Text Lu Xun's stories : The Future Can Be Changed!

[rikunobodyxiii 700]

Another chapter that leaves me biting my nails as to what's going to happen. Not gonna be pretty. :unsure: But, well written.

[KHlover8 24]

i like it, Keyla looks evil but has beauty

[teh lazy prince Xylek 1,559]

you an see the evil intent in her eyes...i like it

[Not-with-a-whimper 144]

AHHHHH! Keyla is incredibly pretty (no wonder she had such a handsome son, just see Omaega's picture) but she's pure evil. This is nearly beyond redemption. Even if she does become good again, she still deserves a lifetime sentence in jail. Keep up the good work!

[Hunter Hawk 392]

Holy crab, Keyla is getting insane by each chapter!!! Man, I'm gonna kill her!!!!

[Col.Random 3,683]

Tried to draw Keyla! Sorry if I erased a lot, cause the first face was way too good to be so evil! Hope you like the drawing! Ehh, she is a lot beautiful. But don't worry -- appearance can fool.

 

lol chibi keyla =D

[Lu Xun 2,069]

Hey, guys! I'm going out to the other house tomorrow, so here's a gift for you Be ready for exciting things in 5.2! Enjoy!!

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Chapter 5.1 - Appearance can fool

 

Keyla stood carefully thinking on each and every minor detail of her terrible plan to get information from the Leader during the evening. But, when it was almost 10:00p.m, she asked Vaya if she could already put the dress and some make up.

 

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She wasted more than thirty minutes in the restroom, but when she left it, she really looked like a Goddess. Many would fall to her charms if she tried to fool more men.

 

The dress was already beautiful alone, but with Keyla wearing it, it looked like she was a princess from a fairy tale. She also wore a necklace that resembled a heart. It was also strange, but she seemed to be very happy at that night. The reason was clear, though -- she was about to do what she loved the most in this life -- fool people.

 

The doctor saw her from the hospital, and then he shouted her name. Strangely, she did not seem to reply, so he ran after her.

 

“Lunaaaffff!” he screamed while staring at how pretty she was at that moment.

“Heya, doc. What are you doing here at this hour of the night?” she replied and got even closer to him, as if she wanted him to stare at her eyes.

“Me? I---I’m just passing by. But, oh God, you’re so pretty now. And here I thought you couldn’t get any prettier... Man...” he replied with a happy tone.

“Oh, is that so, darling? Thank you so much. But I need to go now.” she quickly replied as if she wanted to live as quick as possible.

“Where are you going? I thought we could go, and drink something?” he replied as if all his dreams with her had been immediately destroyed.

“To see the Leader. I have, eh, something to ask him. People told me he’s nice, isn’t he?” she happily replied.

“Yes, he is... and lucky, if I do say so myself.” he sadly replied.

“Okay. See you tomorrow. Thanks for helping me, doc. I might need your help again soon, though.” she replied while starting to walk.

“Anytime, my dear lady. Just come or scream, and I’ll be at your side before anything can happen to you.” he replied while still staring at her beauty.

 

“Hahahahahahaha! He surely will be useful to me... but not now. I’ll focus on that drunker. My, my, I just hope he is a little handsome. Either way, he’ll end up burned as well, so I don’t really care. Wahahahahahaha!” Keyla thought to herself.

 

As the village was very secure, since nothing had happened there, and there were no thieves, the Leader’s house was not guarded by anyone, and also the door was opened to anyone who wanted to talk about anything to him.

 

So, Keyla quietly opened the door and entered in the living room. The inside was even better than the outside. It did not even look like it was really a part of that small village. It had everything a person could ask for. And it was all for that old man, as Keyla liked to think of him.

 

“Hello, Leader? Are you here? I’ve come to --” Keyla said but was interrupted by the Leader himself that left a glass fall on the ground.

“Oh my god. Is this real? Are you a Goddess that came from the sky to bring me to the Heavens? Because if so, I’m ready to die.” he replied as he carefully looked at Keyla’s body.

“No -- I just came here to ask about some things... My name... it’s Lunaf.”

“Oh my,my,my.... Such beauty has never presented itself in my house... This must be a present from the Heavens... Milady, before we talk, don’t you want to drink anything?” he asked while still staring at Keyla’s eyes.

“Oh, yes... That’d be great... Can’t we drink two at once? I love drinks.... I just can’t find a man that likes them as much as I do....” she replied with a happy tone.

“Is that true? Then I might have just found my soul sister... Here are the drinks. And yeah, let’s drink as much as we can.” he slowly replied as if he was not believing in what he had just heard.

 

Meanwhile, Vear and Jason spent their last day on Earth organizing everything they would like to take with them. At night, they stood together watching TV -- what they did not use to for ages. And before sleeping, they hugged each other as a symbol of trying to make the other feel better and securer.

 

Vear could not sleep well that night. She kept thinking about what could have happened to Keyla, and what would happen to them once they arrived in this new planet. They would go at 1:00p.m, and might arrive there at the night.

 

As for Keyla, she started giving a lot of drinks for the Leader, and lying, telling a lot about her fictional ‘Lunaf’s story’. It was all very tragic and sad, what made the Leader feel bad for her past. It was finally time to start with the questions and find out what the ‘old man’ knew after all.

[Akihiko 1,628]

YES KEYLA, BURN THEM ALL TO DEATH!!!~

 

MUAHAHAHA!!!!

[Sora's Baby 729]

Just when I though that couldn't get any cooler.

[Luna☆ 108]

Another awesome chapter! http://kh13.com/forum/public/style_emoticons/default/happy.png

 

I love this story a lot I really can't wait for more.

 

The only bad thing is that you're leaving I'm going to miss you.

[SparxofFlame 10]

Keyla uses her evil laugh in her head alot o.o

[Axtwyt 500]

She crazy

[SoraKH 793]

Yeagh!!!! Muahahahahaaahh Keyla!!!!!!!! KILL THEM ALL!!!! Dunno why but i really like Keyla's part since she is full of adventure!!!! I hope to see Vear and Jason in action too!!! Especially Jason. Anyway... Great story!!

 

Oh no your leaving again?!?!?! Awwwwwwwww COME BACK!!!

[replika13 455]

this music made me smile alot while reading

awesome work ^^

[Beta 102]

Awesome chapter! can't wait for the next one! I am so curious of what will happen. And just when I thought she couldn't get any crazier.....

[Hunter Hawk 392]

Jeez NOW I really want to know what will happen!!!

[rikunobodyxiii 700]

Hanging on the edge of my chair, man. Cringing slightly, too. This story is going really good.

[Col.Random 3,683]

cool story bro, needs more horcruxes =P

[PillowHead 569]

Nice, lookin' forward to more!

[Leaxel 178]

AHAHA Keyla is the best character, she never fails to amuse me with her madness.

[Lu Xun 2,069]

Sorry guys. Couldn't make it bigger cause school starts tomorrow. Nevertheless, hope you enjoy it as much as the others!

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Chapter 5.2 - The truth about the magical powder

 

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“As for Keyla, she started giving a lot of drinks for the Leader, and lying, telling a lot about her fictional ‘Lunaf’s story’. It was all very tragic and sad, what made the Leader feel bad for her past. It was finally time to start with the questions and find out what the ‘old man’ knew after all.”

 

“Heehehehehehe! I drank more than I could.... But I’d do anything to a fine babe like yourself, my goddess! Is there something you want me to do? I can actually do anything you want -- ANYTHING.” he replied while laughing and looking at Keyla’s beautiful body.

“Is that so, my leader? Then I guess I have some questions to ask you. It’s nice of you to be so kind.” she happily replied with a smile on her face.

“Okay. Say it, ask as many questions as you want. I’ll answer ‘em all. After that, maybe we can---” he was interrupted by Keyla’s first questions.

“What do you know about the magical powder?” she asked with a tone that seemed like she wanted the answer as soon as possible.

“Eh? The lady wants to know about THAT? I had thought of something different. Hahahaha! But okay. The ‘magical powder’ seems to be split around this planet. Small parts are here and there.” he slowly replied as he was already drunk.

“Is that all you know, sweetheart?” she replied with a tone of disappointment.

“Nah, not even half of it. I’m gonna tell you more now. It seems like there are countless different types of this powder. And each one gives you different powers, of course. Some are very rare -- it’s said that there are three legendary powders, but no one knows about these. Some powders have powers related to their colors -- red controls fire, blue water, eh, you get the idea, right? But the nearest powder that is believe to exist is in a mountain, and it would take more than seven hours to arrive there. I prefer to stay with my ladies then get it, really. What is more valuable than a babe like yourself, my dear?” he replied as he approached her.

“That is very interesting. Which way should I head to?” she replied while trying to walk away from him.

“To the west. But it’s a bit dangerous. It’s been discovered that a powerful creature guards the powder located there.” he replied while trying more and more to get closer to her.

“Oh. Thank you, my leader. I’ll take my leave now.” she happily replied while she looked at the direction of the west through the beautiful window in the Leader’s house.

“I don’t think so. You’ll stay here, all the night. We’re gonna --” he was interrupted while trying to grab her arm.

“Get away. You pedophile. You dirty rat. GET OFF. Or I’ll call the doctor to get you. NEVER LOOK FOR ME AGAIN, YOU HEAR?” she screamed while trying to get his hands out of her arm.

“Oh.. I’m sure y’babe will come back sooon... And then we’ll love each other until I find a prettier lady than you.” he replied as he watched her leaving his mansion.

 

It was finally time for Jason and Vear to go to the airplane. At 12:00p.m, they ate for the last time on Earth. Vear made a special food that day. It was very delicious, according to Jason. They would never forget that day. It surely would mark their lives forever.

 

“Is it good?” Vear calmly asked.

“Yes, truly delicious, grandmother. You really did your best today.” he happily replied, trying to cheer her up.

“Thank you. It’s sad that Keyla can’t eat it as well.” she said while looking at the window, wondering what had happened to her daughter.

“Ehh.. We’ll find her, I’m sure of it.” he replied, trying to get Vear’s hope up a bit.

“Probably...” she whispered, and almost started to cry.

 

Thirty minutes later, Jason and Vear left their home, and looked for one last time to it, and quietly said “Good-bye.”. It was very sad for them to leave it behind. But there was no other way -- they could not stand having that doubt forever. They needed to know what had happened to Keyla.

 

So, they entered in the airplane, and both of them cried when it took off. Their lives would never be the same. No one knew what would be waiting for them.

 

Meanwhile, Keyla slept in the doctor’s hospital, because she said she was very tired, and then he left her sleep in one of the beds. During that night, she actually did not sleep, she stood thinking about what her next move would be. It’d sure be very complicated, but she would be able to plan something terrible in a short amount of time.

[rikunobodyxiii 700]

*Cringing* Oh dear. Oh dear oh dear. This is not good. Keyla is getting closer... :ph34r:

[Col.Random 3,683]

and that's why i never trust hot girls

[replika13 455]

and that's why i never trust hot girls

 

Me either. luckily i dont drink

[SoraKH 793]

Lol "You'll stay and we'll have some-" Hehehhe

 

GO ON KEYLA!!!! WOOOOOOOOOT!!!! KILL THEM AAAAAL!

 

Love the story!!! Good job!

 

I'm Keyla team... muahahahahahahahaahah