Video Teach Me Your Wisedom! What can I fix?

[DaedalusO0o 0]

I really want to get better at making videos. This is my third one but I really want to know what I can fix? I aleady fixed full screen and text at the bottom so thats good now Thanks guys I appreciate your help

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pkgHpxUgHVc&feature=channel_video_title

[AwersomeOne 109]

i liked it except for that one axel part (it was like complete silence for quite a long time )

[deathnight55 26]

That wasn't bad. It wasn't great but it was good.

[DaedalusO0o 0]

That wasn't bad. It wasn't great but it was good.

 

at least it was good

What else can I do to fix it tho?

[deathnight55 26]

at least it was good

What else can I do to fix it tho?

 

Don't have demyx say dance in slow motion at the end of dance water dance. I didn't really like that. Also I like most things and don't like to dislike things. I think you did pretty good.

[DaedalusO0o 0]

Don't have demyx say dance in slow motion at the end of dance water dance. I didn't really like that. Also I like most things and don't like to dislike things. I think you did pretty good.

 

Lol I'm the same thanks for the advice tho i appreciate it

[deathnight55 26]

Lol I'm the same thanks for the advice tho i appreciate it

 

P.S. You could make it a little longer too.

[DaedalusO0o 0]

P.S. You could make it a little longer too.

 

hahahahaha yaa I'm lazy sometimes

[deathnight55 26]

hahahahaha yaa I'm lazy sometimes

 

Me too. Don't feel bad. Ya gatta do what you gotta do.

[Obi-wan 411]

Not bad some of the slow things bug me