Text Lu Xun's stories : A Frightful Prevision

[Luna☆ 108]

I Love this story, it just keep getting more exciting to read every time and I need more please.

[rikunobodyxiii 700]

Dang it, I fell behind. It's always cool to hear about a battle from different sides.

[Lu Xun 2,069]

Thanks, guys! I hope you're ready for more parts, because tomorrow two more might be posted!

 

Not too much until the end, though.

 

If you want to post your theories about the end, feel free to do it

[Hunter Hawk 392]

This is getting better and better!

[Sora's Baby 729]

I can't wait to read more.

[replika13 455]

GOOOOD!!!

keep going! Your getting really good and good and good all the time!

[3636yousef 20]

Just as I expected! Well done!!!

[Lu Xun 2,069]

Thanks guys, here is a small update

 

May 20th

 

Drak

 

Hello again. How have you guys been? I haven’t been fine. Actually, I’m not the one who is writing this now. I can’t even write until I get better... which is very unlikely to happen... But I can’t die... Not yet... Until the end of this month...

 

Everyday, when I wake up, I feel like my body is slowly dying, and then, I pray to God, saying “Just a bit more, please”. So far, it seems to be working. I can’t lose hope... If I die, everything I’ve been creating so far will be destroyed in a single blow... I just can’t let that happen...

 

We have just come to far to lose! This person who is writing for me, is the second on command. His name is Thinog. If something were to happen to me, he would be the one to command everything... He’s been with me since I first built my religion.

 

So far, it seems like the enemy is not going to attack us until the end of the month, when, probably, the final and decisive battle will take place. Losing is not an option. Even sick, I will -- at least command -- our troops.

 

There’s a general in the enemy that I particularly dislike the most. His name is Tligh. If I could, I’d myself kill him. He is one of the few who isn’t even a bit convinced by my prevision...

 

Now, I’m afraid I need to go. I need to sleep the whole day. I know everyone dies, but my time can’t be now... Just two weeks more... Please....

[Obi-wan 411]

Short but so emotional keep going

[Hunter Hawk 392]

Poor Drake... I really fell sorry for him. But great story!!!

[3636yousef 20]

Short but so emotional keep going

 

I agree with you!

 

Short,bigger. but it still great for me!!

[Lu Xun 2,069]

I've just added three questions to this thread. Please answer, so I'll know if you enjoy or doesn't enjoy the story

[SoraKH 793]

Good job

[Kirie 3,489]

 

I agree with you!

 

Short,bigger. but it still great for me!!

 

agree as well

[Lu Xun 2,069]

Thanks ;DD Just for you guys, a new update

 

May 23th

 

Tligh

 

Hello. I haven’t written for some days now... But, never mind. Have you all been fine? Because I have. We haven’t attacked the enemy since the last battle. We are preparing ourselves for the Final Battle.

 

There is no chance of losing for us. We’ll go with thousands of men, and with a variety of weapons.... Haha! And, I’ve heard that Drak’s situation just gets worse and worse. Without his help, his followers will surely lose... Ah! It couldn’t have a better end.

 

I, myself, will go and attack Drak himself. I want to take him out of the stage! Hahaha! It won’t be hard, I’m sure. I have been training to be a soldier! Although I’m a general, I’m more the strategist type. Now, I can really fight!

 

While I stand, I swear that no rebellion will be big enough to take over the world! We have to destroy it by killing the leader, it’s the only way. I’ll be known as a hero if I accomplish that!

 

We will attack them in four days, just right before the day of the prevision. It won’t be so hard to defeat him. May Heavens bless us! We are the right side! Justice is with us! No one can stop us from putting an end to this madness!!

 

I need to go, and plan more attack strategies. Sorry, but I have to go. See ya. Not sure if I’ll write before the Final Battle, though. Take care!

[rikunobodyxiii 700]

Both sides believe they're right, neither one willing to back down. The end won't be pretty, though it's going to be really cool.

[Leaxel 178]

Both sides believe they're right, neither one willing to back down. The end won't be pretty, though it's going to be really cool.

 

Exactly what I am thinking.

It's going to be awesome, dramatic and sad.

[KHlover8 24]

it's getting better, write more!

[Lu Xun 2,069]

Thanks!

 

Ready for the Final Battle?

 

Pay attention, because the following parts won't be written like diary.

 

I'll write the battle like a normal story!

[Sora's Baby 729]

 

Exactly what I am thinking.

It's going to be awesome, dramatic and sad.

 

I agree.

[Lu Xun 2,069]

A Frightful Prevision

 

Prologue For

The Final Battle,

 

May, 28^th 1:00pm

 

It was a calm afternoon. But this state would not be the same for much longer. The greater battle of the history of the Humanity was about to begin. It was going to take place in Drak's country, and it may also get outside of it. No one could tell which side would win. The entire humanity was participating in this battle. In number, both sides were equal. But in the end, only one would continue to stand alive.

 

The reason of the battle was the difference of ideals. While one side was defending that everything the Humanity had been doing was wrong, and their leader, named Drak, had make a prevision, which was called by most “A Frightful Prevision”, informed that if things did not change, the planet would meet a transformation in the end of this month. The other side did not believe in anything that Drak said, and stood to defeat him and his followers.

 

But this last side had a great advantage; the leader of the other side was very sick, and no one could tell if he would last until the end of the Battle or not. The enemy was praying for his death, because if he died, his followers would probably lose quicker and easier.

 

Now, the members of the side, which was against Drak, had begun to appear. They were heading to the Sacred and Pure land, a place where Drak and his followers called “Home”. Drak's enemy did not have a leader, rather it was split in Generals. These Generals were the Main Politcs, who refused to join Drak in his new Religion.

 

There were four Generals, and their names were:

 

-Tligh

-Omeyn

-Zarcy

-Das

 

Each one of them was going to come from different directions. They had 2,000 soldiers with each one of them. Besides them, there were still many people who did not have a leader, but could attack as they want. Attack, defend, or give up.

 

In the other side, Drak had put his trust in his best General, whose name was Thinog. This man was responsible for protecting Drak, and he had let the responsibility of the attack with three people, his best friends. Each one of them was going to have 3,250 soldiers to accompany them. Their names were:

 

-Papphy

-Eirwd

-Poeh

 

There were also the people in this side, who did not have anyone to lead them. They could do anything they want, but Drak had asked them to protect the palace, and ensure that no one arrives to his chamber.

 

The stage for the battle was set. Who would win? Who would end up losing? Find out in the next parts of this great and historical conflict.

 

 

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Feel free to share your thoughts below

 

 

And I hope you're looking forward to see the end of the Final Battle.

[Sora's Baby 729]

I cant wait 4 more!!!!

[Obi-wan 411]

Nice so you know what to do

[Luna☆ 108]

I loved this story is really amazing and can't wait for more.

[Leaxel 178]

This battle is going to be pure chaos. Many will die... and the battle's outcome can change humanity completely.