SoraKH 793 Posted August 27, 2011 u]Chapter 13[/u] Day 120 It's been a long time since i last wrote. Diz sent me to Twilight town again today. He wanted more clues. This time i didn't go searching....but i went to the clock tower and i hid behind a wall. I waited for Roxas and Axel. They finally came but Xion was with them too. When I looked at her I was shocked...She looked a lot, and when I say a lot, I mean A LOT like Kairi... Then I figured out everything! She was the same with Kairi because she was holding inside her a part of Sora's memories that were about Kairi. When they started talking I found a chance to sneak out and I ran to the mansion. Diz was not there so I went to his office...he wasn't there either! When i stopped looking i went to the basement and i started looking at Sora's memories..There weren't memories of Kairi there. Then a horrible thought came...What if Sora needed these memories in order to wake up...What if they were the key? Hi guys! Thank you all for reading my story and i will write more chapters soon. This is Part 3 and if you want to see the other parts and chapters go to: Part 1:http://kh13.com/forum/topic/22625-namines-diary/page__fromsearch__1 Part 2:http://kh13.com/forum/topic/22645-namines-diary-part-2/page__fromsearch__1 3 Hunter Hawk, 4Everbee and RoxasXSora reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
xBerserkerSaix07x 125 Posted August 27, 2011 Thanx! 2 SoraKH and RoxasXSora reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
SoraKH 793 Posted August 28, 2011 Chapter 14 Day 123 Today Diz visited me..I told him my thoughts. What if Sora needed the memoriws that Xion haves in order to wake up! I told him that if some pieces were lost ithere will be no way for me to finish. If that happend and the memories found a body to live then he'd never get them back.... He said that Sora can do without a memory or two...but i answerd him back "What if their th key?" He stopped me. Then he said that i'm a witch with a power over Sora's memories and those connected to him...Are you seeing something i'm not? He asked. I answer him back that if his memories become her memories...she will never survive it. She? Asked Diz... Then Riku came. He wanted to talk to me. Diz left and Riku started talking. Something happend...he said. I told him to sit and he started . A few days befor i went to the beasts castle. He said with a tremulous voice. Then i knew something was going wrong. He continued saying that he saw Xion. He said he deafeted her and her face...she was like Kairi. He also asked her why did she have a keyblade. Then she asked Riku why is he dressed like on of those...the organazation members. He answerd that he is taking care of his best friend, and he took her keyblade. He throwed it to her and then they started talking. Then Riku left and Xion started screaming. Riku aked for answers. Why did she look like Kairi?.....Why did she have a keyblade? And i told him everything...that she holds a part of Sora's memories so she looks like Kairi and she has a keyblade. She's like a copy of Roxas. Then Riku remained silent. He asked: So the only way for Sora to get back his memories is to give an end to Xion?... 1 RoxasXSora reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kingdom Sora 464 Posted August 28, 2011 Wow this story is interesting! I want more! 1 SoraKH reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
demy1077 56 Posted August 28, 2011 fantastic dude 1 SoraKH reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
SoraKH 793 Posted August 28, 2011 Chapter 15 Day 127 Today the memory meter went up to 70%...30% to go! I havent heard any news from Riku .Today i was only drawing...I drew Sora,Kairi and Riku sitting on a papua tree. I was so bored so i decided to ask Diz if i could go to twilight town. At first i hesitated but i asked him. He thought for a bit and he said yes! I took my sketch book and i ran out of the mansion. I had a felling that i forgot something but i continued... I went to the Clock Tower and i started drawing the sunset... The strange thing was that Roxas, Xion and Axel didnt show up. When the sunset was gone i went back to the mansion at the basemant...This was terrible! 10% of the meter was lost and i had to reload it again! I was so sad and confused! I placed the memories again in the machine and i pressed "transfer".Then i sat on my chair and i fell asleep. I was so tired! 1 RoxasXSora reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
SoraKH 793 Posted August 29, 2011 Chapter 16 Day 130 I'm almost done transfering the progress i lost 3 days ago...Today Diz gave me the "Heartless Killer" machine. He said that we may have a lockdown again....But this time the heartless will be much stronger so i had to use the machine... Then heartless started coming out of nowhere. I pressed on the machine and it started killing the heartless. But as long as i kept doing it the heartless got more and more! I started calling for help but none was around. The heartless started jumping on the memory machine and i killed them. Then they started breaking the machine that sora was in then i killed them again. Then i started calling for help again and Riku who he had came a few seconds ago. He started killing the heartless and he said that i had to,press lockdown. We killed all the heartless and he ran out while i pressed lockdown. The door closed and heartless stopped appearing. But while the heartless jumped on the machine that Sora was in the progress was lost...again! I had to replace them again. This was never goin to end! 1 RoxasXSora reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
SoraKH 793 Posted August 29, 2011 Chapter 17 Day 170 I'm done with loading the 10%. It took me a long time. Today i discovered something. When the heartless attacked Sora they took a part of Sora's memories and the memory meter went down to 50%! I summond Riku as fast as i could and i told him what happend. He said that he can help only if i tell him where did the memories go. I said that i killed the heartless them and i don't know where did they go. Then Riku had an idea. He told me to open the memory finder and find the memories. When i opened it the machine it showed that the memories were at twilight town in the forest. I gave Riku a memory gatherer and he ran out at the forest. We are still at lockdown. But i think tomorrow is going to end. Riku came back with the memories and i placed them in the machine. Then it started raining and Riku couldn't go. So we sat on the floor and he started talkingabout his adventures. It was a great nigh! Well do you think Namine is in love with Riku? HAHAHAHA just kidding. Well stay tuned...more chapters are coming ! 1 RoxasXSora reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Hunter Hawk 392 Posted August 29, 2011 Awsome man! I love your story! Keep up!!! 1 SoraKH reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
SoraKH 793 Posted August 29, 2011 Chapter 18 Day 174 Today i started with the memories that were stolen by the heartless. I pressed transfer and i took my sketch book. I went to Diz and i asked him if he had any quests for me. He sent me to Destiny islands and he told me to keep an eye on Kairi for today. She was ok. She had forgot completly about Sora and Riku. But like a sid i have to hurry. This is dangerous...if i don't finish soon they will forgot about eachother for ever! When Kairi went back to the main island i went back to the mansion. I reported to Diz and i went to the basemant. Everything was fine with the machines. Suddenly the memory machine started beeping and it started saying "Warning deleting Data" I used for the first time real magic. I told a spell and i shouted stopaga! Everything around me freezed and i typed a passcode on the computer. Then the warning sign stopped and it started transfering as usuall. Someone tried to break in and delete all the data... 1 RoxasXSora reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Weedanort 8,786 Posted August 29, 2011 Awesome job! Now I wanna know who tried to delete all the data. 1 SoraKH reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
SoraKH 793 Posted September 1, 2011 Chapter 19 Day 180 Man time flies!...Riku keeps visting me every day and he continues he's adventures.....Today he brought me tears..He said that he had fall into the darkness...and he had betrayed his friends...And that now he is fighting to get them back... Diz hasnt come back yet so i'm lonley...Riku decided to go and find him. When he left i went and checked to the main computer. The data was at 59%! I went and checked the memories...20% was missing! We had to find that 20% or i will never finish Sora. Then the emergency started warning...again! I tried to use stopaga but i was out of the current magic that was needed. I use stopra but that wasnt enough too. I used stop and i rushed to lock the computer. *ALERT* Virus detected,*ALERT* Virus detected, the machine kept warning. The spell vanished and the Virus started deleting files. Sora's memories where hid very good. And i had 5 more minutes until the Viruse was going to find the memories. I activated the antivirus. It was going to earn 5 mor minutes until the Virus was going to destroy it. I had 10 minutes. So i tried to summon Riku. The 1st one there wasnt even a spark. The seconf time something happen. The third time i summoned Riku. I told him what was happening and he ran to the computer. He typed a passcode and the Virus was dead! He told me the password: Sea Salt ice cream! Diz favorite...Riku said. He smiled and he left. I wanted to find out who tried to delete the data. I checked the memories to see if they were fine and i locked them with the sea salt ice cream password. When i did some things and i runned some programms i finded out that the compuer that attacked was at: The World Tha Never Was! 1 RoxasXSora reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Weedanort 8,786 Posted September 1, 2011 I suspect that Saïx is attacking the computer 1 SoraKH reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
SoraKH 793 Posted September 4, 2011 Chapter 20 Day 187 After reaserching and studying for days i found out that the virus came from the main computer of the castle that never was. I had to end this thing...and quick! I took my magic ancient book of spells and i opened to the portal spell. I needed wildflower,mushrooms,elixier and sunset shanshine to make the spell.When i gathered everything i took my enchated coldron and i placed inside all the things. I took my wand and i whispered a spell. The spell was saying: This spell will give me help. It will make this work. Open the portal that i need. Open it because i need it quick! Then a white light came out of nowhere and a door was shaped. I took my wand, I locked the basemant,and i took a big breath. I was so excited..i thought that i was going to pee on me! I wrote a note to riku and i opened the door. I steped inside and i closed my eyes. I was thinking of the world that never was. Suddenly the door closed and i everything around me became black. Then a hole opened on the floor and i fell in. It was something like a slide. I felt like i was at the water park! I was going up and down,right and left and upsidedown! Then i saw a atrange light and i was transfered to the castle entrance. The castle was huuuge! I transformed into an organazation member with a spell. I think the name of the person i was transformed was larexen! I ran iont the castle and there i saw more organazation members. I tried to act normally but when i saw the true larexen coming i panicked. I tranformed back to Namine and i hid behind a wall. When larexen passed next to me i casted the "72 hours of sleeping" spell. She fell on the floor and she started snoring. I had maximum 3 day to find out why all this where happening. But for now i'm sitting on the floor,in the castle and i'm thinking of a plan... A smart plan, Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
SoraKH 793 Posted September 5, 2011 Chapter 21 Day 188 Today i continued exploring even more the castle. I transformed back to Larexen and i started running int the castle. Some guys told me to go and hangout with them. I tried to find an excuse. So i asked them where the Vice was..,.I didnt now his name! They told me that Saix was at the computer room. "He is preapering to attack again to the mysterious computer" Said one of the organazation members. Mysterious computer...my compuer! He was going to attack and i was at the castle! Hwe was going to delet all the data! I started panicking but i had to calm down. I thanked them and i ran behind a wall. I casted the wayfinder spell and it was showing the road to the computer. When i reached my destinasion i hid behind some furniture. And i started spying the mysterious man Saix. He was ready to press the attack button. Then i took my wand and i transformed to Larexen. I told him that the leader Xemnas asked for him. He told me to attack and he left. I locked the door with an ancient spell and i ran to the computer. I canceled the attack and i changed the attack spot. I switched the attack spot on my computer of the world that never was. So the next time Saix was going to try attacking he is going to attack his self. I deleted all the information and the data that he had about our location and our computer. Then i was ready to cast the portal spell but i forgot the words! I tried everything that i new! The refresh spell,the come on remember spell but nothing worked! I heard Saix coming and i hid behind the furniture again! I didn't now what to do.... Yeah Sora's little helper was right! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Think Pink 1,967 Posted September 5, 2011 It's a great story--just work on your spelling and grammar a bit. (: Also, you don't need to keep making a bunch of new parts. I think you could just keep all the Namine's Diary parts in one thread, since you're making them only a page long. 1 SoraKH reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
SoraKH 793 Posted September 6, 2011 Chapter 21 Day 189 Today when i woke up i was still behind the furniture! I was lucky that no one discovered me but i was still in trouble! When i picked up all my things i took my wand and i tried to remember the spell. When i heard Saix coming i knew that i had to go and quick! I couldn't remember the portal spell so i used the teleportation spell. When i said the words i teleported outside of the castle. Then suddenly i heard a big noise and there was an explosion and a part of the castle fell out. The explosion was so big that the parts of that were explode came right next to me! I knew that this happened because Saix tried to attack and he attacked the computer! This meant that the computer was destroyed! Suddenly i saw someone coming. I't was Saix! He saw me and he started running behind me! He took out his weapon and hestarted throwing magic at me! I used reflega but his attack was so strong that he throwed me in the air. When he was ready to attack i used blizzaga and he couldnt move for a while. I ran as fast as i could but Saix attacked with thunder. When i saw the thundrer coming at me i suddenly remembered everything. The spell! I told the spell and i telepoted to twilight town. Saix was ready to step in the portal but i closed it. When i went back to the castle i was so happy! The memory meter was 57%! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
RoxasXSora 11 Posted September 6, 2011 Hey i love your story keep it up! 1 SoraKH reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
SoraKH 793 Posted September 8, 2011 Chapter 22 Day 193 We met with Riku today. He was mad about my visit to the world that never was. I tried to explain that we were in danger, but he refused to listen. He was so mad that he left and told me never to ever speak to him again. Although I knew that he didn't mean, it still made me feel sad. Around noon, while I was repairing a broken part of memories, I heard a noise coming from the hall. It was Diz! I ran to him and gave him a huge hug. I was so happy he was here after all this tiime. I asked him why he had left and where had he been all along. He answered back that it is still a secret. We sat in the living room and I told him about my adventures while he was away. When i told him about the World That Never Was he lost it. He first remained silent and then he asked me why i did such a dangerous thing. I explained him about everything and that they knew about our location. When i told him that i got to my objective . He remained calm and he gave me a smile. He said that as long that i was safe nothing else matters...It's the first time that i felt that someone was looking over me...someone was protecting me. I guess that is how a parent is... Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
RoxasXSora 11 Posted September 8, 2011 aham continue it now! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Hunter Hawk 392 Posted September 8, 2011 awww, how cute! I always thought that DiZ is a jerk, but you proved that he didn't 1 SoraKH reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
SoraKH 793 Posted September 9, 2011 awww, how cute! I always thought that DiZ is a jerk, but you proved that he didn't Hahahaha! Thanks hawki but that's the Diz from my imagination. Hehehe i'm not shure about the original ;p Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
SoraKH 793 Posted September 9, 2011 Chapter 22 Day 200 Today Diz told me to go on a very important mission at Twilight Town. He explained that when he went missing he was seeking for some answers. He had to destroy the heartless in Twilight Town in order for Sora to be safe. There was a portal in the Town from which heartless were pouring out. My mission was to destroy the portal and vanquish the heartless at once! He gave me the Eliminator Machine. A machine that could destroy and vanish portals and sources of magic. He explained that I had only one shot and that I had to hit the center of the portal in order for it to be completely destroyed. That means only one shot...only one chance! I left the mansion. As I was walking in the forest I met Riku who was on his way to the mansion. He didn't speak to me....I guess he didn't see me....I hope that was the reason! I went to the station and I took the train to Sunset Terrace. When I arrived everything was a mess. I looked out of the window and there were heartless everywhere and everyone was scared and was hiding in their homes. I got off the train and ran to the stairs and I saw the portal on a hill. Heartless were constantly pouring out of it. I took my wand and I cast the flying spell. Sparkles started forming around me and I started levitating. I flew as fast as I could to the hill but suddenly a heartless came out of nowhere and attacked me. I cast Blizzard on the heartless and I continued towards the portal. When I finally got there I landed on the hill and I took the eliminator. I aimed at the center and as soon as I was ready to pull the trigger a heartless jumped on me. I lost my balance and the machine fell of the hill. I quickly regained my balance and I cast Stopra on the machine. It stopped in mid air and flew towards it. I picked it up and flew back up the hill. I used Reflect to be sure that the heartless would not attack me again and I aimed once again at the center. I took deep breaths and I pulled the trigger. A ball of light came out of the machine leaving tracks of light behind it. The ball disappeared in the portal. After 5 seconds purplish blue circles started coming out of it and red sparkles started exploding. I started running. I knew that the portal was going to explode.....and I wasn't wrong. The explosion was so big that it threw me up in the air. I fell down and bumped my head. Diz came, picked me up and threw me over his shoulder. While we where running for the train the explosion became bigger and stronger. The good news were that the heartless were vanquished and Twilight Town and Sora was safe... The last thing i remember was Riku fixing me wound. Then everything became black... Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
marly2 20 Posted September 10, 2011 very good story 1 SoraKH reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
SoraKH 793 Posted September 11, 2011 very good story thanks! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites