dusk 910 Posted November 5, 2011 I wrote this in school and i got inspiration from song words: Here I lay in a crashed car No-one knows when I've left Here I lay, staring at stars But I know their just satellites first aid kit The first aid kit It's useless It's too late It offers no help I Heard the sound of the sirens Long gone in the distance a sweet sonnet And I have seen no guardian angels Well, I have my doubts if they even care Take me to the hospital Drive fast at cause I am bleeding Take me to the hospital Drive fast at cause I am bleeding Snow falls through the windshield I guess this time my fate is sealed Here I'll lay forever They all find me under the autumn leaves first aid kit The first aid kit It's useless It's too late It offers no help Take me to the hospital Drive fast at cause I am bleeding Take me to the hospital Drive fast at cause I am bleeding I am bleeding Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Lu Xun 2,069 Posted November 7, 2011 Great work You should try to write more some times Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
