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Text Lu Xun's stories : A Frightful Prevision

By Lu Xun, in Creative Media

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  1. 1. Are you enjoying this story so far?

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  2. 2. We're near the end, so between 5 and 10, which number would you choose to give to the story?

  3. 3. Do you like this style of story? (I mean, two characters writing a diary)

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    • Doesn't matter. I love everything you write <3
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Lu Xun    2,069

Lu Xun
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There you go, the new part!

 

May 10th

 

Tligh

 

Hello. It’s been a while. I’m afraid I’m not happy today. Why? Because we failed in our attempt of destroying Drak and his country. But it was so close... And there surely was something strange with him... I wonder if he has some kind of illness?

 

Well, I think you might know what happened, and so I’ll tell you. Pay attention to the next paragraphs.

 

First, as I have already told you in my last report, we were going to attack Drak on May 5th, but we had to reschedule it to the following day. So, we went there, with our forces, ready to attack any and everyone they could find there.

 

But, there were no soldiers in the borders. So, we continued to advance, and arrived in a city, very near the palace -- where again, there was not even one soldier. Even though that it was telling us that a trap was very near, we continued to proceed.

 

Then, we arrived in a place near the palace. As there are some woods surrounding it, we decided to send one of the soldiers, just to analyze the area. A few minutes after he went there, we heard a noise -- which looked like a shoot from cannon.

 

So, we went to see what had happened. There were, like 1,000 of us there. But, when we arrived and saw the body of the one who had gone before, we found out we had just fell into a carefully planned trap. From the east, there were ten or twelve cannons, ready to shoot at us. From the west, archers -- like 200 or 300 -- ready to wound us with their arrows. To the north, there was Drak, with 400 ot 500 soldiers -- which were only carrying normal soldiers, but seemed to be more trained than the archers.

 

First, our general said that we should not fear, and that we should attack, but only focusing on killing the leader. From the 1,000 of us, 500 followed his advice, and end up dying -- and only killing a very small amount of the enemies.

 

Drak then said some weird words -- which appeared to be orders for his troops. Moments after, they began to shoot at us -- and we had to flee. From the 500 of us that had remained, 250 were killed in this part. Luckily, I managed to get out from there without a scratch. But when I heard Drak speaking -- I noticed his voice was weird... He seemed to be very sick.

So, as planned, we tried to attack the Common Houses -- but Drak had already thought of that possibility too. Outside of the Houses, there were a lot of fire -- we couldn’t advance, unless we wanted to get burned up. There was nothing else we could do -- so we decided to return home -- with the only 250 of 1000 who had gone there.

 

That’s exactly what happened. I’m still thinking about Drak’s healthy -- if he were to die -- then it’d make everything easier for us.

 

I’m sorry -- it’s getting late. It was fun to tell everything about the battle. Hope you’ve enjoyed. I need to sleep. See ya.

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Lu Xun    2,069

Lu Xun
Posted

Thanks again :)

 

May 12th

 

Drak

 

Hello. I’m happy to be able to write here again... For a second back there, I think I would never be able to... So, how have you been in these days? I’m not doing fine. This illness is just getting worse... I’m beginning to be afraid of what can possibly happen if my days in this planet are to meet their end...

 

So, I think you are interested in knowing what happened in these past few days... Remember when I wrote I’d call the soldier in the day after the one I had written? So, I was right. In the next day, we were attacked by the politics. I wonder what would have happened with us if I didn’t do that... Well, I must not think of What could have happened, but what Actually happened.

 

Me and some strategists had carefully planned a defense strategy, just in case the enemy decided to show up. We had installed a thousand of hidden cameras around the borders of our country...

 

The person who is responsible for staying all day watching if any enemy is coming, quickly went to my room in the palace, and told me that the enemy, which was in number, around 1,000, had just invaded our country.

 

It was the right time to put into practice the defense strategy I had planned some days ago. It included a cannon unit, an archer unit, and some soldiers. As the palace is surrounded by woods, I knew that they would just sent one to see if the area was clear or not. And I was right. We killed him with one of our cannons.

 

Obviously, the rest quickly went to us -- to see what had happened with their comrade. One of the main generals, was very stupid. He ordered the soldiers to attack us -- despite the fact that we had a cannon unit, an archer unit -- ready to shoot until the last one of them had finally closed its eyes permanently.

 

So, we killed the 500 who obeyed his command. The remaining soldiers were smarter -- they decided to flee. But even then, we managed to kill half of them. After running away, they went to the Common Houses -- but we had already planned something for there as well.

 

We carefully put flames around it -- but these flames did not enter inside the buildings. As soon as they saw it, they left running once again.

 

That’s the only good news I have for you. My condition is just getting worse and worse... I need to rest now... I actually shouldn’t be writing... See you guys soon!

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