SoraKH 793 Posted December 10, 2011 Chapter 7 November 25 From the time that man came to our castle he didnt say a word. He is sleeping and when he wakes up the only thing he says is: "ughhh" and "arghhh". I warned Ansem that i dont like him but he says that these things are nonsense and that he was just a hurt man. I feel that something bad is going to happen. Today i saw Braig enterning the room of the man. That was odd.... Why would Xigbar go there. I sneaked behind the door and i saw him talking with the man. Braig: Xeanort? Is that really you or you are just Terra? Man: Xeha-nort I knew that Xehanort meant trouble. I saw Ansem walking down the corridor. I ran to him and i told him what happened. Ansem opened the door and he just found the man lying. There was no sign of Braig. Ansem told me that i didnt have to bother him and he sent me to my room. I went there and sat for hours. I didn't know what to do. All i was thinking was the mystery man Xehanort. Suddenly i heard screaming coming from Xehanorts room. I quickly ran and opened the door. He was glowing and he was shouting: Aqua! Ven! I didnt know what he was talking about but Ven was a familliar name to me.. He was the boy that saved me. I saw Ansem coming so I decided to go back to my room. Ven.. What was hes connection with him..? 1 RoxasXSora reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Sora's Baby 729 Posted December 10, 2011 This story is cool. 1 SoraKH reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
SoraKH 793 Posted December 11, 2011 This story is cool. Thanks! This comment means a lot to me Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Hunter Hawk 392 Posted December 11, 2011 Wow, this is getting interesting by every minute!!! Keep going! 1 SoraKH reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
replika13 455 Posted December 11, 2011 nice ^^ so octomber 5th is his birthday, which i found funny cause octomber 6th is my birthday 1 SoraKH reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
SoraKH 793 Posted December 11, 2011 nice ^^ so octomber 5th is his birthday, which i found funny cause octomber 6th is my birthday Lol i just guessed ;p Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
replika13 455 Posted December 13, 2011 i know 1 SoraKH reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
SoraKH 793 Posted December 21, 2011 i know ^^ Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
SoraKH 793 Posted December 21, 2011 Chapter 8 December 2 Xehanort is getting better day with day. He can walk and he started talking. A week ago he started working as an apprentice at Ansem's lab. He shows a lot of intrest at the expieriments that Ansem is doing. Today while i was walking through the corridor i heard Ansem and Xehanort fighting. They had a serious discoussion. Ansem was eating a sea salt ice cream. In front of him there was a guy named Mickey. He was fighting with Xehanort. He wanted to proceedwith an expieriment but Ansem forbid it. Xehanort exit the room and he started swearing. At the afternoon Ansem cameto my room. He gave me a sea salt ice cream and we started walking down the corridor. I saw Xehanort talking with Braig. "You are not Terra... Right?" Ansem looked at him with a strangegaze. We continued walking as we were eating ice cream.... 2 RoxasXSora and newxo reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Sora's Baby 729 Posted December 21, 2011 Stare gaze woo! 1 SoraKH reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
KingdomFantasy69 2 Posted December 31, 2011 This is getting more interesting as I read, Keep up the great work. I am very interested in reading more. 2 RoxasXSora and SoraKH reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Seis7 7 Posted December 31, 2011 Will this continue?? I hope so. It's so good ^^ Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
SoraKH 793 Posted January 23, 2012 This is getting more interesting as I read, Keep up the great work. I am very interested in reading more. Will this continue?? I hope so. It's so good ^^ Thank you!! I just saw the comments I will post a chapter soon I'm glad you like it 1 RoxasXSora reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
coolwings 1,546 Posted January 23, 2012 Wow nice work Sorakingdomhearts.... This story is awesome..... I want to see next chapter 1 SoraKH reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
SoraKH 793 Posted August 8, 2012 (edited) Ok so there has been a reeeeallly long time since i uploaded any new chapter. So here you go New chapter, Final Chapter! Final Chapter December 10 http-~~-//www.youtube.com/watch?v=L9KFFk4IPh8 Today was weird... I woke up as usual in my room. The sun was shining bright and a new day was starting in Radiant Garden. But something felt wrong.... As Ansem would said... I can sense darkness... Never knew what he meant but i figured out that he feels it when something bad was going to happen. As i walked out of my room i heard a strange sound. It was coming from Ansems lab. I walked in looking around. No one was in sight. The noice was coming deeper in the room. I continued walking deeper in the lab and i ended up into the computer room. Vexen was on the floor. He was trying to say something but i could understand. A dark ash was coming inside of him. I started screaming for help. In the shadows i saw Xehanort. I screamed to him for help "Xehanort! Come help me please Vexen he-" I stopped talking. Something told me to run away, as fast as i could. As i turned away to run i felt something on my chest. I immediately freezed. The pain was awful. Xehanort had stabbed his keyblabe into my heart. Everything became blurry and dark. I got dizzy and i fell on the floor. My whole body freezed. I said my last words "HELP". Then i was comepletely paralazied. Braig came running into the room. When he saw Xehanort he started talking to him. I couldnt hear clearly. I started loosing my senses. Last thing i remember was Xehanort stabbing Braig. Then everything became black. His name was Ansem Now i look to my self... What have i become... Is any of this for real...or not? THE END.... Awwww, that must be so cute! Wow nice work Sorakingdomhearts.... This story is awesome..... I want to see next chapter Stare gaze woo! i know Updated Edited August 8, 2012 by SoraKH 2 RoxasXSora and Hunter Hawk reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
replika13 455 Posted August 9, 2012 OMG!!! so cool you updated it X3 i really like this one. Its much like scene in kh3d only from Ienzos view. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
SoraKH 793 Posted August 9, 2012 OMG!!! so cool you updated it X3 i really like this one. Its much like scene in kh3d only from Ienzos view. Thanks Bro 1 RoxasXSora reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
CloakedSchemerX 1,011 Posted August 16, 2012 Hey!!! So i have this awesom idea. I have this obbsesion of writing stories for organazation members. So i'm ready to present one...The life of Ienzo-Zexion from Birth to Death! Oh btw i'm starting this story cuz i'm almost done with One sky, One destiny...Last chapters coming soon Chapter 1 September 1st Okay so first i'm introducing my self in this book, diary or whatever it is! I'm Ienzo.... Master Ansem gave it to me and told me to write in it. I dont talk a lot so i rather write my feelings. Well they say i was born with a strong heart...Heart...what's a heart anyway..Can someone live without it? Ansem says that the heart is a very special machine..A machine that can give you life..And once it stops working..BOOM! You are died. So i guess i'm lucky i have a strong heart right? Yeah whatever... Today i helped Aeleus with guarding the castle. It is a boring work tho. But that is what i think... I'm like what 10! I have a lot of fun with all the guards. Around two a clock at the afternoon Master Ansem called me for a lesson. Our subject was "The heart". Ansem started talking: "The heart is a myogenic muscoular organ found in all bodies with a circulatory system , that is responsible for pumping blood throughout the blood vessels by repeated, rhythmic contractions." I stared at him for a while...I was like "What the heck?" "Um heart also gives us feelings...right?" I asked. The Master chuckled and explained that feelings come from the brain...But i dissagreed. He told me to write down that the heart is a myogenic organ found in all bodies and blah blah blah. He also gave me a book. He knew that i hate books. It was about the heart..Around five a clock i ran with my book in my hands at the castle doors and me,Dylan,Aeleus sat and we watched the sunset. Braig never had time for us. He was in our gang but he was the older one and he had his own buissines. Dylan asked me what was the book i was holding. I gave it to him... I didn't answer or somehing. I was called as the quite one and i hade the nickname Quitie. When the sun got lost behind the mountains i said goodbye and i ran to my room. I had to sleep. I sat on my bed. "Really? Is heart only an organ? Isn't it something more than that?" This question kept messing with my head...heart is more than an organ...? Hope you like it!!!!! oh my FIRETRUCKING god this is great! As a true Ienzo/Zexion fanboy....will we see Zexion's life as we did Ienzo's? I would love to hear your story about him too. Also, as such a fan of Kingdom Hearts and specifically these two characters, I likely, would have done this, but quite frankly, it would not come out as great as this did! I applaud, and demand a Zexion sequel..! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Sora's Baby 729 Posted August 16, 2012 Aw~ Good story. 1 RoxasXSora reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Shera Wizard 2,736 Posted January 21, 2013 "Me: So...um..Wikiboom? No..no... dictancom? Hmm dictionary in the ancient Greek was Lexiko and Greek is the most ancient language, that means more history..So umm com lexico..LEXICOM!!!" I LOVED THIS PART I'll read more after I get back Great work! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites