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How can I sleep

When I know

I'll just dream of you

Of you and me

Of what could be

Of what won't be

Of what I want us

To be

That won't be?

 

How can I sleep

When I know

You'll just brush off

The feelings

That I set free

By just saying

"Aww that's cute" or

"Aww that's sweet,"

Instead of telling me

What you really think

Of me

Of my feelings

Of my spirit

Of my heart?

 

How can I sleep

When you just

Sit there

Seeming to enjoy this

Enjoying me

Being hurt?

You say you don't

Want to hurt me

But you hurt me

Still

 

How can I sleep

When you

Won't tell me

How you feel

About me?

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I would say maybe this would be a slow song and have a slow guitar going with the lyrics and at the intervals have a slow sad violin

 

You are right... But.... Start it with piano thats better then slowly bring guitar and then start to sing... maybe if you like to make it POP music bring Drums and if pop-rock bring drums with electric guitar... HEY some thing goes in my mind right now I MAY CAN MAKE YOU A SONG... I will send you a massage if I could make the song...

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You are right... But.... Start it with piano thats better then slowly bring guitar and then start to sing... maybe if you like to make it POP music bring Drums and if pop-rock bring drums with electric guitar... HEY some thing goes in my mind right now I MAY CAN MAKE YOU A SONG... I will send you a massage if I could make the song...

 

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You are right... But.... Start it with piano thats better then slowly bring guitar and then start to sing... maybe if you like to make it POP music bring Drums and if pop-rock bring drums with electric guitar... HEY some thing goes in my mind right now I MAY CAN MAKE YOU A SONG... I will send you a massage if I could make the song...

 

Then I would be on the drums since it's what I do for a living :P

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