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Text Lu Xun's stories : A Frightful Prevision

By Lu Xun, in Creative Media

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  1. 1. Are you enjoying this story so far?

    • Yes, I love it!
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    • Yes, it's ok.
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  2. 2. We're near the end, so between 5 and 10, which number would you choose to give to the story?

  3. 3. Do you like this style of story? (I mean, two characters writing a diary)

    • Yeah, it's cool to watch them "fighting" forth and back.
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    • Yes, I like.
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    • It's ok.
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    • No, I'd like if it were like most of stories are.
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    • Doesn't matter. I love everything you write <3
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Lu Xun    2,069

Lu Xun
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Awesome

 

Thank you! Hope you enjoy the next parts as well!

 

 

Good job with it keep going!!!

 

Thank you! Once a new part is up, I'll tell you :)

 

 

I like it. It sounds like Drak is talking to the reader. Well done.

 

Yeah, that was my intention haha. Thank you, Riku :)

 

love the story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :D

 

Thank you, ami <3 You're so handy haha :)

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Lu Xun    2,069

Lu Xun
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Thanks guys, for the comments :) There you go more!

 

I’ve decided not to tell more about it for you guys, at least not now, let’s leave it for later. So, as I was speaking, I got more and more fascinated with Religion, and decided to make it a big part of my life. I’ll just explain one of the many principles that my Religion follows.

 

One of the main principles of my Olthism, is that everyone who follows it has to believe in a transcendent, something way bigger than us... And, in the book I made, which name is Yukli, I’ve described how this “Transcendent” is, at least in my way of seeing. I will more about it in the following paragraphs.

 

Just by thinking in the word “Transcendent”, you can think about something that is better, or at least, more important that us. And that’s right, according to the dictionary. But, what if the Transcendent IS someone or something bigger than us, but not necessarily considers himself/itself that? What if he sees us as his sons and daughters, and not pawns he can just play with?

 

To that question, my answer is : Yes, in my way of thinking, he does not see us as things he has to play, but as his creation, something he created, and admire, with some exceptions, like these who destroy nature, bring more pollution to this world, and all of that stuff. So, according to that, I wrote a principle, and it is the 1st one that is written in my book.

 

“You may believe in a God, a transcendent, but you do not have to think that you’re nothing compared to him, because we’re his sons and daughters. So, which dad would consider himself way better than his sons? No one. Fathers only expect their sons and daughters to be better and better. They have expectations for them.” This was written by me, but in the book, it’s written in a better and simpler way. But, my point is, we need to live up to his expectations, because if not, why were we created? Just to destroy nature and make technology? No. We have to aim in something greater, that at the same time, is good for everyone, is good for the Earth, our beloved planet.

 

If you’re atheist or something like that, sorry for that part. You won’t hear more about it for some time now. So, now you know a lot about me, and I think it’s time to begin to talk about the Present. I’ll organize this diary according to the Dates that something incredibly important happened.

 

Unknown Date

 

I’m sorry for the Date, but it’s just that I can’t remember this. Actually, I am not even sure if this really happened or not, but it’s so important for me, that I think I need to share it with you. I had a dream -- well not sure if it was a dream or a vision, but anyway -- and, in it, I had a conversation with someone. The screen was entirely black, and then I began to ask some questions.

 

“Who are you?”, I asked. “I’m the one who created everything.”, the creature replied. “Created... everything?”, I asked one more question, feeling strange inside, like I already knew this creature. “Yes, the Earth, the world.. Even the humankind.”, he replied. “So... You are the Transcendent ?”, I asked. “Some call me that, some call me God, and some people don’t even believe I exist...”, he replied. “But I don’t understand... Why are you talking to me?”, I asked. “Because you were the one courageous enough to create new theories about me, and everything else in this world... You also instructed people to believe me, and see, your Religion keeps getting more and more followers.”, he replied. “Okay... Thanks for the compliments, but surely, you have some purpose if you’re really talking to me now, don’t you?”, I asked. “Yes, I need to tell.....”.

 

Oh sorry! It’s too late, I have to sleep. One of the other principles of my religion is that we have to sleep at least 7 hours per day. See you as soon as I write here again, and sorry one more time!

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Lu Xun    2,069

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February 27th

 

Hello again. It’s been a while since I last wrote here. Some things have happened since that day. But, first, I think you’d be more interested in hearing the rest of my dream -- which I’m not really sure if it was a dream or a vision -- now, wouldn’t you? Then, let me continue from where I left.

 

Like I said in my last text, I was talking to what I believe it was our God, our transcendent, and then I asked what was the reason for why he was talking to me directly. And, just by hearing his answer, I felt really strange.

 

“Yes, I need to tell you about something that the other humans -- the ones who are selfish, self-centered and don’t care for anything except for themselves -- they are slowly creating the end of their specie, the Humankind. You saw the world twenty years ago, and you see it today. Being as intelligent as you are, I think you know what I’m talking about.”, he replied. “The humans... They’re destroying the nature... or better, they’re destroying your creation, the World!”, I said. “Indeed, my friend. And the last day of most of the Humanity is drawing near... Soon, a lot of people won’t be on Earth...”, he said. “Yeah... But I still did not get it, where do you want to go by talking about this now?”, I asked. “Of all people, I’ve chosen you to tell this... And so, here it goes : I need a person, brave enough to tell about this to the other humans. It’s essential that they all know that. When talking about that, I want you to say “It’s a Frightful Prevision, that may very soon become real.”, he said. “I don’t have words to thank you for choosing me... But as you, yourself said, there are many humans who don’t care about anything... So, what should I do with them? They surely won’t listen to what I have to say”, I said, a little worried. “Yes, yes... Those who ignore what you have to say will feel the wrath of the Heavens.”, he said, with a very confident tone. “Fine, but a lot of people have already created false previsions, and most of them ended up being killed by these selfish people... Will I have this same fate?”, I asked. “No... In fact, I was about to talk about this now. To confront the Money, I’ll give you many powers that no human has ever dreamed of. With time, I’ll make new contacts with you. Be sure to hang out safely from now on.”, he said, before disappearing. However, one moment before that happened, I saw two beautiful and big green eyes, and that made me wonder if God’s eyes were green.

 

So, now you know everything about my conversation with this magnificent and great being. Then, as I was requested, I began to spread rumors of that Frightful Prevision around my own Religion, and those who follow it, began to be afraid. But, I told them to be brave, because if they cooperate with our world, no harm will happen to them. Now, the seeds of the Salvation of the Humanity were set. I just had to wait for the reaction of the enemy.

 

Before going, I have two things to say. First, I want to tell that I am really curious to know what powers will I gain, and second, I want to ask you guys, who are currently reading this : Think a bit about our planet. Don’t be so selfish, and our future will be brighter and safer. Thank you, and hope to see you again!

 

 

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