Luna☆ 108 Posted February 6, 2012 I love Keyla's fake name! Keyla character is becoming really interesting I can't wait to see what she's planning to do next! This chapter was epic as always! http://kh13.com/forum/public/style_emoticons/default/happy.png Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Leaxel 178 Posted February 6, 2012 Awesome chapter! Feel bad for the Doctor, blinded by beauty. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Sora's Baby 729 Posted February 6, 2012 Poor Doctor. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
-Omaega- 629 Posted February 6, 2012 here it is my drawing of keyla. 1 Lu Xun reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Lu Xun 2,069 Posted February 7, 2012 Thanks, guys! Sadly, though, now I might post chapters only on Fridays, Saturdays and/or Sundays Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
coolwings 1,546 Posted February 11, 2012 The only think more insane than Keyla is your insane writing skills ........... Keep up the awesome work! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Naught 44 Posted February 17, 2012 This story is awesomeness given form. So beautifully constructed with the music creating atmosphere, further adding to the emotion felt by the reader. Keep it up, I can't wait for a new chapter. 1 Lu Xun reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
The Transcendent Key 12,109 Posted March 2, 2013 Wow, this story is really impressive! As I kept reading the chapters, I felt so sad for Vear and Jason, and the backstories for Vear and Keyla were so emotional! I really loved how you implemented love, trust, hate, anger, and insanity into this well developed story. And as much as I hate Keyla, I can't help but like her, because to me, she is the female incarnation of Light Yagami from Death Note. She was okay at first, but her obsession with power made her go mad. That instantly reminded me of Light Yagami! Excellent work Lu! Reading this story has given me many ideas for any stories I might write in the near future. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
