Stardustblade358 806 Posted July 22, 2011 Saphira stood up and whiped her tears. She then looked at Odin and noded. They were about to run towards the others when Saphira was stopped. Her feet were crystalized. She was starting to crystalize. "No...not yet...."Saphira says. She just wished she could atleast see the others and see how they were doing. She looked at Odin,who looked down,sad. Saphira felt her hands tremble. She rested herself to cry again. She was just scared. But she knew that she would wake up. She looked at Odin. "It's ok,it's just a nap..."Saphira says. The crsytal went up to her knees and her waist. She looks around. "Joe,Rai,Lightning,Hope,Vanille,Snow,Fang,Odin,everyone..."Saphira says. Remember their faces. It was only a see ya soon. But she couldn't help it. She chuckled. She saw as it was up to her shoulders. She said one last messege,witch she wished they could hear. "Thank you,and see ya soon."With that Saphira closed her eyes and actually smiled as the crystal took over her completetly. She shone one last time,Odin dissapeared,and teh crsytalization was complete. She would remain like that. Until she would wake up once more. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Wolf on the Run 391 Posted July 22, 2011 joe and the others walked throw orphans cradle cutting down any cie'th they crossed joe then had a strange feeling in his heart he knew what it was and slightly smiled he looked to the others "she did it" sazh looked at joe "what ya mean" "saphira she did it she finished her focus now i just hope we are around to see her and rai wake up" lightning looked at joe "we will lets just keep are heads straight and remember our goal" joe nodes with a determand face "Ya lets take dysley down once and for all" Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Keyblade13 6 Posted July 22, 2011 Rai smiled as he finnaly made it up the hill and came across who he was looking for, not able to help but laugh as he saw Saphiria locked in crystal. "Looks like you did it....bravest girl I ever seen." Rai then kindly took off his red jacket and wrapped it around her, smiling at her. "You may be in eternal sleep...but I got cold when I was asleep." he said, walking past her as he rounded the corner as he saw three figures waiting for him, all of them in ORG13 cloaks. Two of them fell to their knees in respect and Leah slowly walked up to Rai with an extra cloak, smiling gently as he put it on. "Welcome back...master." she said softly and fell to her knees as well, Rai's memory fully returned and knew his place. "Let's go...the troubles of this world will be ending soon." Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Wolf on the Run 391 Posted July 22, 2011 final after a long time of walking throw the hall of orphan they finally reachech the chamber in which Orphan should of resised they looked into the huge room then seeing a throne in the centre everyone looked to eachother lightning asked everyone "ready" everyone nodes the room then begins to shake snow looks forword "this is it" lightning speaks "moment of truth hero" the room the stops shaking and four different coloured crystals then appeared Bathandelus then appeared sitting in the throne "life sparks shines on once freed from its fleshly shroud" the four crystals then shine bright everyone looks forword at them then seeing who the crystals were joe looked at two of them "Rai Saphira" Sazh looked at the smaller of the crystals "Dajh" snow and lightning then look at the fourth crystal "Serah" Barthandelus smiles "dreams meanwhile shatter in a flash" barthandelus raised his staff in the air then tapping it on the ground all four crystals then shatter "you heartless" joe roared out "No" snow yelled joe and snow then ran at barthandelus but both were blasted back by a force field everyone one runs over to them lightning looks at snow "think wheres the real serah" snow then takes out serahs crystal tear it was still in one piece joe could then sense in his heart that Saphira and Rai were safe Sazh then steps over to them both "hey listean" he said holding out the chocobo who was shaking his head "it isnt real its just fal'cie smoke and mirrors" hope nodes "ya they dont work wonders they play tricks" everyone one then stands up drawing there weapons barthandelus laughs "at last my errant L'cie men fight men men battle beasts cocoon wars with pulse there can be no end to such conflict but cocoons end is imminent and inevitable will you not atleast slay Orphan and make it quick as an act of mercy" lightning steps forword "Mercy you mean murder and cocoon wont die we're not here for that we came for you" "such willful insolence disappointing you prolong cocoons suffering and to what end refusing me but condemns another to face your focus tomorrow if you truly seek salvation you will obey" barthandelus then turns into his fal'cie self joe steps forword summoning his keyblade "hate to blow it to you but from what ive been told i've never been one for following orders" joe smirked Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Keyblade13 6 Posted July 22, 2011 Rai cept slowly as his team began to walk into the dark corridor one by one and the last ones to leave were Rai and Leah, Rai stopping and staring at cocoon in the far distance. "Rai...." Leah said, looking worried as he was just staring then she saw him pull up his hood. "They are going to kill me when we meet again...ah well..they can understand." He said with a smirk as he turned and walked into the corridor. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
vanitas234 19 Posted July 22, 2011 is it to late for me to join Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Keyblade13 6 Posted July 22, 2011 We are nearing the end of this one vanitas..buta sequel will be based on this soon. So stick around and sign up for that one. Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Wolf on the Run 391 Posted July 23, 2011 OOC Ya keyblade13 is right vanitas234 but dont worry i'll let you know when the sequals coming and man this is the longest post ive ever done BIC: joe and everyone else looks at barthandelus everyone then brought fourth there summons all seven summons stud fourth in there final move form everyone then jumps on there summons and one by one everyone attacked knocking barthandelus back barthandelus then roared in pain and began to fade in to a pool of silver liquied joe looked as he faded as all the summons disappeared "that was to easy" joe thought sazh stepped forword as barthandelus roared in pain "Hey put a lid on it" "release at last release" lightning then spoke "its done" snow then cheered "alright" joe looked to them "hold on guys that was to easy somethings up" everyone then hears flapping above them so they look up to see dysleys strange bird the bird then dives into the silver pool of liquid and the pool begins to glow the room shoke and a voice came from the pool "a haven yea yet it must fall ere we be saved too frial a shell and humans should not thrive" a strange creature emerged from the pool smashing a huge fist against the ground as it stayed raising and talking "too stout a shell and they would not die slaughter and salvation two irreconicilable focuses we bore yet bound in a cocoon prison impervious to our power and so we thank you for granting us our long for birth" snow asks "Dysley?" sazh steps forword "No not anymore" the creature speaks "we are the abandoned one born but now to die our name is Orphan by our hand the world shall know redemption" joe looks at the creature "so thats Orphan barthandelus was Orphan the person who wanted us to kill Orphan all this time was Orphan" Orphan then began to laugh then raising into the air orphan fired some kind of energy blasting everyone but fang back "have you ever paused to consider our reason for making L'cie of men we fal'cie are crafted for a single purpose and granted finite power to that end with men it is not so men dream aspire and through indomitable force of will achieve the impossible your power is beyond measure we take l'cie so we might weild such streaght" vanille then begins to stand up while Orphan keeps talking "through you we obtained freedom from our bondage and now your focus alone remains defy it and all will be for naught cocoons sacrifice and that of gran pulse as well" some strange seal the surrounds vanille shocking her and lifting her into the air in pain fang looks to vanille "Vanille!" Orphan talks again "yet if we but summon the maker we will be granted the chance to begin again all our sins absolved and the world born anew submit L'cie become ragnarok lead us into the light" joe finally gets up staggering up use his keyblade to hold him up "Into the light you know nothing of the light" "you boy our nothing more then a tool used to keep the darkness in check" joe growled vanille screamed in pain fang called out "let her go" "we have no need of flawed l'cie" "Orphan i'll do it ill destroy you" Orphan smiled and vanille fell to the ground joe looked to fang "fang dont" joe then walked over to vaille orphan spoke "ragnarok the will to guide a world into obilvion can you bear the sin of our salvation" "you heard me i said ill do it" joe then helps vanille stand up as she calls out "you cant i'll be fine and you cant forget our promise we promised to sace cocoon we promised" fang then points her spear at joe and vanille "i made another promise too to protect my family" everyone else then begins to get up "sometimes you got to choose" joe saw fang swing her staff back he readyed his keyblade when saw stopped fang she yelled out "back off" "what are you doing" sazh then caught hold of fang as well "this aint the time to be losing it lady" "you to huh" lightning and hope then stand infront of joe and vaille lightning asks "what do you get from hurting vanille were in this together" "this is my focus no ones gonna stop me" fang then knocks sazh and snow back then jumping into the air she kicks her staff up high then jumping onto what looked like Orphans tail strange aura surronded fang as she jumped higher into the air grabbing her staff then slamming it into the ground it release a huge energy blasting everyone but vanille back there was a bright light then five Cie'th were in the room beside each one lied the weapon of its old user fang looks at them "everything i do why is this what you meant to happen all of em" Orphan laughed as the five cie'th got up walking towards fang ignoring vanille vanille began to cry as she fell to her knees "after all we went throw" the cie'th then began to hit fang with out way "guess i deserve it after what i did" fang then falls to the ground coughing "are they my sin to bear for choosing salvation" vanille calls out "please stop" the ceith then begin to fall on top of fang one by one crushing her vanille cried out "stop it" orphan just laughed "give them back" there was then a blast of energy from fangs brand and all the cie'th were blasted back Fangs brand glew brightly and began to turn her into ragnarok orphan spoke "salvation is born of sacrifice miracles of misery from shattered shards a new crystal legend will arise" ragnarok attack orphan then roaring out Orphan cried out "yes let anger be your streagth despair despair and save us all lo the day of wrath is come" something strange then happened and ragnarok turned back into fang Orphan looked at her "yet again how many times must you fail" orphan then did to fang what it had done to vanille earlyer fang spoke "let me go" "retake the form of ragnarok deliver us that what we have to long been denied" "what do you want" fang then cried out in pain as Orphan filled her with pain "steep yourself in hatred let it infuse your soul with the streagth it craves" vanille then stud up and walked towards orphan Orphan looks at her "your awakening demands an offer of pain" fang looks down at vanille "vanille run" "no i swore i wouldnt run away anymore id rather fight and lose than give up with out even trying" three strong explotions then hit Orphan hard and fang was blasted back vanille turns to look then seeing snow catch fang sazh then walks forword "Miracles out of misery youve got to be kidding me" hope then healed fang "ya fang whod be dumb enough to swollow that crock" joe then steps forword keyblade and gunblade at hand "well it seems like fang was she did turn into Ragnarok after all" joe laughed lightning then appeared with her gunblade raised "shore we've all had better weeks" vanille and fang look at them "your alive" "but you cant be" lightning then speaks "could be more fal'cie smoke and mirrors" snow then talks "fang i'm sorry" lightning then turns to fang "we made you go it alone" "second time now isnt it" vanille then asks "but where were you" hope speaks "somewhere cold and dark just thinking about everything that happened up until now" snow then coutiues on the story "it was like i had a glimpse of the future everyone was smiling and laughing" snow then takes out serahs crystal tear "even serah evern light" sazh then spoke to "i dont know it was a new focus or something you know it didnt really make sense of course i mean knowing we were worm bait and but as luck would have it next thing i know i feel someone pushing me right along" lightning then goes on "you were there to fang same side all of us together to the end" joe then looks at the cie'th "pulse you didnt actually think these ugly things were us did ya" everyone laughed vanille then looks at fang "we promised didnt we" everyone then hears Orphan screaming in pain as it fades into the pool once again everyone steeped forword then noticing all there brands had turned white instead of the black and red they once were snow then spoke "the heros never die come on were got a world to save" hope then spoke "if we have the power to destroy cocoon then we have the power to save cocoon you say you want your day of wrath do ya well its coming right now" sazh spoke "its time se gave the people what they want" vanille then spoke "we can do it i know we can we made it this far lets make a real miracle happen" fang then stepped forword "lady luck shore aint on his side" joe then cracks his knuckle "owe this is going to be good" a creppy laugh then came from the pool and the pool shined a clocked shape Orphan then came from the pool then speaking "you over reach yourselves" lightning spoke "no we over reach you" "is that so" "you dont beleave in anything you gave up on life before you were even born sat poisoning cocoon from the inside waiting for someone to come and destroy you shore you thing the end of the world is salvation all you care about is deaths release so take it and leave the rest of us alone we dont think like that when we think theres no hope left we keep looking until we find some maybe cocoon is past saving but its our home and we'll protect it or die trying we live to make the impossible possible that is our focus" orphan then crys out as everyone readys there weapons joe then speaks "lets finish this and complet that focus" Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Keyblade13 6 Posted July 23, 2011 Rai exited the portal on the other side and found himself in a large ship, looking around he saw it was quite dragon like. "Where did you get this?" He asked, Leah approaching him. "It's a weapon that was used by the Organization 13...due to our records it was destroyed years ago but we were able to use some of it's remaining parts to create our vessel." Leah said, walking up to a control panel. "Where shall we go?" She asked him, Rai searching his memory for a world. "Sea-Salt Ice cream......where could I find it?" Leah paused for a moment as she hoped he was regaining his memory. "Twilight Town sir." She said with respect as she began to set the hyperdrive cubes on. "Then that's where we are going." A large vortex began to rip open in space as the ship vanished and was flying through a energy tunnel. ("Something tells me I will be coming back to this world soon.") He thought to himself. // Meanwhile in Castle Oblivion on the top floor a woman sat on a throne while watching a magic screen with a large smirk on her face. "There you are my children...I have been looking all over for you..." She said, making the screen dissapear. "So..did you have fun playing with your big brother after so long?" She asked as the man in silver armor walked into her vision. "Yes. He has gotten stronger...and even a bit more for me to handel. But he does not remember a thing...his memory has been wiped completly." He said, the woman scowling. "Oh?..then we will just have to remind him. Now rest my childre,..you all will soon be reunited with your brothers and sisters!" She announced, the room becoming dark as millions of red eyed began to open. "Hahahahahah..AhahhahahahahahahaAHAHAHAHAHAH!" (Lightning-clashes) That's it for me posting tillthe sequel! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Wolf on the Run 391 Posted July 23, 2011 everyone looks at Orphan "your times up Orphan you wont death then here it comes" joe says as everyone begins to attack Sazh was shotting like mad while snow hope and vanille were firing every bit of magic they had in them at Orphan while joe fang and lightning when in for a direct attack Orphan screamed not even putting up a fight joe then jumps back along with lightning they both node then roar out "arm of one" both of them charge in attacking Orphan with everything they had they then jumped back everyone looked to one another "everyone together" everyone then fired one huge energy blast with there combined powers Orphan screamed and and began to explode everyone lowered there weapons as Orphan exploded lightning stepped forword "were here to stop him we've come to save cocoon right" everyone spoke together "Right" as Orphan began to fade away a bright light emitted from the wall behind filling the room and shining out into the city below the light then began to fade and all the lights in cocoon began to go out another smaller light but still just as bright came from Orphans cradile the roof to Orphans cradile began to collapse and joe and the others began to float into the sky joe looked as his brand was glowing along with everyone elses he could see they were beginnning to turn to crystal lightning called out "stay together" joe nodes then grabbing lightnings hand while she grabbed sazhs and sazh grabbed hopes while hope grabbed snows they then all looked down seeing fang and vanille way below them snow called out "Fang Vanille fang and vanille looked up and there brands began to glow much brighter then the others everything that happened next for joe and the others was a blur as they had turned to crystal and some how ended up on Gran pulse joe was in his deep sleep when he heard a voice call out "wake up" the crystal around joe then melted away and he looked around then seeing the others awake he then saw lightning ahead a bit looking forword joe then also looked ahead seeing a huge tower of crystal holding cocoon up in the sky stopping it from crashing into pulse lightning spoke "they did it they saved the world" joe then looked around seeing fang and vanille werent with them joe smiled snow then stepped forword "no they gave us a new one" sazh then jokes "thats one gift i'll forgive em for not rapping" hope laughed "yeah" joe looked at cocoon being held up by the tower of crystal "well thats one way to make to worlds one wouldnt of been my way to do" everyone then sees what looked like flag ships landing on pulse with civiliians hope then spoke "does this mean we completed our focus" snow shrugs "cocoons seen better days thats for sure" sazh spoke "ya and id say that quilifies as a demolition focus complete" lightning smiles "it really is a miracle" everyone then hears hope speak "My brand its gone" joe and the others look at hope then checking all of them there brands were gone joe smirks "now thats a miracle snow then looks ahead seeing three figures in the distance everyone then sees them as well lightning snow and sazh all smile they can hear the three people talking the small boy spoke "and there was this big punch of chocobos there" one of the girls then speaks leaning down to the boy "hey look there" the three people then begin to run towards the group snow smiles then saying "Serah" he then runs towards her as Sazh runs to his son Dahj lightning speaks "it is her" joe then sees the third person was saphira joe then walks beside hope and lightning hope looks down slightly "theyre gone arent they i guess they meant for this to be goodbye then again we've changed our fates before" joe puts his arm on hopes shoulder "no you never say good bye to anyone as long as you remember them in your heart there alway with you got it" hope nodes saphira then walks infront of joe joe smiles "told you you could do it" joe smirks joe then notices saphira with rias jacket "what the" joe takes the jacket "when did ria give you this" saphira shrugs "well at least i know hes awake and when i find him im going to kick his ass" joe smirked serah and snow then came over to lightning serah then hugged lightning "I missed you" "serah i'm sorry" "its okay" snow then put his hand on serahs shoulder "hey come on the apologies can wait we've got a wedding to plan you are going to allow it right" sazh then walked over with dahj on his shoulders "He said wedding dad" hope spoke "you dont waste anytime do you" "no i dont" sazh laughed "thats right go right in guns a blazing" "i swear to you i will make her happy" lightning nodes "i beleave you congrats" joe then smirks "i say you just about beleave him" "dont start" "just kidding snow" "actual you sticking around for the wedding" "me no sorry fix my runner then i'm out of here looks like ria did a bit of a disappearing act so best go off and look for him ya know" "fair enough but until the runner of yours is up and running your staying with us" "got it" Five weeks later lightning looks at joe "so this good bye" "a just for a while i'll be back to vistit some time" "right" lightning nodes "Owe joe take this" lightning then gives joe her old soldier armour "whats this for" "im not a soldier anymore but you your kind of a soldier of the worlds so fits you fine" joe nodes "thanks lightning" joe then takes something out of his pocket "here take this" "whats this for" "just incase you need me for anything anything goes wrong click on the button i got this it'll react to it no matter how far off i am and i'll be right back to give a hand" lightning smile "right okay joe good luck and dont get yourself into to much trouble" "right" joe then flys off into space To be Contiued Share this post Link to post Share on other sites