RoxAs Is Wise 7 Posted June 24, 2011 Recap from My Character Designs (http://kh13.com/forum/topic/20530-my-character-designs-8/): Basically the story is about some kids have their pets can turn into monsters so they go to an adventure to defeat evil force Sorry it's rough, this was made in about 4-5 hours only and supposedly made for colors to distinguish things but I didn't have time to Usual real world thing, exam coming up I plan to make the finer version afterwards. For those who have trained eyes to see beyond all that, or used to read 'name' (manga sketch) please comment. That'll be used in making the complete version. Thanks! WARNING: Heavy bw killer (loong spoiler contents) COntinued... 8P Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Protoman 1,974 Posted June 24, 2011 Me: Well, I'd work on the form and details Me: just make it alot less messier Me: then if you have time, it's always good to color. Me: if you make the lineart and the details more clear, it's easier to tell whats going on Me: and try typing it out instead of handwritting it Me: Because it's either shading or coloring Me: both, when done correctly, are helpful so people can help distinguish backgrounds and details Me: the quality of the lineart just makes the thing look quite rushed, so you need to work on it Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
xion---424 51 Posted June 24, 2011 yeay! i love your style it seems wet.. no no.. flows your lines are flowoing but precize ands neet they look verry fluid and relaxed i love the story Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
