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TUTORIAL

 

This story is completely fictional and has nothing to do with acctual epic storyline of real kingdom hearts.

 

Okay, so here is few things you should know about main characters before getting started.

This story is setted to far away past from Soras adventures.

Some of characters already made an appearance in KH days Blade of Existence (which can be entered through my profile)

 

 

Kuma is 13 year old protagonist of story. He is friend with Shabon and Gake and twin brother for his arch enemy, Umbra. Here is his appearance.

http://replicator13.deviantart.com/#/d4mejwi

 

Gake is 15 year old protagonist of story. He is friend with Kuma and Shabon. He trains under master Magmas student and he has young, 8 year old brother, Choku to take care of, since they dont have parents.

Here is his appearance.

http://replicator13.deviantart.com/#/d4meklo

 

Shabon is 17 years old main character in story. She is friend with Gake and Kuma and is one of most talented students of master Magma.

Here is her appearance.

http://replicator13.deviantart.com/#/d4mek56

 

Master Magma is keyblade master and teacher of Shabon, Gake, Kuma and many other.

I dont currently have any picture of him.

 

Crace, is keyblade master and is mother of Kuma and Umbra. She is main antagonist for Kuma, Gake and Shabon and is also teacher of Umbra.

I dont have yet picture of her either.

 

Umbra is Kumas evil twin brother and is one of main enemies in story.

Here is his appearance.

http://replicator13.deviantart.com/#/d4meks3

 

Now, we can go to story itself. So if you are here before first chapter, please wait.

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CHAPTER ONE

 

DREAM, WOKE, AWAKE.

 

 

"This time its over!" Boy with black hair said and rised his keyblade for another attack.

"Afraid its not!" Kuma shouted and striked his keyblade against boys. And then, everything went white.

Kuma woked up and looked around him. He was in his room and not in another world with his evil twin brother, Umbra.

Kuma looked out of window and sawed that sun was going to rise and bring morning to town.

He wored his jacket and shoes on and went outside to corridors. this time that dream was even more real-like than it was last night... or night before that or night before that...

Truth was, that he has been seeing same dream through three weeks now. It was so horrible at first, but then he got used to it. There was always him and Umbra, fighting in a Black Manor. Manor that their mother ruled.

Kuma was keyblade wielder, which made him really special person, but his connection to his mother and brother made him even more special... which Kuma though was bad thing.

He walked to courtyard of castle and sawed Shabon and Gake, who were training there. He walked to them.

"Morning Kuma!" Gake said and dodged Shabons strike.

"Morning..." Kuma answered.

"Whats wrong? Is it those dreams again?" Shabon asked and tried to hit gake three times, but wasnt quick enough.

"Yes." Kuma answered.

"You should tell to Master magma about them." Gake said.

"No way!" Kuma said so loudly that Gake tripped and felled off to his back. Shabon pointed him by her keyblade.

"Victory." She said.

"What? No fair, i just tripped!" Gake shouted.

Shabon laughed a bit and turned back to Kuma.

"Why not?" She asked.

"I dont wanna make him worry. He already told me that i cant leave Town and go to other worlds, because Umbra might attack me like he did last time!" Kuma said and sat to seat. Shabon helped Gake up and they both sat next to Kuma.

"At least you can go to town right? And forest and mountains? Isnt that good enough?" Gake asked.

"Yeah but you guys can go out there and explore and i just stay here and explore everything i already explored..."

"You could spend time with Choku."

"Oh come on! He is a little kid!"

"So what? You are too." Gake laughed.

At that time, bell ringed. Sound was so loud that it made Shabon to scream a bit.

"Somethings wrong..." Shabon said.

"Master wants to meet us." Gake said.

"Iĺl go back to my room. Master said i cant take a part of these meetings." Kuma said sadly and walked away.

 

 

All 13 students were in big hall. They all waited nervously except Shabon, who was used to these.

Master Magma walked in and nodded in order to give permission for everyone to sit.

"Like always, you may ask why we are gathered to this room." Magma said.

"And answer is, that there has been new kinds of darkness on the loose. They attack to worlds and peoples in there, so we must take an action and go to save worlds and investigate what these kinds do..."

"Wait! Kinds? Your saying there is more than one?" Gake asked.

"I afraid so. My friend, who sighted them, named one kind to Xioblivians and other one, DayFaders. Iĺl send three of you to investigate Xioblivians and other three to investigate DayFaders. When i say your name, you come here and when all six are here, others may go."

Shabons name was said at first. Was it even an suprise, since she was best student in whole school.

Gakes name was said lastly, which was suprise to him as he never was so talented as others were.

Shabon was putted to trio that would search for DayFaders and gake was in trio that would search for Xioblivians. As other seven were gone, Shabon, Gake and four others standed in front of Magma.

"Remember. You are not going to other worlds to have fun. You must seek these creatures and slay them from sight and make notes of them." Master said and handed an report book to each one.

"You arent an teams, so you can go separate ways. That should fast things enough. You may now dismiss. i want that everyone is on other worlds until sunset."

 

 

"So, your going to long trip?" Kuma asked sadly.

"Were coming back soon as possible." Shabon said.

"Take care of Choku while im gone okay?" Gake said and Kuma nodded.

"See you soon." Shabon said and hugged Kuma.

"Yeah. Seeya!" Kuma said and walked away.

"Do you think we really should go?" Gake asked.

"Masters orders are absolute. We cant stay here if worlds are in danger again." Shabon answered.

Gake nodded.

"Where are you going by the way?" Shabon asked.

"Dawn-Day town. I think thats good place to find something." Gake said.

"An ice-cream?" shabon suggested.

"well... where are you going then?"

"Fiendish Forests. Master told me that it would be good place to check out." Shabon said and opened an Spirit window. It was an bright portal, that can be used to world travelling.

Gake touched to his chest and light surrounded him as he turned to keyblade armor form. He throwed his keyblade to air and in a flash, it turned to keyblade glider. Shabon disliked about travelling inside Lanes Between, cause there was dangerous and darkness could easily gather into her. But Gake loved his glider and wasnt strong enough magician to create an Spirit Windows.

Shabon waved her hand to Gake and jumped inside the window. Gake waved to her and jumped to his glider and flied to portal of Lanes Between.

 

 

Kuma walked through town and eated an ice cream. What if something happens to Shabon or Gake? It isnt safe out there.

Suddenly someone jumped to his back and made him fall to street.

"Oww..." Kuma muttered.

"Hi Kuma!" Someone said and Kuma turned his head just to see Choku, who was sitting on his back.

"Hi Choku..." He said.

Choku was 8 years old boy, who looked much like his brother, Gake. They even had kinda same hair style, excepy Chokus was shorter.

"Why are you here alone?" Choku asked and stepped away from Kumas back.

"No special reason." Kuma said.

"Your lying."

"Im not!"

"Yes you aaare..."

"Look. I WANT to be alone now okay?" Kuma said and walked away.

Choku watched him few seconds and then he sawed an broken keychain, lying on ground. He picked it and runned after Kuma.

 

 

Kuma was now in forests. He looked around and thinked that he could train a little of his magic.

"Good day, Brother!" Someone said and Kuma turned around and sawed Umbra, who standed against big rock.

"You? What do you want?" Kuma asked.

"Like you should ask Kuma. You know mother wants to meet you." Umbra said lazily.

"Like i would wanna meet her!" Kuma shouted.

"Look. Do you wanna make this easy way or hard way?" Umbra asked and started to look annoyed.

Kuma summoned his keyblade.

"Stupid!" Umbra said and summoned his.

Kuma dashed to Umbra, but Umbra runned much more faster from the sight. As Kuma tried to see where he was, Umbra suddenly shooted an dark-vines and wrapped Kuma to them.

"Nnnggh!" Kuma tried to escpe, but like always, Umbra was better than he was.

Choku appeared to forest and sawed what was happening.

Umbra lifted Kuma to his shoulders and opened an dark corridor.

"Next destination is... Black Manor." Umbra laughed and stepped inside.

"Kuma!" Choku yelled and runned toward dark corridor, but when he tried to jump into it, it vanished, causing him to fell into his face.

 

 

Umbra putted Kuma down for a second. He could see his home at top of dark mountain.

"We are almost there bro!" Umbra said.

"You dont get away from this!" kuma said.

"Oh, what makes you think so?" Umbra asked.

Suddenly an man flied through stage, making Umbra to fall on his back.

"Who in the he...?"

Man freed Kuma with single scratch of keyblade.

"Quickly!" Man said and opened an Spirit window.

Kuma didnt know who this man was, so he was kinda scared, but he jumped in as he though it was better to follow stranger than Umbra.

Umbra tried to jump after them, but man blocked him away.

"Thank you." Kuma said.

"No problem."

"Who are you?"

"My name is Nile."

[coolwings 1,546]

Wow awesome story I really enjoyed............... Few minor spelling errors ............. I want more... Who's NIle?

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CHAPTER TWO

 

GREEDINESS OF HEARTS

 

 

Shabon landed to forest. Forest was huge and branches of huge trees coveres sky out of sight. Light inside forest was kinda cosy though. Shabon has heard rumors about forest being inhabitent by thiefs. She was kinda easy looking target. Lonely girl, walking on forest. But truth was she had her keyblade, Silver-Caster if danger comes away.

"AAAAAH!" Someone screamed.

Shabon runned really fast toward it and saw an woman being attacked by creatures. Creatures had an four eyes and sun shaped fur on top of their head. These were DayFaders!

"Stay back!" Shabon shouted and summoned Silver-Caster. She dashed toward first monster and striked it away. it dissappeared into deep orange flames with black bubbles.

She started to spin and managed to destroy two more DayFaders. Suddenly an bird like DayFaders appeared and started to attack Shabon hair. She shooted blizzard spell to them and striked another normal one out of existence.

When all Dayfaders were gone, Shabon turned to woman.

"Are you okay?" She asked.

"I- im fine thanks." Woman said.

"My name is Shabon. Who are you?"

"Im Liale. Daughter of thief lord, Fiedros." Liane introduced.

"Thief lord?" Shabon repeated and looked horryfied.

"Dont worry. Im sure he leaves you alone since you saved me." Liale smiled and Shabon sighed in relief.

"Say? Do you know where those creatures came from?" She asked.

"Well, they started attacking when i went to forbidden sewers. I believe that witch, Slagaia is behind all these." Liale said.

"Okay." Shabon said and turned around.

"What! Are you going to sewers alone?" Liale asked.

"Well yes." Shabon answered.

"Be careful... Slagaia is dangerous."

"I do!" Shabon said and runned forward.

 

 

Gake landed to town, but was sure it wasnt DawnDay town... this town looked kinda "poor" it was like an slum or something.

He saw an monsters, attacking an man. These monsters had an weird looking eyes and symbols on their stomach. These possible were Xioblivians.

Gake runned to them and quickly managed to strike three of them away.

"Move!" He shouted to old man and hitted another Xioblivian away.

Man runned to alley and Gake followed him, keeping monsters away from him.

Man opened door and pushed Gake inside the house and after coming in too, locked the door.

"Thank you young man." He said.

"No problem." Gake smiled.

"Im Gake."

"Interesting name. My name is Thefd. I need to thank you."Thefd said and offered an golden coin to Gake.

"Sorry, but im not interested about treasures or objects." Gake said.

"Are you sure? If you have an generous heart, this coin may copy itself when you gave it to other person. As it replicates, you may easily help all peoples around here." Thefd said.

"What? An magic coin? Why dont you giveit or its copies to others?" Gake asked.

"Lets say, i dont have heart thats generous enough..." Man said sadly and Gake tooked coin to his hand. When it touched hand, it replicated to five more coins.

"I see you got special heart." Man smiled.

"Okay. I´ll go there and help peoples." Gake smiled and went outside.

 

 

Shabon walked now through dark, smelly and discusting sewers. Liale was right. There was lot more DayFaders than outside. But why? She had to ask Slagaia personally what she was doing.

She entered an big, tower-like room that was filled with pipes and different mirrors.

In front of one mirror was an woman, who was covered with slime and her skin was a bit green.

"Slagaia?" Shabon asked.

"Who are you?" Slagaia asked when suddenly turning around.

"I am Shabon. I wanna know what are those creatures doing here." Shabon said.

"DayFaders? An man brought them to here. He saw that i needed them. Their power... i could finally take over outside kingdom..." Slagaia muttered.

"Excuse me?"

"Outside kingdom! Forest up there girl!"

"Why cant you take over without monsters?" Shabon asked and prepared to summon keyblade. Witch looked really annoyed.

"I cant stand light! Light is horrible!"

"Huh?"

Slagaia casted an spell and Shabon dodged it.

"You think im crazy?"

"No! I was just..." But Slagaia casted another spell, that Shabon was hardly able to block.

"Wait!" Shabon screamed but Slagaia casted more spells to her. She didnt have much change, than to fight her.

Shabon jumped up to pipes and dashed above Slagaia. Then she jumped down and striked witch farther.

"How dare you?" She shouted.

"How dare YOU?" Shabon answered.

 

 

Next morning Gake walked around town, but didnt see anyone around. He spent whole day for giving golden coins to town peoples. They looked really happy. He even lost his own coin in some point, but it didnt matter him.

"Seriously... where is everyone?" He muttered.

No Womens speaking together, no mans on the work, no kids playing outside... town was even creepier than it was.

Then he sawed an little girl and runned to her.

"Hey you! Where is everyone?" He asked from girl.

"That man captured their hearts..." Girl cried.

"What?"

"Everyone wanted an golden coin but i didnt wanna one. And now everyone is gone. That man tooked them!"

"What man?" Gake asked.

"Thefd. He is evil!" Girl cried more.

"Hey. lets go get them back. Im Gake." Gake said and pulled girl to her feets.

"My name is Hikomé." Girl said and smiled a bit.

Gake and Hikomé runned to Thefds house and entered it.

"Thefd? Are you home?" He asked.

"You? I though you were... never mind." Man said and tried to close the door, but Gake pushed it open. He then sawed an difference in Thefds house. It looked much more...different. His furnitures looked much more newer and one of corners was filled with golden coins.

"Where did you get these?" Gake asked angrily.

"I...I..." Man stuttered.

"Answer!" Gake shouted.

"All those peoples were discusting... they were greed. I wanted to proof it, but there was no one generous hearted here. After you arrived and gave coin to everyone, who was greed, all those peoples are now mine. Their hearts are in my posession. And those coins are here to remind me how i finally showed the world its price!" Man laughed and pushed Gake away.

"But why? Why would you wanna do that?" Gake asked.

Thefd didnt answer. He snapped his fingers and suddenly giant hand grabbed Gake and throwed him out of house. Gake flied against wall and saw how huge Xioblivian rised in front of him.

"Holy heartless!" He shouted and rolled away, when it tried to crush him by its hands. gake summoned an keyblade and prepared to fight.

 

 

Slagaia stepped backwards, as Shabon had defeated her. She even stepped under an hole, where sunlight was coming in.

She slowly started melting.

"Oh no! Watch out!" Shabon shouted, but was too late... Slagaia melted away too quickly.

She didnt get all the answers but knewed something...

She tooked her reports and started to write them.

 

Shabons reports 1: DayFaders

 

Master gave us an missions today. I needed to go into Fiendish forests in order

to learn more about these new dark species called "DayFaders".

They were powerful sorts of darkness, but no match for my skills...

It seems they are somehow connected to sunlight. Maybe is should

try to go somewhere even more brighter world in order to get more

answers...

 

After finishing writing. She opened another Spirit portal and went through.

 

 

Gake made final slam to his opponent and it started to fell. Thefd was still there and monster felled onto him.

"Thefd!" Gake shouted.

Once monster was gone, so was Thefd too... Suddenly all peoples started to appear again as Thefd didnt own their hearts anymore.

"Thank you!" Hikomé said andhugged gakes feets.

"Your welcome." gake answered and waved good byes to her.

He stopped for a second and tooked his reports to his hand and started writing.

 

Gakes reports 1: Greediness

 

Xioblivians were my target. An dark species that are targeting

to peoples hearts by some reason.

It seems thefd was greed himself... greed of power.

And that greediness was his fate as Xioblivians tooked over his heart...

[Hunter Hawk 392]

Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa awsome story!!!! It's even better than I thought it will be, great job!!!!

 

And I must say, your grammar is making a great progress!!!

[coolwings 1,546]

Chapter 2 awesome...... less spelling errors but still that mistake with sawed............ You keep saying sawed it's saw

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CHAPTER THREE

 

TWIN BROTHERS

 

 

Nile brought Kuma to an world, where was huge steamboat. There he asked Kuma to wait while he get something to drink. Kuma looked into water as he leaned against the edge. He looked himself at far below on the water. Boat runned slowly and Kuma felt wind on his face. Wind was thing, that made Kuma always feel great. Master magma told that his name was related to wind and sky. Kuma meant cloud. And clouds fly free with the wind.

"Here." Nile said and handed some hot chocolate to him.

"Thank you." Kuma answered and tooked the glass to his hand.

"Who was that guy?" Nile asked.

"Nobody... what were you doing there anyways?"

"I was hunting."

"Oh right... why?"

"I travel through worlds and hunt for special monsters of darkness. I heard Black Manor would be great spot to find some..."

"Cool... I never knew about monster hunters..." Kuma said sadly.

"Now tell me..."

"Huh?"

"Why that guy kidnapped you?"

"Do i haf to?"

Nile nodded and Kuma sighed.

"Umbra. Thats his name... he is my twin brother..."

"He didnt look like you." Nile said.

"Thats because darkness changed him. Like light changed me... our mother... she did horrible things to us..."

 

 

Man walked through corridors. He opened door and entered to room, where was woman. Woman was holding two really young and similiar boys in her hands.

"Hi Crace. How was your day with boys?" Man asked and gave kiss to his wife.

"I was at library today and i found something interesting." Crace said and handed one of boys to Richy.

"Yes? What was it?" Richy asked.

"I found an really old manuscript. It was about keyblades of course..."

"Why are you interested about keyblades if you own one?"

"This wasnt ordinary keyblade dear. It was called, X. Most powerful keyblade in universe. Think what we could do with it..."

"X? I dont know about this. Why should i be interested about keyblade that strong?"

"Think about it Richy! We could create new worlds, destroy dark creatures and create better future for our boys!" Crace said and stood up.

"We are both keyblade masters already. You should think about something else. That X-keyblade doesnt sound good."

"You dont see it! To forge such a keyblade, we need heart thats pure darkness and heart that is pure light!"

"And..." Richy was nervous to hear the rest.

"We could train one of boys for using of darkness and other one to use of light! Its an perfect plan!"

"No!" Richy shouted.

"No?" Crace repeated.

"We train our childs to believe that both powers are absolute together. We are not going to forge anything like X, never!" After saying that, Richy just walked away and didnt even gave Kuma back to her...

 

 

"Where are they?" Richy asked.

"Sleeping." Crace lied.

"Robbish! You´ve been acting strangely last four months and now i just dont found Kuma or Umbra nowhere! What did you do to them?"

"Nothing! I said they are sleeping!" Crace said and tried to prevent her husband for going into basement, but man pushed her away and went down. He saw boys on the table and they both were unconscious and looked suffering.

"Huh? What in the world?"

Kumas left shoulder bleeded and Umbras chest was blue.

"What did you do to them?" Richy shouted to Crace and summoned his keyblade in rage.

"Dont! Please!" Crace said and stepped away.

"Answer me!"

"I just... i severed Kumas darkness and Umbras light and putted them to different boys. I made Umbras heart pure darkness and Kumas heart pure light you see!"

"What! You almost killed them! Using keyblade to babies in order to split their hearts apart is horrible!" Richy shouted and striked one of shelfs apart.

"I... i... i know!" Crace cried.

"Forgive me Richy... I dont know what went wrong in me.!

Richy prepared to attack Crace, but then he dissummoned his keyblade and turned away.

"Never do that again..." He muttered.

"I...i wont!"

 

 

"Listen Magma... Crace has been acting even more weirdly after she did what she did... I afraid that boys arent in safe with her anymore..." Richy said.

Magma turned his face from window to his friend.

"She has been always reckless... but this X-blade thing is surely making her even more hungry of power."Magma said.

"We need to do something now Richy!"

"But, she is my wife!" Richy answered.

"I know! And you are so naive, thinking that she will change just like that. We need to save boys and fix them, before those splitted halves becomes to their owns."

"What? What does that mean?"

"Nothing serious for Kuma... as for Umbra, i afraid he will follow dark paths, if his heart stays too long with Kumas darkness." Magma said.

Richy looked to his feets for a second and then he rised his face to Magma.

"Just when are we going to do this?"

 

 

Manor was burning and Magma was carrying Kuma, while Richy carried Umbra.

Crace runned after them and shooted more fire spells.

"Stop! You dont take my sons away from me!" She screamed and her rage flowed to her keyblade as it started to change its shape. She dashed and throwed her keyblade and caused corridor to collapse, trapping Richy and Umbra.

"Richy!" Magma shouted and Kuma started crying.

"Im okay! Go! Take Kuma safe!" Richy shouted and summoned his keyblade as Crace came closer and closer to him.

Magma didnt wanna do it, but there was no other choice than to go.

 

 

 

"What happened then?" Nile asked.

"My father died by mom. Umbra survived and Mom started to train him. Master tooked me to his school and while being in there i met Gake and Shabon, when their parents were training. Then Shabon turned to 10 and she was accepted to school. then Gake went in too and then me. Umbra appeared several times during past years and kidnapped me in order to take me to mother. I was always saved by Gake, Shabon or Magma..." Kuma said.

"I feel bad for you. Did your master told all that?"

"Yes. When i was 7. It was really big piece to pull together... i cried very much after learning what i was... because of my mother..." Kuma shed one little tear.

"I sometimes think, that what if any of this wouldnt happened? I still remember Umbra, when he was truly my brother... not my enemy."

"Hm. Lets get going. Iĺl haf to check one or two place before taking you home." Nile said and opened new Spirit window.

Kuma nodded and jumped in, leaving so peaceful place behind, but taking piece of its wind with him...

 

 

Here is some pictures about this chapter:

Here is Nile.

http://replicator13.deviantart.com/art/Nile-279545626

 

Here is Umbra and Kuma as a babies before darkness and light changed them.

http://replicator13.deviantart.com/art/Baby-umbra-and-Kuma-279546127

 

Here is picture that symbolizes Umbra, being trained by Crace and Kuma being trained by Magma.

http://replicator13.deviantart.com/art/Different-masters-279546490

[Hunter Hawk 392]

Sad chapter... but I love your artworks!!! Man, I'm gonna kill that freaking mother for hurting Kuma and Umbra!!!!

[coolwings 1,546]

Wow another awesome Chapter....... I want more......... I loved how you put the music in there while I was reading I listened to it and it fit perfectly............

[SoraKH 793]

Loving this! Like wow!!!! The only bad thing is the spelling errors! The story is soo awesome and if you didn't have spelling mistakes it would be better! But at least your trying and you get better! Just if you are not shure about the grammar you can show it to someone so he can help you! Othere that this.. The story its awesome!!! Stupid mother! She is soo mean!!! Lol i liked the "Holy Heartless" quote!! Loving this keep it up!!!

[coolwings 1,546]

Loving this! Like wow!!!! The only bad thing is the spelling errors! The story is soo awesome and if you didn't have spelling mistakes it would be better! But at least your trying and you get better! Just if you are not shure about the grammar you can show it to someone so he can help you! Othere that this.. The story its awesome!!! Stupid mother! She is soo mean!!! Lol i liked the "Holy Heartless" quote!! Loving this keep it up!!!

 

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replika13 is the other one who inspired me to write Thanks to both of you

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This guy

replika13 is the other one who inspired me to write Thanks to both of you

 

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This guy

replika13 is the other one who inspired me to write Thanks to both of you

 

Awww thanks ^^

[replika13 455]

Sorry that you had to wait this a little. im going to add pictures to each chapters end and choose music to parts of story. Enjoy ^^

 

CHAPTER FOUR

 

 

HELPING IN WORLDS

 

 

Shabon popped out from Spirit window and looked around. It was an village. Village that was built on the lake.

She looked its beautyness and listened harmony of surrounding nature...

"Excuse me?" Someone asked. Shabon turned her face and saw an woman next to her.

"Yes?" Shabon said.

"Do you have any...potions?" Woman said weakly and Shabon handed an potion to her.

"Thank you... since everyone in village went sick... im trying to keep my childrens alive..." Woman said.

"Alive? What has happened?" Shabon asked.

"You dont know? Well, after that factory was built to mountains, its chemicals floods to lake, causing sickness to us... and those creatures that attacks us... they take our hope and they tease us all the time..."

"Factory? Creatures?" Shabon asked. Woman pointed to mountains, where Shabon saw an grey, mechanic building. Its pipes dropped huge amounts of green liquid to water of lake.

"Horrible..." Shabon said.

"I must go now. Thank you again young lady... your like an protecting angel..." Woman said and walked away.

("What if... no... even though it would be against law of this world, i must do something for that place!") Shabon though and runned through village and saw all kinds of peoples suffering... old ones, men, women and childrens... they all looked weak and sad... like they would die soon...

She crossed bridge and started running really fast through beach.

 

 

Kuma and Nile came inside some sorta bar. it smelled weird and was full of creep looking peoples. But at least there was much more cooler than outside at desert. Kuma still felt deserts warm wind in his hair and followed Nile.

"Sit here." Nile said and Kuma did as he said and sat down.

Nile returned soon with an glass of water and sat to other side of small and round table.

"Why are we here?" Kuma asked.

"I told you im an creature hunter. We are here to chase something really strong."Nile said.

"Really? What?"

"No idea." Nile answered and drank all of water.

"I already asked bar keeper, but he told me something about Khrullén Jinn named guy. It seems he is powerful and feared."

"Khrullén Jinn?" Kuma repeated.

Nile and he stepped outside and started walking to gate of town to desert.

"Please! Wait!" Someone yelled after them. Kuma stopped first, causing Nile to stop too.

An woman followed them.

"Forgive me my interruption!" Woman said and bowed to them, which made Kuma feel uncomfroable.

"Who are you?" Nile asked.

"I am Khanysa. I wanna offer you an help! If you are going to Khrulléns tower." Khanysa said.

"We can take care of ourselves... at least i do." Nile said.

"Hey!" Kuma shouted.

"But but... you cant defeat him without having keyblade!" Khanysa said and Nile summoned his keyblade, muchly to suprise Khanysa.

"If you wanna stick with us, its okay... i dont mind, if you keep yourself from my way." Nile said and continued walking.

"Thank you so much...you wont regret this!" Khanysa said happily.

 

 

 

Gake walked through big hillside area. It was so great out there. Air was fresh and wind was just great! then he saw an hall at down of the hills. He walked to there and saw four persons, building something really weird looking machine.

"Excuse me..." Gake said and all four looked at him.

"Hello." Girl said to him.

"Umm... hi!" Gake answered.

"You came here to see our flying machine?" One of boys asked.

"Flying machine?" Gake looked at machine. It was big and there was no signs of chargers at anywhere. Gake though this machine cant fly. Unlike his keyblade glider, machine was huge, it had four wings and it was possibly heavier than all Gakes property combained.

"How... how is this thing supposed to fly?" Gake asked.

"Dont you worry about it! We are creating it right now to tomorrows show. Its almost ready." Other boy said.

"Im Aer." Girl said.

"These three are, Flit, Widh and Clouth." She said and pointed to each boy.

"Heh, im Gake." gake introduced.

"Say? If this thing can fly without magic, are you first ones to create this?" Gake asked.

"Yeah..." Widh said.

"IF it works that is! many other tried too, but this one here is ours, so im sure it rises to air..."

"Nice..." Gake said and looked to flying machine... flying was everyones dream... even his...

 

 

Two little boys chased each others through forest. Kuma jumped on Gakes back, making him fall to ground.

"Gotcha!" Kuma said and laughed.

Gake smiled and turned around and looked to sky.

"Huh?" Kuma went lying onto ground too.

They both looked to clouds and majestic brightness of blue sky.

"Gake?" Kuma asked.

"What?"

"Do you think, that someday we can go up there to explore?" Kuma said.

"Hmmm... sure." Gake answered.

"Really?" Kuma said and looked excited.

"But my parents told me, that we must wait until we can control keyblade and all sorts of cool things. Then we can go behind that sky." Gake said and pointed to sky. Kuma watched at him and his eyes shined by excitment.

 

 

"Gake?" Clouth pushed him and Gake woked up from his memories.

"Sorry... i guess i was daydreaming." He said and smiled.

"Look at this sister. Losers are about to finish their little Crash&boom machine." Someone said.

"Not you again!" Widh shouted. At door, there was two persons. boy and girl and Gake saw how darkness of jealousy surrounded these two.

"Who are you two?" Gake asked.

"Look at this sis! This little scum doesnt know us..." Boy said.

"Surely dont! Look at his clothes! Yuk!"

Gake glared at them so scarily, that they decided to leave.

"Those were Trawons twins, Kirt and Herd. They are always causing problems here!"

"I see..." Gake said.

 

 

"Did you see it?" An woman asked from Kirt and Herd.

"No doubt about it! That poor kid was propably one you were looking for..." Herd said.

"Excellent..." Crace said and smiled to them.

"Now... you two can have a little gift..." Crace said.

"Whats that?" Kirt asked.

"Power to use your darkness for controlling Xioblivians... use it as you want."

 

 

Here is some pictures.

Shabon looking to how factory pollutes the lake.

http://replicator13.deviantart.com/art/Shabon-looking-toward-factory-279922152

Kuma and Nile, meeting Khanysa.

http://replicator13.deviantart.com/art/Kuma-and-Nile-meets-Khanysa-279922541

Gake looking at flying machine.

http://replicator13.deviantart.com/#/d4mnq14

Kuma (4 years old), Gake (6 years old) and Shabon (8 years old).

http://replicator13.deviantart.com/art/Kuma-Gake-and-Shabon-as-young-kids-279923476

[SoraKH 793]

I love the drawings! Awesome chapter!!!

[coolwings 1,546]

Awesome I really enjoyed it....... can't wait for chapter five

[replika13 455]

sorry for making you wait so long with this, but i was working with pictures and other REALLY good reason is that i was lazy

well, to make this story faster, i decided to not make any drawings, cause its such a pain to do it, but im still going to do some of them but not all the time ^^

 

CHAPTER FIVE

 

 

Chaos of jealousy

 

Kuma, Nile and Khanysa walked through hot desert. Sand and little sandhills were filling surrounding area and Kuma felt its wind, running free and warm.

Khanysa looked nervous, which made Nile even more nervous of her presence.

"Theres Jinns tower!" Khanysa said and pointed to something big building that stand alone at far away. It didnt look dangerous or evil. It was white and really tall and only windows were at toppest floor, where was also an balcony.

"How did you know about this location?" Nile asked from Khanysa.

"I...well i have been here many times. Jinns well contains an magical water that can heal from burnings and save from heat of our sun..." Khanysa said.

"I would use some right now. Its so hot here!" Kuma said.

In front of the tower, Nile had to drag Kuma to shadows, cause he was too weak for walking on his own. Khanysa quickly get some Jinns water to him and Kuma healed in no time. Then they walked to front door and Nile simply pushed it open by his keyblade.

"Lets be careful..." Nile said. They started to climb up to stairs, which went around and around the tower again and again, making Kuma wonder how long stairs are going to last. Finally they were at level, where was just one door.

"Khrullén Jinn?" Nile knocked to door but no one answered.

Nile pointed his keyblade to door and opened it, revealing an round room, which walls were covered by windows. Floors and corners were full of different sized and coloured pellows. An white curtains were tied to each pilar. At other side of room, there was an man, siiting on the stone chair.

"You brought me keyblade?" Jinn asked.

"What?" Kuma said.

"Khanysa. Well done! You make really good job!"

"Khanysa? Aaargh!" Nile shouted, when Khanysa slapped him to face, grabbed his keyblade and striked Nile against wall.

"I am... sorry..." Khanysa said sadly and throwed Niles keyblade to Khrullén Jinn.

"What are you doing?" Kuma shouted.

"Now that i finally have this "keyblade", i can spread DayFaders all over this world!" Khrullén Jinn laughed.

"Khanysa! Kill that man!" Khrullén Jinn commanded and pointed Nile, while he himself picked sharp scimitar from his back.

"Dont do it Khanysa! Speak with your heart and try to think what is right!" Kuma shouted.

"Insolent child! Luckily you have no purpose here!" Jinn shouted and charged toward Kuma without warning and Kuma closed his eyes as he waited for attack. He heard sword scratching something. He opened his eyes and saw Khanysa being in front of him in her knees. She felled to floor and Kuma saw bloody scratch going through her back. He then rised his face to Jinn and summoned his keyblade.

"You are going to regret that!"

 

 

 

Shabon sneaked to factorys pipe, but it was too small for her to sneak in. She then had brilliant idea to use spirit formation.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=p0pPRhCvRLc&feature=related

She started growing down and changing shape. Her hair growed around her to fur and her ears moved upper to his head. Fur and her body started changing colors and soon, she was an big mouse with keyhole symbol on her forehead. She crawled to pipe and climbed up to it easily.

When she finally managed to get out of pipe, she transformed back to herself and sneaked through empty corridors, until she saw an big room, where was lots of machines and fire, making red shining light to inside the room. Xioblivians were making work there.

"Quickly now! We need all the strength to production!" An man in red jacket shouted to monsters and workers.

"You! Stop this factory right now!" Shabon shouted and walked inside, suprising workers and man in red jacket.

"Who in the name of moogle you are?" Man in red jacket asked.

"My name is Shabon! I have arrived here to put an end to this! This factory pollutes lake, makes peoples hurt and sick. You scar this world!" Shabon said.

"Is that so. My name is Sir Doughas, leader of this factory. You have no rights to turn me away." Sir Doughas said.

"Maybe i wont, but i will stop this on my own rules!" Shabon said and summoned her keyblade. Xioblivians immediatly started attacking her. She was suprised, but manages to dodge and block them all. She then casted Tri-firaga to them, destroying xioblivians.

She walked to Sir Doughas, who showed his workers to stay put.

"Why are you using those creatures?" Shabon asked.

"They keep villagers away. They stop their resisting thoughs and actions." Man smiled.

Shabon tried to say something clever, but then machine exploded, throwing her and Sir Doughas farther and destroying walls and roof of factory, making it burn. Shabon quickly stood up and saw an giant dragon like xioblivian rising from smoke and heading down to the lake.

 

 

 

It was an carnival as many peoples who builded flying machine, were testing them at this day. Air was filled by balloons and peoples were enjoying all around town square. Gake looked how Aer, Flit, Widh and Clouth started to walk toward their hall.

"Arent you coming? We have a little room for one more at flying machine." Widh asked from Gake.

"No... im kinda scared of hights." Gake said. That wasnt easy subject for him: talking about his fear of hights. Choku and many other teases him often about that. He doesnt fear, when he is at his keyblade glider or at lanes between, but he gets dizzy.

He then saw Kirt and Herd, who looked awfully happy. They were plotting something...

THey runned to outside the town and Gake followed them.

As they finally stopped behind the hill, Gake hided to behind the tree.

"Are you following us... keyboy?!" Kirt shouted and casted an dark veil to tree and veil tied Gake against it.

"Nnnnngh!"

"You propably wonder why we are here? Well, our friend gave us an good toys to destroy those stupid fliers!" Herd said and both of them started glowing black aura.

"Darkness? What are you two doing?" Gake shouted. An giant, eagle like xioblivian rised to sky and started attacking flying machines.

Gake summoned his keyblade and quickly started to saw dark veil. Once it was cutted off, he runned back to town. There was no way, he could reach that creature, unless... Gake jumped to roof and then grapped rope of giant balloon and it started to rise up to sky. He tried to not look down.

[replika13 455]

here is a picture sorakingdomhearts so friendly drawed for me ^^

its that world, where Gake is in

 

http://replicator13.deviantart.com/gallery/#/d4n8f9d

[SoraKH 793]

Nice music! Great job ^^

[replika13 455]

CHAPTER SIX

 

 

SAVING THE DAY

 

 

Khrullén Jinn was face down on the floor as Kuma has won him on the fight.

"You cant defeat me! I am immortal and will rise again and again!" Jinn shouted, but then he saw an scepter on Kumas hands.

"No..." He said.

"You are spirit of the scepter right?" Kuma asked and smiled to him. Khanysa gave scepter to him, after being attacked by Khrullén Jinn.

"I dont know what you are talking about foolish infant!"

"As a spirit, i suppose you can grant few wishes to me..." Kuma said and pointed scepter to Jinn.

"NEVER!!! I would never do such a wishes to minor aged foolishes like yourself!"

"First wish!" Kuma shouted and an shiny electric leash appeared between scepter and Khrullens wrist.

"Bring Khanysas soul back to restore her life!"

Kuma saw how Khanysas body started to move again and how vound healed.

"Second! Restore this world from its hurt that you caused!"

Suddenly hearts started to rain through sky as they returned to their owners.

"Third! Khrullén Jinn, i shall punish you ultimately and with no mercy! You will spend rest of eternity inside this scepter for now on!" Kuma pointed to Khrullén and he started to vanish as scepter sucked him in.

"NOOOO!" Jinn screamed and finally he was sealed inside the scepter and Niles keyblade felled to floor.

"That was awesome Kuma." Nile said and picked up keyblade.

"No problem." Kuma said and handed scepter of Jinn to him.

"You wanted to hunt something down? Here he is."

Khanysa cried a bit as he watched to desert.

"Khanysa..." Kuma said quietly and woman looked him a bit.

"Why did you do that?"

"I...I... i and he were couple once, but then he choosed path of darkness and started using me as a tool in his desperate search of keyblade... when that woman came here and gave xioblivians to him, he didnt have able to control himself..." Khanysa said.

"Woman?" Kuma repeated.

"Yes... an long blond hair and blue eyes... she had this weird looking boy with her..."

"Mom..." Kuma muttered.

After some minutes, Nile and Kuma choosed to continue their travelling and they said good bye to Khanysa and opened Spirit window to another world...

 

 

 

Shabon glided to monsters back and stabbed it with her keyblade. Battle was tough but she finally managed to get rid of it. As Xioblivian vanished to water, all polution vanished with it. Factory was ruined, so everything was ok.

Sir Doughas sneaked to woods with his workers, when no one didnt notice and Shabon even let them go, cause they cant cause harm anymore.

"Thank you so much for saving us!" One of villagers said and Shabon nodded to them.

She sat on the edge and looked to water. It was so bright again. She took her reports and started writing.

 

Shabons reports 2: more knowledge

 

Xioblivians are growing stronger at every second

now. It seems they have able to put an end to

resisting thoughs and actions, when they effect

on peoples hearts.

 

 

Gake jumped from balloon to balloon and finally reached eagle like xioblivian and throwed his keyblade at it, destroying it. But then he saw how he was falling down. Then he looked down and his heart started to pump from fear. He was closing up with face of earth.

Then something glowing opened below him and he felt necessary to wear an armor when falling.

At the second, he was at Lanes Between.

"What a-?"

He turned around to see his saver, but space was empty, if previous world doesnt counted. He looked down to world and was sure everything was allright by now. He then summoned his glider, sat on it and started wonder what is he going to do now... He didnt have any new information about xioblivians and he felt homesick by now. He wanted to know that Kuma and Choku are allright... But his mission was important! He should fly to next world immediatly!

[Hunter Hawk 392]

Awsome!!! I so damm wanna know what happends next!!!

[replika13 455]

CHAPTER SEVEN

 

 

HOPE FOR LIVINGS

 

Shabon jumped out from the Spirit window. She was at world, that collapsed ages ago. This world was then called something else but now its name is known as Ruined Heart. It looked alot like an normal asteroid belt, except there was no darkness or light. There was some trees still growing from the ground.

Then Shabon saw someone, sitting on the big rock. She recognized black hair and purple jacket.

"Umbra!" Shabon shouted and Kumas twin brother turned his face to her.

"What do you want?" Umbra asked with dark, upsetted attitude.

"Nothing. Just saw you there." Shabon said peacefully. She didnt wanna fight with boy without any good reason.

"Did Kuma send you?" Umbra asked.

"Kuma? Why would he do that?"

"Isnt he home yet?"

"What are you... WAIT! You kidnapped him again didnt you?" Shabon shouted.

"Most likely i did..." Umbra said and stood up.

"But then Gake came and rescued him. At least i think it was Gake. He looked alot like him."

"Who? Gake was at DayDawn town!"

"Then i dont know who that guy was, but he did got some serious nerve of getting into my and moms way..." Umbra opened dark corridor.

"Wait! What happened to that guy and Kuma?" Shabon asked and Umbra just smiled evily.

"Like i should care. Sooner or later Kuma will show up and by then im gonna catch him!" Umbra laughed and walked to corridor, which soon vanished.

"What if... I better tell master about this!" Shabon though and opened new Spirit window. But before getting inside she was gaught by net.

"All right!" Man shouted. This man was having grey outfit and belt, filled with self-packing weapons. He carried net-gun in his hands.

"Looks like you are my catch today!" Man laughed and tried to kiss Shabon through net, but she went back and slammed man to cheek.

"Who in the world you are you psycho?!" She asked.

"Names Grein chick. Your coming with me now." After saying that other man who had blue outfit was carrying Umbra at net.

"Look what i found from dark corridors. Good place to check eh?" Man said.

"Let me go or i will burn your properties and friends to cynders and attack you when you sleep!" Umbra threated.

"Enough waisting time! Boss propably wonders where we are." Grein said and carried Shabon and umbra in spells to ship.

 

 

 

Gake was at world which contained lots of forest and huge building. All around he saw childrens in uniforms.

"School..." He muttered, when looking to building. Would it be good place to check? School? It felt like waist of time to him, but there was something dark he sensed in atmosphere. He walked to front door, where an man stopped him.

"Why arent you wearing your uniform young man?" Man asked. He must be an prefect.

"Im not an student sir. Im just here to check on... my little brother." Gake lied. It would be pain to explain why he was so interested about schools dark atmosphere.

"Go in, but be quick ok?" Man said and Gake nodded.

Students looked upsetted. Even youngest ones. That was kinda weird, cause usually some students would be happier than that. Then he saw something weird. An xioblivians that wore an uniform. And they started immediatly teasing all other students.

Gake summoned his keyblade and started attacking xioblivians, but was soon stopped by prefect.

"Dont attack students punk!" Man said and took really tight grip on Gakes neck.

"Your going to principals office!" Man said. Gake tried to say again that he isnt a student here, but grip was so tight he hardly could breath. Soon he was pushed to room where was an old evil looking man, putting papers on order.

"Name and reason being here?" Man asked.

"Excuse me?"

"Dont play dumb with me boy!"

"Umm... Gake... and... i guess reason im here is that i prevented xioblivians from killing those students."

"Xioblivians?"

"Yeah its those dark creatures that are walking around building in uniforms." Gake said and principal looked to him like he would be insane.

"You need teraphy boy." Principal said.

"Me... say wha?"

"There is nothing unusual at here, just students and authorities. Go back to your dormitrory or else you will be punished." Principal said and Gake saw an dark aura around him. He summoned his keyblade ready to attack, but prefect catched him again.

"Attempted murder!" Prefect shouted and more prefects started to grab on Gakes arms and feet.

"No! He is evil!" Gake shouted.

"Heed my words boy... there is no evil at here... thats just school spirit... there is no evil here..." Principal smiled to him goldly.

Gake was dragged to basement, where he was locked up to small utility room. He tried to use his keyblade, but door was protected by spell. He was completely trapped.

 

 

 

"What is this world?" Kuma asked. This world was filled by gigantic blocks and toys. It was so bright and colorful.

"I dunno, but it makes me feel sick..." Nile said weakly and holded his stomach.

"Welcome to Aremaries Doll house." Womans voice said to them. Kuma turned around and saw small doll, which waqs wearing an green uniform.

"Hey Nile! It talks!" Kuma smiled.

"Of course it talks!" Nile said and sat against huge block and now he was holding his forehead.

"Oh my heavens! I cant stand this world at all!" He said.

"Is something matter of your friend?" Aremarie asked.

"Umm... im not sure... anyways, what is this place?" Kuma asked.

"This is world, where many of wonderful toys are produced. But lately production has been..." An explosion happened at nearby house.

"...terrorized." Aremarie said and pointed DayFaders, that runned out from the house.

"Oh its just those things." Kuma smiled.

"Dont worry. I help you out. Are you helping Nile?"

Nile didnt answer, he looked like he is going to vomit.

"Go alone! Let me get my stomach back to its place..." Man said.

Kuma smiled and runned after DayFaders.

[replika13 455]

CHAPTER EIGHT

 

Laboratory

 

Gake sat at chair. He wondered how long have he already been in the room. He was hungry and he was becoming sad, because if he dies to room, Choku would have no family at home world. Kuma and Shabon would never know what happened to him...

Then someone opened door. It was an boy, who was propably 12 years old. Boy was having brown hair and different clothes than other kids was wearing.

"Im Denny. I was sent to take you from here and return to dormitrory." Boy said.

"Im Gake and once again, im NOT from this school!" Gake shouted, but boy didnt look scared.

"I know. Principal Malicon is consumed by those creatures. Like every other adult here." Denny said and they started walking up to corridors.

"You mean you can see them?" Gake asked.

"Yeah. Every student can see them. But every grown up will see them as a another student, since their eyes and heart lies to them."

"Lies?"

"Yeah. Those creatures take away our hope... so we cant resist grown ups and Malicon. But im strong! I still believe we have able to clear everything and get away from those creatures."

"Hows that going to happen?" Gake asked.

"You arrived here and saw the truth. You could help us!" Denny said. Gake smiled and nodded.

"You haf to get prefects attention to somewhere else... then i talk to Malicon." He said.

"Dont worry. Im good making trouble here!" Denny laughed.

 

 

Shabon and Umbra were sitting in cell. Their hands were chained and Umbras mouth was gagged, because he was too noisy and shouted pretty much anything that came up to his mind. Then door opened and an man in very impressive outfit walked in. He had an black hair and yellow eyes.

"Who are you?" Shabon asked calmly.

"Im Zenerith. An master of this little group." Zenerith said.

"What are you going to do with us?"

"Lets say i cant attack citizens of this world. My hunters lures anyone strong hearted and captures them. They are brought to here as a test subjects."

"Test subjects?" Shabon repeated.

"Yes. We´ve been studying darkness really long time now and we came up with great creation, DayFaders!" Zenerith said and summoned several normal DayFaders to room.

"We also created many other great species, but our newest one has failed and im going to use someone of you two to create it." He snapped his finger, when guard and scientist came in and when Zenerith pointed Umbra, they nodded and carried him away from room. Shabon watched horryfiedly. That was maybe her enemy, but he was also Kumas twin brother!

"Monster! He is just a child!" Shabon screamed.

"So are you. Our tests which we took fromk you two, after we casted an sleeping spell to you, shows that his heart is much darker than yours!" Zenerith said.

"I dont care! Let him go!"

"Cyan! Guard her. You can hit her if you wanna. Its always funnier to bring next one when she is in her last breaths and asks mercy from us..." Zenerith smiled evily toward Shabon and walked away.

Man named Cyan came closer to her.

"Stay away freak! No!" She screamed, but Cyan didnt punch her, he freed her.

"What? Why?" Shabon asked and watched to mans sad eyes.

"I´ll escort you out. I dont wanna him to hurt you." Cyan said.

"But... what are you going to tell him?"

"That you died in my hands and i disposed of you."

"Oh... nice..." Shabon said sarcastically. They walked through corridors, Shabon hiding under the veil. An scientist with green, spiky hair appeared.

"Hey Cyan man! Whos this? Your grandma again?" Young man asked.

"Yes. She came again to see me, but now im escorting her out. It was nice to see that you are acctually doing something Regne." Cyan said and walked with Shabon leaving Regne behind.

"Are everyone working for Zenerith?" Shabon asked.

"Just few of us... he keeps works as a secret from his master..." Cyan said and when they were in front door, he pushed Shabon to outside and quickly closed the door.

 

 

 

Kuma catched another DayFader and annihilated it with his keyblade. All houses were clear from creatures now.

"Area is clear! Not a monster in sight!" Kuma said to Aremarie, who jumped happily around her yard.

"Oh thank you thank you so much!!!" It screamed.

"No problem. Wonder what they do at here though." Kuma said.

"I believe they are after this thing that is at my house. Follow me." Aremarie said and leaded Kuma inside her house. She pushed sofa away, revealing an shiny keyhole under it.

"What is that thing?" Kuma asked.

"Its an keyhole of world and sun. Every world has several keyholes, each one having own purpose. This one controls sunlight. Those creatures seems to be after it."

For Kuma it sounded logical. Name "DayFaders" propably meant that these guys were after keyhole of world and sun in order to darken the world and control it by then.

Kuma summoned his keyblade and pointed it to keyhole. As bright ray flied to keyhole, it started dissappearing, leaving brightness to air.

"I think i should go now miss... my friend propably needs different place to be." Kuma smiled.

"Wait! Take this as a reward!" Aremarie smiled and gave an small plushie of anime character to him. Kuma found it was cool, though he was bit older for playing toys anymore.

He walked to Nile, who lied on the ground.

"What are you doing?" Kuma asked.

"Im suffering! I need dangerous world! I need hazardous wasteland!" Nile shouted and Kuma looked to him ruthfully.

[coolwings 1,546]

I go away for eight hours and you post four chapters of your story ............. Still more spelling errors.... but over all a great story, keep up the great work

[Hunter Hawk 392]

Lol! I alost died laughing whem Nile said that he needs a dangerous world.