Luna☆ 108 Posted January 26, 2012 Awesome as always, great job Lu Xun! http://kh13.com/forum/public/style_emoticons/default/happy.png Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Lu Xun 2,069 Posted January 30, 2012 Hey guys. How have you all been? Hope you've been fine. Here's a new one! Enjoy it! Also, I added a poll, so be sure to vote when you can Chapter 4.3 - A new goal Keyla was quickly taken to the small hospital that there was in that village. It was such a small place, but thankfully, in that day there were only two people besides her, being treated. “AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH Ittt hurtsssssssssssssssss AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW HELP ME HELP ME HELP ME MEMEMEMEMEMEME!” Keyla screamed. “Calm down. I’m the doctor around here. My name’s Laye, and I really don’t like when people start screaming in my hospital. Let me take a look at your wounds.” the doctor said. “I found her in the entrance of the village -- she appears to be seriously injured. She said she’s been attacked by wild beasts. Is she going to be alright?” the man asked. “Wild beasts? Only if they were really bad cats. It’s not that bad. She’s going to be fine pretty soon. It’s not life-threatening or something. She only needs to rest, and then she’ll be just fine.” the doctor replied. “You... sure.... doctor? It’s hurting sooooooooooooooooo much....” Keyla said. “Yeah, no doubt. Do not worry, lady. There’s nothing truly bad here. What’s your name, ma’am?” the doctor asked. “My name? I---I---I ca--can’t remember.... Has something happened in my head? Where am I? I just remember being attacked by a bunch of strange animals, and then I woke up, and managed to walk until I arrived in this village...” Keyla lied. “Really? Then it’d be better if we do some exams later. But for now, you simply need to relax. It’s already later, so I’ll leave it for tomorrow.” the doctor replied. “Hope you get better.” the man said. “Thanks. And yes, we’ll leave it for tomorrow.” Keyla replied. Later, around midnight, when no one was left in the hospital to take care of the people there, because most of them were simply sleeping, Keyla left her bed and decided to have a walk in this ‘village’. “It’s not as small as I thought.... Very interesting. I might stay here for a while -- there may be things which I need to see.. or hear.” Keyla thought. As she walked in a small street, she heard a woman talking to a man. She was really happy when she understood what they were talking about. http-~~-//www.youtube.com/watch?v=4s5Pvh7trgo&feature=related “Is it true?” the man asked. “Yes, the leader of the village confirmed it.” the woman replied. “But how did they discover that?” he asked. “Apparently, there’s a place -- very far away -- where there were powders, each with different colors, and so, they think that each of them represent different powers or magic. But there is still much to be studied about it yet. We can’t have conclusions based on conjecture. But if it is true... then anyone could have powers. I just hope I get a small amount of it..” she said. “Don’t forget me. I’m truly interested in finding out what this ‘magical powder’ is. So far, it’s a big mystery... but we’re humans. We’ll find it out soon, I believe.” he replied. “I hope you’re right. Otherwise, the life in this place would be completely boring.... Let’s head to the leader’s house. It’s that mansion there, you see it?” she said. “Oh yes. What a beautiful house, indeed. I want to be really close to the leader, you know.” he replied. “Everyone wants.... Hahahahahah! Let’s go.” she said. Keyla stood hearing and saw where the leader’s house was. It was truly a big house, and it might be truly greater from the inside. For now, however, she had to return to the hospital. “HAHAHAHAHAHA! If these two fools think they got what it takes to have the ‘magical powder’, they are completely wrong! It’s gonna be mine! I’ll kill anyone that stands in my way. I swear!!!! It shall be mine. I need it. With it, I can destroy everything, and kill thousands of fools hahahahahahahahahahahahahah! Just wait. It’ll be a splendid show. And I’m the protagonist, of course! Don't worry, your meaningless life won't be boring. You'll be burned alongside this village as soon as I put my hands in the magical powder.” Keyla thought to herself. 16 lostmemory123, Nikolasvanitas, teh lazy prince Xylek and 13 others reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Leaxel 178 Posted January 30, 2012 Keyla is insane! I love it! Awesome chapter! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
replika13 455 Posted January 30, 2012 epic. i love those musics Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
-Omaega- 629 Posted January 30, 2012 amazing as always Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Beta 102 Posted January 30, 2012 Keyla just went coco! seriously, what's wrong with that woman?! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Luna☆ 108 Posted January 30, 2012 Amazing chapter! http://kh13.com/forum/public/style_emoticons/default/happy.png I love it can't wait for more! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Hunter Hawk 392 Posted January 30, 2012 O_O Jeez Keyla is getting evil by every second!!!! Hope Jason and Vear will be able to calm her down... I just hate her!!! But amazing story, can't bloody wait the next chapter!!! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Nikolasvanitas 358 Posted January 30, 2012 looking great so far,nice Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Sora's Baby 729 Posted January 30, 2012 Keyla is insane. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rikunobodyxiii 700 Posted January 30, 2012 Power hungry, much? I shudder to think what Keyla would be capable of if she was to get a hold of all the powders. Good chapter Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
teh lazy prince Xylek 1,559 Posted January 31, 2012 protagonist!? im pretty sure a protagonist wouldn't say "I’ll kill anyone that stands in my way" lol Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kirie 3,489 Posted January 31, 2012 Nice story Harry Potter!!! 2 The Transcendent Key and Lu Xun reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
SoraKH 793 Posted January 31, 2012 I sooo love it!!! Bravo bravo!!! Wow different types of the magic powder? Awesome!!! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Axtwyt 500 Posted January 31, 2012 So space travel messes you up? Dang... Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
dusk 910 Posted January 31, 2012 Well done as always Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Lu Xun 2,069 Posted January 31, 2012 Thanks to all of you! Just to inform that we've just reached 3,000 views! Yeah And pretty soon we'll have 200 replies! I'm so proud of this story! But again, it'd be nothing without all of you. Thank you very much :> Stay tuned 'cause more will be up later today! Edit: Guys, do you think this song fits Keyla well? http-~~-//www.youtube.com/watch?v=bwLSVPwGiqI Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Beta 102 Posted January 31, 2012 Actually it does fit her perfectly. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Luna☆ 108 Posted January 31, 2012 Yeah that song fit her very well. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Lu Xun 2,069 Posted January 31, 2012 Hey guys! This chapter is good, in my opinion. Hope you find it interisting. Enjoy :-) Which character is your favorite? Vote! ----------------------- Chapter 4.4 - The truth There were still two days left for the day when Vear and Jason would travel to the new Planet. She decided to go once again to the cemetery, to see the members of her family that had already left this world. “Jason, I’m going again. It’s truly sad that I’ll probably never be able to go again, so it’s better to go as many times as possible while we’re still here.” Vear said as her eyes quietly stared at Jason. “Okay, grandma. Do not worry about me, I’ll be fine here. Just take as much time as you want.” Jason replied as he smiled, trying to make his grandmother happier. “Alright. If you need anything, just call me and I’ll come back as quick as possible.” Vear happily replied, but it was noticeable that she was not truly happy inside. “Take care. I’ve heard that the beasts are no longer attacking people. That’s really good to hear... And so, I wonder, do we really need to leave, now that things are getting better?” Jason replied with a worried tone. “That’s good, but yeah, we’ve gotta go. There’s really no way we can remain here for a long time. Just two days to go, my dear.” Vear replied before closing the door and heading straight to the cemetery. http-~~-//www.youtube.com/watch?v=IkbqWOvDBMY&feature=related Alone, Jason stood thinking about his entire life. Many questions quickly appeared on his head. “What am I here for?” “Why did my mom leave us?” “Am I a failure as a son?” “Should I really go to the other planet, and who knows? Maybe see Mom again?” “I’m just so lost.... I wish I could have some guidance....” Jason thought to himself. In the cemetery, Vear quietly prayed for all the dead people that she had met. She prayed asking that they can be full of light, be in a marvelous place, protect her and her grandson, and be always around to see if everything is all right. “My family... I am going.... Just as I was told to in my dream.... I just hope this is the right decision to take. I just hope that Keyla is all right, but that she has not turned into an assassin.... I’m just so worried... That’s why I can’t stay here anymore... Staying here will not help with anything... Please, lend us protection -- to the three of us -- Me, Keyla and Jason.” Vear whispered as she prayed. This time, Vear had forgotten to block the TV channels that could tell about the woman that survived and went to the other planet. Bored, Jason decided to turn on the TV, and when he noticed that no channels were blocked, he put in the News, to hear out what was happening in the world outside. “And we’re back with more about the accident of the airplane, which was heading to the new planet. The government has stopped the search for more bodies, and strangely, two bodies were not found. And we still know that the transport that can take a person to the New Planet was used, but the question is, who used it? Before dying of his terrible injuries, Captain Georg sent a message to Earth. He informed that a woman had stolen the transport, and used it to survive. He was apparently hurt by a knife on the neck, and the investigations on who that woman is haven’t had any substantial progress, so it might take a while. Most of the people that went to the New Planet are already aware, but although countless attempts were made, it was not possible to inform a small village, whose leader appeared to be absent in the time when we tried to contact him. We just hope that this woman is no longer able to hurt anyone. That was the reason for why the airplanes were delayed a bit. The first one will be going in two days, and I have one sentence to say to the people that are going. TAKE CARE! I, myself, am very worried about what can happen. I just hope they catch this woman as soon as possible, and that no more innocents are murdered by her. This is all for today. We will be back shortly with more about why the wild beasts seem to have stopped attacking people....” Shocked, Jason turned off the TV, and stood wondering if his mother was the woman that killed the captain, or if she was already dead. Many possibilities came to his mind, and each one seemed to be worse than the other. He had now to wait until Vear came back home. After praying for hours, Vear decided to head back. She, too, was still very worried about what kind of fate had happened to Keyla. She also wondered how much longer could she hold off the secret from Jason. Maybe she should tell him as soon as they arrived in the New Planet, but she was still unsure of what to do next. http-~~-//www.youtube.com/watch?v=rpsAjphFZg0(This will be Keyla's theme for now) Meanwhile, Keyla woke up in the room of the small hospital in the New Planet. She pretended to have recovered her memory, and said she was named “Lunaf”, and that she had gone separated from the people that came on the same day as her to the New Planet. “Doctor, I’m fine. Can I go out now?” Keyla asked. “Yes, Lunaf. I just hope we get the chance to see each other again -- now that I noticed, you’re very pretty. Hope you can feel better. If you have any problem, just come here and I’ll help you.” the doctor replied. “Thank you so much, but for now, it won’t be necessary, doctor.” Keyla said. “hahahahaahah! I just hope it is necessary very soon...” the doctor replied. “That I cannot say. Who knows? Maybe our destiny is connected, hahahahaha!”Keyla said. “I just hope so. See ya around.” the doctor replied. “Yeah, yeah, we’ll see each other, yes.” Keyla said before leaving the hospital. Outside of the hospital, Keyla stood thinking about how she could approach the leader and get information from him. “Hm.... Maybe... I should ask the people around here. That seems to be the best way to learn more about this sucker -- I mean, great leader. Hahahahahahahaha” Keyla whispered. The first person Keyla saw was an old man, wearing a suite, and with a big beard, which clearly seemed to make him older. Then, she decided to ask him. “Excuse me, my good sir, but I’m new to the village, and I would like to know a bit about the Leader. Can you tell me anything?” Keyla politely asked. “Oh, yes. To such a beautiful lady, and polite, too... Well, you see, the leader is a forty-years old man, but he likes to think he is just another teen. He loves to go out with the ladies, and sometimes, he drinks too much -- and, er, he loses control of his right mind...” the old man replied. “Oh, is that so? Well, thank you very much. I’ll try to learn more around the town. May God bless you!” Keyla replied. “Ohoho. Thank you! I’m sure the Leader would love to meet a lady like you -- very pretty, polite and truly nice. You would get him down to your feet in seconds, hahahahahaa!” the old man said. Next, she saw a woman, that looked like she had around the same age as Keyla. “Excuse me, but could you tell me something about the leader? I’m new here, and I’d like to approach him.” Keyla said. “Oh yes. That idiot! We went out, and then in the next day, he was already with a woman younger than me! He is a drunker, too. Do not play into his games. You’ll only get hurt.” the woman replied. “Oh, is that so? Then I’d better keep myself away from him. Thank you for informing me. I’ll be sure to take care.” Keyla replied. “That’s good. Well, good-bye. See you around.” the woman said. As her next move, Keyla went to a lonesome place, where she started to devise a plan to attack the Leader, and find out everything he knows about the magical powder. “Hm... I’ve got everything in my favor. Hahahahahahahha! I just need to find a real nice dress, use make up, and be the most beautiful lady he’s ever seen. Then, I’ll give him drinks, and once he’s drunk, I’ll find out everything he knows. And, once I get my hands on the magical powder, I’ll destroy this place along with every single person in this terrible excuse for a village! Hahahahaha! You all will see.. But, maybe, I can use the doctor as my assistant... I’ll see if he’s worthy. For now, they are all doomed -- just wait until the final day! HAHAAHAHHAHAHAHAA!” Keyla thought this to herself. 15 teh lazy prince Xylek, Luna☆, PillowHead and 12 others reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Leaxel 178 Posted January 31, 2012 Wonder what Jason is thinking... Very good chapter indeed! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
XxKHFanForLifeXx 12 Posted January 31, 2012 very interesting Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Nikolasvanitas 358 Posted January 31, 2012 looks great Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
-Omaega- 629 Posted January 31, 2012 the keyla's plan , LOL , it reminded me of final fantasy 7 cloud when you need to dress as a woman. Nice history as always. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Akihiko 1,628 Posted January 31, 2012 I need another one ASAP. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites