Text Some weird thing my friend asked me to write for him

[Emo/Yami 37]

Okay, this is a non-rhyming poem (is that called free-verse?) that a friend from school wanted me to write for him. I thought I should share it with you guys since its only half-finished and if its too weird, I want to fix it where its at now.
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The Black Rose

Roses are red

Violets they say are blue

But this rose is black

And our train is way off track

The last time I saw you

You said this was the last time

And that the line was too fine

Between love and hate

But I didn't accept the bait

So I'm stuck here in a crate

Of crows and evil souls

Taking in 1000 tolls

If it wasn't for one stupid lie

You probably wouldn't of died

And I wouldn't of gotten tied

To one sinister ride

Although I will escape

I shall not leave unscathed

For today is the day

I learn how to play

The Nightmares' games

Attacking the things

The stupid humans called Angels

Was our first mistake

Angels and Demons

Stria and the Nyx

Are no where near the same things

But they do share one common trait;

Both have those that fell from their proper state.

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Wow... Turns out I lied. This poem pretty much rhymes throughout. Oh well. Anyway, my friend says this is apparently part of an actual story he was going to write (which explains some of the things like "Stria and Nyx" as well as why "Nightmares" is capitalized).

[Keyblade King 12 486]

I'm sorry did you say "Non-rhyming" looks back at poem. Uh...

[Emo/Yami 37]

I'm sorry did you say "Non-rhyming" looks back at poem. Uh...

 

Exact same thing I said after I typed this up, man. Rhymes alot more than intended