Text Lu Xun's stories : A Frightful Prevision

[MarluXia777 170]

This story is so great :D :D :D :ph34r:

[rikunobodyxiii 700]

Hmm, the plot thickens. How shall it end? No one knows...well, Lu Xun knows, but that...ah heck with it. Good work.

[PersianRose13 14]

THIS STORY IS SO WONDERFUL, THAT I AM AT A LOSS OF WORDS...

[Weedanort 8,786]

Yup, we have a very good story here, keep going.

[3636yousef 20]

Nice story! This the best story I have read it in my life!

 

Keep up the good work!

[SoraKH 793]

Cool keep it up!

[Lu Xun 2,069]

Thanks guys! Hope you enjoy this new part

 

April 30th

 

Hello guys. How have you been? It’s been just nine days, but it seemed like forever, didn’t it? I’ve been doing great. We got more followers. The world is almost split into 50% of people, who help us, and 50%, who are against us. But, as destiny may tell, it will soon convert to 99% people aiding us. No need to worry about anything. I’m just so calm. I’m sure that we will win!

 

The politics still have a good resistance... But that’ll soon be over. With God’s help, there’s no one that can withstand us! Wahahaha! I’ll be the hero. After the end of May, you all will see that.

 

With more people, we need more supplies, so we are spending a lot of money to get it. How do we get money, you ask? Well... everyone who follows us are forced to give their money in order to make our Religion better to everyone -- and so we built a lot of common houses -- in where they can all live together, sharing their ideas and living like a real community.

 

They’re all equals there -- no one has more or less money than the others. This is the perfect society. We follow the communism, which bases itself on people being equal, without any difference. Also, everything that’s property of a person, it’s of every one's as well. People are accepting that quiet well.

 

I’m so happy for that. Finally, the differences are slowly fading away, and everyone will have the same rights, and no one will ever have to suffer humiliation from others because of their economic situation!

 

Now, I’m afraid I need to go. Bye, see you soon. Don’t forget, you shouldn’t treat other people bad because of their money. We’re all humans. Just... Please don’t forget, and have an awesome week!

[rikunobodyxiii 700]

Uh oh. I'm sensing a bubble busting moment a-comin'.

Good work.

[Sora's Baby 729]

So good.

[MarluXia777 170]

The last part of this is gonna be so good

[Obi-wan 411]

Keep going

[echo 69]

in love with this story cant wait for more

[The Transcendent Key 12,109]

Lu-Xun, once again, your talents as a storyteller have boggled my mind. Brother, you truly have an amazing gift. You have the potential of being a best-selling author. Wow, man, just wow! I can't wait for the next chapter, the story has me on the edge of my seat!!!! Anyways, that was my logical side thinking, my crazy side says: " Oh snap, holy mother of f'ing awesomeness, make more!!! More!!!!".

[Hunter Hawk 392]

Wow, that last chapter really kicks my mind out! Your stories are very well writen and I really enjoy by reading it! Good job, bro!

[Lu Xun 2,069]

Thanks for the comments, guys! That’s what makes me write as best as I can ~~

 

Now, I’ll change this part to another person, the one who started with.

 

However, you still don’t know what his name is, right? Then here you go.

Tligh

 

You’ll have to pay attention, because I’ll be changing the person who writes sometimes! So, read the name of who’s writing the report!

 

Now, to the story!!!

 

April 29th

 

Hello. It’s been a while. That idiot Drak... We need to kill him as soon as possible! The prevision is coming up! Time’s ending... And I just get more and more frightened... But we must not give in. We will fight until the last day of our lives!

 

Our next attack is planned to be on May 5th, and then, if we fail, we’ll make small attacks twice a week until we can finally kill their leader! I will go myself, in one of these battles. I haven’t fought for some time, but I know I’m strong enough to kill that lunatic!

 

He says he talks to God! He must be crazy! No ordinary human can be capable of talking to Him... He just lies all the time, and I must put an end to his madness! Let me tell you more about our plans.

 

Our main plan is divided into some parts. I’ll explain them in small topics to you :

 

*We will attack them on May 5th, and try to sneak in the palace, and with luck, kill Drak.

 

However, as there is always the chance of failure, we already thought of what we will do it if fails.

 

*We will attack the Common Houses -- some buildings created by Drak, where most of his followers are living -- and then kidnap as many as we can, and use them to make Drak come to us -- and then, we’ll end him once and for all.

 

That’s our plan so far. Until May 4th, we will think of something else. There are still a lot of places that we need to fill with strategies! But, I’m sure that we’ll save our society from the madness of Drak and his followers!

 

Nowadays, the world is divided into 60% of people who are still with us, and 40%, who have put their trust in Drak. But, I’m afraid that if we don’t do anything quickly -- this number will turn into equals (50% for each).

 

Ah, it’s getting late. Almost midnight. I’m sorry, but this is all for today. I’ll help our strategists tomorrow. My goal is to formulate a plan, which will be responsible for Drak’s defeat, but that will take me a lot of time. So, see ya! Bye! I’ll report back soon!

[Junko 2,815]

awesome job!!! keep that creative mind working!

[Kirie 3,489]

he want to kill a leader =0 intresting, and making plans of how to kill him ,nice stroy Lu Xun! keep up the story!! i want to see the bloddy war!!! lol jkjk

[rikunobodyxiii 700]

Ah, I was wondering what the original character was. Cool. The back and forth between the two should be really good.

[Sora's Baby 729]

No poor Dark.

[3636yousef 20]

I like this kind of story!

 

write more, I want to know what will happen to the leader!!!

[KHlover8 24]

cant wait for more!!

[Lu Xun 2,069]

Thanks for the comments, guys

Drak

 

May 4th

It’s been just a few days since I last wrote here. It seems like I’m really enjoying it. In these days, I have been fine. There was no sign of attack from the enemy -- but that’s what worries me the most.

 

If they keep so quiet as they have been until now... Then, I’m guessing they’ll do a full-scale attack... And I’m afraid we may not be ready for that... not yet... I can feel that something really bad is about to transpire... But I hope I’m wrong... We can’t lose... We are the followers of God!

 

Yes, we shall not lose! Our great protector will be always there to give support to us! We can’t lose hope! But, anyway, tomorrow, at the evening, I’ll ask my soldiers to stay in defense positions...

 

In these days, I haven’t had any dreams with God... It’s strange... It’s as if my connection with him has just disappeared... But, I’m ready for any and everything! I’m not afraid of anyone! I shall guide my people until my very last day on this Earth!

Oh, at this very moment, I am not feeling well... I’m coughing... What does this man? Is my last day approaching? I can’t die now... not yet... Not until my ambition is realized!

 

I must stop writing... I’m having a headache... I might be getting sick... I’ll write soon. See you all later, and hope you all stay fine!

[Obi-wan 411]

Keep going

[rikunobodyxiii 700]

Hmm, Drak's death or disablement due to illness could have interesting repercussions on his followers. Possibly dissolving the movement or whipping them into a frenzy. I'm interested to see how this turns out.

[Sora's Baby 729]

So sad.