Text Hawkie's Disney Mixes: Roxas - The Little Merman

[Hunter Hawk 392]

Ok, this story is not totally mine, because I already saw one very similar one on the internet.

 

The Little Mermaid is one of my favorite Disney movies, so I decided to write it in my kh version. You’re probably asking yourself why it isn’t Sora - The Little Merman. That’s because, in the movie everybody talk about how beautiful voice Ariel haves. Then I remembered that Roxas is voiced by Jesse McCartney, very cool singer. So, I decided to put him as the Little Merman. Most of the text is used directly from the original movie.

 

Enjoy!

 

Chapter One:

 

The seagulls are peacefully flying above the sea, when ship appears along with some dolphins. On it are sailors, setting the ship and catching fishes while they are singing about the sea. The girl with blond hair is sitting on the fence and drawing in her sketchbook.

 

Princess Namine: Isn’t that great, Red? *looks to her dog*A beautiful ocean, salty air and the wind blowing in your face. A perfect day, don’t you think Axel?

Princess’s personal bodyguard Axel: Yes my sweetie, delightful… *he vomits in the sea*

 

Namine smiles as her red dog barks on the seagulls. All sailors seem happy with the sea.

 

Sailor: King Ansem must be in the friendly type mood.

Namine: King Ansem?

Another Sailor: Ruler of the Merpeople, princess. Thought every good sailor know about him.

Namine: Merpeople must be so nice. Wish I could meet one someday, so I could draw them!

Axel gets better.

Axel: Hmm… Merpeople. Namine, pay no attention to this nautical nonsense.

Sailor: But it ain’t nonsense. It’s the truth! I’m telling you. Down in the depths of the ocean they live!

Namine : So, they are real! Oh, Red I can’t wait to see one.

 

She says as she hugs her red dog. Sailors are taking fishes from the net, when one of the fishes escapes back in the ocean. The fish takes a deep breath and is happy that it escaped from the net. Fish swims deeper in the ocean, seeing all other sea creatures. There are jellyfishes, giant whales

and suddenly… merpeople!

 

The whole families are swimming towards one place, a magnificent palace. There are merpeople taking sits. It looks like concert is about to begin. When all came in the concert hall, a small seahorse comes on the stage. He clears his throat.

 

Seahorse: His Royal Higness, King Ansem the Wise!

 

An older man comes on the carriage, carried by dolphins. He is also carrying a sword shaped like a key. Dolphins are swimming all over the concert hall. While they swim past the chandelier, King’s sword starts glowing. He points it straight at chandelier. Chandelier started glowing in beautiful golden color. Audience starts clapping. They are very impressed by it.

 

Seahorse: And presenting the distinguished court composter, Donald Duck!

 

A squid like duck comes on the in hall as well, carrying a baton. Before he goes on the stage, King talks with him.

 

King Ansem: I’m really looking forward to this performance, Donald.

Donald: Your Majesty! This will be the finest concert I have ever conducted. Your daughters, they will be spectacular!

King Ansem: Yes! And especially my little Roxas.

Donald: Yes, yes. Almost forgot your only son. He haves the most beautiful voice. Hmm? *quietly

continues to himself* If only he’d show up for rehearsals once in the while.

 

Lights turn off. The only light follows Donald on the stage. He raises his baton and orchestra starts playing. Three big seashells appear on the stage. From them, six mermaids come out, singing.

 

#Ah, we’re the daughters of Ansem, great father who loves us and names us as well: Raquata *first sings*Radrina*second sings* Rarista*third sings* Rattina*fourth sings* Radella*fifth sings* Ralana*sixth sings*#

 

While they are singing another closed seashell appears.

 

#And there is a youngest and his musical debut, our only brother we do have. We’re presenting him to you, to sing a song Donald wrote. His voice is like a bell. He’s our brother Rox…#

 

But the seashell is empty. King Ansem angrily raises his key sword.

 

King Ansem: *angrily yells* Roxas!

 

Somewhere in the ocean, a little blond haired merman stares on the ship wrecks.

 

???: Roxas, wait for me.

 

He turns around.

 

Roxas: Goofy, hurry up!

 

A sea turtle comes.

 

Goofy: You know that I can’t swim that fast.

 

But the boy doesn’t mind him. He looks around again.

 

Roxas: *says excited*There it is. *shows on a big ship wreck* Isn’t it fantastic?

Goofy: Yeah, sure. It’s great. Now let’s get outta here. *tries to swim away*

Roxas: *sighs and pulls him back* You’re not getting cold fins now, are you?

Goofy: Who, me? No way. It’s just… It, uh… It looks damp in there. Yeah. And I think I may be coming down with something. Yeah, I got this cough. *starts coughing*

Roxas: *gives him a weird look and looks through the ship’s window* All right. I’m going inside. You can just stay here and watch for sharks. *goes inside the ship*

Goofy: OK. Yeah, you go. I’ll stay and…*realizes one thing* What? Sharks? Roxas! *tries to get through the ship’s window, but he’s too big* Roxas, I can’t… I mean… Roxas, help!

Roxas:*smiles and goes to Goofy* Oh, Goofy.

Goofy: *whispers* Roxas? Do you really think there might be sharks around here?

Roxas: Goofy, don’t be such a guppy. *pulls him out of the window*

Goofy: I’m not a guppy.* follows him inside the ship* This is great. I mean, I really love this… *screams when he sees a human skull* Roxas! *swims quickly in Roxas’s arms*

Roxas: Are you OK?

Goofy: *trembles* Yeah, sure. No Problem. I’m OK.

Roxas: *swims deeper in the ship* Wow, how cool is this! *picks a fork* Isn’t that the coolest thing you ever saw?

Goofy: Yeah! But, what is it?

Roxas: *puts fork in the bag* I don’t know, but I bet Sora will.

 

Something pasts through.

 

Goofy: What was that? Did you hear something?

Roxas: *picks a pipe* I wonder what this one is.

Goofy: *says scared* Roxas?

Roxas: Goofy, will you relax? Nothing is going to happen.

 

In that moment giant shark comes in the ship.

 

Goofy: Shark! *panicking over the ship* Shark! We’re gonna die!

 

Goofy runs in Roxas’s arms, this time completely scared. Shark tries to bite Roxas’s tail, but he dodges in time. They both swim quickly, deeper in the ship. While they’re fleeing away, Roxas loses the bag. He quickly swims back to get it, just before sharks bites it. After that, they both flee to the nearest ship’s window.

 

Goofy: Oh, no!* stucked in the window*

 

Roxas pushes him out and gets out of the ship as well. Shark still chases them, until it gets stuck with an anchor.

 

Goofy: You big bully! *sticks his tongue at shark*

 

Shark tries to bite him. Goofy becomes very scared because of it.

 

Roxas: Goofy, you really are a guppy.*swims on the surface*

Goofy: I’m not.*follows him*

 

Somewhere on surface, there is a seagull with brown, spiky feathers. He’s looking through the spyglass.

 

Roxas: *shouts* Sora!

Sora: *throws his spyglass in the air and turns it wrong* Whoa! * sees Roxas and Goofy through the spyglass pretty far away* Merman off the port bow! *says loudly* How, you doin’ kid? *removes spyglass and sees Roxas and Goofy right in front of him* Whoa, what a swim.

Roxas: Sora, look what we found.*shows on a bag*

Sora: Human stuff, huh? Hey, let me see. * picks a fork* Oh! Oh! Look at this. Wow. This is special. This is very, very unusual.

Roxas: What? What is it?

Sora: It’s a dinglehopper. Human use these little babies… to straighten their hair out.

Roxas: Really?*tries to straight his hair with a fork*

Goofy: What about that one? *shows on pipe*

Sora: Ah! This I haven’t seen in years. This is wonderful! A banded, bulbous snartblatt.

Goofy: *says excited* Wow!

Roxas: *still tries to straight his hair, hair only becomes more ruffled* What are humans doing with it?

Sora: Well, if humans get bored, they use this to make a fine music. Allow me! *blows in pipe, only to makes a noise*

Roxas: *realizes something* Music! The concert! My dad’s gonna kill me! *quickly takes a fork and a pipe and swims in the ocean*

Goofy: The concert was today? *follows him*

Roxas: I’m sorry! I’ve gotta go! Thank you, Sora!

Sora: Any time, kiddo!

 

Roxas swims along with goofy towards the home. But they aren’t unaware that they’re watched by to evil looking eels. Someone else is watching them as well, with the help of magic and eels.

 

???: Yes, hurry home, dear Prince. We wouldn’t want to miss old Daddy’s celebration, now, would we? Ha, what celebration. I used to have them to, when I lived in palace.

 

Light shines on the person who is talking. It’s an octopus like creature.

 

???: And now look at me. Wasted away to practically nothing. Banished and exiled and practically starving, while he and his flimsy fish folk celebrate.

 

Goes towards the glowing cauldron, where picture with swimming Roxas and Goofy is.

 

???: Well, I’ll give ‘em something to celebrate soon enough. *looks at picture* Xaldin! Xigbar! *eels hear its voice* I want you to keep an extra close watch on this little boy of his. He may be the key to Ansem’s undoing. *wickedly smiles*

[TheApprenticeofKingMickey 3,689]

Cool. I can't wait for chapter two.

[Hunter Hawk 392]

Chapter Two:

Roxas comes home. Outside the throne room Donald is waiting for him.

 

Donald: You’re in big trouble kid!

Roxas:* sighs* I know… *gives a bag to Goofy, whispers* Meet me outside.

 

Donald takes him to the throne room, where Ansem is sitting.

 

Ansem: *angrily looks at Roxas’s ruffled hair* What the hell happened to your hair?

Roxas: It’s just a dinglehop… eh, never mind.

Ansem: Anyway, I just don’t what I’m going to with you, young man.

Roxas: Dad, I’m sorry. I just forgot.

Ansem: As a result of your careless behavior…

Donald:*appears alongside King, speaks angrily* Careless and reckless behavior!

Ansem: …the entire celebration was, uh…

Donald: *continues* Well, it was ruined! That’s all! Completely destroyed!*sadly looks up*This concert was to be the pinnacle of my distinguished career. *angrily looks at Roxas* Now, thanks to you, I am the laughingstock of the entire kingdom!

Goofy: *angrily swims in the throne room* But it wasn’t his fault… we were chased by this shark and then we were safe. And then this seagull came, and it was, “This is this…”

Ansem: *give him a weird look* Seagull? *Goofy covers his mouth* What? Oh! *Goofy quickly hides behind the Roxas, who gives him a weird look* You went up to the surface again, didn’t you? Didn’t you?

Roxas: Nothing happened…

Ansem: How many times must we go through this, Roxas? *puts hand on his head* You could have seen by one of those barbarians, by one of those humans!

Roxas: *angrily says* They’re not barbarians!

Ansem: They are dangerous. Do you think I want to see my youngest son snared by a fish-eater’s hook?

Roxas: Quit treading me like a kid! I’m 15 years old. And if you didn’t noticed I’m a boy, not a stupid girl who’s all my sisters are! I can take care of myself.

Ansem: You should imitate them! They always obey all my rules and never mind with a human’s world. Even though you’re not a girl, you’re still my son. And as long as you live under my ocean, you’ll obey my rules!

Roxas: If you would just listen…

Ansem: Not another word! And I am never… never to hear of you going to the surface again! Is that clear?

 

Roxas sadly leaves the throne room along with Goofy.

 

Donald: Hmph! Teenagers. They think they know everything. You give them an inch, they swim all over you.

Ansem: Do you think I was too hard on him?

Donald: Definitely not. Why, if Roxas was my son, I’d show him who was boss. No, sir. I’d keep him under tight control.

Ansem: *thinks* You’re right, Donald.

Donald: Of course.

Ansem: Roxas needs constant supervision. *Donald nods* Someone to watch over him, to keep him out of trouble. All the time. *shows on Donald* And you are just the squid to do it.

 

Donald: Who me? *surprisingly leaves the throne room* How do I get myself into these situations? I should be writing symphonies, not tagging along after some headstrong teenager.*sees Goofy bringing a bag to Roxas* Hmm? What is that kid up to? *follows Roxas and Goofy*

 

Roxas, carrying a bag swims through the ocean along with Goofy. Donald is still following them, until they reach a cave closed with a stone. Roxas removes the stone and Goofy goes in. Merman checks if anyone is around and goes in cave as well. Donald quickly swims towards the cave and goes in just before it gets closed. One of his tentacles gets stuck, but it quickly get is from the stone.

 

Donald:*surprisingly looks around the cave* Huh?

 

In the cave were all kinds of human’s stuff, all over. In the middle of it Roxas sits, talking with Goofy.

 

Goofy:*sadly looks at him* Roxas, are you OK?

Roxas:*sights* If only I could make him understand. I just don’t see things the way he does. He can’t see the human things that are cool and interesting.*sings with his beautiful voice* (imagine how would Jesse McCartney sing Part of That World)

 

#Look at this stuff, isn’t it neat? Wouldn’t ya think my collection’s complete?#

 

*puts fork on the candlestick*

 

#Wouldn’t ya think I’m the boy? The boy who has everything.#

 

*looks around the cave*

 

#Look at this trove, treasures untold. How many wonders can one caver hold? Looking around her you’d think. Sure, he’s got

everything.#

 

*swims towards the pendants*

 

#I’ve got gadgets and gizmos aplenty. I’ve got whozits and whatzits galore.#

 

*takes a box and shows it to Goofy*

 

#You want thingamabobs? I got 20!#

 

*sadly puts is back down*

 

#But who cares. No big deal. I want moo-oo-ore. I wanna be where the people are.#

 

*goes to the music box*

 

# I wanna see. Wanna see ‘em dancin’. Walkin’ around on those… What do ya call ‘em?”

 

*goofy shows his last two fins*

 

#Oh yeah, feet.#

 

*starts swimming around*

 

#Flippin’ your fins you don’t get too far. Legs are required for jumpin’, dancin’.#

 

*starts dancing with Goofy*

 

#Strollin’ along down a… What’s that word again? Stree-eet.#

 

*swims towards the surface*

 

#Up where they walk. Up where they run. Up where they stay all day in the sun. Wanderin’ free. Wish I could be part of that woo-oo-orld.#

 

*sadly looks up*

 

Donald comes toward him, but he stumbles at some of the things.

 

Roxas: *surprisingly* Donald?

Donald:*says angrily* Roxas, what are you… How could you… What is all this?

Roxas: It’s, uh… It’s just my collection.

Donald: *says sweetly* Oh, I see. Your collection, hmm. *says angrily* If your father knew about this place…

Goofy: *quickly swims toward Donald* You’re not gonna tell him, are you?

Roxas: Oh, come on Donald. If he’d saw my cave, he’d destroy it in a minute. He would never understand.

Donald: Roxas, you’re under a lot pressure down her. I’ll take you home and get you something warm to drink.

 

But Roxas sees a giant shadow pasting through.

 

Roxas: What do you suppose…

Donald: Roxas?

 

He leaves the cave, swimming towards the surface to see what that giant shadow is.

 

Donald: Roxas! You came back there!

 

PS: Try to guess which kh character wil play Ursula's cast.

[TheApprenticeofKingMickey 3,689]

Xehanort! LOL

 

Chapter 3 please.

[Hunter Hawk 392]

Xehanort! LOL

 

Chapter 3 please.

 

Unfortunately is not the Xehanort. But the chapter three will be posted as soon as possible.

 

Thanks for the comments!

[Obi-wan 411]

 

Unfortunately is not the Xehanort. But the chapter three will be posted as soon as possible.

 

Thanks for the comments!

 

.... Evil guy not Xehanort hmmm Ok Ansem out so that leaves Xemnas Terranort good amount organization 13 Braig Darn to many to figure out X|

[KairiGolden13 10]

 

Unfortunately is not the Xehanort. But the chapter three will be posted as soon as possible.

 

Thanks for the comments!

 

i though the same thing so if not Xehanort it Maleficent

by the way i love the story so far it good

[UnstableInsanity 4]

I keep seeing Roxas in a bikini when I read this...

>3

 

Besides that it's a really interesting story, continue, continue!

[Hunter Hawk 392]

.... Evil guy not Xehanort hmmm Ok Ansem out so that leaves Xemnas Terranort good amount organization 13 Braig Darn to many to figure out X|

 

Sorry, but it's not Xemnas, Terranort or anybody from the Organization 13.

[Hunter Hawk 392]

i though the same thing so if not Xehanort it Maleficent

by the way i love the story so far it good

 

Maleficent won't be appearing here as well.

[SoraKH 793]

great story man!! Its almost the same with the little mermaid but its good for anyone who hasn't see the little mermai!!! ;p BTW who ever read my story namines diary and wants to continue it go to

http://kh13.com/foru...__fromsearch__1

[Hunter Hawk 392]

Chapter Three:

 

Roxas comes on the surface to see that the shadow was from the ship. The sky is already dark, but is lightened by firework.

 

Roxas:*excited by firework* Wow!

 

Goofy and Donald comes on the surface as well.

 

Donald: Roxas, what are you… *sees firework, scared* Jumpin’ jellyfish!

 

Roxas goes closer to the ship, Goofy follows.

 

Donald: *shouts* Roxas? Roxas! You come back there!

 

Merman climbs on ship and looks around it. There are sailor all over the ship, dancing and playing on instruments. There is also a red dog happily barking around. Suddenly he smells something. Dog smells until he comes to the Roxas’s hiding place. Roxas quickly hides. When he wants to check if the coast is clear that dog appears again, licking Roxas’s face.

 

Roxas: *quietly says* Yuck!

???: Come here Red! Good boy.

 

Merman watches the dog. Dog goes back on the ship to the girl with a sketchbook. Roxas looks on her with a detail. She had a beautiful long blond hair and those sparkling blue eyes. He couldn’t stop watching her.

 

Princess Namine:*stroking the dog* Good doggy! *tries to show her a merman* What is it? Did you find something?*goes to the fence and looks, Roxas quickly hides* What did you wanted me to show, Red? There’s nothing there. * goes back on the ship*

Roxas: *watches her again*

???: *says loudly* Hey there, kiddo! Quite a show, eh?

Roxas: Sora, be quiet. They’ll hear you.

Sora: *says quietly* Ooh, I got ya. I got ya. We’re bein’ intrepidaceous. *says loudly* We’re out to discover!

Roxas:*quickly holds Sora’s beak* Will you just be quiet? They’ll see me.

Sora: Then get off the ship if you don’t wanna be spotted.

Roxas: But, I’ve never seen a human this close before.*looks on the Namine who is playing with a dog* This one is so beautiful, isn’t she?

Sora:*looks on the dog* I don’t know. She looks kind of hairy and slobbery to me.

Roxas: *smiles* Not that one. *shows on the princess* The girl, not a dog.

 

Suddenly princess’s bodyguard comes.

 

Axel: Silence, silence. It is now my honor and privilege to present our esteemed Princess Namine with a very special, very expensive, very large birthday present. *shows on big package*

Namine: Oh, Axel, you shouldn’t have.

Axel: I know. Happy birthday, Namine.

One of the sailors opens the package. In it is a beautiful statue of Namine.

Namine:*excited* It looks just like me. So beautiful! Thank you Axel. *hugs him*

Axel: Glide you like it! I commissioned it myself.

Namine: Really?

Axel: Of course, I had hoped it would be a wedding present.

Namine: Oh, come on Axel. Don’t start. You’re just mad because I didn’t fall in love with that stupid prince. They’re all the same! None of them likes the sea and exploring like I do.

Axel: Oh, my! But, Namine, it isn’t just me alone. The entire kingdom wants to see you happy settled with the right boy.

Namine: *looks towards the sea* Oh, he’s out there somewhere. I just… I just haven’t found him yet.

Roxas happily looks at her.

Axel: Perhaps you haven’t been looking hard enough.

Namine: Believe me, Axel, when I find him, I’ll know. He will come to me… in a speed of lighting.

 

Suddenly storm starts making itself.

 

Sailor: *shouts* Hurricane a-comin’! Stand fast! Secure the riggin’!

Axel: Go to your cabin! Fast!

Namine: *says loudly* Quit treading me like a girl! I’ll stay her and help!

Axel: Ok, just be careful.

Namine: I will, don’t worry.

Sailor: *shouts* Stand fast! Secure the riggin’!

 

Namine along with the sailors starts setting a ship for a storm. It starts raining, blowing and ship starts shaking.

 

Sora: *holds on the rope and tries not to be blown away* Whoa! The wind’s all of a sudden on the move here! *wind blows him away* Yo! Roxas!

 

The big waves start lapping against the ship. Sailors are hardly controlling the ship. Roxas holds on the rope, but he falls back in the sea. He comes on the surface, watching ship again. Suddenly a lightning strikes into the sails and casts a fire. And that’s not all. Ship also hits the sea reef. Everyone jumps off the ship, directly into the sea. Fortunately one of the sailors brings a lifeboat and everyone goes in. Suddenly barking is heard. Namine looks towards the ship and realizes that her dog is still on the ship, stuck under the pieces of wood.

 

Namine: Red! *jumps in the sea and swims towards the ship* Hold down, I’m comin’!

Axel: Princess! Come back!

Namine: *shouts* Not until Red is safe!*climbs on the ship and goes to Red* Don’t worry, I’ll help you. *takes pieces of wood off the dog* Come on boy! Let’s go! *runs along with a Red to the fence* Jump into the lifeboat, Red! You can do it!

 

Dog jumps in the lifeboat. Namine tries to jump to, but her leg is stuck.

 

Axel: Namine!

 

Suddenly an explosion destroys a ship. Sailors and Axel are watching it with horror. Roxas sees it to and quickly starts looking for a Namine. He finds her, slowly sinking in the sea. Merman takes her in his arms and carries her towards the seashore. It’s already a day when he gently puts her on seashore. Sora flies here too.

 

Roxas:*frightened* Is she… dead?

Sora: It’s hard to say.

 

Sadly looks at princess again and realizes one thing.

 

Roxas:*happily* Look! She’s breathing.*sights* She’s so beautiful. *starts singing again*

 

#What would I give to live where you are? What would I pay to stay here beside you? What would I do to see you smiling at me?#

 

Goofy and Donald come on the seashore as well. Donald watches open mouthed.

 

#Where would we walk. Where would we run.#

 

Sora closes Donald’s mouth.

 

#If we could stay all day in the sun?#

 

Namine opens her eyes a bit, to see a foggy picture of Roxas.

 

#Just you and me and I could be. Part of your woo-oo-orld.#

 

Suddenly he hears barking. That dog, Red is running towards him along with Axel. Roxas quickly returns in the sea.

 

Axel: Namine? Namine! Oh, you’re alright my dear.

Namine: *looks towards the sea* A boy… rescued me. He… He was singing. He had the most beautiful voice.

Axel: Ah, Namine, I think you’ve swallowed a bit too much seawater.

Namine: But, it’s true! He was really here!

Axel: Sure, sure. Let’s go back in the palace.*helps her walk towards the castle*

 

Roxas is still watching them, behind the rock.

 

Donald: We just gonna forget this whole thing ever happened. The sea king will never know. You won’t tell him. I will stay in one piece.

 

But Roxas, doesn’t listen to him. He only continues singing.

 

#I don’t know when. I don’t know how. But I know something’s starting right noo-oo-w.#

 

Sun shines through the clouds.

 

#Watch and you’ll see-ee. Someday I’ll be-ee-e. Part of your…#

 

Wave hits the rock, which Roxas is on.

 

#Woo-oo-orld!#

[Obi-wan 411]

 

Sorry, but it's not Xemnas, Terranort or anybody from the Organization 13.

 

Like i said to many bad guys to figure out what one it is so I though of a couple of them and gave up

[TheApprenticeofKingMickey 3,689]

AAW! That was adorable.

[Hunter Hawk 392]

Chapter Four:

 

While Roxas is singing those two eels appear, watching him. With the help of eels someone else sees him as well.

 

???: Oh, no, no, no, no, no. I can’t stand it. It’s too easy. *laughs* That kid is in love with a human. And not just any human. A princess! *laughs even more that before* His daddy will love that. King Ansem’s headstrong, lovesick boy would make a charming addition to my little garden. *looks towards the plant like creatures and laughs again*

 

Roxas returns to the palace along with Donald and Goofy. He quickly goes into his room and tries to do something with his hair. Suddenly someone knocks on the door.

 

Roxas: *says nicely*Who is it?

Rattina: *comes inside*Eh, it’s me Rattina, your sis. I know that you really like that book of yours, but do you mind if I borrow it?

Roxas: *dancingly swims to his bed, takes a book and gives it to his sister* Here it is, hope you’ll enjoy. *swims back to the mirror, fixing his hair again*

Rattina: Eh, bro? Are you OK?

Roxas: *looks with dreamy eyes*Yeah, why I shouldn’t be?

Rattina: *confusedly leaves Roxas’s room and goes to the room that she and all her sisters share*

 

Inside all sisters are talking. One of them spots her.

 

Ralana: So, did you get that book or you needed to fight for it?

Radrina: Why you look so confused? Did he shout on you?

Rattina: It’s not that big deal… but I think something is wrong with Roxas.

All sisters (except Rattina): *suprisigly* What’s wrong with him? *worried* Is he sick? *more worried* Did he hurt himself? *angrily* Did he made a mess again?

Rattina: *loudly* Calm down! *sisters stop talking*Nothing like that happened! It’s just… that he… Do you remember when I wanted to borrow that book of his?

Radela: When he shouted at you, by saying “None is touching my things, except me!” and didn’t come out of his room for like two days?

Rattina: Yeah, but this time, when I to asked him the same thing, he just gave it to me, saying “Hope, you’ll enjoy.”

All sisters (except Rattina): *even more surprisingly*

Rattina: But, that’s not all.

Rarista: What can it be weirder than that?

Raquata: He swims around with dreamy eyes!*laughs*

Rattina: Exactly! And he was fixing his hair all the time!

Radella: You’re kiddin’!

Rattina: Go see for yourself if you don’t believe me.

Radrina:*smiles* Ok, we’ll all gonna see our little brother.

 

Sisters swim towards the Roxas’s room. Rattina prepares to open it. She opens it, but the room is empty.

 

Radella: *looking around*Where the hell did he go?

Ralana: *looks through the window* There it is! On the… *laughs* You not gonna believe me what is he doing!

All sisters (except Ralana): What?

Ralana: *nearly dies laughing* He’s picking flowers!

All sisters: *look through the window*

 

There is Roxas, dancingly swimming from one flower to another and murmuring a nice song. From time to time he picks a flower.

 

Rarista: I haven’t seen him so cheerful since his birthday.

Suddenly Roxas swims back in the palace.

Rattina: Ok, I’d like to ask him so questions.

Radrina: No don’t do that sis. Isn’t it obvious?

Rattina: What?

Raquata: He’s in love!

 

All sisters start laughing, when Roxas comes in the palace. He swims dancingly again, putting flowers in each sister’s hair. He keeps

the last flower for himself and swims away.

 

Radella: Oh, he’s got it bad.

Ansem: *comes* What? What has he got?

Raquata: Too bad that I’m his sister…

Ansem: *confusedly* Hey, what has he got?

Ralada: Oh, daddy. Roxas is in love! Wonder who is the lucky mermaid?

Ansem: Roxas? In love?

 

Somewhere in the ocean Donald swims up in down, thinking.

 

Donald: OK. So far, so good. I don’t think the king knows. But it will not be easy keeping something like this a secret for long.

Roxas:*sitting on the rock tearing the flower* She loves me. *smiles* She loves me not.*frowns sullenly, and takes the last piece of flower* She loves me! *happily* I knew it!

Donald: Roxas, stop talking crazy!

Roxas: I gotta see her again… tonight. I’ll pick some flowers to her, she’ll definitely love it. And then we can finally talk for real!

Donald: Don’t you even think about it! You will stay right here where you belong!

Roxas: Oh come on. I won’t do anything stupid!

Donald: Listen to me! Human world world… It’s a mess. *starts singing Under the Sea along with other sea cratures*

 

While he sings with a weird voice, Donald comes and whispers something on Roxas’s ear. Roxas nods and leaves along with Goofy. When Donald finishes his song, he sees that Roxas is gone. Suddenly a seahorse comes.

 

Seahorse: Donald, I’ve been looking all over for you. I’ve got an urgent message from the sea king.

Donald: *frightened* The sea king?

Seahorse: He wants to see you right away. Something about Roxas.

Donald:*even more frightened* He knows!

[demy1077 56]

is it vantus

[KairiGolden13 10]

is it vantus

 

im thinking the same thing if not him than i gave up

[Luna☆ 108]

Great story I loved my favorite chapter is the 3rd one it was so beautiful can wait for other charter oh and by the way is vanitas the evil guy.

 

Sorry for the bad english.

[Hunter Hawk 392]

Great story I loved my favorite chapter is the 3rd one it was so beautiful can wait for other charter oh and by the way is vanitas the evil guy.

 

Sorry for the bad english.

 

Sorry. but is not Vanitas either.

[Obi-wan 411]

 

Sorry. but is not Vanitas either.

 

Who is he then I want to know!?

[Hunter Hawk 392]

Chapter Five:

 

King Ansem sits on his throne, thinking about Roxas.

 

Ansem: *thinking* Oh, who could the lucky mermid be?*sees Donald* Come in, Donald.

Donald: *says to himself* I mustn’t overreact. I must remain calm.*goes to the king* *says with squeaky voice* Yes? *he quickly clears his throat* Yes, Your Majesty?

Ansem: Donald, I’m concerned about Roxas. Have you noticed he’s been acting peculiar lately?

Donald: Oh! Uh, peculiar?

Ansem: You know, mooning about. Daydreaming, being nicer, picking flowers, singing to himself. *looks at Donald* You haven’t noticed, hmm?

Donald: Oh, well, I…

Ansem: Donald?

Donald: Hmm? *looks at the king*

Ansem: *gives him a weird look* I know you’ve been keeping something from me.

Donald: *acts like he doesn’t know a thing about it* Keeping something?

Ansem: About Roxas?

Donald: *shaking* Roxas?

Ansem: *goes closer to him, pointing his sword like key into a Donald* In love, hmm?

Donald: *panicking* I tried to stop him, sir! He wouldn’t listen! I told him to stay away from humans! They’re bad! They are trouble!

Ansem: *confusedly* Humans? *angrily*What about humans?

Donald: *realizes that he just tell something that he shouldn’t * Humans? *slowly moving away* Who said anything about humans? *gets picked by king*

 

Somewhere in the ocean, Goofy is leading Roxas to their cave.

 

Roxas: Goofy, why can’t you just tell me what this is all about?

Goofy: You’ll see. It’s a surprise.

 

Roxas enters the cave and sees a statue of Namine, right in the middle of it.

 

Roxas: *happily* Oh, Goofy. *hugs Goofy* Goofy, you’re the best! *goes to the statue* It look just like her. It even has her eyes. *starts talking with a statue* Why, Namine, run away with you? *imitates Namine’s voice* Oh, this is all so… so sudden. *starts happily dancing around, until he spots someone else in the cave, he becomes scared* Dad?

 

Donald is peeping, behind the king and Goofy quickly hides.

 

Ansem: *angrily* I consider myself a reasonable merman. *comes closer to Roxas* I set certain rules and I expect those rules to be obeyed.

Roxas:*scared* But, dad, I…

Ansem: *before Roxas could finish* Is it true you rescued a human from drowing?

Roxas:*tries to say* I had to…

Ansem: Contact between the human world and the mer world is strictly forbidden.*says loudly when he sees that Roxas is looking down* Roxas, you know that! Everyone know that.

Roxas: *angrily* But, she would have died!

Ansem:*shouts* One less human to worry about.

Roxas: *angrily* You don’t even know her! She isn’t dangerous and she loves the sea.

Ansem: Know her? I don’t have to know her! They’re all the same. *shouts* Spineless, savage, harpooning fish – eaters incapable of any feeling…

Roxas: *shouts as he never did in his live* Dad, I love her! *quickly hides behind the statue*

Ansem: *surprised* No! *even more angrily * Have you lost your senses completely? She’s a human. You’re a merman.

Roxas: *in tears* I don’t care.

Ansem: So help me, Roxas, I am going to get through to you. *his key sword starts glowing* And if this is the only way, so be it!

 

He starts destroying all human stuff Roxas and Goofy collected for so long. Roxas watches in horror, until everything is destroy except Namine’s statue.

 

Roxas: *he tries to protect the statue with himself* Please dad, don’t do this.

Ansem: Step aside, Roxas! *merman shakes with his head* Step aside, I say!

 

King loses his temper and sets a blast on the statue. Roxas dodges in time, but his shoulder is wounded. The blast completely destroys the statue, leaving only some pieces. When Ansem realizes that he just harmed his son, he tries to find words to say.

 

Ansem: Roxas, I…

Roxas: *grabs the piece of the statue and leaves in tears* Just go away! *shouts* I hate you. *swims away*

Ansem: *tries to follow Roxas, but Donald stops him*

Donald: I think you said enough. He needs some time alone, then I’ll try to speak with him.

Ansem: *thinks* Right then, I’ll return to the Palace. Report me back as soon as you talk to him. *swims towards the palace*

Donald: Hope, he’ll listen to me. After all if I wouldn’t be so stupid, things might turn differently. *starts looking for Roxas*

 

Meanwhile Roxas sits on rock, looking on the piece of Namine’s face. Every time when he looks in her eyes, a teardrop slides down to his cheek. Goofy who followed him here, tries to cheer him up.

 

Goofy: Don’t worry… we’ll find… other human stuff for our collection.

Roxas: *sadly* It’s not just about that. Dad… he… he hates humans so much, even though they’re not so dangerous. And he almost killed me, when he wanted to destroy the thing, made by them. I don’t understand him at all. *hides his head behind his arms*

Goofy: How’s your shoulder by the way? *looks on it*

Roxas: I don’t know… it hurts a bit, but only if I move it.

 

Suddenly something wraps thigh around Roxas’s arm. Goofy tries to help, but the other thing knock him down.

 

Roxas: *scared* Goofy!

 

The thing that attacked Goofy, wraps around Roxas’s other arm and moves it roughly. Roxas feels pain in his shoulder. Now he realizes that he was attacked by two evil looking eels.

 

Xigbar: Try not to struggle kiddo or we will break that arm of yours. *pulls him somewhere along with the other eel*

Roxas: Where are you taking me? And what did you do to my friend?

Xaldin: You’ll see. It’s for your own good.

Roxas: But, if you’ll just let me go…

Xigbar: Not a chance. After all don’t you have something you want to do, huh?

Roxas:*sighs, when two eels are pulling him into a darker part of the ocean*

 

Eels bring him to the scary looking cave. Roxas looks on the ground, but quickly looks up when he sees a bunch of plant like creatures on it. Eels pull him to the room where a large cauldron is. Suddenly an octopus like person comes in the room.

 

???: So you’ll finally showed up.

 

The light shines on person and reveals his long white hair.

 

Roxas:*shouts* The Sea Sorcerer Riku?

Sorcerer: The one and only yeah. So, I heard you got a problem kid. How can I help you?

Roxas: You can help me?

[TheApprenticeofKingMickey 3,689]

D: RIKU?! HOLY CRAP! Why Riku, of all people?

 

I have a question: If Roxas is underwater, how can he possibly have the ability to cry?

 

Also, I noticed that some of Roxas' mannerisms are slightly girly. Make him more manly! (If possible.) Maybe you should tweak him up a bit so he doesn't seem too much like Ariel. Even if it is based on the Little Mermaid. http://kh13.com/forum/public/style_emoticons/default/smiley-confuse.png

[Hunter Hawk 392]

D: RIKU?! HOLY CRAP! Why Riku, of all people?

 

I have a question: If Roxas is underwater, how can he possibly have the ability to cry?

 

Also, I noticed that some of Roxas' mannerisms are slightly girly. Make him more manly! (If possible.) Maybe you should tweak him up a bit so he doesn't seem too much like Ariel. Even if it is based on the Little Mermaid. http://kh13.com/forum/public/style_emoticons/default/smiley-confuse.png

 

Well, I chose Riku, becuase I think he's Roxas's enemy in 358/2 days.

 

For Roxas crying underwater? Well I'm not entirely sure how, but in the acual movie Ariel crys underwater too.

 

For making Roxas more manly? I'm trying that too, but I promise I'll try harder in the next chapers. It's just that I like him so much when he sings or do things that makes him cute.

 

Anyway thanks for telling me that, I'll do my best.

[TheApprenticeofKingMickey 3,689]

Well, I chose Riku, becuase I think he's Roxas's enemy in 358/2 days. For Roxas crying underwater? Well I'm not entirely sure how, but in the acual movie Ariel crys underwater too. For making Roxas more manly? I'm trying that too, but I promise I'll try harder in the next chapers. It's just that I like him so much when he sings or do things that makes him cute. Anyway thanks for telling me that, I'll do my best.

Yay! I can't wait for the next chapter!

[Hunter Hawk 392]

Chapter Six:

 

Donald: *looking around* Roxas! Where are you kid? *sees unconscious Goofy* Goofy! What the hell happened to you? *slaps Goofy’s face*

Goofy: *slowly opens his eyes* Donald?

Donald: Are you alright? And where is Roxas? I saw you followed him.

Goofy: *thinks* Well I did follow him here. Then we talked, I don’t know what exactly. Then… something attacked Roxas, I tried to help, but it attacked me either. Then you woke me up.

Donald:*worried* Who attacked him?

Goofy: I’m not sure… but it all began when something wrapped around Roxas’s arm. Could be snakes or… ells! That’s it, there were two eels!

Donald:*scared* Only one person haves two ells for pets!

 

Meanwhile Roxas talks with Riku.

 

Roxas: What do you mean, you can help me?

Riku: Exactly what I said! I heard you had a little trip on the surface, was it nice?

Roxas: *angrily*Why are you asking me that?

Riku: *continues* There was some human girl, wasn’t she?

Roxas:*surprised* How do you know about that?

Riku: What am I saying is that you should stop listening your Daddy and make your life as you want. You’re a just poor merman who doesn’t have any life, only ruined dreams. But I can make your dreams come true. *picture of Namine appears on the cauldron* She is quite a catch. Isn’t she?

Roxas:*angrily* No stop that! I don’t want your help!

Riku: Too bad for you, kid. It just happens that I know the right solution. *sees that Roxas is not listening to him* So, you will just go home and be miserable for the rest of your life? *goes towards the other room* Well, now. I won’t intrude any longer, but that was a wasted chance for you.

Roxas: *thinks* What solution?

Riku:*turns around with a smile* Well, I do know some magic and I think it’s the best way to meet with that girl if you become a human yourself.

Roxas:*shocked* What… you mean… no!

Riku: Oh, yes! I can make a potion that will turn you into a human for three days. You will be able to meet her, see her world that you been exploring for your whole life. Just imagine to see it more than just from the shore and…

 

Suddenly Donald and Goofy appear.

 

Donald: No, don’t do this Roxas, you’ll…

 

But eels wrap both of them.

 

Riku: Now where were we?

Roxas:*still thinks* What do I have to do?

Riku:*smiles* Potion will turn you into a human for three days. In those three days that girl you like will have to kiss you with all her love. If she will kiss you, you’ll remain human forever if not… you’ll turned back into a merman… and belong to me. Is this clear?

Roxas: But if I become human forever, I’ll never be able to go back into an ocean. I don’t know if I should…

Riku: *wraps one of his tentacles around Roxas* But your dreams will come true. And we hadn’t talked about payment.

Roxas:*tries to get away* But I don’t have… *tentacle shuts his mouth*

Riku:*smiles* Don’t worry, I don’t want anything big or impossible to get. Just a little thing. *looks straight into Roxas’s eyes* Your voice.

Roxas: *finally gets off the tentacles* But how will I possibly talk with her?

Riku: *laughably* Ever heard of a body language? *gets seriously* So, do we have a deal kid?

 

A contract appears in front of him, along with a pen.

 

Riku: All you have to do is sign.

 

Roxas hesitates for some time and looks towards the Donald and Goofy who shake with their heads. Then he thinks about Namine, her beauty, her love… He holds a pen, closes his eyes and signs a contract.

 

Riku:*laughs* We have a deal! *starts throwing all sort of things into a cauldron*

 

The cauldron starts glowing and light comes from it. Light surrounds Roxas and goes straight into Riku’s seashell necklace. Roxas tries to say something, but he can’t. The light took his voice! Then another light surrounds him. It spins around him like a worst carousel. Suddenly his tail starts glowing until it gets transformed into a two legs.

 

He braves, but the water goes into his mouth, so he tries to get on the surface. Donald and Goofy quickly carry him towards the surface. Riku watches and wickedly laughs. Roxas finally gets on the surface, breathing the air. He also coughs because of the water ( imagine him coughing, without a voice! ). When he finally clears his throat, Donald and Goofy take him to the nearest shore. Roxas collapses right on it.

 

Near the palace, Namine tries to draw the face of the one who saved her. Her dog is jumping around, barking on the seagulls. Princess sadly looks on her sketch.

 

Namine: That face… it can’t get out of my head. And his voice… where is he?

 

On the other shore, Roxas is still laying unconscious. Goofy tries to wake him up.

 

Goofy: *slapping Roxas’s face* Come on, Roxy! Wake up!

Roxas:*slowly opens his eyes and sees Goofy right next to him, then he sits and realizes that he have legs*

???: Hey again, kiddo!

Roxas:*sees Sora*

Sora: *lands on the shore* Hey, I think there’s something different about you. Don’t tell me. It’s your hairstyle!*Roxas shakes with his head* No, maybe it’s your…

Donald:*loudly* He’s got legs you idiot!

Sora: I just wanted to say that!

Goofy: And that’s not all. He gave his voice to the sea sorcerer to get legs! And now he has only three days to get a kiss from a Princess.

Roxas:*tries to stand up, but he falls in the water*

Donald: Just look at him! On human legs! What will I tell the king?

Roxas:*quickly looks at Donald and shakes with his head*

Donald: *thinks about him* Look Roxas, I don’t know what will I do, but one thing is clear. You need to meet that girl and let her fall in love with you. Oh right I’ll help you. *Roxas smiles*

Sora: *brings a piece of old sail* If you wanna be a human, the first thing you need to do is dress like one. Let me see. *he wraps the old sail around Roxas’s waist and makes him some kind of skirt* You look hot!

Roxas:*gives him a weird look as he looks on the cloth*

 

Meanwhile Namine still draws Roxas’s face. Suddenly her dog sniffs something and he’s very excited by that.

 

Namine: What’s the matter boy? *dog pulls her dress* Is there something to show me? *dog keeps pulling Namine’s dress* Ok, ok I’m going.

 

Dog runs faster than Namine and soon comes on the shore where Roxas. Donald and Goofy quickly hide into the sea and Roxas tries to run away, but he quickly falls because he can’t walk properly. Dog jumps on him and licks his face again.

 

Roxas: *Not again! Yuck!*

Namine: Red, where are you?*sees Roxas* Oh, are you ok?

Roxas: *stares on her*

Namine:*offers him a hand* Sorry if my dog scared you. It’s just that he likes jumping on the people.

Roxas: *holds Namine’s hand and slowly stands up, but falls again*

Namine: Oh, dear! Let me help you. *helps him back on his feet*

 

When Roxas is finally standing properly, she sees his face in detail.

 

Namine: You seem very familiar to me. *thinks*Have we met?

Roxas:*happily nods** Yeah, it’s me! You remembered!*

Namine: Yeah! I knew it! You’re that boy! What’s your name?

Roxas: *I’m Roxas!**realizes that he can’t talk*

Namine: What’s wrong?*Roxas shows on his throat* You can’t speak? Oh! *disappointed* Oh , then you’re not the one that I thought you are.

Roxas:*I’m the one! It’s just that I can’t speak.* *tries to improvises that he’s a merman, but that only causes him to fall for the third time*

Namine: *helps him stands up again* Jeez, you must have really been through something. Don’t worry I’ll help you.*helps him walk* Come Red, we’re going home.

Roxas: *smiles**Yes, she still remembers my face! Hope she’ll like me…*