Kingdom Sora 464 Posted June 17, 2011 This one i call Falls into the shadowsWith her, I'm in heavenMy heart is alive and thuds against my chestMy feet soars on the airMy skin feels hot in her radianceMy eyes are alive and open because they don't want to miss a second of herThough, when she leftMy body fell down, down toward Earth and then down more. Down into darknessMy heart stoppedMy skin felt frostbitten in the darknessMy eyes are closed to escape the darknessI waited for her to return, to save meDays passed and I stayed, slowly falling into darknessI started to lose hopeHopeThe last thing I had in the darkness, slowly diedHope was the last thing I had, died in the darknessHope u like them, i have a lot more where this came from 1 roxasgirl-miley reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
The Transcendent Key 12,109 Posted June 17, 2011 Epic man, keep writing! 1 Kingdom Sora reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
spenskh89 66 Posted June 17, 2011 Breath taking man. I really liked. Sincere and heart felt. Amazing man! I wish I could write poetry. Hope the girl likes it to. 1 Kingdom Sora reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Xenelle 11 Posted June 17, 2011 On 6/17/2011 at 1:57 AM, 'Kingdom Sora' said: I dedicate these poems to my one love, PersianRose13! This one i call Falls into the shadows With her, I'm in heaven My heart is alive and thuds against my chest My feet soars on the air My skin feels hot in her radiance My eyes are alive and open because they don't want to miss a second of her Though, when she left My body fell down, down toward Earth and then down more. Down into darkness My heart stopped My skin felt frostbitten in the darkness My eyes are closed to escape the darkness I waited for her to return, to save me Days passed and I stayed, slowly falling into darkness I started to lose hope Hope The last thing I had in the darkness, slowly died Hope was the last thing I had, died in the darknessHope u like them, i have a lot more where this came from \ totally epic man...............did she see it yet? she gonna be SO happy!!!! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Xenelle 11 Posted June 17, 2011 that is so beautiful!!!!!! got any more?! 1 Kingdom Sora reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kingdom Sora 464 Posted June 17, 2011 On 6/17/2011 at 2:27 AM, 'Xenelle' said: that is so beautiful!!!!!! got any more?! ya i got like 16 left and i will post them all if people like it! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kingdom Sora 464 Posted June 17, 2011 Thanks for the comments I wanted to put a new one on so here it is This one is called No More Hope Days without her has brought sorrow in my heart Friends say have hope, but for how long How much longer must I have hope In my heart, there is no hope Just sorrow Sorrow struck my heart The blood from my heart is my love, being drained away Instead of death its sorrow that has came in In death, you feel nothing Sorrow is worst, it gives you pain Pain that destroyed my hope Now there is no hope No hope No hope left in my heartHope you like this one, I'll post more if you like this one! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
The Transcendent Key 12,109 Posted June 17, 2011 Dude, you are seriously talented, please write more! 1 Kingdom Sora reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Pandora2721 46 Posted June 17, 2011 OMG thoes were great!!!! 1 Kingdom Sora reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
spenskh89 66 Posted June 17, 2011 Keep it UP! 1 Kingdom Sora reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Xenelle 11 Posted June 17, 2011 AWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! thats AWSOME MAN!!!! shes gonna love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 1 Kingdom Sora reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kingdom Sora 464 Posted June 18, 2011 Thanks for the comment guys, I really appreciate them! This one i call Death by love My life had meaning when i met her She gave me life for a moment That moment She was mine But, She had to leave Leave me in the darkness Days has gone by and I wait for her Day and night she doesn't come Slowly, death came to me I tried and tried to stay alive But death was always found a way to trick me The the day came where death came back I didn't hesitate when he tried Then I died, died by my love for her My death was Death by loveI hope u like it! Comment if u do like it! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Destati_Dream_XIII 91 Posted June 18, 2011 Awesomeness, Kingdom! Keep it up! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kingdom Sora 464 Posted June 19, 2011 Thanks for the comment guys! Really i appreciate the comments! I call this one Rose in the wind The girl I met gave me life She looked like a vision of beauty A rose Her skin was smooth and her eyes were shining When the wind blew in her face Her hair would flow like an angel She reminded me of a goddesses in Greek mythology I wanted her to be mine And for a minute, she was Then she disappeared in the wind Only to remind me is memories of my rose The wind took it away But she will be my rose in the windHope u like it! Comment on it! I want to know how the poem is! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
The Transcendent Key 12,109 Posted June 19, 2011 Truly touching man, i congratulate you! You are frikcin talented! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Destati_Dream_XIII 91 Posted June 19, 2011 Keep it up, man! Your poems all seem pretty deep. Great job! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
demy1077 56 Posted June 25, 2011 man ks you hit my heart and i am not going to say i am pr13 but those are lovly as can be. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
