ask me where i got these "stories" picture is not by me(you can tell from the link on the picture) http://www.boardofwisdom.com/default.asp?topic=1005&listname=Love 9 Not-with-a-whimper, Col.Random, allstarkingdomfan13 and 6 others reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
SoraKH 793 Posted March 4, 2012 ....Ami this is beautiful and heartmelting.... I just love it... I can feel my eyes hurting and wanting to cry... This is beautiful and so damn real... I bow to you... One of the saddest love stories i ever read </3 5/5 Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kirie 3,489 Posted March 4, 2012 ....Ami this is beautiful and heartmelting.... I just love it... I can feel my eyes hurting and wanting to cry... This is beautiful and so damn real... I bow to you... One of the saddest love stories i ever read </3 5/5 A very very sad love story indeed.... Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
SoraKH 793 Posted March 4, 2012 A very very sad love story indeed.... Wait.... Is it true?!?!!? Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Not-with-a-whimper 144 Posted March 4, 2012 Oh noes!!!!! I nearly cried. 1 Kirie reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
allstarkingdomfan13 2 Posted March 4, 2012 that is so cute 1 Kirie reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Col.Random 3,683 Posted March 4, 2012 even Saix would start crying after this T_T i've learnt something from this, if you love a girl, being shy is the greatest mistake of your life. Maybe.....i should ask her out..... 1 Kirie reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Hazimie 1,595 Posted March 4, 2012 Dammit,why i'm not cry on this Lovely Story.....and now i'm really crying.... http://kh13.com/forum/public/style_emoticons/default/smiley-cry.png 1 Kirie reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kirie 3,489 Posted March 4, 2012 Wait.... Is it true?!?!!? Dimi its just a story lol even Saix would start crying after this T_T i've learnt something from this, if you love a girl, being shy is the greatest mistake of your life. Maybe.....i should ask her out..... Thats the spirit Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kinode 3,056 Posted March 4, 2012 Chances of things like this happening are so incredibly low... ._. Still I get the message of the story. But you know it's not so easy so I feel the characters' pain. This is pretty freaking sad though, if it had the characters even more detailed and became a full fledged story I'd cry, no doubt. 1 Kirie reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Namine` 28 Posted March 4, 2012 :'( D': this is so sad, but its soooooooo wonderful! its like , Hunger Games wonderful. 1 Kirie reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
KingdomKatherine 272 Posted March 4, 2012 That was one of the best love stories I've ever heard... 1 Kirie reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
animemylove 439 Posted March 4, 2012 I'm assuming he committed suicide for being an idiot 1 Kirie reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Dream 4 Posted March 4, 2012 OK, IM SORRY. IM SORRY FOR THAT NIGHT. I like your story too btw. D: 1 Kirie reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kirie 3,489 Posted March 4, 2012 That was one of the best love stories I've ever heard... you mean "one of the best sad love stories you've ever heard" Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Ivan 969 Posted March 4, 2012 You could at least credit the original writer, or at least where you found it, because it's all over the internet. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kirie 3,489 Posted March 4, 2012 You could at least credit the original writer, or at least where you found it, because it's all over the internet. i should've done that in the first place Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Ivan 969 Posted March 4, 2012 i should've done that in the first place If you're going to post something in the writing forum and you didn't write it, credit the original writer. If you don't know who the original writer is, at least put where you found it. Otherwise people will assume you wrote it, and we don't approve of plagiarism on this site. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kirie 3,489 Posted March 4, 2012 If you're going to post something in the writing forum and you didn't write it, credit the original writer. If you don't know who the original writer is, at least put where you found it. Otherwise people will assume you wrote it, and we don't approve of plagiarism on this site. fixed it ._. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
4Everbee 1,365 Posted March 4, 2012 Cute story. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
TheHeartsDepths 13 Posted March 5, 2012 This is one of those rare story that make you really feel for the character ~A Sad yet Beautiful story~ Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
huntypujj 0 Posted June 24, 2013 this is very sad story and i wish that you will reecover soon from this phase and starts happy life again really sad love quotes Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
