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Text Lu Xun's stories : A Frightful Prevision

By Lu Xun, in Creative Media

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  1. 1. Are you enjoying this story so far?

    • Yes, I love it!
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    • Yes, it's ok.
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  2. 2. We're near the end, so between 5 and 10, which number would you choose to give to the story?

  3. 3. Do you like this style of story? (I mean, two characters writing a diary)

    • Yeah, it's cool to watch them "fighting" forth and back.
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    • Yes, I like.
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    • It's ok.
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    • No, I'd like if it were like most of stories are.
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    • Doesn't matter. I love everything you write <3
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Zexion's_Lover_46    76

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OMGoth! The whole story was wonderful and great! :D But the ending was such a moving piece of work! Zarcy and Omeyn's love was so moving and binding! :') And the music effects were a nice touch. I loved the whole story it was so moving. You should try and get this publish. Oh, and now that you have fans, COULD I BE YOUR NUMBER 1 FAN?!?!? :D I loved the story it was great...well great would be an understatment xD. It was very beauitful and touching. You're a great writer. :)

 

Also, in this part:

However -- I created a place where people who follow my prevision and believe in it can be safe, and together -- it is called “House of the Believers”. I know it is not a very good name, but that was what I managed to come up with in these hard times I’m facing now.

 

^ I think it's a good name for the house. :3

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Lu Xun    2,069

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Final Battle

Part 3

 

Now, that both Generals had been killed, the numbers of Generals still left alive was once again, the same. There were two helping Drak; Phappy and Eirwd, and these two against him; Das and Tligh. It appeared to be a miracle, because no one could have foreseen that Drak would be alive until this part. His condition before the war was really terrible.

 

Das and Eirwd were already battling for some time now, and their troops were reduced to a very small number. Their hatred would not allow neither of them to back down and retreat. This was the only chance they had to prove that one was better than the other. And, surely, neither would just waste it.

 

“Ready to die, ugly?,” Eirwd said.

“Only if you’re willing to go to the hell with me!”, she replied.

 

One of Das’ soldiers was able to tell her brother, Tligh, that she was in a very dangerous situation. He began to hurry to save his sister.

 

Meanwhile, Thinog, Drak’s Main General, had entered in his master room, and began to have a conversation with him.

 

“Master, do you believe we can win?”, he asked.

“Yes, my pupil. But only fate can tell for sure....”, he replied.

“If you die, then I’ll take command, right?,” Thinog asked.

“Yes, I’ve already named you as my successor a long time ago.” he replied.

“Ok. I’m going to keep patrolling the palace.”

 

Some time later, he found Phappy, his best friend. Phappy was too happy for a person who was in a war, and there was something very suspicious happening between them. No one could tell what Drak’s true destiny really was.

 

Tligh finally managed to arrive in the location of his sister. But she asked him not to interfere -- that battle was hers, and hers alone. If she were to win, she would win alone.

 

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“But, sis....” he said.

“Be quiet! I want to take this idiot by myself. I won’t need your help. Don’t worry!,” she replied.

“Oh, the big bro has come to save the little girl? How delightful. Maybe I can put an end to your entire family after finishing the weakest, you!,” Eirwd said.

“Don’t put your big noise in where you ARE NOT called,” she replied.

“Oh, I’m sorry if you’ve got your little feelings hurt. Oh yes -- I forgot -- Ugly creatures actually DO NOT have feelings, right?,” he said.

“I don’t want to hear any other words from your mouth. Let’s fight until one of us is killed,” she replied.

“Okay... You want one-on-one? So tell your big bro not to do any tricks to help you... Make him swear!”, he said.

“Bro, please... Swear you’re not going to interfere in our battle”, she said.

“Ok, I promise... But be careful!”, he replied.

 

And so, Tligh walked to get some distance from the fighters, and watch it from a safe point. A battle for supremacy between the two of them had just started. No one knew how many minutes, or even hours, would that battle last. Only one thing was sure; no one was willing to give up and let the other take the upper hand.

 

Meanwhile, a soldier heard part of the conversation between Thinog and Phappy.

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“Isn’t it the right time already? That old man needs to say goodbye to this world soon...”, Phappy said.

“Not yet... We need to wait a bit more... Until he is completely alone... There is still some soldiers around the palace.” Thinog replied.

“But, is it going to be tonight?,” Phappy asked.

“Yes, that’s for sure. That man’s life ends today. Even with soldiers -- I’ll not retreat. If we succeed, fame, fortune and everything will be ours... Drak... He is such a fool to believe so much on me...” Thinog replied.

“Hahahahahahaa! And we were so smart to formulate this plan... Once the old man goes to the other dimension, you will be the leader, and I... will be the Main General!”, Phappy said.

“Yes... With Poeh dead, and Eirwd fighting to the death with Das, we will not have much to worry about... And, once we are in charge, we will end this war... Drak’s Religion will be completely destroyed... and erased from history! No one will remember that he has ever existed! Hahaahaha! Our ambition will become reality, my friend. It’s just a matter of time!”, Thinog replied.

 

The soldier was not sure of what he should do, and so he invaded Drak’s room. He told everything to him, but much to his surprise, Drak just replied “Thank you. I need to be alone for some time. What’s your name?”. And the soldier said his name. It was Sutr. “Very well Sutr. I need to rest... My life ends tonight...”. “But sir, aren’t you going to do anything?”, the soldier asked. “You will see. Farewell, and thank you.”, Drak said.

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Lu Xun    2,069

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Final Battle

Part 4

 

 

Drak ordered a soldier to go and tell Eirwd that he wanted to him to come to the palace as quick as possible. While he did not arrive, Drak stood writing two letters. The first one should be sent to the enemy, once the battle was over, and the second, should be kept by Eirwd until he thought it was the right time to read it.

 

Eirwd was fighting Das when the soldier came. Eirwd said “Sorry, ugly, but I need to go.”, and left the battlefield with his 250 soldiers. Das stood furious, but Tligh instructed her not to go after him. He thought that maybe it could be a trap.

 

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When he arrived, Drak told him everything.

 

“Hello, my dear friend.”, Drak said.

“What do you want, master? Why did you want me to come here so quickly?,” he said.

“We have been fooled by Thinog and Phappy. They are planning on killing me, and ending my religion.” Drak said.

“But... Are they crazy? We’ve fought so hard to get here... and they want to ruin everything? I will kill them! You just need to say the word, master!” he said.

“No... You won’t do that... at least not now... I have formulated a plan.. and I would appreciate if you could hear, and tell me your opinion about it” Drak said.

“Ok, I’ll hear it all”, Eirwd said.

 

After an hour of conversation, Eirwd finally agreed on following Drak’s plan. It all seemed very sad and bad for him, but Drak managed to make him notice that it was the only way. Drak also gave him the two letters.

 

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At the night, when Thinog and Phappy came to kill Drak, they had a great surprise. Drak was dead. He had been killed by someone. His room was without any lights, and so Eirwd turned the lights on. He was with a strange smile, and he seemed to be acting strangely. He was also carrying a knife, which had some blood in it.

 

“What is wrong, guys?” Eirwd said.

“You... killed Drak?” Thinog asked.

“Yes, and I’d like to know if you two want to join forces with me. I want to put an end to this battle.” Eirwd said.

“Of course. We wanted that as well!” Phappy said.

“I think we can do that.” Thinog said. He wanted to pretend he did not want that, but rather that he was being forced to accept.

“That’s great. We need to go to the first floor, and there plan how we will simply say -We give up” Eirwd said.

“Yes, you are absolutely correct!” Phappy said.

“That seems a good idea for me.” Thinog said.

 

But that was all a trap planned by Drak. Even though he was dead now, he would still interfere in the lives of many people.

 

The first floor of the palace was just like Drak’s room -- without any lights. Thinog and Phappy were the first ones to arrive in there, while Eirwd stood watching everything from the second floor.

 

“Eirwd? Where are you?” Thinog asked.

“Yes, where are you man?” Phappy asked.

“I am here.” Eirwd replied from the second floor.

“Where? Your voice seems to be so far away...” Thinog replied.

“Is this a joke or what?” Phappy asked.

“For you, it may well be.” Eirwd replied.

“Aren’t we going to plan how to give up?” Thinog asked.

 

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“Hahahahahaha! It’s just too funny to watch!” Eirwd replied.

“To watch what? Are you feeling well?” Phappy asked.

“It’s so cool. It’s just as Drak said. I wonder if he had already foreseen this.” Eirwd said.

“What? I will get you Eirwd!” Thinog said.

“Not so fast, my dear.” Eirwd replied.

 

And, much to both Phappy and Thinog’s surpise, 250 soldiers came out and attacked them. They used some arrows, which were with fire, and some other soldiers tied them.

 

Eirwd finally went to the first floor, and turned the lights on. He looked at the two Generals, and began to laugh. He was also very happy, because he managed to do exactly what his master ordered him to, just before dying.

 

Now, he decided to have a small conversation with the prisoners, before killing them, and making Drak’s wishes turn into reality.

 

“Why did you two rebel against our master?” Eirwd asked.

“He was just a fool... I never really liked him... And you’re the biggest idiot if you really liked him..” Phappy replied.

“Kill this one. I want his mouth to be closed permanently.” Eirwd ordered.

 

And so Phappy was killed. Eirwd simply could not stand that monster. He seemed to not have a heart, nor feelings. He only cared about himself. Only Thinog remained.

 

“And you?” Eirwd asked.

“I.... I was convinced by Phappy... He told me about his plans to kill Drak... and forced me to cooperate with him.” Thinog said.

“You are lying. Drak told me a lot about you. You are the falsest person I have ever met.” Eirwd said.

“I’m sorry... I did not want to... but I did not have a choice.....” Thinog lied again.

“Stop lying. Drak told me you were the one who was going to kill him in the first place.” Eirwd said.

“Yes... I wanted to get money, fame, and a big place in history. But I’ve lost everything... You can kill me now.” Thinog said. It was the first time he said the truth.

“You are wrong. You will get a place in history... You are the traitor... the one who tried to ruin Drak’s religion, but failed.” Eirwd said.

“And you will get the place of the coward, who was not even able to fight the traitors by himself alone...” Thinog said.

“Maybe. Who knows? I only know one thing. Your fate is death. Kill him with no mercy.” Eirwd said.

“Noo... we can do great things together -- In the middle of his false speech, he was killed.

 

Then, the soldiers began to wonder what they would do now. Drak had already planned that with Eirwd a while ago.

 

“We are going to give up. But with a condition. That our Religion keeps existing.” Eirwd said.

 

The soldiers were happy. Suddenly, an earthquake began, in a place near the palace, and Eirwd ordered everyone to abandon it and go to the nearest city.

 

 

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Hope you've enjoyed it so far :) There's just a bit more! Stay tuned!

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