Kirie 3,489 Posted December 28, 2011 awwwwww her father died!! :'(...sad ending,but good story Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
replika13 455 Posted December 28, 2011 niiiiceee!!! sad end of chapter though, but still, good work my friend ^^ Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Lu Xun 2,069 Posted December 28, 2011 awwwwww her father died!! :'(...sad ending,but good story The story isn't over yet. Actually, this is just the start! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Sora's Baby 729 Posted December 28, 2011 Awwwwwwwwwww. I know Naula feels my father died too. T T Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kirie 3,489 Posted December 28, 2011 The story isn't over yet. Actually, this is just the start! but its still a sad story 1 Lu Xun reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Luna☆ 108 Posted December 28, 2011 The part were Naula's father die was really sad but I still like it. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
dusk 910 Posted December 28, 2011 Good job mate! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Weedanort 8,786 Posted December 28, 2011 Death to spice things up, I like where things are going. Keep it up Lu Xun Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rikunobodyxiii 700 Posted December 28, 2011 Good, sad chapter. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Xlllroxas 4 Posted December 29, 2011 i love this story keep on with the good work lu xun Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Leaxel 178 Posted December 29, 2011 Good one! very sad. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Hunter Hawk 392 Posted December 30, 2011 Sad chapter... http://kh13.com/forum/public/style_emoticons/default/smiley-cry.png ... but like you said, it's just the begining. I bet it will be freaking awsome!!! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Lu Xun 2,069 Posted December 30, 2011 Thanks guys... I probably won't be posting chapters soon, but maybe I'll change my mind and decide to post... 1 SoraKH reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Seis7 7 Posted December 31, 2011 Wow, it was cool Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
SoraKH 793 Posted December 31, 2011 Thanks guys... I probably won't be posting chapters soon, but maybe I'll change my mind and decide to post... That was Awesome! Cool chapter.. I hope we see the lady of hell and her daughter again. I have a feeling that the old woman wandering around is the lady of hell! Lu Xun take your with writing new chapters time we know what you are going through... Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Indecypher 495 Posted January 7, 2013 How did you come up with the name Kira? The squirrel attack made me laugh I'm not sure if throwing an arrow would be as effective as shooting it or even if it would be a good idea to return the ammo someone fired at you with, but I'll chalk it up to suspension of disbelief. I honestly did not see Math's death coming, it seriously made me gasp. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
The Transcendent Key 12,109 Posted March 4, 2013 Wow, I have to say, you have got me hooked on these stories! You keep impressing me the more that I read! I've read six of your stories already, and I am just hooked! Job well done brother! I salute you! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
