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Text Lu Xun's stories : The Future Can Be Changed!

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Nikolasvanitas    358

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nice story first of all i like the setting the detailed view of the world in the future that is different from how it is today(it reminds me of the jrpg star ocean which is something i like ,secondly i like that you put a lot of empasasis on peoples relationships that is depicted in the dialogues,in the end this is a really good job,i feel like we are viewing the prologue of a fascinating story that is about to unfold

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Lu Xun    2,069

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Thanks again for the comments and likes :) I appreciate it :] New chapter just to you guys!

 

Chapter 2.2 - The Past

 

Keyla stood remembering her past while crying a bit, locked in her room. Vear decided to go to her room as well. She started remembering the old times -- and all the losses she had.

 

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Forty years before, Vear married a man named Valyt, with whom she had Keyla. She did not have another son or daughter. Life was pretty hard at that time -- Vear had to work every day to get money for the family. Valyt got some jobs, but most of the time, in less than one month he was fired.

 

“He simply does not have luck with work, and I’ll be with him as long as I want” Vear said this to her dad, Filiph, during a conversation in which he asked her why she was still married to a ‘loser’ like Valyt.

 

When Vear was forty-four, she and Valyt had a terrible discussion. Vear was very beautiful, and Valyt was very jealous of her. He could not stand seeing her with other man, or he’d be able to do anything -- even start a fight and probably kill whoever was with her.

 

“You’re going out with your boss, aren’t you?” Valyt said.

“No -- I’d never betray you.” Vear said.

“You’re lying -- You’re just a ---” Valyt said.

“I don’t want to live with you anymore. I hate you! Go away! I’ve been bearing with you all these years because of my daughter... But you keep calling me bad things, and simply can’t believe that you’re the only one I love... It’s too late now. Sorry, but this is my limit.” Vear replied.

“What? You can’t mean that...” Valyt replied.

“I MEAN IT. I simply can’t bear with you anymore! Please, for the love of God, go away! You’ll be able to see your daughter whenever you want, but go live with your mother -- that poisonous snake!” Vear said.

 

The reason for why she called Valyt’s mother that was because she hated Vear, and had tried every thing to separate them. She even kidnapped Valyt one year after he and Vear married -- and said that he did not want to live with her anymore. But later, Vear managed to find him, and everything turned out fine. Valyt’s mother did not even go to their marriage.

 

“Mom, I’m not a kid anymore. I’m a man. I can be with whoever I want! I love Vear. She’s the woman of my life. I won’t let you interfere.” Valyt said.

“Follow that, and you’ll see -- I’ll go to the cemetery, to bury you.” Valyt’s mother replied.

“What? How dare you say that, mom? You’re an idiot, fool. I want you to go to the he---” Valyt was interrupted because two men, contracted by Valyt’s mother put something on his nose, so he fell asleep, poisoned. And that was how she managed to kidnap him.

 

Valyt’s mother was right about going to the cemetery -- to bury him. When Keyla was fourteen-years old, about to turn fifteen, Valyt had a heart attack, and died in the hospital. He and Vear were about to be together again, and were preparing a big party to Keyla, but destiny simply did not want to let that happen.

 

Everyone stood very sad, and Keyla almost entered in a depression. Vear was shocked -- and cried much after Valyt was buried. Another loved one had left her. She had already lost a brother. When she was twenty-three, her younger brother, named Ronald, died with seventeen-years old, in a car crash.

 

It was her first loss -- she felt a sadness that she had never felt before. Her hear lost a small piece, which would never return. She felt empty -- something that she had never felt before.

 

In the year that Jason was born, Vear’s mother died -- because of cigarettes -- she was completely addicted to it. After Ronald’s death, she started to use it to block the past. It was like a therapy to her. Without cigarettes, all of these painful memories would return, and a deep sadness would take over her.

 

Her lung was seriously affected, and she couldn’t breath well anymore. That’s the reason for why she died. She had always said that she would die with seventy-years old -- and that’s what eventually happened. She died on December 16th, and Vear’s birthday was very near -- on December 25th. It was the saddest Christmas she ever had -- and the first without her mother.

 

She had many more losses -- but these were the most important ones. Just like Keyla, she started crying -- but because she knew she would probably have to left all her past behind, and never see her family’s grave anymore.

 

Jason was the only one that remained in the Living Room. Differently from his grandmother, he wanted to start a new life in the new planet -- as his life on Earth had not been very good.

 

At school, he was the smartest, and so most of people had envy of his intelligence -- all the teachers complimented him, and said that his future would surely be brilliant. He was shy, but beautiful. Had brown eyes, short straight hair. Although only a small number of girls actually felt something for him.

 

He loved to stay on the internet, and loved his internet friends. His friends from real life were just idiots, at least at his point of view.

 

Going to the new planet would mean a chance to restart his life. Make new friends, meet new people, and who knows? Maybe even find the magical powder, and become a very famous and known person. He wanted the world to know him. He had a lot of interests, but was not capable of doing anything to accomplish it.

 

He decided to go his room now. Each one of them slept well. For a few days, the relationship between the three of them was very strange. It was finally April 2nd, and the first 500 thousand people were about to go to the new Planet. This small family had to decide whether they would or not go. Now, they only had a few days to decide.

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Lu Xun    2,069

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Just passed by to say thanks to you all.

 

It's really impressive -- this story is 3 days old, and my three posts [the chapters] have 64 likes if you count. Also, 35 people following this! 67 replies to this thread! Almost reaching 1,000 views! I really am so glad that you guys are so awesome and have enjoyed this story so far! I must work hard in order to not disappoint you all! Once again, thanks, from the bottom of my heart. This gives me a really good feeling in this hard time I've been through -- I love you guys!

 

I might post the next chapter later today or tomorrow, so stay tuned :)

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