replika13 455 Posted February 20, 2012 TUTORIAL First of all, this story is fanfictional. It has nothing to do with acctual Kingdom hearts or any of its characters. Second, To understand some things better, you should read storys first part, if you havent readed it yet. Dont worry, its not that long, just 24 chapters. Heres a link http://kh13.com/foru...21-kh-ancients/ CHARACTERS (Like i said all characters are made up in my own head. Non of them are original,FF or disney from original series) Kuma. An 13 year old keyblade wielder, who holds light of his twin brother Umbra, making him pure light hearted boy with strong sense of justice. He wields fast and light keyblade called Free-Wind. Umbra. 13 year old pure dark hearted boy and twin brother of Kuma as well carrier of Kumas darkness. He is strong and determined boy, who dos whatever he wants to and also is ready to do anything to get it. He wields sharp and dangerous keyblade Venom-Jaw. Gake. 15 year old boy and friend of Kuma. Because of his mistakes at past story, his darkness is very close to take over his heart. Gake is strong and good-willed. His keyblade is strong and heavy RageFader. Shabon. Friend of Kuma and Gake, who lost herself to Realm of Spiritians during ending side of last story. Crace. Kumas and Umbras evil mother, who wants always more and more power no matter what it takes. She losted Kuma for her past friend, who saved boy from her evil plans, when both Umbra and Kuma were babies. Umbra however was fated to live with her. Spiritian master. New character. You find out about him soon enough Synthia. Keyblade master, who has great knowledge about magics and mysteries. ENEMIES DayFaders, dark species existing in Realms of light and darkness. They might look harmless, but their true goal is to submerge worlds to absolute darkness. Troumas, an mysterious monsters, living inside Realm of Spiritians. Their darkness may affect on human mind... Ok, there y go. Now you know whos main characters. If you are here before first chapter, please wait a bit ok? NOTE: characters doesnt age! 1 Kirie reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
replika13 455 Posted February 20, 2012 CHAPTER ONE REALM WHERE SPIRITS BORN Master Magma, keyblade master of 13 different apprentice tried to find his youngest apprentice, Kuma. He wasnt at training or breakfast, which was odd. More odd was that Kuma was always at dinner and now he was not. Magma wouldnt allow boy to make exceptions. He was more worried about Gake. He has been acting strangely since he and Kuma returned from Shattered World after defeating Zenwae and DayFaders. Its been many many months now, but Gake still trained far away from others and was silent. He didnt pay attention for Kuma or his little brother Choku. Both boys were now gone, even though Magma told them to not travel anywhere from castle, except to town nearby. He opened Kumas room and looked how clean it was. Kuma usually never cleaned up his room, but now there was not even single book at floor. Magma then easily noticed an piece of paper at desk. He quickly knew that there was purpose on cleaning up entire room and leaving just one paper lying around. Magma quickly picked it and readed the message from it. "Kuma..." He whispered and quickly runned out of room. "Umbra! Where in the Darkside you are?" Crace shouted. Boy wasnt at Black Manor nor its gardens. He wasnt anywhere. Umbra has been silent after Crace told him about how dissapointed she was on him after losing both xioblivians and Merians legendary keyblade. Umbras room was empty, except it was cleaned up. No matter how many time she told the boy to clean it up, Umbra wouldnt bother to do such a thing. But why change ways now? She then noticed an letter at boys bed and took it. She readed it and quickly understood what was going to happen any minute now. "That boy!" She muttered and opened an dark corridor. At Pieceful Altars, there was these (chinese like) temples. They belonged to great keyblade master and magician, Synthia. Synthia was old and wise woman with only one 6 years old and skillful apprentice, Ken. They both lived at temples, even though Ken often travelled to his home world to meet his parents and friends. Umbra, Kuma and Gake were at her work room, standing other side of table, while Synthia drinked cup of tea. "Dont you think you are asking too much from me?" Synthia asked and only Gake nodded, but twins, Kuma and Umbra looked determined. "We know what to do and we know this is only way to rescue Shabon!" Kuma said. "Hmph! Speak of yourself! I have more important things to do there!" Umbra said and smiled evily. "Oh yeah? Like what?" Kuma asked. "Non of your business... brother!" Umbra answered. Synthia sighed. "None of you know what to do! You only know what do you seek for..." She said and boys were quiet while Synthia walked toward window. "Realm of Spiritians... its not an playground! Its nothing like realm of light! Travelling through its worlds isnt that easy as you think!" "What do you mean?" "There is nine worlds in Realm of Spiritians. Each one is inhabited two kinds of creatures. Human like creatures named Spiritians... and dark species called Troumas. Neither of them arent that helpful... Troumas are distortions that are confuing tides of spirits and thoughs. They are fears and paranoias... in worse form! Keyblade may not be enough to defeat them. You are just mere childs! You dont have enough wisdom or strong will to resist that pain they cause..." Synthia said and turned back to them. Boys were qúiet, but they still looked determined. Synthia sighed. "Your sure about this?" She asked. "I dont care what it takes to bring Shabon back home!" Kuma said. Umbra looked at other direction as he think that his brother was acting lame again. "Very well then... i guess i cant stop you..." Synthia said and made an misty spell to her table. Mist started whirling, revealing nine ball shaped stars. It was like a map. "At Realm of Spiritians you will arrive to world, that is very close to you both. Then, you both will travel to seven worlds between first and last one. Each one of them contains an keyhole, which will appear to you as you have better able to wield spiritians powers and understand Troumas pain. Once every keyhole is unlocked, last world will appear to you, but in there, you will haf to face man called Spirit master. He is person, connected to Troumas. You cant return if you havent found last and ninth keyhole, which is under his protection." Synthia said. "How can we know if other one of us already unlocked that keyhole?" Umbra asked. "You two arent spiritians, so you are connected. If one unlocks keyhole at another world, other one will know about it. Now move to next room. I will send you to Realm of Spiritians." Synthia pointed the door and both boys walked inside, after Kuma waved goodbyes to Gake and Ken. After door closed, Synthia turned to Gake. "Are you sure you dont wanna follow them?" She asked. "Yes... Its... my darkness. I know it would be bad idea to travel with them. Zenwae may take control over me and attack Kuma..." "I understand. And besides, you have someone to chase right?" "Of course. Diana haf to return my DayFader for me. I need Niles half of my heart back..." Gake said and walked away from door. Ken looked to Synthia, who nodded to him and boy runned after Gake. "GAKE!!!" He shouted.¨Gake turned around. "Let me help you!" Ken said. "What?" "You heard me! I wanna help you go through Zenwaes darkness. Together we can defeat him and get rid of him for good!" Ken said and Gake smiled. "I can always use some help... from friend... Kuma and Umbra stood still. Synthia opened an Spirit window, except this window was entirely green. "All you need to do is fall. Dont fear or hesitate. You need to be calm or Troumas darkness will affect on you." She said. "Piece of cake!" Kuma smiled and walked on window and falled down from sight. "I dont fear anything. Everyone should know that!" Umbra said and followed his brother. Synthia closed the window just in time when Magma stormed into room and Crace appeared from dark corridor. "Wheres Kuma?" "Wheres Umbra?" "Your too late my friends..." Synthia said and looked sorry. "They already left..." PS: Kuma is from japanese word kumo and means cloud. Umbra is latin and means shadow. Troumas are variation from word, Trauma. 1 Kirie reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Hunter Hawk 392 Posted February 20, 2012 Awsome intro bro!!! I was in the edge of my seat while reading this!!! I can't bloody wait for the next chapter!!! I never realized how you got ideas for Kuma and Umbra ( I love their names! ). Well I did find out in your previuos story that Kuma means cloud, but didn't know in which language. Keep writing bro! Plus I like the name of the other creatures. 1 Kirie reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
coolwings 1,546 Posted February 21, 2012 .....!!!!!!! Stop writing, I can't keep up! Also.... Awesome new start to your new story. I will try to read the other one when I have time 1 SoraKH reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
replika13 455 Posted February 21, 2012 Note: Each chapter will be focusing one world. Each one of worlds between first and last, wont appear chronologically. I just randomly choose them. But worlds story will be chronological. CHAPTER TWO DAY-DAWN TOWN OR SOMETHING DIFFERENT "What a?" Kuma said. When he was falling everything just flashed. He falled to his back as he was suddenly standing, which was too weird. He stood up and looked around. "But this is... Day-Dawn town?" He said as he regocnized one of his, Gakes and Shabons favorite worlds. They always eated ice cream there or they played with local kids. But why was it here at Realm of Spiritians? Synthia said that world very close to him and Umbra would be first one. Then he noticed something else too. "Wow! My outfit!" He looked his reflection from window, sawing that his shirt, jacket and pants have been changed. His shoes was same old. There was green mask painting going across his face. This must be his spiritian form. According to book about spiritians, spiritians had these painted masks. "Umbra do you see this?" He asked, but then realised Umbra wasnt there. "Who are you?" "Whoa!" Kuma quickly jumped farther and then saw that voice came out from boy, in age of 14 possibly. "Stupid..." Boy sighed. "I am not! Im Kuma! Whats your name? I dont think i have seen you before here." Kuma smiled. "Whys that? Everyone in this town knows me... My name is Seiji." Boy said, but didnt even offer his hand. Boy only looked away from him. "Seiji? sounds cool!" "Hmph!" "Umm... is there other peoples around here?" Kuma asked. "Of course there is... they are everyone at back-streets." "Back-streets? But... i havent ever heard of that place." Kuma said and was confused. "If you come from Realm of light, then of course you havent... Back-streets is spiritual distortion in this town. It locates under metro-tunnels. Follow me..." Suddenly creatures started to appear around them. They were creepy looking and had an emblem, shape of star with spiky heart shaped hole in middle. "Troumas!" Seiji shouted. "So these are troumas? I was waiting a bit more..." Kuma said and summoned his keyblade. "They are tough enough! You´ll see." Seiji said and casted weird magic on monsters. Kuma hitted one of troumas and... an scream echoed at his head and his head started to hurt. He felt colder than before hitting it. "What a-?" Then monster attacked him. It punched him to stomach and throwed him against wall. "I told you!" Seiji said and blocked one of attacks and punched trouma away from him. "How can i fight them?" "You need to focus. You haf to keep your mind clear when you hit them. If you dont, your heart may shatter after couple of those reactions! That happened to one of my friends couple of months ago!" Seiji said and casted spirit dust again. Kuma stood up and tried to clear his mind and hitted one of creatures. Scream came again to his head, but it was much more silent one. "Great! I think i know it now!" Kuma shouted and tried to keep excitment from his mind. He managed to fight monsters and defeat them along with Seiji, but now he had slight headache. "Lets go then! We cant let them wait for us!" Seiji said and runned to central square. Kuma runned there too. All shops around square were different named and sized than they were in back home. "Here we are! Back-streets!" Seiji said when they walked through metro tunnels to corridor, that didnt exist in real Day-Dawn town. It was huge place. There was ten fountains surrounding center area. at center there was arena, surrounded by water. Everything looked so festive and cool for Kuma. "Awesome!" He said. Seiji waved his hand to two other person. "Hi CJ!" Older boy, probably 18 years old, said to Seiji. "I told you to not use that ridicilous name, Rafell." Seiji said angrily to man. "He just joked Seiji!" Girl said. Kuma looked to weird looking chibi-dolls in her hands. Other one was boy and other one was girl. They had similiar hair and outfits. "Nice." He said. "You like them? Wanna see something cool?" Girl asked and Kuma nodded. Girl putted both dolls down and they started to dance and sing. "Super awesome!" Kuma said and looked really amused about dolls. When he was about to take girl-doll to his hands, boy-doll jumped and punched him to cheek. "Owww!" Why it did that for?" Kuma asked. "They are twins you see? They dont wanna be separated and this little guy doesnt wanna anyone than me to touch them." Girl said. "Im Kira by the way. Nice to meet you." Kira introduced and shaked Kumas hand. "Im Kuma." Kuma said. Seiji took grip from his wrist and dragged him farther. "Hey! What are you doing?" Kuma asked. "Another round starts. We must stay farther, while Kira and her dolls take care of this." Seiji explained. Kira jumped to arena and dolls followed her. Her opponent was man in black jacket. An helmet surrounded his face and hair from being seemed. "I wonder who that is... there has been strange things going around lately..." Seiji said quietly. Kira dashed toward her opponent, but man quickly dodged and summoned troumas to arena. "What? He can summon them?" Seiji shouted. "So he is bad guy?" Kuma asked. "But its forbidden to let troumas to compete! Its against every rule!" Seiji shouted and tried to jump to arena, but man shooted an fireball to him. Kuma then runned to arena and hitted one trouma, that was about to kill Kira. Man looked amused, even though his face didnt show it. "What are you doing? Your braking rules!" Kuma shouted. Man smiled and jumped away from arena. When he did, Umbra suddenly appeared to arena. He was on his old outfit. "Umbra?" "Shut up and fight!" Umbra shouted. When Kuma tried to hit him, Umbra dissappeared. It was a trick! Man summoned an illussion. Kuma runned after the man with Seiji following far behind. Man finally stopped to Great balcony and looked to sunset. Kuma saw him and runned to him. "Who are you?" "Can you handle the truth?" Man asked. "What?" "Or can you see true nature lying between good and evil? Is there any point at light anyways?" Man turned around. "What do you mean?" Kuma asked. Man throwed helmet away, revealing dark,red hair and yellow eyes behind it. Man smiled evily. "I dont tell you who i am, but if you want... you can call me Spirit master..." "What?" "Spirit master!" Man and Umbra said. Kuma looked again and again Umbra dissappeared. "You arent from here? Hmm... No matter... Soon you will lose your mind. Each trouma you defeat, will take you closer to oblivion of your senses. Your heart will shatter and darkness will overtake your body..." Spirit master said. "Hey! I know you!" Seiji shouted and grabbed from Spirit masters jacket. "You promised me i would win! Why are you attacking my friend?" Seiji shouted. "Seiji!" Kuma shouted, but then suddenly his headache growed stronger and stronger. Then it was so horrible he fainted against street. "Seiji..." Picture of Kumas and Umbras outfits. http://replicator13.deviantart.com/#/d4q9hew 1 Kirie reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kirie 3,489 Posted February 21, 2012 Kuma and Umbra reminds me of Ventus and Vanitas 2 replika13 and The Transcendent Key reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Hunter Hawk 392 Posted February 22, 2012 Keep writing! I bloody wanna know who that Spirit Master is! 1 replika13 reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
replika13 455 Posted February 22, 2012 CHAPTER THREE SPIRIT FRAGMENTS Umbra suddenly standed at alley near of Giant Balcony, in Day-Dawn town. So this was familiar world Synthia was talking about... It was good world for practicing since all kids in town loved dueling. Umbra loved to strike them down and cause sadness and broken toy swords around. Even thinking them, makes him grin. "Hmmm..." He looked his outfit. It was changed. He had red masks going across his eyes and an spider shaped bag on his back. He looked around for Kuma, but didnt see him anywhere. "AAAAH!" Someone screamed. Umbra quickly summoned his keyblade and runned to under alleys, which leaded from Great Balcony to Center Square. He saw an girl being surrounded by monsters. These must be troumas... "Run!" Umbra shouted and jumped between girl and monsters. Girl nodded and runned toward Central Square. Umbra smiled to his opponents and then hitted one of them. "Ah!" Suddenly small scream came to his head for a second, causing headache. What in the world was this... Umbra decided that it was nothing to worry about and keeped hitting those monsters and by each strike his headache growed stronger until he felt that his brains were about to explode from his head. Umbra stabbed last monster, but then he lost control of his body and felled down to street. Was this some sorta curse? What was happening to him. "There you are!" An tall man with really tall hat said, when he walked toward Umbra. He took boy tois arms and carried him across Central Square. Umbra then felt that he can move his body again, so he pushed man to face and jumped to ground. "Ouch! Why did you do that for?" Man asked. "You tried to abduct me!" Umbra said. "No i wasnt! I was going to take you to safer place. Those monsters are no good for rookies like you!" Man said. "Rookie? Me?" "You attacked them without knowing how to resist their powers..." "Oh... you mean that headache came from those creatures?" Umbra asked and man nodded. "Troumas are quite dangerous creatures. You haf to close your mind and focus on attack when hitting them." "Okay. Have you seen an red haired weirdo that looks like me around here? I have couple of things for him to say..." Umbra said. "I afraid that i havent met anyone like you with red hair around here. My name is Clokon by the way." Man said and shaked Umbras hand. "Umbra." Umbra said coldly. "Lolia! I found him!" Clokon shouted to girl, that Umbra saved back there. She quickly runned in front of Umbra and bowed. "What a-?" "Thank you for saving me. Im very greatful mr..." "Umbra." Umbra answered and looked to opposite direction to hide his embarrasment. "My name is Lolia..." "I know! He just called you with that name didnt he?" Umbra said and walked pass the girl toward huge chamber. There was arena, surrounded by fountains. "What is this place..." He wondered. "This is Back-streets of Day-Dawn town. This place along its duelling tournaments exist only in this realm." Lolia explained. "Duelling eh? How amusing... you guys know how to fight?" Umbra laughed and annoyed both Clokon and Lolia. "Of course we can!" Lolia said. "But there was little problems after last game, so we dont held tournaments today." Clokon explained. "Problems?" Umbra repeated. "There was man with helmet against Kira and he summoned troumas to fight, which was forbidden. This boy then runned after that guy with Seiji." Lolia said. "An boy?" Umbra said and wondered if Kuma was here. "I need to ask you something. Have you ever heard of spirit fragments?" Umbra asked. "Why yes. They say that only one piece of it exists in each world of our realm. We also have one, but its kinda hard to reach." Clokon said. "Whys that?" "Asking from foolisness..." Someone said. Umbra turned around and saw Kuma, walking to him with this man in helmet. "What?" "Fragments doesnt belong to likes of you!" Man and Kuma said at same time and Kuma slowly vanished away. Umbra looked confused, but he then glared to man. "What was that?" He asked. "Nothing to be concerned about..." Man said. "REAL question is: Can you handle those pieces and become one and only one whole with your mind and heart?" "Huh?" Man then summoned Troumas. "Proove me. Show me. Or are you weakling?" Umbra glared at him, but summoned his keyblade without hesitating. He cleared his mind and brought only one thing to his head: Hurting those creatures. He immediatly managed to hit one monster without screamings or headaches, but he had to focus, which was harder for him. He quickly casted magic above monsters, making them dissappear. He then dashed toward man, who turned transparent, making Umbra fall through him. "Hmph. Childish toy...that keyblade of yours..." Man said and putted hands on his helmet. "Who do you think you are?" Umbra asked and then man tooked off his helmet and throwed it away. "My true name... is none of importance... if you want that is, you may call me... Spirit master." Man smiled to him, revealing his dark red hair and yellow eyes. Man was someone from darkness! Man started slowly walking toward him and Umbra crawled back until they were almost in sewers. Umbra then stood up and felt how he was against wall. "What an interesting puppet you are... darkness veiling through your heart and hurting and chaos tangling up inside your filthy little mind. Tell me... are you sure they havent forgotten you?" "Who?" Umbra asked angrily and then he saw his father, Richy and mother, standing side by side with Spirit master. "Your true selfs." They all said. Umbra then felt weird... headache started growing and growing until it was so worse that he fainted against floor. "Weakling..." Spirit master smiled and throwed his helmet to water as he wont need it anymore. 1 coolwings reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
replika13 455 Posted February 22, 2012 Kuma and Umbra reminds me of Ventus and VanitasGood point there.They are kinda same as Ven and Vanitas, but Umbra is twin brother of Kuma who borned with balanced heart. His mother later putted Kumas darkness to Umbra and Umbras light to Kuma, changing their hearts. All though Umbra is suppose to be pure dark hearted, he can feel remorse and friendshipness like he did at last story. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
replika13 455 Posted February 22, 2012 CHAPTER FOUR PLAYING WITH SPIRIT MASTER Kuma opened his eyes and saw arena in front of him. What was going on? He then remembered that he fainted, but how did he get here? "Rested well?" Spirit master asked and Kuma turned his face on him. "You? What are you doing?" Boy shouted. Spirit master holded something in his arms. It was Seijis wrist band. "Huh? What did you do to Seiji?" "Nothing. He just losed thats all..." Spirit master said. "He was weakling like that brother of yours..." "What! You met Umbra?" Kuma asked. Man didnt answer. He just turned around and looked to houses of Back-street. "In place where is too many rights and lefts... an keyhole rests. After challenging whos strongest of all... resisting or speed?" He said. "What do you mean." Kuma asked. "You´ll see... if you look to right corner." Man said and opened dark corridor. He walked in, leaving confused Kuma behind. "Kuma!" Kira shouted and runned toward him. "Whats wrong?" Kuma asked. Girl looked shocked and tired. "Seiji! He is at arena of labyrinth! Lolia and Clokon are there too. That man captured them and taked them to there!" Girl said. "What! Lead the way!" Kuma shouted. "Gaaah!" Seiji flied against wall of arena. He was facing powerful trouma, Semitaurus. It was huge and extremely strong for Seijis powers. "Go Seiji! You can do it!" Lolia shouted. She and Cloken were locked to gage. If Seiji loses, they all will die and troumas will take their hearts. "I´ll try!" Seiji shouted and another huge strike throwed him to other side of arena. "" Where is too many rights and lefts... an keyhole rests..."" Kuma remembered Spirit masters wirds. Labyrints walls were round like. There was no real corners around... unless... Kuma started to look for sharp corner, that should be at right... not left. Spirit master simply tried to trick him. He gave him a clue. Kuma followed only right tunnels, with Kira and her dolls following him. Then he saw an sharp corner. He looked behind it, but there was just an hole, where water felled. "Is this a well?" Kira wondered. "I´ll check! Wait here!" Kuma said and girl nodded. Kuma jumped down to hole. For a second he didnt see anything else than darkness around him, but then he saw an light below him, revealing room there. Seiji was fighting against powerful monster. He was too tired to continue. Kuma summoned his keyblade and blocked monsters finishing attack, when he was at arena. Seiji looked suprised. "Missed me?" Kuma asked. Seiji smiled a bit and nodded. He jumped from arena and went helping his friends. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_xZEx6qcir0&feature=related Kuma dashed toward Semitaurus, who tried to hit him by its horns. Kuma dodged by jumping to its back and hitted monster by his keyblade to its head. Monster roared and throwed boy from its back. It tried to run for Kuma and crush him against wall, but Kuma dodged again and casted Fira to monsters head. Monster started gathering energy to its horns and then it started to shoot rays from them. Kuma jumped back and then used spped-mode in his shoes to run behind monster. He then used strong hit to make Semitaurus fell to floor. Monster quickly jumped up and started to roar. It tried to hit Kuma by its strong hands. Kuma still managed to dodge them easily. He then throwed keyblade, stabbing monster. Giant trouma vanished away. "Good one Kuma!" Seiji said. Both Lolia and Cloken were safe. "Lets go back to Back-sreets." Kuma said and pointed to door, that just appeared to wall. "Kuma! You really saved the day!" Lolia horrayed. "It was nothing." Kuma smiled. "Friends gotta help each others right?" "So your the one Umbra was talking about..." Cloken said. "What?" "He told me he was looking for red-haired weirdo. I bet thats you." Cloken said. Yup, thats Umbra all right... Kuma thinked. Suddenly an crystal-like sound came from roof. Kuma looked up with others and glowing keyhole appeared above arena. Kuma then summoned his keyblade and pointed to roof. Keyblade shooted an light toward keyhole and sealed it away. First one was now sealed. Eight more to go and Shabon would be free. "I gotta go now guys." Kuma said. "Already?" Lolia asked. "I come back soon." Kuma smiled and started vanishing into green light. 1 Kirie reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kirie 3,489 Posted February 23, 2012 Nice story 2 replika13 and The Transcendent Key reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
replika13 455 Posted February 23, 2012 Nice story thank you -^^- 1 Kirie reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
replika13 455 Posted February 23, 2012 CHAPTER FIVE HUMANISTIC WORLD Umbra woked up. He saw an woods surrounding him. Woods with blue light covering tops of trees. It was so magical. Suddenly something runned past him really fast. "What a-?" He felled to his back. He was seeing an dog-like creature who runned with two feets. Suddenly great shadow covered ground below him. He summoned his keyblade. "Whos there?" He didnt see a thing. Suddenly he was throwed to air by something. His opponent was invisible. He felled against tree, but he quickly stood up and jumped away just before tree was crushed by invisible thing. Umbra could use his spirit formation, but he knew that spirits cant be used in Realm of Spiritians. He heard his enemy coming closer and he quickly runned to other direction from voice, but then that something captured him to its hand. Then monster turned to other direction and took Umbra with it. "Let go you bast...!" Umbra was shouted but then an wooden branch hitted his head. "Oww! What a he...! Oww!" Another branch hitted him. Monster jumped through forest, so it was obvious how branches accidently hitted him. Monster dropped Umbra to hole, that leaded to room with iron walls. Mechanic door suddenly opened and two men came to room. "Hey! Your not Folw!" Other man said. "Do i look like one you wise guy?" Umbra asked. Men then grabbed his arms and dragged him through corridors until they were in big room. There was lots of computers and machines. In middle of room, there was scientist, sitting on chair and was surrounded by U-shaped computer table. "So, my monster captured you?" Man asked. Umbra didnt answer but glared to man. "What was that all about? Your abomination almost crushed me!" Boy shouted. "He just mistaked you to someone else. My name is professor Zephyr by the way." Man said and stood up. "Umbra. Can i go now? I have a lot more important things to do than stick around with weird nerdish guy." Umbra said. "Hmmm... i could use your help a bit... Take this machine to house at woods. There you see animal named Tuket. Use this machine to eliminate him." "And why would i wanna do that?" "If you wanna know something useful. I know everything from this world." Zephyr said and throwed machine to Umbra. Umbra still glared at man, but did what he said and walked out from that weird place. It tooked only one hour for Umbra to find house at mountains, near the sea. There Umbra saw cat like animal. It had golden spiky hair, t-shirt and green shorts. It carried two crystals in its hands. Umbra pointed machine to it, but when he was about to shoot, something jumped against machine and kicked it away from Umbras hands. "Did you know its act of coward to shoot from behind without warning." wolf-like small animal said and glared at Umbra. "Hmph! Who are you?" Umbra shouted and summoned his keyblade. "I am Folw. To you, im winner!" Folw said and attacked to Umbra. Umbra managed to block another air kick, but Folw was too fast for him. It quickly could run around him three times and suddenly dash for attack. Umbra then had brilliant idea to use darkness a bit. He teleported and when Folw stopped, Umbra attacked from above him, knocking animal down. He then stood up and saw weird looking ball of shadows, coming closer. Zephyr also appeared and he was carrying those crystals that cat had moment ago. "Here Wahdos!" Zephyr shouted and throwed crystals to Wahdos. Suddenly bubble growed bigger and turned its shape to an monster. "Youve been very helpful by distracting Folw, Umbra. I think i owe you one. But i afraid Wahdos doesnt allow it." Zephyr laughed and monster roared. "What is that thing?" Umbra asked. "Wahdos is monster of shadows! An brilliant servant of mine. When i feed these enrgy crystals to it, it grows bigger! After all nine energy crystals are inside him! This world is mine to rule!" "Guess again!" Umbra said and pointed him by his keyblade. Zephyr just laughed and snapped his fingers. Wahdos then punched Umbra and throwed him down from mountain. Umbra felled and suddenly headache appeared again. "Not...ugghh!...now!" He said before fainting again. 1 Kirie reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
replika13 455 Posted February 23, 2012 CHAPTER SIX ENERGY CRYSTALS Kuma walked through city. It was night time and everything was shiny. Suddenly something runned against his knee and felled to its back. Kuma looked down and saw an animal, wearing an dress. "Sorry. I didnt notice you." Kuma said and helped her up. This animal... girl, looked shocked. "What is it?" Kuma asked. "Erin! What are you doing? He is coming!" An wolf-like small creature shouted and runned to her. Behind him Kuma saw weird shadowy ball following him up. "Oh no! I dropped it!" Erin screamed, when trying to find something. "Hahahaa! Count them! I got four energy crystals thanks to you!" An weird looking scientist man shouted, when his minions brought an shiny gem to him. Man then throwed crystals to ball and ball started to change its shape. It turned to huge monster. "What a-?" Kuma shouted and summoned his keyblade. But monster turned back to ball and flied away. Scientists also runned away, leaving Kuma and two animals standing to square. "What was that all about?" Kuma asked. "Zephyrs new toy! It steals energy crystals and grows bigger. There is still five left to find!" Wolf-like creature said. Suddenly cat-like creature, who wore t-shirt and shorts appeared with another shiny crystal. "Rame gave it to me! Do you have other one?" Cat asked, but then he saw wolfs face and knew what happened. "Maybe i can help you? Im Kuma." Kuma said. "It would be pleasure! Im Folw. This is Erin and this ones here is Tuket." Folw introduced. Tuket then picked an small device from his pocket. "According to tracking device that i planted to energy crystal, Wahdos is moving toward sea. We need flying machine to reach it. I bet its at Zephyrs newest HQ!" Tuket said and pointed them to go toward mountains. "Oh no!" Fowl shouted. His flying machine was attacked by troumas. Kuma summoned his keyblade and prepared to battle. Fowl didnt have weapon, but he was fast. He runned to creatures and made an air kicks to them. Kuma fighted like he always did, but those air kicks looked cool. After few minutes, all troumas were gone and Tuket prepared his flying machine. Kuma remembered when he saw first flying machines being created at Realm of Light. He and Erin jumped into back seats, while Fowl jumped to wings and sat down. Soon machine flied at air, through sky and above beautyful morning sun. "Where are we heading?" Kuma asked. "To there!" Tuket said and pointed an huge ship, that was floating on sea. It looked hollow and scary. It was full of weapons and its colors were weird too. Suddenly it started to shoot missiles. "Oh no!" Erin shouted. "Folw, energy crystal!" Tuket said and throwed crystal to Folw. Folw started to glow as energy surrounded him. He jumped from machine and dashed through each missiles, making them explode, before hitting flying machine. "Good one!" Kuma shouted. Tuket controlled flying machine toward ship and landed successfully on it. Kuma and others jumped to ships floor and there they saw another animal. "Rame! Here already?" Tuket asked and Rame turned his face on them. He had two energy crystals. "Im fast enough see? I found these things from here. Zephyr hasnt given them to Wahdos yet." Rame said and throwed crystals to Tuket. But suddenly both crystals were captured by shadowy ball again. "Darn it!" Rame shouted, when Wahdos evolved again. It was bigger than ever. Monster roared and turned back to shadowy ball and flied away. "We gotta go after him!" Erin shouted. Folw then landed to ship with another crystal. "It seems like Zephyr is having one more crystal. That makes clearly seven then..." He said and glared at Rame who turned away. "Lets go then!" Kuma shouted and he and Folw runned toward Wahdos direction. Others leaved behind as they had to sabotage the ship. "There you are!" Kuma shouted when he and Folw finally reached Wahdos. Zephyr was there too. Wahdos looked different as it had new crystal already in it. "You cant stop it now! Even if he doesnt have all nine crystals, he is strong enough to kick you into outer limits of realm!" Zephyr laughed. Wahdos then suddenly punched Folw, making him to drop eighth crystal. "No!" Kuma shouted when monster growed larger. "Lets finish him! He isnt unbeatable!" Folw shouted. "Yeah!" Kuma agreed and charged toward monster. He turned his speed-mode on and runned to left side of it, while Folw runned to right side. Monster couldnt choose which one it could attack. Kuma then throwed Folw to its back and runned around it making all of its feets to trip until monster was on its stomach. Folw made air kicks to monsters eyes. "Now Kuma!" Folw shouted. Kuma shooted strong beam of light to monster and it started to shine. Folw then jumped and dashed inside monster. He then flied inside him, collecting all eight crystals and then using their powers to produce blast. Wahdos exploded. Folw then landed back to ground. "Seems like your plot turned out to be too easy to beat Zephyr!" Folw laughed. "Grrrr! This isnt over yet!" Zephyr shouted. Folw runned after him, but then ship started to explode. Kuma felled to ground and felt headaches growing and growing. "Aaaagh! Not again..." He fainted. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
replika13 455 Posted March 2, 2012 CHAPTER SEVEN CREATURE FROM ANNIHILATION Umbra felt dizzy. He shook his head and stood up. He was now standing on bridge like way. He looked around him and saw nothing, but buildings on fire. Sea of flames covered streets below Umbra, like they would be lava. Sky was red and full of dark clouds. Umbra saw giant monster, Whados being in middle of giant square. It chrged fire to everywhere. "That monster is starting to get into my nerves..." Umbra heard someone saying. He looked to below bridge and saw Folw, standing there. He jumped down and walked to him. "You again?" Folw said. "What has happened?" Umbra asked. "That creature managed to stole back all nine energy crystals! Now it seems to be unstopable and it will destroy the world, if no one will stop him." Folw said. "Destroy this world?" Darkness inside Umbra started to grow as his blood started to boil. His promise to Khanysa would be ruined. He would loose one of spirit fragments and possibly keyhole of this world too. An green aura surrounded his body and Umbra started to float above ground. "What a-? What is this?" Umbra asked. "I see... you arent from this world after all. That means you can use spirit drives. I think you can boost toward Wahdos gather energy crystals from him and bring them to me. If you do that, i may have able to use their energy for defeating it."Fowl said. Umbra nodded and chrged toward Wahdos like he would have been gliding. He felt energy and know how to move it. He gathered all energy to his feet, creating even more boost to make gliding even more fast. Wahdos shooted countless of fire balls, which Umbra dodged by spinning around. He stopped, summoned his keyblade and boosted through three fireballs, cutting them from half. "Umbra! Focus! You need to keep your mind clear so you can keep spirit drive on. It vanishes, you are in really warm trouble!" Folw shouted. "Got it!" Umbra said and tried to focus. Wahdos started to shoot flamepilars toward him, but Umbra used dark corridor to teleport over them. He then used all his energy and boosted with speed of sound inside Wahdos. He spinned around there, until all energy crystals were gathered to him. He then jumped out from monster via its mouth and dashed to sky. "Folw! Catch!" He shouted and throwed all crystals to wolf. Fowl didnt even touch them. He just jumped toward them and then all crystals and he started to glow. An red flaming armor urrounded Folw and he flied toward Wahdos. Umbra then flied back to ground and looked how Folw fought against fearsome beast. "Your still weakling..." Someone said. "Huh?" Umbra turned his face and saw Spirit master, standing right above him at upper level. "Who do you think you are!" "Maybe an good teacher or worse enemy... you decide which one you want... to be loyal or fight?" Man said. "Like i would wanna ever be loyal for guys like you!" Umbra shouted and summoned his keyblade. "Very well then..." Spirit master snapped his fingers and Master magma appeared. "You are darkness. Destroy this light inside him." Spirit master said and sat to edge of bridge and looked already amused. Umbra knew there must be an trick in this. He could choose to escape, but his mother always told him to not leave foe. He attacked Magma. "Give up Umbra! You cant have Kuma!" Magma shouted and tried to hit boy with keyblade, but Umbra quickly rolled away from hit and striked man to waist. "Im not after Kuma this time old man!" Umbra answered and let rage to fill his head. "Of course you are! You are wreched, just like your horrible mother!" Another attempted strike. This guy was too weak for being Magma. Magma would never miss his attacks. Umbra then focused again and let last fragments of spirit drive to burn this pretender in front of him. Magma vanished quickly to same smoke Troumas dissappeared. At same time, Folw made final strike to Wahdos and monster started to dissappear along with flames around buildings and streets. Folw returned back to Umbra and he saw Spirit master as well. "You! What are you doing here?" He shouted, but man didnt pay attention to him. "Fine. Take it, Umbra... thats only one you can find..." Spirit master said and throwed small orb to Umbra and used dark corridor to vanish. Umbra looked at orb. It was spirit fragment. One of nine. Suddenly an shining keyhole appeared to center of square, that was below Wahdos just seconds before. Umbra rised his keyblade and pointed toward it. Keyblade shooted shiny ray which went inside keyhole and hole dissappeared. Shiny light surrounded Umbra as he started to vanish into other world. He quickly managed to wave goodbyes to Folw, before he felled to unconsciousness. 1 Hunter Hawk reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Hunter Hawk 392 Posted March 2, 2012 Yay this is getting so damm interesting!!! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
replika13 455 Posted March 3, 2012 CHAPTER EIGHT ASSASSIN Kuma walked down an streets full of spiritian-people. There was some kind of carnivals going on. Everything was so festive and loud music could be heard from everywhere. Kuma tried to enjoy himself, but it wasnt so easy as he saw troumas couple of time, popping out of nowhere at rooftop of city. They also dissappeared quickly. Then Kuma saw weird man, who was walking to alleys out of crowds. Kuma followed him. Man didnt notice him. Then troumas appeared around him, but man pulled pistol out of his pocket and shot all troumas with one shot. Man was scary looking, bald with glaring dark looking green eyes. He then glimbed on trash and jumped to laddery and easily sneaked up and climbed inside the room from window. Kuma used high jump to reach ladders, then he used it again to jump inside from window. He didnt see anyone... suddenly someone turned on all bright lights of room. "Who are you?" Man asked and pointed Kuma by his pistol, while holding younger man on his other hand. His hand easily gagged other mans mouth. "Huh? Who are YOU? And what are you doing?" Kuma asked and looked shocked. "Children like yourself couldnt understand. Get lost or i haf to assassinate you too." Man said and pointed window with his gun. Kuma used opportunity and quickly throwed his keyblade, which throwed man against wall. Other man was free and he runned away from room shouting something about attempted murder. Man looked furious, when he stood up. "That my boy, was stupid." He said and tooked pistol from floor. He pointed again to Kuma, who was ready to fight. However suddenly authorities appeared from door and man quickly jumped out of other window and runned to crowd. "Hey!" Kuma shouted and tried to jump as well, but one of authorities took strong grasp from his hand. "Dont! That is notorious criminal, Rellik. He is extremely dangerous!" He said to him. "But..." "No buts. Do you mind to tell me where your parents are. You might need some protection." "Me? Protection? You cant be serious." Kuma said. "Do i look like im joking. That man is killer with no heart to feel remorse about killing an child. Tell me where your parents are! Now!" Kuma felt little embarrasment from all those peoples staring at him and this guy glaring at him. He didnt wanna explain who he was or where his parents were. "C-could you please let go of me? It hurts..." Kuma said trying to sound sad. Man let go of Kumas hand and Kuma immediatly runned off from window. He jumped to alley and runned back to crowd. He still kept running until he saw perfect place to hide in. An theather. Relliks other target was opera star. His show would be 40 minutes long and it would be repeated after 16 minutes of brake. They used gun in the show, so Rellik just needed to change it to real one. He also wanted to cause accident happen to guards in audience. He would go to attic and place small explosive to winch, which helds giant chandelier. When it explodes, it would be an real blast. Rellik already has disguised to guard uniform. To get into actors room he needed bodyguard outfit. He quickly went into bathroom and waited until someone would come in. He would chloroform bodyguard and stole his uniform. Everything was perfect. Kuma looked giant hallway of theather. It was deeply amazing. Giant pilars and caramel brown marble walls. An awesome old roof-painting and red carpets were placed around floor. Peoples were walking around as guide escorted them around theather. Kuma however didnt care about following someone else. He wanted to wonder around, no matter where he would end up. He then saw door with star on it. His curiosity forced him to open the door. There was room with big mirror and table in front of it. But all there was at table was gun. Kuma suggested it was an fake-gun to the show, that runned at auditorium. However there was brake right now. Kuma quickly took gun to his hands and looked how real it looked like. He even opened its bullet-safe to look if there is anything. For his suprise, one iron bullet felled to floor. "Huh?" He took it to his hands and looked to gun. There wasnt any other bullets in it and Kuma was sure that this one wasnt part of the show. He quickly walked away from room in case someone would retrieve the gun. He walked toward another door, which leaded to upstairs. He climped up the iron stairs upper and upper until he was sure to be above the auditorium. He saw birds flying around this room. Then he saw someone, who was placing an small object to winch. "You! Rellik!" He shouted and runned toward man. Rellik quickly took his pistol and pointed it to Kumas head. "You again... I already had enough of you." Man said and pulled the trigger. Nothing happened. He looked at his pistol. "No... i forgot to dispose of this fake-gun." He said. "So you were the one who putted bullet to that pistol." Kuma said and summoned his keyblade. Suddenly show started. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ee_ZZfKfyic&feature=related Kuma dashed toward Rellik, who dodged his attack and hitted him to back, making him to fell on his back. "I should have done this before..." He said and took knife from his jacket and jumped toward Kuma, who rolled off and when man stucked to floor with his knife, he kicked him away. Kuma striked him to shoulder and man started to look even more angrier and fearsome. "Die you infant!" He shouted and throwed enchanted knifes toward Kuma. Kuma runned around the room and blocked nifes with his keyblade. He then jumped to air and throwed keyblade to man like an boomerang. Keyblade hitted him and splitted to two and then they attacked Rellik again and again until they forged back to one and returned to Kumas hand. "Come!" Rellik rised his hand and giant wind started to whirl around room. Birds started to appear too. There were so much of them, Kuma didnt almost see man at all. "Now!" Birds attacked toward Kuma. Kuma tried to block them, but there were too many of them. They started to poke him with their beaks and Kuma felt pain from each one of them. These birds were troumas. "Dispose!" Rellik shouted and all birds started to burn on powerful fire. "Reflect!" Kuma shouted creating shield around him just in second, when all birds exploded. Rellik walked toward him, so Kuma brake shield around him, making small blast, that hurted Rellik even more. Man started to look tired. He warped around arena, throwing enchanted knifes at Kuma, but Kuma managed to block them all and even sent some of last ones back to man. Finally Rellik warped behind him and Kuma quickly charged his strike, turned around and hitted man. Rellik flied through window and felled down from roof. Suddenly troumas started to appear around him and eat his heart away, making man dissappear. Kuma then saw shining light at other window. Keyhole appeared into it. Kuma pointed and sealed it. Then green light started to fade world away from him. He saved this world from darkness. He was just six keyholes away from Shabon. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Hunter Hawk 392 Posted March 4, 2012 Wow music suits that chapter pretty well! Nice work here! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
replika13 455 Posted March 10, 2012 CHAPTER NINE FIRST TRUE FRIEND Umbra walked down the alleys of town. There was loud music at outside of alleays at streets, where peoples horrayed and had fun. Umbra found it pathetic and so he went to alleys, where was silent. He hold spirit fragment in his hand. Small orb glowed mystically and Umbra looked at its enchantment. Eight more and Khanysa would reveal her plan to him. Suddenly someone napped orb from boys hand and runned to streets. "Hey!" Umbra shouted and runned after. Thief was wearing an hood, so Umbra couldnt see its face. He throwed his keyblade to make thief fall down. Many peoples looked shocked. "Okay! Give it back!" Umbra shouted and ripped thiefs hood away, revealing her face. She then kicked Umbra to knee, stood up and runned again. "Stop right there! You are under arrest!" Authorities shouted at them. "Hmph." Umbra runned after her again, lifted her to his hands and used high jump to jump into rooftop. There he jumped across alleys to another roof and then jumped in from the window to room full of wooden boxes and blanks. He putted girl down. "Okay we are safe here. Give me my fragment back!" Umbra shouted. Girl then kicked him to stomach and punched his face. "Greep! What kind of man attacks on lady!" She shouted. "What kind of lady gos around stealing stuff thats others?" Umbra said back and summoned his keyblade. "If you give it up now, ill go easy on you." He said. For an answer, girl throwed huge wooden box toward him. Umbra however smashed the box to air, before it could have hurted him. He dashed toward girl and hitted her against wall. Someone started to clap. Umbra turned his face to see Spirit master, who was sitting in the window. "Not bad! Not bad at all, would i say..." He said and smiled. "You-? AAAGH!" Girl punched Umbra and made him fall. She tried to run away, but an shadowy man appeared from darkness and caught her. "What a-?" "Let her go! She has one of my spirit fragments!" Umbra shouted at Shadow-Rellik. "Your brother did great thing when he destroyed this man. Now he is trouma and is totally on my control..." Spirit master said. "What do you want?" Umbra asked and glared at man. "I want you... your darkness is enough perfect for my plans..." Spirit master said. "What?" "Meet me at roof of theather. Come alone. If you dont appear in one hour, your girl is history..." Man said and opened dark corridor, where he walked in. Shadow-Rellik and girl dissappeared. "She is not my girl!" Umbra managed to shout just before corridor vanished. He had no choice... Spirit master had his spirit fragment. After an long searching, Umbra finally found theather and found an latters to go on roof. There he saw girl, being inside at spell. Spirit master was looking to other way, where moon was. He sighed and turned around. Shadow-Rellik appeared from darkness again and he glared at Umbra. "Where is spirit fragment?" Umbra asked. Spirit master took small orb from his coat and he smiled. "Your darkness... it is perfect for my master..." Shadow Rellik said and took an gun from his jacket. "Im determined about my own path and our paths will never connect! No one will use me like an cheap toy!" Umbra said and summoned his keyblade. "Great words but... do you think they are enough to proove anything? Maybe you truly wanna be an slave of darkness, but you refuse to see it." Rellik said. "Slave? Hah! Like i would never be so pathetic as you are." Umbra said and Relliks face turned more angrier. Umbra casted tri-firaga spell toward Rellik and made man to fall down. Spirit master looked suprised, but he quickly protected himself by magical shield. Rellik started to shoot enchanted knives from his gun. Umbra jumped an long jump to right, dodging all of them. He dashed toward man. He striked him to waist and then used powerful air-strike to make Rellik to fly against wall. Rellik however teleported from air and then teleported and dashed toward Umbra, then teleported again and did that attack many times, but Umbra was always able to use dark corridors to teleport to other location. Rellik looked furious. "Die you infant!" He shouted and lots of birds started to appear around roof. Umbra started to fire them by dark flames. Birds however created an whirling tunnels and lightnings started to appear from inside them and when they always flied above Umbra, they released that lighning toward him. "Spiral trap!" Birds started to whirl around Umbra, so it looked like he would have been inside tornado. They started to dash toward him. Umbra however blocked many of them. "Its over now! Last words?" Rellik snapped his fingers and birds started to burn. Umbra gasped and started to jump around, dodging burning birds from hitting him. When all birds burned they exploded. "Reflect!" Umbra casted, but too late, explosion throwed him to edge of roofs and his keyblade felled farther from him. He tried to reach it, but Rellik pulled him up to air from his neck. Umbra tried to get free from mans grasp, but he felt that he would suffocate by any second now. "Join me... your darkness will be used for great things." Spirit master said and dark aura started to surround Umbra as Spirit master tried to possess him now he was on weak state. Girl took her hood and putted potion inside it. She managed to throw it toward Relliks back of head, making him to fell Umbra. Boy quickly took grasp from edge and jumped back to roof, kicking Rellik to stomach. He quickly summoned keyblade back to his hand and released spirit drives power. He floated around Rellik and throwed keyblade at him again and again. Then he used full power and dashed through man, making all that energy to escape into man. Rellik vanished away and Umbra stood up victorious. "Well? What do you say now?" Umbra asked from Spirit master. "........." "Now give me my fragment!" Spirit master took two spirit fragments from his coat and throwed both of them to Umbra. He snapped his fingers and released girl from his prison. "I´ll deal with you next time. Believe me, we will meet..." Spirit master said and vanished to darkness. Umbra went to girl and helped her to stood up. "Are you... whats the word... okay?" Umbra asked. "Yeah. Thanks about that. I owe you one." Girl said. "Then you can already set scores with me. Stop stealing my spirit fragments okay?" Umbra said. "My name is Umbra by the way." "I am Kia. Nice to meet you." Kia said, but didnt truly sound like it. Umbra turned around and started walking away. "Wait a second! Can you meet me later at DayDawn town?" Kia asked. "What for?" Umbra asked without turning around. "Do you need any reason mr tough guy?´We are friends now." Kia said and revealed her wing. She floated to air and flied away. Umbra looked at her going and then stared at his shoes. "Friends? What is... friend?" He wondered and green light started to surround him again. 1 Hunter Hawk reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
replika13 455 Posted March 10, 2012 CHAPTER TEN ZENWAES CURSE Gake and Ken were walking down the road. Gake looked a bit tired. "Your okay? I know we have already done alot!" Ken said. "Yeah. It just feels like... every world we visit makes him appear more and more." Gake said and stopped walking. Ken stared at him and looked sad. "Gake cheer up! We can win him together! I promise it!" Ken said and tapped his chest. Gake smiled a little and continued walking with determined look on his face. "We haf to go on right? Zenwae will be history for sure!" He said and Ken smiled. "Thats the spirit!" "Huh?" Gake suddenly felled to his knees and his eyes started to show everything differently. Road looked longer and Ken looked evil. Trees and nature looked sad. Everything he did was useless. There was no point in continueing... "Hey." Someone said. Gake turned around and saw no Ken around. Instead of him, there was masked man in black cloths. "Dont give up Gake! I though you were stronger than that!" Man said. "What? Who are you?" Gake asked. "Dont you get it? I quess i haf to be suprised... I am you! We both are the same Gake. Dont loose your heart like you did before." Man said and mask vanished from his face. It was Nile, Gakes DayFader. "How are you here? I though you were inside Diana..." Gake asked. Nile looked sad, which wasnt Nile Kuma told him about. Nile was suppose to be tough and danger-loving guy, who doesnt show his emotions to anyone else. "We are connected remember? My heart might be sleeping inside Diana, but my conscious belongs to you. Since my heart is not my own anymore and i know it... i just wanna return to your heart. But you haf to take it back from Diana first." Nile said. Suddenly Zenwae appeared from darkness. "Your fool Nile! Your DayFader like me! But i am superior of them all! Including you. Get out of Gakes heart!" Zenwae shouted. Gakes head filled by rage and he attacked to Zenwae, who looked shocked. "I dont need keyblade! I kill you with bare hands!" He shouted and made Zenwae to fell down. Nile came to help, but Zenwae throwed them both to high air and they landed to far away from man. Suddenly Zenwae appeared to behind them. "Useless weakling! You are nothing without your darkness! Embrace it and join it to mine!" Zenwae said. "Never!" Gake shouted. "Are you sure? While you are doing nothing than useless efforts to get rid of me, your friends will return and forget about you. All of it!" "No! Your lying! Kuma and Shabon wont ever forget me!" Gake shouted. "Then do it! Embrace your darkness. Feed anger and confusion in your heart and become full without this fool." Zenwae said and pointed to Nile. "If i ever get my heart inside Gakes, your dead!" Nile shouted. "Kuma has prooven himself to be loyal friend. He always missed Gake and Shabon, but still choosed to help me. Kuma would never let us down!" Nile shouted. "STOP IT! BOTH OF YOU!!!!" "Gake?" "Humh?" Gake saw that he was laying on ground. Ken was sitting next to him. "Your... okay? You suddenly fainted." Ken asked. "I did? Sorry." Gake said and stood up. "Maybe you need some rest. You look awful." "No thanks. We must continue searching okay?" Gake said and walked again. Ken sighed and looked worried. "Dont let him in Gake. Even if its hard, dont do it! He wants you to get weak, so he can come and take over." Ken said. "I think... we should go to that swamp Kuma mentioned... maybe we find some clues." Gake said. 1 Hunter Hawk reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Hunter Hawk 392 Posted March 11, 2012 Wow how awsome those chapters were. Very nice Umbra found a friend... and it's a girl... wonder if there's going to be any romance... Keep writing bro. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
replika13 455 Posted March 12, 2012 CHAPTER ELEVEN SHRINE OF BETWEEN Everything around Kuma were huge islands, floating above clouds. Each isle was green and full of forests and ruins. This looked like real spirit-world for him. He was acctually suprised how less all other worlds matched his imagination about spirit worlds. Kuma was also concerned about ways he always seems to travel through worlds. It seems, everytime keyhole is sealed, green light will make him sleep and travel through realm to next world. If keyhole isnt sealed, troumas will affect on him, hurting his mind until he will painfully fell to some sorta unconsciousness. But how does he travel to other worlds by that? "Who are you?" An girls voice asked from him. Kuma saw young girl with an symbolic cloths and black hair. "Im Kuma. You are?" Kuma asked. "My name is Mimio. Could you please move a little. Thats an sacred area." Mimio said, pointing to ground under Kumas feets. "Oh. Sorry." Kuma said and stepped away. "I think the godness will accept your apologizing friend." Mimio smiled and Kuma smiled back. "Hey! Have you seen guy, who looks much like me and has an black hair? Or have you seen this man in black jacket with red hair?" Kuma asked. "Hmm... i think i saw someone with red hair at shrine, but that is sacred area and clearly anyone cant enter there." Mimio said. "Can you take me to that shrine? That red-head is person, who causes trouble around!" Kuma said. "So, he is the one who brought troumas to our land?" "I think so. He seems to have much more answers in his pockets than i have keychains in my room." Kuma laughed, but took an determined look to his face. "I can take you there, but be careful. Anyone who gos to shrine ends up to oblivion." "Well, thats kinda reason im here. Maybe there is something else at shrine too..." Kuma thought. "Here we are. I cant go along with you. Sorry, but thats the rule of my tribe." Mimio said sadly, when Kuma started to climb stairs inside shrine. "Dont worry. Im okay whatever happens." Kuma said with thumbs up and continued walking in. Shrine had mysterious blue light inside it. Every wall and floor shined. "Im here Kuma!" Someone shouted. "Shabon? Where are you?" Kuma asked and started runing toward voice. "Im here! Help me! There is too many of them!" Kuma runned toward corridors and finally came to room, where was Shabon. Girl looked somehow different. "Im here Shabon. Dont worry." Kuma smiled, but Shabon smiled evily and turned to trouma. Many other troumas started to appear around room and Kuma saw Spirit master, sealing the room. "Your naive you know. Friendshipness seems to be weakness. It is almost most powerful weakness along with love and family. They can be used to blind human senses. Used to make mind go confused and heart paralyzed." Man said and turned around. "Come back here!" Kuma shouted after him. He quickly summoned keyblade and blocked one of troumas away. He then slashed it to its doom by cutting it from middle. He casted fire to another one and started to whirl and hit others with keyblade until there was almost no one left. Suddenly something happened to floor. It started to collapse tile by tile until Kuma felled too to darkness under him. He started to float after seeing light coming from hole. He landed to giant round room with catherdalic paintings and giant pilars. It looked so awesome. "An intruder has disgraced our sacred shrine! You know what to do men!" An tall old man shouted to hooded people around room. Kuma glared at them. "Im sorry. I just got lost a bit. Can you tell me how to get out?" Kuma asked. "You have seen too much. Our godness isnt happy at all. You shall pay for your insolence with death!" Man shouted. Other men throwed an black slimy balls to Kuma. When balls touched him, they took strong grasp from Kumas hands and feets. It was like someone would have holded him. "Nnnngh! Wait! There must be other way!" Kuma shouted. "No there is not..." Man said and snapped his fingers. An wall behind him started to open. Spirit master appeared next to him and smiled at Kuma. "Thats right Trevorth. This child has discraced your godness. Increase your darkness! Take its control and unleash its ultimate power!" Spirit master whispered. An giant woman statue-like trouma, Avataria came in from the wall. Kuma tried to get free from black things, but it was impossible. "Yes! Our godness power... darkness! This boy will face its full load!" Trevorth shouted, making Avataria even more dark. It was ready to attack. But when Kuma closed his eyes and attack didnt came Kuma saw Mimio standing right between him and Avataria, holding its gigantic hand in the air. "You? How dare you!" Trevorth shouted. Hooded people started to fade by walking through walls. "So this is what our priest is doing below the ground? Using darkness to control tribes? You monster!" Mimio shouted at man and used her other hand to cast an spell to Kuma. It freed him from that black thing. "I dont haf to listen child like yourself! Get out of way or prepare to die!" Trevorth shouted and Spirit master made last eye-contact with Kuma and vanished to darkness. Giant Avataria was still stuck on Mimios small hand. Kuma quickly jumped at its hand and runned up to its head and started to hit it piece by piece. Then suddenly power of blue spirit drive surrounded his body. He felt lighter and also somehow...cooler. When he charged to air and boosted through trouma he felt ice melting through his body and in every hit, Avataria freezed more and more. Until it was frozen solid. Kuma throwed his keyblade to it and smashed giant trouma out of existence. "Thank you Mimio. I though i was goner." Kuma smiled. They both looked how Trevorth walked through wall. "I hope i would have any evidences against him. Otherwise peoples dont believe me about his quiltiness." Mimio said. Suddenly an familiar light appeared to one of paintings. Kuma saw keyhole, shining bright as always. He rised his keyblade and sealed it away. When green light started to surround him again he said. "Im sorry. I think, i cant help you..." "Its okay..." Mimio smiled just before Kuma closed his eyes. Spirit master was in one of the temples rooms. Rellik and Zenwae were there with him. "Kuma is always in our way. That was fourth keyhole out of nine." Rellik said. "Who cares? Last keyhole is in my posession, so everything will be fine like always. Keyblade warriors have tried to escape from here many times before and two little boys arent exception." Spirit master said lazily. "What about Umbra? He doesnt wanna negotiate with us nor we can force him to join us." Zenwae said. "Yes... quite a problem..." Spirit master said and crossed his arms. He soon smiled and opened his eyes. "Maybe we have wrong target. Umbras darkness would be perfect, but what about if we use someone who dont have touch to darkness?" 1 Hunter Hawk reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
replika13 455 Posted March 15, 2012 CHAPTER TWELVE ABANDONMENT Umbra looked around and saw nothing else than burned isle. Trees and nature were completely dead. Then he saw someone lying at ground. An teenage boy with pieces of armor with ritualistic symbols. Umbra runned to him and was about to help him up, but biy stood up by himself. "What has happened?" Umbra asked. "It was that Trevorth. He attacked here in order to find Mimio. He told she was sacrelicious." Boy said. "Sacrelicious? Are you one of those peoples who have an pathetic life? Hanging in the edge of faith?" Umbra laughed but boy looked serious. He turned around toward cliff and started running. "We gotta go to city and stop Trevorth! He might hurt Mimio." Boy said. "We?" Umbra repeated. "Yeah. Names Sijar." Sijar introduced. "Umbra." Umbra answered and followed Sijar to cliff. Suddenly troumas started to appear around area. "I take care of them! You go to city!" Umbra shouted and summoned his keyblade. Sijar nodded and runned away from Umbra and monsters. Umbra smiled and attacked one of troumas, striking it to air and then teleporting to air, where he punched it back to ground and it was annihilated. He then started to do small whirls, he could fast move behind of one enemy and then whirl his keyblade to kill trouma. He tried to keep his mind focused on eliminating of creatures, but it wasnt so easy. After couple of minutes, all troumas were gone and he runned after Sijar. Umbra looked around. Everything in city was burning. Troumas attacked everyone and darkness covered the sky. He runned to Sijar, who held uncoscious Mimio at his hands. "What happened?" He asked. "Trevorth has gone berserker! He summoned those monsters and tried to hurt Mimio." Boy said. "Where is Trevorth?" Umbra asked. "Up there at temple." Trevorth said. "Got it!" Umbra shouted and runned toward stairs, that leaded toward temples roof building. He climbed fast, not stopping to defeat troumas that were trying to stop him. He even dodged couple of them and dashed ten stairs. He then jumped to rooftop. There he was. Trevorth. Old man looked really dark and grazy... "Trevorth! Give up! Darkness is too much for you to handle!" Umbra shouted but Trevorth laughed. "Too much? Dont lie me child..." He stood up and darkness surrounded his body. "Shall the darkness swallow you... TO ETERNITY!" Trevorth shouted and summoned giant trouma between him and Umbra. Umbra was ready to fight, but he didnt wanna waist time for it. He only used spirit drive to charge and strike giant trouma like an tennis-ball down from the roof. However, monster flied against Trevorth, making them both to fell down. "Nice show Umbra..." Spirit master clapped his hands and smiled. "I could say its pleasure to see you... but it isnt." Umbra answered. "I see now... I chose you to make an mission for me... but apparently i was deeply wrong. Your darkness is balanced. You cant be taken over." Spirit master said and Rellik appeared next to him. "You... chose me?" Umbra stuttered. Rellik then took his knife and pointed it to Umbra. "May i dispose of him now? He is useless." Rellik asked. "Go ahead. I haf to locate Kuma." Spirit master said and walked down into temple. "Give up boy. You never beat us." Rellik laughed coldly. "Think again pathetic coward!" Umbra said and summoned his keyblade. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-YduhEqSyS8&feature=related Spirit master walked down stairs. "Maybe... i was wrong after all... Umbra shows some potential, but he is too determined and strong for me..." He though and turned left. "Hmph. No matter... soon it all will be clear enough. There are many others than Umbra to fullfill my mission. After all these years im free from this realm and can have my revenge... darkness shall be more than it just seems when i take its control." He then opened dark corridor and walked in. "I should gather up the others now. I haf to meet them and tell them my plans have changed..." Umbra won Rellik once again. Man however ddnt dissappear. "Your... really good..." Rellik stuttered. "Unlike you ive been practicing." Umbra said and didnt low down his keyblade. Suddenly he saw spirit fragment, lying at hole inside the wall. He walked closer and took orb. When he did so green light surrounded him. "You will pay for this... Umbra... I will get you..." "Not today." Umbra grinned and vanished, leaving angry Rellik to roar at rooftop. 1 Hunter Hawk reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
replika13 455 Posted March 17, 2012 CHAPTER THIRTEEN HALF-WAY Kuma opened his eyes, only to see DayDawn town again around him. How was he here again? He already sealed away its keyhole. He then saw something weird. It looked like ghost. It was transparent and gloved weirdly. Then he recognized Umbras face. Umbras cloths were so cool. "Umbra! Here!" Kuma shouted, but boy didnt see him. He just keeped running toward towns stairways. Kuma quickly followed him. He then saw Umbra stopping to talk with girl. Girl wasnt transparent and gloving however. Umbra then continued and Kuma walked to girl. "Hi. Was that Umbra?" Kuma asked. "Huh? Of course he was Umbra." Girl answered. "But... what is he doing? And why he is looking like ghost?" Kuma asked. Girl looked to him like he would have been grazy. "That is not concern of yours what is he doing." Girl said and turned around and walked away, leaving confused Kuma behind. Kuma then chose to go into Back-alleys to meet Seiji and others. Maybe they know something about this. "Hi guys!" Kuma said and waved his hand to Seiji, Clokon, Lolia and Rafell, who were looking an giant poster at wall. "Hi Kuma. Long time no see." Rafell said. "We were just looking for newest games. They seem to be cool. Only thing is that troumas are opponents here." Seiji said. Kuma looked closer to poster. "Thats right..." Spirit master said, when walking into chamber. "You? What are you doing here?" Kuma asked. "I happen to be holder of these games... an Grand Key Tournaments of Realm of Spiritians. In other words, GKT-RS- games." Spirit master introduced and everyone around roomclapped to his performance. Kuma and Seiji glared at him. "Impressive..." Lolia said. "But what about the rules?" "Rules? Pfffth! Who needs the rules?" Spirit master laughed. "Rules are best way to keep games clean. Its also the way to avoid anyone get serious injuries or get killed." Seiji said and Kuma and Rafell nodded. Spirit master looked amused. He then putted his finger to his forehead and closed his eyes. He soon opened them and snapped his fingers. "Okay. My minion shall make the rules for you, if you want that is. But signing up to GKT-RS is about to end... lets say... in four minutes." Man smiled evily. "You dont wanna sign up Kuma?" Seiji asked. "Nah. I dont care about prices or being the best. Im here to find Umbra." Kuma said. "Well, he said he was looking for a girl, who is some sorta thief." Clokon said. "Really? I think i already saw that girl..." Kuma said. "Two minutes!" Spirit master shouted. "Hey, talk you later Kuma. We gotta go now." Seiji said and pushed his friends toward table, where people signed up. Kuma waved an goodbyes to them and left to sewers. He walked until he was outside from sewers at market square. He was wondering if everything was allright at home. He started to miss Gake, Choku, Master Magma, Nile, Diana and even his mother. It has been so long when he last see them. "Dont let your heart to overtake your mind." An voice said. Kuma turned his head toward voice and saw an masked person. "What do you mean?" Kuma asked. "If you want to success in your quest, you must not let your emotions to outside world to take control in your heart." Boy said. "Easy for you to say. You propably dont have home out there." Kuma answered. "Yeah. Your right. Maybe there is home for you but no home for me. Maybe that makes me stronger and you weaker." Boy said and stood up. "Farewell Kuma. Seeya later." Boy waved before dissappearing to darkness. "What was that all about?" Kuma wondered. "Oh Kumaaaaa!" Spirit master called. Kuma felt how mans smile gave him the greeps. Spirit master walked closer to him and Kuma stepped couple of steps back. Spirit master sensed that he was trying to escape and casted spell, that made street to swallow his feets. Kuma was stucked. "What do you want? Stay away from me!" Kuma shouted. "No worries. Im not here to cause you trouble this time. Im here to help you understand better your abilities." Spirit master said coldly. "Huh?" "You travel because your mind lets you to be free. Your powers awaken when you are brave enough to seek more of them. But how are you and Umbra parallel is because of me." "Really? What did you do?" "I separated you when you falled to here. You cant return to realm of light together. One of you two has to stay here... forever..." "NO!" "WHY YES! And to admit it to you. It was my pleasure." Spirit master said, bowed to Kuma and walked backsides to dark corridor with an evil grin. Kuma felt how his feets were free from street, but he felled to his knees. He stared at his hands and felt desperate. What if Umbra must stay here forever? He couldnt never do that to his brother. Even though he is lonely at home. He then felt green light again and closed his eyes. "Maybe... i save you both..." He said. 1 Hunter Hawk reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
replika13 455 Posted March 17, 2012 CHAPTER FOURTEEN SEPARATION Umbra appeared to Back-alleys, where peoples were looking more exited than last time he was there. He immediatly walked behind Seiji, putted his hand on his shoulder and said... "Have you seen any thief looking one winged girl around?" He asked. Seiji looked shocked when he looked to Umbra. "Well hello to you too... no i havent. But there should be new girl at central square." Seiji said and Umbra quickly left Seiji there without saying hello nor good bye. Boy didnt wanna loose precious time to speak with others like his brother possibly did. Kuma were so kind and innocent... and complete idiot. Umbra wanted to see his mother, before she gets really mad about his running off from home. He still needed 6 more spiritian fragments before he can go anywhere from this cursed realm. Then he saw Kia, standing in front of jewelry and looking like whole shop could use some "spring cleaning". "Hi there Umbra." Kia said. "Hi..." Umbra muttered. "Whats wrong this time? Someone ate your ice cream or something?" Kia asked. "No its just... tell me... what is friend." Umbra asked. "You dont know? How come?" Kia asked. Umbra didnt wanna answer her that his mother kept him away from other childrens in order to make his darkness stronger. She always told that friends might be useful, but they will become an weakness and might in the end turn against you. "Well, friendshipness is an connection between two or more peoples who like each others and wants to spend time with them. It isnt that special." "So... its like... allying?" Umbra suggested. "Ummm... almost like. It only makes you feel better. Talking about better, i think i saw spirit fragment over there at train station." Kia said and pointed toward west side of town. Umbra nodded and runned. For a second he was about to see something red, transparent and gloving at forward alley, but it was propably just an spiritian. Umbra was finally there. He saw an spirit fragment, lying at ground just like that. He runned toward it, but someone already grabbed it in front of his nose. It was a boy, who was wearing an mask and dark leather jacket, jeans and sneakers. His hands were blood red. "Hey! Give that back immediatly!" Umbra shouted. "Why? It havent been in your possession yet, so why should i "give it back" if i may ask?" Boy said and sounded amused. Umbra summoned his keyblade. "Oh boy what a shame... your sure that this is way to treat new peoples?" Boy asked. "Why should i care?" "You see that is bad thing in first expressions... you always got only single one per person you meet." Boy laughed. "Oh yeah? Wanna fight?" Umbra asked. "I could... but first. Show me your strendth." Boy said and Ten Craces appeared from darkness. "Are you somehow related to Spirit master?" Umbra asked. "Beats me if i am or not. I think these babes are his creations not mine. Anyone else around here cant make women appear like an water at rain." Boy said, made spirit fragment to dissappear and he jumped higher to lift-tower. "Okay chicks! Listen up! Our orders were to dispose of him before he can make any contact to new target!" Boy shouted and all Craces summoned an dark version of Merians legendary keyblade. Umbra looked extremely shocked. He haf to fight against his own mother? Ten mothers were worse cause only one was bad enough... "There he is. Man he is fast..." Kia muttered and saw Umbra fighting against ten women who were all same looking. She stared them. "Ooookaaaay..." She said. Then she noticed an masked boy, who hold Spirit fragment at his hand. She quickly jumped to roof and dashed to roof of train and then jumped to ground. She runned to ladders and climbed up. "Why is everything so hard...?" She though, sighed and continued. Meanwhile Umbra was still fighting with seven Craces as three of them dissappeared already. He didnt wanna let his guard down. If he did, all those Craces would immediatly attack and annihilate him for good, even after he is annihilated. He blocked another five keyblades and jumped back. Craces were secretly leading him toward trails. Train would overrun him. Finally Kia was up there at roof. He sneaked behind boy, poked his shoulder from right side, while he was at left side. Boy looked to right, but there was no one. Kia then took spirit fragment from his hand and kicked him down from the roof. "Finally... i almost though it would be harder than that." Kia though. "Umbra watch out!" She shouted when train was about to overrun him without noticing. Umbra turned around and for first time in his life, he was acctually frightened and scared. He tried to stop train, but it wouldnt be no use. He waited, keeping his eyes closed, thinking that is this how death feels. He then opened his eyes and saw that an purple aura surrounded him. An spirit drive of fears. It was strong enough to keep train where it was. Craces saw that and tried to hit Umbra, but Umbra then teleported farther and train destroyed all Crace-copies. Umbras spirit drive wore off. Holding an train was enough to take all its powers. Kia appeared behind him. "Look what i found." She said and handed over spirit fragment to Umbra. "Lets see each others at finish line if you know what i mean." Girl winked. "Yeah. Ninth world." Umbra smiled and vanished again to green light. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
