Lu Xun 2,069 Posted January 20, 2012 Hey guys! Sorry for not posting chapters in a while. But I hope you like this one. It's where the 'action' starts, I think. (: 3.4 might be up today as well, so look forward to it --------------------- Chapter 3.3 - Everything for Survival Desperate, and with an enormous rage of her daughter, Vear tore Keyla’s note in countless tiny pieces. “Why did you do that, grandmother?” Jason asked. “If she wants to forget about us, we, too, should forget her once and for all. Besides, I’m fine with this situation -- only the two of us. It’s actually much better.” Vear replied. “But grandmother -- she’s still my mom and your daughter...” Jason said. “She was my daughter. If she wants it that way, then so be it. About she still being you mom after this, it’s up to you to decide.” Vear replied. “I guess I gotta think...” Jason said. “Anyway, it’s very late. Let’s go to sleep, it’s almost 4:00am... Damn, thanks to her -- we’re still awake. I’m going to my room. May God bless you!” Vear said this and left to her room. “I should sleep too... Bye, grandmother. See ya tomorrow.” Jason replied and went to his room as well. Meanwhile, at the airplane, Keyla was enjoying the trip. She had really turned into a cold person -- it seemed like she had absolutely no feelings. After all, she had just broken every relationship with the small family she had left, and now she was completely alone -- and worse, in a foreign Planet. “Do you want some champagne?” the woman asked. “Yes, please. And quick.” Keyla replied. “Okay. I will bring it in a few minutes. May you enjoy your trip.” the woman said. It would still take more five or six hours to arrive in the New Planet, and so Keyla decided to sleep. As Vear could not sleep, in the next hour, she went to Keyla’s room, and many memories came to her head -- like a big movie. First, she remembered when Keyla was a kid. Everything was easier back then. But, even then, strangely, the two of them did not have a big relationship. Actually, thinking better, Vear noticed that her daughter never really liked her so much. In the past, Keyla would stay almost all the time Vear’s mother, Rita, while Vear was working hard, day after day, to guarantee the food for all of the family. When Keyla was a teenager, Vear remembered that most of the time, she was with her friends, hanging out. But, with her, she spent only one or two hours per day. Maybe it was Vear’s mistake to let her with her mother all the time -- she had been such a spoiled girl. No limits were created, and now, it was too late to even try. When Rita got her money, the first thing she would do was go to the shopping, buying new clothes, some chocolate, and all the things Keyla asked her. But Vear couldn’t help -- if she didn’t work, then things would have been harder. They would only have her mother’s money, which was less than 700$. In the next room, Jason kept crying all night -- he really could not sleep. Vear heard him crying, and so she went to his room. She cried alongside him -- both of them were truly sad. They did not know how Keyla’s personality really was until that faithful day. Vear still had a bad feeling about Keyla’s travel -- not even her could say what it was -- maybe maternal instinct? After four hours, Keyla and the others were near to arrive on Miteyp. But, destiny was against them. “We are going to crash soon. The controls stopped working. Please, pray for our lives. And try to remain calm.” A voice said this and everyone on the airplane was able to hear it. Everyone started screaming, and some, prayed. However, Keyla saw when the captain and a woman that worked there passed by, and followed them. She was almost sure that they would take her to the secret transport that could save her life. http-~~-//www.youtube.com/watch?v=C8g3gt1SCgA “Mr. Fytu, how are we going to get out?” the woman asked. “We? I’m sorry, but only one person is allowed to go on the PWF-0005. And that will be me.” the captain replied. “But sir... Will you simply let me die here?” the woman said. “I’m afraid I’ll.” the captain replied. Keyla stood watching, and as the two of them started to fight, she carefully approached the two of them. The captain did not notice her, and so he opened the secret door. The woman punched him in the face, and he managed to seriously injure her. But that woman was determinate to live -- even hurt, she continued to follow the captain. And so Keyla kept following them as well. The secret room was bigger than Keyla could have imagined. The captain hurried as quick as he could, but even hurt, the other woman kept following him. Keyla picked the knives she had put in her bag, and slowly walked after the two of them. Finally, the captain had arrived near the transport. But the other woman managed to bite his arm, and then, after struggling a lot, he finally managed to make her faint. Even hurt, he kept walking towards the vehicle. “Haha, you’re not the one who’s going to be alive. It’s me.” Keyla said this while holding two knives, and other was on her pocket. “What? Who are you? What--? Knives?” the captain replied. “Yeah, baby. Don’t worry, though. If you cooperate, I won’t hurt you. When the airplane falls, you’ll die, anyway.” Keyla said. The captain was very weak, and Keyla simply kicked him, and he fell, almost without any energy left. “Ahahahahahahaahaha! Idiots! All of you. May you perish... I hope you guys go to the he--” Keyla said this when she tried to make the transport work, but it needed a password. “Tell me the password, NOW!” Keyla said. “No, I won’t tell you anything.” the captain replied. “10 minutes before crashing.” a voice said this to everyone in the airplane. 17 Akihiko, Not-with-a-whimper, Kinode and 14 others reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Akihiko 1,628 Posted January 20, 2012 OMFG THE SUSPENSE Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
JohnLuig 0 Posted January 20, 2012 Nice job Can't wait for more!! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Nikolasvanitas 358 Posted January 20, 2012 great ,i love it Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Leaxel 178 Posted January 20, 2012 Yes! I have missed this! Good chapter and the music really fits. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Luna☆ 108 Posted January 20, 2012 OMG what's going to happen next I can't wait for more now! http://kh13.com/forum/public/style_emoticons/default/ohmy.png Keyla is such a bad person. I really love this story! http://kh13.com/forum/public/style_emoticons/default/happy.png Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
replika13 455 Posted January 20, 2012 HOLY XEHANORT!!! O_O this music makes me even more nervous about whats happening next. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
SoraKH 793 Posted January 20, 2012 Ohhhhh!!! Scary music!!!! I love this!! Omg just like you said Keyla a murderer!!! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Col.Random 3,683 Posted January 20, 2012 O_O keyla has lost it.... Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Col.Random 3,683 Posted January 20, 2012 random fact "keyla" in my national language is "banana". that definitely explains why she went completely bananas . 1 Kinode reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
roxas27 52 Posted January 20, 2012 That was a great chapter. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Junko 2,815 Posted January 20, 2012 awwesome! keep up the good work Lu Xun! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Not-with-a-whimper 144 Posted January 20, 2012 EEEEEEEVIL! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rikunobodyxiii 700 Posted January 20, 2012 Hmm, interesting. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
darkchaser 788 Posted January 20, 2012 awesome chapter what is gonna happen next i wonder Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
keystrike 145 Posted January 20, 2012 I get the feeling I feel to much for the Keyla. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Lu Xun 2,069 Posted January 21, 2012 I hope you enjoy this one. It has a lot of action, I believe. See how Keyla doesn't really have any limits D: Post your opinions ------------------------------------------------------- Chapter 3.4 - A successful escape (same song) http-~~-//www.youtube.com/watch?v=C8g3gt1SCgA" “Repeating -- 10 minutes before crashing.” the voice said. “IDIOT, give me the password now!!!!” Keyla said. “Never... If I die, you’ll die as well.” the captain replied. Then, the woman that had fainted finally woke up, and was slowly trying to attack the captain from behind. “YOU DUMB BLOND -- I STILL NEED HIM” Keyla said this before throwing one knife, which she had been holding with her right hand, in the direction of that woman. Everything that was heard was one last scream from that poor woman. The captain panicked, and was now aware of how mad Keyla truly was. If she did that with her, she could easily kill him -- but not quickly, make it a painful, slow death. “You... monster....” the captain said. “AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! Me? Am I the monster here? By what I’ve seen, you tricked that woman. She asked how you two were going to get out of this tragic situation alive -- but you were selfish. You lied to her. You must have said that you two would be able to get out safe... She might even be your lover! And I’m the monster? Baby, I just learned that we need to pretend to be cold as an ice berg -- otherwise the world will make us suffer so much -- and we’ll barely feel any happiness at all. That’s why I’ve ‘forgotten’ all my feelings. Life has made me such a cold person. But, here, my dear, it seems like I’m not the monster.” Keyla replied. “How do you --” the captain said. “Hahahaha. I am right... I knew it... Humans... We’re all equal. We pretend we care for others, but inside, we only care about ourselves. I’ve learned it the hard way. But enough about that.” Keyla said. “You’re not crazy --- you’re worse -- you don’t feel bad for anything.” the captain replied. “Call me whatever you desire. You don’t know what I’ve been through.” Keyla said. “Five Minutes before crashing! Five Minutes before crashing!” the voice said. “Hahaha. You’re smart, little boy. It seems you were trying to distract me, so both of us would die -- but your tricks end now.” Keyla said. “What?” the captain replied. Keyla then picked the captain, and put the knife that she was holding in her left hand, and put it in the captain’s neck. “We still have five minutes. It’s more than enough time to torture you. Ahahahahaha! What do you prefer, little boy? Slowly die with a knife in your neck, or simply die because of the airplane? I would choose to have the quickest death possible, which would be caused by the crash of the airplane... But it’s up to you.” Keyla said. “I -- don’t know.” the captain replied. “Oh, you DON’T know? How sad. I’ll start with the torture then.” Keyla replied. Slowly, she started to hurt him with the knife. After feeling a tremendous pain, he finally decided to say the password. “STOP! I’ll tell you the word.. The password....” the captain said. “Ahahahahaahhaa! Yes! Finally! Come on, baby! Say it!” Keyla replied. “The password... it’s my name... Georg...” the captain replied. Then, she left him on the ground, and tried to put the password. It worked. She had finally found her escape route. Without waste any more second, she pressed the button that made the transport fly. “Ahahaahahahaha! May you all die. I am the one who will be able to tell the tale. Bye-bye, Georg. And bye to you too -- dumb woman.” Keyla said. She had turned into a completely crazy person. Time had really been hard on her. But, of course, she was weak enough to follow that road. She had the support of her family, but even so, she decided to follow the wrong path. The captain Georg used his last energy to send a report to the men on Earth. “Alert.Alert. A Mysterious woman has stolen PWF-0005, and killed a woman that works here. I’m also injured, but the airplane is going to crash very soon -- Please, catch her!” the captain said his last words. 16 lostmemory123, Luna☆, teh lazy prince Xylek and 13 others reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Akihiko 1,628 Posted January 21, 2012 < Iam not amused with Keyla ¬¬ Awesome story Xun! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Leaxel 178 Posted January 21, 2012 Keyla has gone crazy! Awesome. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
-Omaega- 629 Posted January 21, 2012 Poor captain Georg. The men of Earth must receive his message. another nice history Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rikunobodyxiii 700 Posted January 21, 2012 Wow. Keyla has reeeeally gone off the deep end. I wasn't really expecting that. ooooo, how will this end? Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
SoraKH 793 Posted January 21, 2012 Stupid Keyla, Awesome Music, Good work Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kinode 3,056 Posted January 21, 2012 This one was great. A little more description would have been nice, though. Like, where the knife hit her, how the characters look like, etc. A little predictable, though. Hoping for more! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kirie 3,489 Posted January 22, 2012 too much reading is making my brain hurt!! DX Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Luna☆ 108 Posted January 22, 2012 Wow, Keyla have turn in to a psycho she would do anything to get want she wants. http://kh13.com/forum/public/style_emoticons/default/smiley-confuse.png Great story Lu Xun! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites