CodedbyDays 12 Posted November 22, 2009 ...when I was nine. Constructive criticism is welcomed, because I don't honestly care, and I had bad taste in poetry back then anyway! I got up one morning, Got up from my bed, Got up from my pillow, Lifted my head. Went downstairs, got a plate, Looked at my watch and saw I was late. Got on my bike, headed for school, The doors were locked, And that's not cool. 0_0 Now bask in the rays of epicness! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Deadshot 666 Posted November 22, 2009 it sounds like a day in life by the beatles and it is better than anything i can write Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Zexion 4 Posted November 23, 2009 It could go platinum! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
CodedbyDays 12 Posted November 23, 2009 It could go platinum! ZOMG inorite? 8D Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Zexion 4 Posted November 23, 2009 Totally, major talent!!! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
