Vanitas 127 Posted June 21, 2011 *At Mysterious Tower* "Yen Sid" said a hooded figure. "Hmm? Whos there?" "Even one past your prime like yourself... You are still a threat. A threat capable of training new wielders." The hooded figure summoned a gray keyblade with a black handle. *At The Great Maw* "What are these things?" yelled Yuffie evading blows from from a blue creature. "I dont know!" yelled back Leon deflecting blows. "These things.... Look like Shadows. But blue? No definetly not Shadows." "There heading to town!" yelled Yuffie. "Well we have our own problems" said Leon looking at a giant red armor heading towards them. *In Radiant Garden's Town* The blue creatures headed into the town destroying things as they moved along. "These things are back huh? Well we have a chance to fix our mistakes now. Wouldnt you agree Aeleus?" said Dilan. "Hmmph" said Aeleus heading towards town. "Heh Heh Heh" laughed Braig watching Aeleus and Dilan from a distance. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
khkyle 2 Posted June 21, 2011 keep writing its a good start Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
CrownKeeper13 688 Posted June 21, 2011 keep on writing it! That could get really good! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites