Text Hawkie's stories: Kingdom Hearts 3 Story...

[Hunter Hawk 392]

Well, I have a pretty long theory what it will happenen just after Sora's and Riku's Mark of Mastery Exam. I'm still not sure if I should post it, becuse of the other members. Maybe they'll say that I'll ruin the whole KH storyline and mess up everything. So, what do you think? Should I post it? And is that good idea?

 

Chapters:

 

( 1 ) The Ones Who Need To be Saved - Done

( 2 ) Farewell - Done

( 3 ) Portal To Realm Of Darkness - Done

( 4 ) Searching - Done

( 5 ) Castle Of Forgotten Memories - Done

( 6 ) New Treasure Hunt? - Done

( 7 ) Betrayal - In working...

[4Everbee 1,365]

I say you should post it!

[XxKHFanForLifeXx 12]

yeah post it

[DTD 33]

yeah man i wanna read it who cares what others think

[CrownKeeper13 688]

Post it!

[spenskh89 66]

I would like to review and not troll your imaginative story.

[Razorwind Keyblade 304]

I came here looking for a story :angry:

[Rob 5,571]

I came here looking for a story :angry:

 

Me too.

[hatok 6,413]

Me too.

 

Me also

[Hunter Hawk 392]

Thank you guys! I try to post it as soon as i can!

[SoraKH 793]

um post it everyone want's to hear your opinion!

[Hunter Hawk 392]

Yay! I finally posted the first chapter. Please tell me what you think about it.

 

Chapter One: The Ones Who Needs To Be Saved

 

Sora and Riku were standing right in front of Yen Sid’s desk. They just returned from the realm of sleep, where their Mark of Mastery Exam was.

 

For Sora, Exam wasn’t hard that much, because he always thought about his Light – Kairi. He always knew she still home, safe and with him. That gave him strength. But Riku was another story. Once, he was a bad guy, thinking only about power and darkness. He nearly destroyed his best friend, give up to the darkness, harmed the innocents… But there were his friends, Sora, Mickey and all others who believe in him. Sometimes he still doubted himself for all other things he done. For example, was a right thing to trust DiZ and follow his plans? Because of him, Sora was able to wake up which caused Roxas to disappear. He knew that he accepted his fate as part of his original self, but things could be different…

The Mark of Mastery was finished. The only thing left was Master’s decision. Yen Sid was only sitting on his chair with closed eyes, deeply thinking. Mickey was there too, standing against the wall.

 

Sora: *whispers* Are you nervous?

Riku: *whispers too* Should I be?

Sora: *whispers* Well, you know… all that and… Man! Will he ever stop thinking?

Riku: *whispers* Don’t know…

 

In that moment Master Yen Sid stood up. He was pretty serious.

 

Yen Sid: Sora, Riku… The two Keyblade wielders who stood beneath the same blaze of stars… Are here to become Masters… *slowly looks at two boys* You were both tested for your Heart and Will as well as for your strength. You’ll need it on your next journey…

 

Riku was confused as well as Sora was. Next journey? And he still didn’t tell if they’re masters or not.

 

Yen Sid: *takes a deep breath* You both performed commendably. However…

 

Sora: *shaking*

Riku: *holding still, trying to look cool*

Yen Sid: You both became masters!

 

Sora started happily jumping around, hugging both Riku and Mickey. Riku was kinda surprised, but happy too. Yen Sid loudly cleared his throat to silent the boys.

 

Yen Sid: Just because you became masters, doesn’t mean, everything’s ok. Mark of Mastery was a test for me to see, if you’re a capable of very important task. This may be the most dangerous and risky task I ever give, but you two showed that you can handle it.

 

Sora: So, what’s the task? In letter you mention that the ones connected by me needs to be saved. But who are they? And how can I save them?

Yen Sid: Well, for that you need to hear a story from the past. It may be long, so I suggest you to sit.

 

Two chairs appeared. Boys sat on them.

 

Riku: You mean something happened? A long time ago?

Yen Sid: Yeah, it all began with a man named Xehanort who was seeking answers. For that he…

Sora: *interrupts* Wait a minute! Isn’t that an apprentice of Ansem the Wise?

Yen Sid: Yes he was. But the story begins long before he became an apprentice.

Sora: Oh, sorry.

Yen Sid: Well as already told you he was seeking the answers that cannot be answered. So, he decided to open the door into Kingdom Hearts. But for that he needed a special Keyblade. Not the one he was carrying, but the all powerful X – blade.

 

In that moment Sora felt something deep inside him, like there’s something shaking from the fear.

 

Riku: Xehanort was a Keyblade wielder?

Yen Sid: Yeah, as well as me and another friend of mine. If you haven’t heard about the X – blade, is the only key, beside seven Princesses of course, who can open the door to Kingdom Hearts. X – blade is made of pure light and pure darkness. And Xehanort had just a victim to use it for this purpose. A young boy, Keyblade Wielder was his apprentice. If the boy would use the power of darkness to cover his light, X – blade would be forged. But, the boy refused to do it, because he was afraid of it. Xehanort lost his patience and used his Keyblade to cut the boy’s heart on light and darkness. From the darkness he created another person and the light, who was slowly fading away, stayed in the boy.

 

Sora: *shocked* How could he… his own apprentice… just for… answers?

Riku: What was that boy’s name?

 

Yen Sid: His name was Ventus, the name of the wind. After that Ventus’s light was slowly fading away, leaving him in sleep. Xeahonort thought he won’t make it, so he brought him on his childhood world where could he spend his last days peacefully. But that only heal him because of you, Sora.

 

Sora:*surprised* I don’t understand. I heal him?

 

Yen Sid: Exactly 16 years ago, Ventus was brought to Destiny Islands. Yes, Xeahornt’s home world is the same as yours. Your newborn heart sensed his sorrow and healed him, which lead to connection between you and Ventus.

 

Riku: But how do you know all that?

Yen Sid: Stars tell me many things.

Riku: Right. What happened next?

 

Yen Sid: Xehanort needed light and darkness in equal strength. Person from Ventus’s darkness, named Vanitas was already powerful enough to forge the X – blade. Ventus was another story. Your heart did made him able to awake and walk, but not for fight. That’s because he took him to his old friend, Master Eraqus. There he could become stronger, to forge the X – blade someday. He also met two Eraqus’s apprentices, Terra and Aqua. And yet they were the ones who opened Ventus’s eyes and truly heal him. Years passed, when Xehanort finally showed up. On Aqua’s and Terra’s Mark of Mastery Exam! After that mysterious creatures started to appear all over the worlds. I named them Unversed and yet I didn’t realize how they appeared in the first place. Later I found the answer. Unversed were monster form of negativity between Ventus and Vanitas. Eraqus sent Aqua and Terra to eliminate which caused Ventus to run away from home, because he was worried about Terra falling in the darkness.

 

Sora and Riku listened open mouthed.

 

Yen Sid: Mickey was sent to eliminate Unversed too. With a Star Shard he traveled from one world to another. But something went wrong, when Star Shard returned back here, but not with Mickey. It returned with Ventus. I tried to found out what happened to him with magic. I only got a foggy picture with Mickey on unknown world. Ventus said that he recognized the world, so he went to bring him back. After that I got grave news from the stars. Eraqus was stroked down by Xehanort and Terra. I tried to find the answer, when Aqua came with unconscious Mickey. I passed that news to her and she decided to follow Terra on Keyblade Graveyard. Yet I didn’t know that’s the place where Xehanort will fulfill his plans - create X – blade and use Terra’s body for a new vessel. Fortunately Mickey woke up and went to Keyblade Graveyard, to help Aqua and Ventus. I’m not sure what was happening there. And after that Mickey came back with unconscious Aqua and Ventus, but I don’t know what happened with Terra. Soon after that Aqua woke up. She tried to wake Ventus up, but she couldn’t. That was because he destroyed his darkness, Vanitas along with himself and Unversed. His heart was wondering between realm of light and darkness, until he found you. *looks at Sora*

 

Sora: What do you mean?

Yen Sid: Ventus’s heart rests within you, waiting to return to his body.

Riku: But where is his body?

 

Yen Sid: That I cannot answer. Aqua took him to safer place and that’s the last time I saw her. Stars only told me that she captured in the realm of darkness. Only she knows where Ventus’s body is.

 

After that was just silence. Riku thought a lot about those three Keyblade Wielders and Sora thought about Ventus’s heart. How come it chose him, to carry it?

 

Yen Sid: That was a story… and those are the ones who need to be saved. Aqua is wondering in the realm of darkness. She needs to be save first, if you wanna find Ventus’s body. I only have one last thing to ask. Are you ready for this?

 

Sora: Yeah. After all, I am who I am, because of them.

Riku: If they’re waiting for us, we’ll come.

 

Yen Sid smiled and looked towards the Mickey. He nodded and brought two bands with symbols and some pieces of armor.

Yen Sid: This journey will be a lot more dangerous than your previous and you’ll not be able to use a Gummi Ship. So, you’ll need armor if you’ll travel with Keyblade Gliders.

 

While Yen Sid was talking, Mickey put bands around Sora’s chest and Riku’s waist. He also gave them pieces of armor on their wrists.

 

Mickey:*quietly explaining* The armor will protect you from darkness in the lanes between and to use them you need to touch piece of armor.

Riku: What about the Keyblade Gliders?

Mickey: Just throw your Keyblade in the air and it will transform into a Glider.

Yen Sid: Is everything clear? Got any questions or are you already ready for a task?

Riku: We are!

Sora: Can I do one more thing before we go?

Yen Sid: What is it?

Sora: I wanna see Kairi, before we go.

[Obi-wan 411]

I love it.......

[SoraKH 793]

Cool continue!!! Love your story!! Btw hawki you have to post this to Nomura somehow. I can't imagine the story to be more epic than this..

[Hunter Hawk 392]

Cool continue!!! Love your story!!

 

Sure, no problem.

[TheApprenticeofKingMickey 3,689]

That was brilliant! You make Terra, Aqua and Ventus sound so legendary.

[Lu Xun 2,069]

Awesome hawk! We're both great writers ~~~

[Hunter Hawk 392]

Chapter Two: Farewell

 

Two Keyblade Wielders went outside, to leave Mysterious Tower.

 

Sora: Let’s see if that works. *touches piece of armor*

 

In the moment he touched it, armor covered his entire body. It was in shining golden and black color, with several silver details.

 

Sora: How cool is this! *makes battle pose and summons his Keyblade* How does your armor looks?

Riku: *touches his piece of armor as well* Let’s see.

 

Riku’s armor was black and silver with some red details.

 

Sora: It suits well with your Way to Dawn!

Riku: *summons his Way to Dawn and makes a battle pose* Now let’s try those Gliders.

Sora: Ok, I’ll be first. *tries to throw his Keyblade and nearly hits Riku*

Riku: Hey! Watch it!

Sora: Sorry, I’m kinda new at this.

Riku: Just throw it already!

 

Sora threw his Keyblade in the air. For some time it was just spinning like a boomerang. Then it started glowing until it fully transformed into something that looked like a floating skateboard.

 

Sora: *happily shouts* Pure awesomeness!!! *jumps on the floating skateboard, trying to get a balance*

 

His Keyblade Glider looked pretty much like his armor. With black and golden color it also had some shapes of his strongest Keyblade, Ultima Waepon. He truly rode a Keyblade Glider only once, when he and Riku fought with Xemnas. And yet, Riku was the one who was driving. He was only a passenger.

 

Sora: *finally gets balance* What are you waiting for? Come on!

 

Riku threw his Keyblade too, but it was much different than Sora’s. It looked like more like a floating motorcycle, than a skateboard. Glider was silver and black, with cool shapes as well. On each side was a wing. White bird’s wing on the right and a black bat’s wing on the left.

 

Sora: Now that’s a style!

Riku: *rides his Glider* So, where are we going first?

Sora: Home, of course!

 

With those words they waved good bye to Mickey and Yen Sid who were looking through the window.

 

Mickey: Are you sure they’re up to this?

Yen Sid: I don’t know, but the starts do.

Mickey: But, was it good idea to not tell them about Master Xehanort? Now that his Heartless and Nobody were destroyed, he’ll come back!

Yen Sid: You’re forgetting a very important thing, Mickey. Master Xehanort doesn’t exist anymore. Only his heart does, in a false body. And they already have one other goal to complete. Sora and Riku aren’t enough to defeat him all by themselfs.

 

Mickey only confusedly looked at two glowing spots that were disappearing and then on three starts who were hardly glowing.

 

Kairi still sat on a Paopu Tree, her favorite spot, deeply thinking. What if he’ll go on another journey and that with Riku? What if they won’t come back? She’ll be all alone.

 

Namine: You’ll never be alone, silly. I’ll always be with you!

Kairi: Namine?

 

Girl with long blond hair sat right next to her. But she was foggy like a ghost.

 

Namine: Don’t worry, everything will be ok! Trust me I can feel Roxas inside him.

Kairi: I guess… wow what’s that?

 

She pointed her finger at two lights in the sky. One of them was coming down, straight into the sea. Kairi saw how it loudly fell into the sea.

 

Riku: Sora! Are you ok?

Sora: *splitting water* Yeah, I’m cool.

Riku: Told you, you need to learn how to land with this thing.

Sora: Hey, I perfectly landed with it! I only mistook sea for land.

Riku: Yeah, right.

 

Sora swam to the beach where Kairi was waiting. She fell in Sora’s arms.

 

Kairi: Oh, Sora. I missed you so much.

Sora: Yeah I missed you too.

 

Sora looked straight into Riku’s face who nodded and went elsewhere, giving Sora and Kairi a little privacy. They both walked beside the beach, while Sora explaining things to her.

 

Kairi: *sadly* So, you’ll go on another journey again, along with Riku…

Sora:*suddenly* Come with me, I wanna show you something.

 

He took her to their secret hideout. Old drawings with Sora’s and Kairi’s face were still there. Kairi looked at them with smile.

 

Sora: Listen, wherever I’ll go, even into the deepest darkness or the brightest light, I’ll always know you’re here, waiting for me. *takes Kairi’s lucky charm from his pocket* Don’t worry one day I’ll come back to return it.

Kairi: *smiles* Oh, you!

 

They laughed together in each other’s arms. After some time passed Sora stood up and left the hideout along with Kairi. They went to the Paopu Tree where Riku was sitting. Both of them sat on tree as well. For some time they were just staring into a beautiful sunset.

 

Riku thought about a new journey ahead and how they will meet Keyblade wielders from the past.

 

Kairi thought how she will be alone again.

 

Sora didn’t actually think about anything. He just stared into a sunset, trying to memorized it, like one friend told him to.

 

When the night came Riku stood up and looked to the sea. He touched the piece of armor, which completely covered him. Sora was about to do the same, when Kairi looked at him.

 

In that moment foggy figure appeared alongside her, along with another foggy figure that appeared next to Sora. Roxas and Namine were staring into each other’s eyes, until they hugged. Riku didn’t actually see them, but he knew they were there.

 

Namine: Stay strong and please, don’t let anything bad happen to Sora. Promise? *stretches her pinkie*

Roxas: *stretches his pinkie as well* Don’t worry, I will. You watch over Kairi for me.

 

They made a pinkie promise just before they disappear back into Sora and Kairi. Sora touched the piece of armor and along with Riku summoned his Keyblade glider.

 

Together they flew to the world where they could enter into the realm of darkness, while Kairi watched how they slowly disappear into the sky.

[Sora's Baby 729]

Omg this should be the story ( KH3 ) .

[Space Cowboy 1,392]

Omg this should be the story ( KH3 ) .

 

Uh no it shouldn't.

 

Anyways I think this is actually well written, unlike a lot of other fanfics out there. Good job, I look forward to the upcoming chapters.

[Sora's Baby 729]

 

Uh no it shouldn't.

 

Anyways I think this is actually well written, unlike a lot of other fanfics out there. Good job, I look forward to the upcoming chapters.

 

Yea it should in fact.....(oh no ) srry ......... but dude it should.

[SoraKH 793]

I want more chapters!!

[Hunter Hawk 392]

Chapter Three: Portal To Realm Of Darkness

 

Leon was quietly standing against the wall. Thanks to Sora, Hollow Bastion almost fully transformed back into Radiant Garden. After that, its shine drove away all the heartless and nobodies. Some of the darkness remained, but it wasn’t that dangerous than before. It only stayed in outer areas, much away from the city centre.

 

Hollow Bastion… I mean Radiant Garden Restoration Comminute didn’t have so much work now that city was safe. Everybody was just lazing around. Cid went doing all sorts of new programs for Tron, Yuffie and Aerith were talking all the time and Leon was trying to find anything new. His wish came true when he heard a crash in outer areas. He quickly ran in the direction where smoke was coming.

 

Riku: But I’m telling you Sora, you’re a terrible rider. Why don’t you learn to drive it first?

Sora: Oh, shut up! I perfectly rode it, until…

Riku: … you started doing somersaults! Try to get more serious.

Leon: Sora? Is that you?

 

Swordsman stepped closer to Sora who seem pretty much smoked by fire from his flying thing.

 

Leon: Is that a Gummi Ship?

Sora: Eh, actually no… *raises his hand summoning his keyblade, causing glider to disappear* It’s a new toy, keyblade glider.

Leon: Anyway, it’s nice to see you again. Man, I was so bored. *looks to Riku* And you must be Riku. Sora told me a lot about you.

Riku: *desummons his keyblade and smiles* Nice, to meet you too, Leon.

Leon: So what brings you here?

Sora: We’re on rescue mission to …

Riku: *covers Sora’s mouth* We were sent to find someone in the Realm of Darkness. Yen Sid said there is portal somewhere in your world.

Leon: Never heard about it… but Cid may know something about it.

Riku: Ok, let’s go.

 

Sometime later, they were already in Cid’s house.

 

Cid: A portal to the Realm of Darkness, eh? Let’s see. *looks over computer data*

Yuffie: Hey, why didn’t you tell me that you’re here?

Sora: Hi Yuffie!

Yuffie: I bet this one is Riku!

Riku: Hello to you too, Yuffie.

Sora: Where’s Aerith?

Aerith: Did someone called me?

Yuffie: There you are! We have visitors.

Aerith: Well, hello there…

Cid: *loudly* I found it!

Sora: Really?

Riku: Let me see.

On Cid’s computer was a map of outer areas. There was a small glowing spot.

 

Cid: Here’s the darkness that hasn’t left, but don’t worry we’ll erase it soon.

Sora and Riku: NO!!!

Yuffie: Wow, what’s all the fuss about?

Leon: They need to get to the Realm of Darkness.

Aerith: Why?

Sora: There is someone who needs to be saved.

Riku: Yeah, that’s the whole reason why we come here.

Cid: Well, that’s the problem. Tron scanned that area about week ago and he found out something very interesting. It really is a portal to Realm of Darkness, but only in one way.

Sora: What do you mean by that?

Cid: You can go in, but you can’t go out.

 

Riku deeply thought for some time.

 

Riku: Either way we’ll go.

Sora: Riku? Are you sure about this?

Riku: Yeah, come on. Let’s go.

 

When they were about to leave, Leon stepped closer.

 

Riku: No, Leon. We have to do this by ourselves.

Leon: Ok. Be careful then.

 

Two boys silently flew with their gliders to the spot that was on Cid’s computer. Area didn’t seem special or something. Until they saw some kind small lake filled with black and purple liquid. In the centre was a small hole, big enough just for one person. Sora was about to go in, when Riku pulled him back.

 

Riku: Are you crazy? We have to make plan first!

Sora: Ok, ok. Our plan is to go in, take Aqua and bring her back. But what are we going to do with one - way thing? You know, we can go in and we can’t go out.

Riku: *senses something* Wait, just give me a sec.

 

Riku closed his eyes and tried to concentrate on the hole in the lake of darkness. He threw a stone in it. He felt how something opened and then closed. That’s it!

 

Riku: Sora, I have some plan.

Sora: Ok, I’m listening.

Riku: The hole in the lake of darkness lets only in, but I know how to make it to let out as well. You will go in and in the moment it will let you in, I’ll use my Stopga spell. I hold it until you return.

Sora: Riku… are you sure you can handle this? Stopga will suck most of your energy while you’ll hold the portal.

Riku: I know it’s risky, but there’s no other way. Trust me! I can handle this. You try to find her as soon as you can.

Sora: *nods* Then I’ll go.

Riku: *nods as well and summons Way to Dawn* On three, right?

Sora: Yeah, on three you’ll cast Stopga and I have to be in it.

Riku: Ok, one… two… three… STOP!

 

He casted the spell in the moment Sora jumped in. The hole froze and stopped moving. Sora already disappeared in a depth of darkness.

 

Riku: Good luck.

 

Sora was quickly falling in the darkness when he saw shining something. It was small and blue. He used his armor and glider to follow it. His eyes adapt in dark, so he could see where in the realm of darkness was. The Dark Meridian! The same place where him and Riku were just after Xemnas’s defeat. Fortunately Kairi’s light opened the portal to their home.

It looked like Aqua didn’t have that kind of luck.

 

Suddenly Sora slowed down, because he spotted something. There were two figures. One dressed in black coat was sitting on the rock and other was hiding its head behind its hands. The other one was sadly sitting on the shore. Sora took a closer look on the other figure. It was a girl, who seemed about 4 or 5 years older than himself. She also had short blue hair and was dressed in black, white and blue clothes. When he slowly got closer, she quickly stood up and summoned a weird keyblade.

 

Aqua: *seriously* Who’s there? Show yourself! *nearly attacks him*

Sora: *steps closer* Take it easy! I’m not your enemy.

Aqua: Who are you then?

Sora: Just let me explain…

Hooded person: You finally come. It’s been a long time… Sora.

Aqua: *confusedly* You’re… Sora?

Sora: Well… yes. How do you know my name?

 

Aqua’s keyblade fell on the floor and disappeared. She happily hugged Sora.

 

Sora: Hey, nice to meet you too, but I can’t breathe.

Aqua: You have no idea how long I been wondering in the Realm of Darkness. It was so scary, until I met this guy. He also told me your name and that you’re only one who can set things right!

Sora: *looks to the figure* Who are you? And how do you know my name?

 

The other figure removed his hood and revealed his long light hair. He looked to Sora with his golden eyes.

 

Sora: Ansem… the Wise?

Ansem: It’s been a long time, my friend. I was waiting here for a whole year to finally meet you. And now I need you to listen to me very carefully.

Sora: Sure, whatever you say.

Ansem: My research data rests within you. You have to use it to set things right. I spent my entire life to study hearts, but yet your heart is only one I truly studied. You are the one who will open the door to light. Now go! Take Aqua back to the Realm of Light and find her friends. You can only beat the ultimate darkness gathered. If you’ll be defeated not only you, but all connected to you will fall. So, don’t be afraid to ask for help. You can’t fight everything alone.

Sora:*little confused* Right, I understand. I’ll go then… but what about you? Aren’t you going back with us?

Ansem:*smiles* Don’t worry, my job here is done. I only waited to meet you…

 

With those words, he went to the ocean. He went further and further, until he fully disappeared in the dark ocean. Aqua tried hard to hide her tears.

 

Aqua: He was only one I ever speak with here…

Sora: Don’t worry, we’ll go back and save your friends.*smiles* You can count on me!

Aqua: Ok, let’s go then.

 

Suddenly he felt a pain in his heart. For a moment he saw Riku, who barely stand beside the lake of darkness.

 

Sora: We have to hurry! *summons keyblade glider* Jump on and hold tight on me!

 

Fortunately glider was big enough for both of them. Sora was riding it as fast as he could. From the Dark Meridian was a long way and yet he couldn’t see much, because of the darkness. Aqua noticed that and summoned her keyblade. She casted light spell, who lighted way a bit. Light was just Sora needed. He quickly recognized the hole and flew towards it. When they came out Aqua couldn’t believe her eyes. She was finally out, seeing light of the day!

 

Sora landed on the ground next to the small black lake. He ran to another boy who stood beside the lake. She followed him too.

 

Sora: Riku! I made it! I found Aqua.

 

Aqua stepped closer to the white haired boy. He smiled.

 

Riku: Nice to… meet you… Aqua.

 

He couldn’t say more. Riku collapsed right into Sora’s arms.

 

Sora: Riku!

Aqua: What’s wrong with him?

Sora: He’s exhausted. The whole time I was in Realm of Darkness, he was casting Stopga. Without him I couldn’t go save you.

Aqua: *summons her keyblade* Maybe I can help. Heal!

 

But the spell didn’t do much. Riku only managed to open his eyes a bit.

 

Sora: We need to take him back to the city. I’m sure he only need to rest.

Aqua: City? By the way where are we?

Sora: That’s Radiant Garden. Have you been here?

Aqua: Yeah, that’s the last world I visited before I fell in the Realm of Darkness.

Sora: *tries to support Riku* Can you please carry him? I’ll summon my glider.

Aqua: Ok.

 

Incredibly glider was able to carry three people! Together they went back to the city. Sora was ridding, while Aqua carried Riku in her hands.

[Hazimie 1,595]

cool story!

[Sora's Baby 729]

Woot,Woot.