Lu Xun 2,069 Posted January 4, 2012 The Future Can Be Changed Chapter 1 - The First Important Decision In the year of 2258, Humans had found a new planet to live. Earth had been seriously damaged, and with time, had been turned into a place where most of the life could not survive for much longer -- there were poisonous gases around the atmosphere, insects had gotten smarter, and so they knew when to attack, injure, and easily transmit diseases. Besides that, new kinds of wild animals had started to appear -- some were like a mix of a bear with an alligator, other resembled the dinosaur, which had disappeared from Earth centuries ago. It was really hard to keep living on Earth -- and some people refused to leave it, and most of them ended up dying -- either by a disease or by being attacked by these wild animals. In the middle of this, there was a small family, which was composed by a fifteen-years old boy, a thirty-eight years woman, and a sixty-four years old woman. They were respectively named Jason, Keyla, and Vear. They were having a hard time deciding whether they would stay here, on Earth, and have risks of being killed or dying at any second, or going to the recently discovered new planet. Vear wanted to stay, because all of her family had lived and died here -- her mom, dad, brother, cousins and grandparents -- but Keyla did not want to, because she wanted to live for many more years. Jason was not sure what he would do -- because he liked his grandmother a lot, but also wished to live a lot more. The people were being sent every day to the other planet -- by that year, there were about 10,5 million people on Earth, and only 500 thousand could be taken by it each day. Vear then told her daughter and grandson that she would think a bit more, and give a proper reply in the following day. Keyla was desperate to go to the other planet -- she had heard that there was a magical powder, which could only be found in there that could give some special powers to the people. She was a bit selfish, and actually would go alone, even if the rest of her family refused to go. Vear was still deciding, but it would be truly painful for her to leave all her memories and dead family behind. She loved them so much, and once she went to the other planet, there was no way to come back -- at least that was what they had informed the people on the TV. Jason would follow his grandmother’s decision, even if it cost him his life -- he loved her so much -- more than his own mother. In the past, his mother had ‘abandoned’ him, because she left all the responsibility with her mother, and instead started to talk with to unknown people on her cell phone. It was time to go to bed -- none of them could easily sleep. It took a while, because they stood a few hours thinking about what they would do in the following day. As the sun appeared, each one of them had decided what they would do now. They woke up almost at the same time, and decided to first have breakfast, before having the discussion where each one would say and defend why they thought that was better. *If you liked the story, click 'Follow Topic' so you can know when I update!!* Drawing of Keyla with the beautiful dress: http://kh13.com/foru...885#entry553885 Chapter 2.1 - Terrible Memories -->http://kh13.com/foru...ed/page__st__20 Chapter 2.2 - The Past --> http://kh13.com/foru...post__p__529908 Chapter 3.1 - The Decision --> http://kh13.com/foru...819#entry531819 Chapter 3.2 - Deceptions --> http://kh13.com/foru...990#entry531990 Chapter 3.3 - Everything for Survival --> http://kh13.com/foru...d/page__st__120 Chapter 3.4 - A successful escape --> http://kh13.com/foru...609#entry542609 Chapter 4.1 - The new planet --> http://kh13.com/foru...371#entry546371 Chapter 4.2 - The right thing to do --> http://kh13.com/foru...008#entry547008 Chapter 4.3 - A new goal --> http://kh13.com/foru...639#entry552639 Chapter 4.4 - The truth --> http://kh13.com/foru...479#entry553479 Chapter 4.5 - Break of trust --> http://kh13.com/foru...479#entry553479 43 Miku Hatsune, 4Everbee, Sigrun and 40 others reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Sora's Baby 729 Posted January 4, 2012 I like this story. 1 KHlover8 reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
-Omaega- 629 Posted January 4, 2012 Nice , I like it . continue writing new historys. year 2258 , that means the world doesn't end in 2012 , yujuuuuu 3 coolwings, JohnLuig and Kello reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Tails 6,690 Posted January 4, 2012 The story is very good. (: Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Obi-wan 411 Posted January 4, 2012 Pretty good so far Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kingroxas 11 Posted January 4, 2012 i like this story its awsome 1:awsome the world is not going to end at 2012 2:where did you hear this 3:write more of this and make your own book about this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kirie 3,489 Posted January 4, 2012 wow!!! 2258 is like the future!!!! =o 2 The Transcendent Key and Kello reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rikunobodyxiii 700 Posted January 4, 2012 Hmm. The setting is interesting. This sounds cool. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Dehmon 12 Posted January 4, 2012 I'm reading it ^^ I'm curious about it Wait till i finish reading. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Dehmon 12 Posted January 5, 2012 I Loved it a lot. u should add more dramatic moments in the future of the future chapters Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Luna☆ 108 Posted January 5, 2012 I love the story it's great, can't wait for more! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shana09 5,769 Posted January 5, 2012 Love the story nice beginning but since this is chapter 1.... the characters should have been explained a little before maybe by dialogue or something else, makes it kind of interesting, this sounds like an summary from the back of the book http://kh13.com/forum/public/style_emoticons/default/happy.png but really amazing i don't hate it at all Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Lu Xun 2,069 Posted January 5, 2012 Thank you all ^^ I'll post more tomorrow Love the story nice beginning but since this is chapter 1.... the characters should have been explained a little before maybe by dialogue or something else, makes it kind of interesting, this sounds like an summary from the back of the book http://kh13.com/forum/public/style_emoticons/default/happy.png but really amazing i don't hate it at all Yeah, you're right. I should name this the Prologue or Something, but don't worry, the next chapter will be explaining a lot Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
VENROXAS 152 Posted January 5, 2012 A very interesting story so far, Please continue on Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shana09 5,769 Posted January 5, 2012 Thank you all ^^ I'll post more tomorrow Yeah, you're right. I should name this the Prologue or Something, but don't worry, the next chapter will be explaining a lot lol alright http://kh13.com/forum/public/style_emoticons/default/happy.png so your going to add this weekly or what? Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Lu Xun 2,069 Posted January 5, 2012 lol alright http://kh13.com/forum/public/style_emoticons/default/happy.png so your going to add this weekly or what? Nah, only when I feel like writing more and have good ideas on my mind =D Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shana09 5,769 Posted January 5, 2012 Nah, only when I feel like writing more and have good ideas on my mind =D lol alright good luck then Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
King Demise 2,359 Posted January 5, 2012 I gotta say this is pretty damn good, way to go and keep writing this is perfect! 2 Ruby Rose and Lu Xun reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
darkchaser 788 Posted January 5, 2012 not bad. I'll keep an eye out for this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
SparxofFlame 10 Posted January 5, 2012 Very nice, very nice. ....What, did you think there was a 'but' in that sentence? You make me laugh. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Leaxel 178 Posted January 5, 2012 Clicked Follow Topic right after I read the first sentence. Awesome first chapter! 1 Lu Xun reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
xxClouDxxmoon 901 Posted January 5, 2012 Seems pretty good so far, keep up the good work Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
deathnight55 26 Posted January 5, 2012 Great story. Do you write stories a lot? You did amazing. Following this now. 1 Lu Xun reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Master Keeper 687 Posted January 5, 2012 I liked the story, keep going my friend ^^ Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Col.Random 3,683 Posted January 5, 2012 great story, can't wait for the next chapter =D Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
