sephyfan98 8 Posted July 17, 2011 Ok.....this is a fan fiction in progress....its set after KH2, and for FFVII, shortly after Advent Children.....the beginning is pretty much what happens when Riku meets Vincent....this is gonna be good. Also, the story will reveal the secrets of Riku's past......Sorry for the misspelling. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rikuluver15 35 Posted July 17, 2011 This sounds SOOOOO cool! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Sigrun 1,064 Posted July 17, 2011 it sounds very interesting, but i hope its well written. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
hatok 6,413 Posted July 17, 2011 Riku has a mysterious past? Best of luck! I hope yours turns out to be one of the good ones. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
sephyfan98 8 Posted July 19, 2011 ‘Where am I?’, thought Riku. ‘One second, I was being sucked into a dark corridor along with Sora, and the next? I’m on the other side of that Corridor, but Sora’s nowhere in sight. Mabey he got looped into another Dark Corridor. I hope he’s all right….’ Riku said to himself, “Waaaait a second….I think I remember this place! But how? I’ve never been to this world in my life.” But then, suddenly, a voice sounded behind Riku. “Hey kid, who are you? ….Never mind that. I don’t think you’re very welcome here.” Riku turned around to face the speaker, and saw a man with a red, tattered cape and a three-barreled handgun - pointed right at him. “…Why are you pointing a gun at me?, asked Riku. He summoned his Keyblade, Way to the Dawn, and pointed it at the man. “I don’t know you, and you don’t know me. But I’ll tell you one thing. You definitely don’t want to get on my bad side. Also, you mind telling me where I am?” The man said, while pointing his gun at Riku,”We’re at the Forgotten City, near the ruins of the Temple of the Ancients. But should’nt a Remnant know this already?” Riku, confused, replied,”Remnant? Remnant of what? I have no idea what you’re talking about.” He leaped at the strange man, and slashed Way to the Dawn at him. The man quickly jumped back and dodged the swing, and shot his handgun at Riku. But then, a voice sounded. “Hey Vincent, you might want to stop shooting at that kid! He’s a friend of mine!” A teenage girl lept out of the trees, landed with a soft ‘thud’, and yelled out,”Hey Riku! Remember me from Hollow Bastion? It’s me, Yuffie!” Riku looked confused for a second, but then he remembered……Yuffie walked up to Riku, and said to him,”Oh, wait a sec….you were….kinda possesed by Xehanort’s Heartless then, weren’t you?” Vincent turned to Yuffie. “Wasn’t Xehanort’s Heartless trying to take over Kingdom Hearts? I don’t think we should trust this….’friend’ of yours.” Yuffie replied stubbornly,”Any friend of Sora’s is a friend of mine. So there!” Riku, confused as to why Vincent didn’t seem to like him very much, said to Yuffie, “Yeah, I remember you. It’s just that the entire incident is really fuzzy, so I don’t remember much about it…..hey, have you seen Sora? We got seperated when we got sucked into a Dark Corridor.” Yuffie:“Nope. Heeey, this is kinda ironic!” Riku:”It is?” “Yeah! Because Sora was looking for you and the King, and now YOU’RE looking for HIM! Hey Vincent, we should get back to Cloud and Tifa’s place and see if Sora’s shown up there! Besides, Nanaki should be there soon and I’m positive him and Sora would get along great!” Vincent replied to Yuffie,”But hou will Cloud react to seeing your friend? You know how he is.” Yuffie: “Vincent, I’m sure he’ll be fine. I’m pretty sure he’s gotten over that. C’mon Riku, let’s go!” “Hmm?” Riku had been thinking to himself. ‘Cloud….Sora’s told me about him….wonder what he’ll be like…..hmm? “Oh. Yeah...ok…Argh!” Riku collapsed, breathing jagged hisses of breath between clenched teeth, as waves of pain theatened to consume his consciousness. “Ugh….” “Riku?!! What’s wrong!?!?” Then, through the agony engulfing Riku, a voice sounded. “Riku…..it’s been a long time…..my son…..” Riku, curled up into a ball, muttered, “Who are you? Whoever you are, get out of my head!!!” Then all of a second, the pain receded suddenly. Yuffie helped Riku up to his feet, while Vincent, staring at Riku, thought,”Something happened…..something involving him, I’m sure of it….” Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
sephyfan98 8 Posted July 19, 2011 for those of you who dont know who Vincent and Nanaki are, Nanaki is more commonly known as Red XIII. Vincent.....Square was originally going to put him in Olympus Coliseum along with Cloud in the 1st KH. Somewhere along the road, the idea was scrapped, so they incorperated parts of his outfit onto Cloud's. For example, his cape and gauntlet. Cloud's bat wing represents Chaos, who resides within Vincent. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
sephyfan98 8 Posted July 19, 2011 on the other hand, theres a reason Riku looks so much like Sephiroth.......part 2: coming soon! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
sephyfan98 8 Posted July 20, 2011 ......also, I would like it if you comment on my story.......I want to see what you think of it....Please? Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
rikuluver15 35 Posted July 20, 2011 That was really cool! one of my favorite kh characters and final fantasy 7 characters Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
sephyfan98 8 Posted July 21, 2011 That was really cool! one of my favorite kh characters and final fantasy 7 characters hey......i'll give you one guess who spoke to riku via telephy.......heeheehee....1 hint: look at first 5 letters of my name. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
sephyfan98 8 Posted July 25, 2011 Grrrrrr.....I can't find my note book with part 2 written in it! Sorry..... Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
