The Transcendent Key 12,109 Posted June 18, 2011 Here is chapter seven, thank you all for reading my story and posting your comments! Enjoy! Chapter Seven: A Fierce Battle As Sora and friends look upon the burnt remains of the village, they see swarms of Heartless, Nobodies and Unborn heading towards them. Sora thinks:-Why are they working together?- Mulan: Sora, what's wrong!? Sora: Why are they working together? Mulan: They want to take us out first so that they can destroy themselves after, to them we are obstacles. Donald: How did you find that out? Mulan: When the two dragons destroyed the village, they started to battle each other. Goofy: Guys, we got trouble!!! Suddenly, they find themselves battling for their lives as relentless swarms of Unborn attack them. Sora: Sonic Blade! Donald: Fire! Goofy: Shield Barrier! Mulan: Flame Strike! At that same moment, a giant Unborn dragon swoops down and wipes out most of the Heartless and Nobodies. Sora: Wha--What's happening? Goofy: It's the three dragons!!! We're in trouble now!!! Mushu: Um, let's see, at time like these we should...RUN!!!! Sora: No, we have to finish them off, or they'll keep destroying everything. Mulan: I'm with you Sora! Mushu: Oh, I got a bad feeling about this! Meanwhile, Kairi sits under a shady tree in the garden when all of a sudden Dexeres appears before him. Kairi: Oh, Dexeres, you startled me! Dexeres: Sorry, it wasn't my intention. Kairi: What's wrong, you look sad. Dexeres: It's nothing... Kairi: Please, tell me, what's wrong? Dexeres: I-- It's just, I've lost everything that I've ever held dear, and I am seeing that the same will happen with all the worlds, that they will all meet a gruesome end... Kairi: Please, don't think like that, as long as we are here, Kingdom Hearts will not be tainted by darkness. Why don't you stay here in Radiant Garden? Dexeres: ...I am a shell of my former self, bound to the darkness. I cannot stay here, I must remain in the shadows, but do not worry, I will come to aid you. As soon as he finishes speaking these words, he vanishes in the blink of an eye. Ethan: Master Kairi, Ventus, Trish and I will depart now. Kairi: All right, please be carefull. As Kairi looks up to the sky, thinking about Sora, Sora and the others battle the three dragons. Sora: Climb on the tails and strike them down! Donald: Waaaak! Easy for you to say! Mulan: Wait, I see a weak spot in the edge of the wings, we have to strike the wings. Sora is right, we must climb on the tails! The brave warriors fight desperately to stay alive, and the battle rages across the skies. But the three dragons combine their powers to transform into an even more powerfull beast. Sora: They have transformed into an even more powerfull dragon!! Mushu: Wait, who's that over there? Sora and friends look towards the horizon, and they see a man in armor wielding a keyblade. Who could he be? Find out in Chapter Eight: The Man in Armor... 2 doom and !Kairi/Aqua! reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Sigrun 1,064 Posted June 18, 2011 armor..who would that be...? 1 The Transcendent Key reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
MiontheDemon 71 Posted June 18, 2011 Well...FINISH IT!!!!! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Stardustblade358 806 Posted June 19, 2011 This is pretty good. Keep it up. 1 The Transcendent Key reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
xion---424 51 Posted June 19, 2011 i love your story you are a AMAZING writer. you fit all the caracters together extreamly well so as karin and cecil who may not be kh caracters but i would have never questioned it.. you word things really good and manage to keep a story with so many caracters untangled and easy to follow and not just that but intresting too! i love the basis for the story for a fan fic it doesnt go far off from the game it could easily fit in with the kh storys and stuff ^^ really really good story which i enjoyed reading also ill get your trailer for it made soon i hope finaly got over my artist block :lol: sooo it should be done soon^^ 1 The Transcendent Key reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
The Transcendent Key 12,109 Posted June 20, 2011 You might be surprised at who the man in armor is, so without further ado, here is chapter eight! Chapter Eight: The Man in Armor As Sora and friends struggle to stay alive, they look to the far horizon and see a man in armor with a keyblade. They hope that this man is here to help, but in the blink of an eye, the man dissapears. The dragon clutches them tight to stop them from breathing. Mushu: Oh, no, our one way ticket outta here just vanished! What do we do now? Mulan: We can't lose hope, we have to stay alive! Sora: Gotta get loose! All of a sudden, the dragon's wings are cut off, and the dragon roars in pain. Donald: Now's our chance, attack!!! Sora: Everyone together!!! All of them unite their powers to form a beam, but it is still not enough. Sora: How can the dragon still resist this power? It should be defeated by now! Then, Sora feels someone behind him. When he looks back, he sees the man in armor pointing his Keyblade and summoning power from it. Sora: Thanks! Man in Armor: ... Then, in an instant, the beam becomes even more powerfull, and the dragon starts fading away, unable to resist the power of light. Goofy: A-hyuck, we did it!!! Donald: Hooray! We're saved!!! Mulan: Thank goodness! Mushu: Ha ha, we kicked some bad guy butt, and we owe it all to knight in shining armor guy!!! Sora: Hey, thanks for the help, I'm Sora, this is Donald, Goofy, Mushu and Mulan. What's your name? Man in Armor: ... Donald: Hey, what's the big idea!? Sora's asking a question, don't be rude and answer!!! Goofy: Donald, don't be so fussy, maybe the good fella is shy. If you ask politely, he will talk. Now then, could you please tell us your name mister? Man in Armor: ... The man stays silent, he reaches out his hand and he shows to them a starshaped object. Sora: Huh? Hey, that looks a lot like the good luck charm Kairi gave me! Where did you get that? Man in Armor: ... Mushu: Sora, there are three possible explanations as to why this dude does'nt talk. One, he is a mute. Two, he's a lethal assassin, or three, he's just a rude guy. Sora: Donald, Goofy, let's go back to Radiant Garden. Mulan, will you be able to handle things here for now? Mulan: Yes, I'll go to the other villages and make sure everyone is safe, don't worry. Sora: All right then. Hey, stranger, come with us! The man, still silent, simply throws his Keyblade into the air, and before their very eyes, it transforms into a keyblade glider. Goofy: I think he's gonna follow us there. Sora: Okay then, let's go. Meanwhile, Trish, Ethan, and Ventus are about to depart for Port Royal. Ethan: Okay, preparations set, all ready! Ventus: Good, now we have to go, the longer we stay here, the more destruction unfolds. Trish: Right! Goodbye Master Kairi, goodbye Master Aqua!!! Aqua: Goodbye! Kairi: So, they've left already? Aqua: Yes, I hope everything goes well. Kairi: Don't worry, we must have hope, everything will turn out all right. Aqua: You're right. We must have hope and be strong. Hey, what's that? They look to the skies and they see two objects, as they get closer, Kairi gets overjoyed. Kairi: Sora!!! When the gummi ship lands, Sora rushes to Kairi and kisses her. Sora: I missed you. Kairi: Me too. I'm so glad all of you are safe! Sora: Well, we owe it to that guy in armor over there. The man slowly approaches towards Aqua, and then stops, as if staring at her. Aqua stands there shocked and starts crying then quickly hugs the man. Aqua: Terra! Terra: ... Sora: That's Terra!? Everyone stands shocked at the fact that the man is indeed Terra. How did he escape from the Keyblade Graveyard? Will he ever speak? What will happen next? Be here for Chapter Nine: Terra's Awakening... 2 !Kairi/Aqua! and doom reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
The Transcendent Key 12,109 Posted June 21, 2011 All right everyone, chapter nine is here! Hope you like it! Special thanks to Xion-424 for the ideas for this chapter! Chapter Nine: Terra's Awakening There is a momentary silence, as everyone stands speechless at the fact that the man in armor is Terra. Aqua hugs him tight, crying, and slowly, he puts his arms around her. He still doesn't say anything, but feels love. Aqua: I thought I would never see you again! Terra: ... Aqua: What's wrong? Why won't you say something? It's been so long, please say something! Terra: Aqua, you, you're all right. You are safe! Sora, realizing that he and his friends best leave the two of them alone, tells everyone to leave. Aqua: Why didn't you come here before? I missed you so much! Terra: I had to protect you, from a distance, I did to many terrible things. I thought that you would never want to see me again. Aqua: How can you say that? Every day without you has destroyed my heart. I tried to carry on, but I couldn't let you go. I love you. Terra: I love you too. He takes off his helmet, and kisses Aqua passionately. Terra feels the warmth in Aqua's lips. Aqua feels something she hasn't felt in a long time, love's embracing kiss. Meanwhile, Trish, Ethan and Ventus are moments away from arriving to Port Royal. Ventus: I wonder how Port Royal looks like? It must be a big place. Ethan: I've been there before on recon missions, it's a town by the sea. I met the strangest guy there one time. I think he was a bandit, or something like that. Trish: A bandit? It might be interesting to come across him, don't you think Ventus? Ventus: Yeah, it would be interesting. As Trish and Ethan keep talking, Ven thinks to himself- I-- I sense him again. It gets worse everytime. Why do I get the feeling that he's coming back? Do I still have darkness in my heart? Am I a danger to everyone? Trish notices Ventus's worried face and feels sad for him. Ethan: Hey, what's with the long face? Trish: I'm worried about Ventus, he looks worried. I should talk to him. Ethan: Go ahead sis, I'll drive the ship. Trish: Thanks. Ventus, is everything all right? You look worried. Please tell me what's wrong. Ventus: I-- I'm scared. Trish: Of what? Ventus: My inner darkness, my other side. Him... Trish: Who? Ventus: Vanitas, he's my other half. I faced him a long time ago, but I know that he's still inside me, waiting to be set free. Trish: Oh, that's terrible... I want to help you Ventus, I want to make sure that you don't get hurt. Ventus: Trish... Ethan: Let me stop you right there, sis. If Ventus has this inner darkness problem, let him take care of it. Trish: But, Ethan... Ethan: I can't see you die Trish, not like what happened to Mom and Dad. Just back off!!! Trish: Can't you understand that I love him!? She says this with tears rolling down her eyes. Ethan: Shut up!!! I don't want to hear another word about it!!! Trish: I hate you!!! She goes to the back of the ship crying. Suddenly, Ethan feels sadness at hearing Trish say these words. Ventus: I'm sorry, I didn't want to come between you two, i'm so sorry! Ethan: Just forget about it! Back at Radiant Garden, Terra is in the library with Aqua and the others. Terra: I have come back and I bring bad tidings. Sora: What is it? Terra: The witch Maleficent still lives on, and she has summoned all her dark powers to create an even more powerfull army of dark creatures. Kairi: More powerfull Heartless? Oh no! Terra: That's not even the worst part. She has revived Master Eraqus and has seized control over his mind so that he can fight against us. Aqua: No, Master Eraqus, controlled? Is there any way to save him? Terra: I've tried, but so far there is no way. They hold their base of operations in The Shattered Realm. Sora: Where is that? Terra: It can only be found in The Lanes Between. I sense something of ill omen is going to happen. Master Eraqus is alive,but why is he under the control of Maleficent? Can things get any worse? Prepare for Chapter Ten: A Date with Destiny... 2 doom and !Kairi/Aqua! reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
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The Transcendent Key 12,109 Posted June 24, 2011 Thanks for your comments everyone, hope you like chapter ten! Chapter Ten: A Date with Destiny Trish, Ethan and Ventus are about to land in Port Royal. Trish is in a corner of the ship crying, Ethan drives the ship while heavily feeling guilt of making his sister cry and Ventus sits in another corner, thinking about his ever growing inner darkness. Ventus: -I don't want to hurt anyone. What should I do?- Then he hears a very familiar voice. Vanitas: Hahaha, well Ven, it's been such a long time. How have you been? Ventus: -Get out of my head!!! Stay out of my heart!!!- Vanitas: Oh, but I can't! Did you already forget that I'm your darkness? You can't keep me inside here forever. Ventus: Get out of my head!!! Silence is in the room. When Ventus regains himself, he sees Trish looking at him with concern and Ethan looking at him with anger. Ventus: ...Are we here? Ethan: Yes. Trish, get out of the ship. Trish goes outside but worries about what his brother is going to say to Ventus. Ethan: Look, you may be on our side, but I have my eye on you. Trish is all that I have left, if you really care about her, back off!!! Ventus: ... After this, they go out only to find that the town is empty. Ethan: That's odd, the last time I was here, there were more people. Trish: It's raining, come on, we have to go somewhere dry. Ventus: Guys, quiet. I hear voices. They slowly approach to where the voices are eminating when they see a group of soldiers, as if surrounding someone. Governor Swann: What gives you the right to do this? Lord Beckett: These two are charged for helping in the escape of a pirate named Jack Sparrow. I believe you know him. Elizabeth: Captain! He is Captain Jack Sparrow! Lord Beckett: So you do know him. Ah, I also have a charge for Mr. James Norrington. Governor Swann: Commodore Norrington resigned his post a few months ago. Lord Beckett: Take them away. Governor Swann: No, you can't do this! Trish: Should'nt we do something? Ethan: No, we can't interfere with their affairs. Ventus: But, we have to help! Ethan: No, we only came here to wipe out any threat that appears, not meddle in the affairs of these people. Trish: Guys, we got trouble! Suddenly, Unborn appear behind them. Trish: These ones look different. Ventus: It doesn't matter, we have to take em' down! Strike Raid! Ethan: Magnera! Trish: Crystal Lance! They fight off the hordes of Unborn, and suddenly the rain intensifies. Trish: I have an idea, guys, hold them off! Ventus: All right. Ethan: Be carefull. As Ventus and Ethan hold off the attacking Unborn, Trish stores power and then points her keyblade to the sky, and lightning strikes the keyblade, and from it, she summons a powerfull warrior mounted on a horse. Ethan: It's Odin!!! Trish: Odin, aid us! In the blink of an eye, Odin uses his blade to deliver a devastating Zantetsuken attack and wipes out all the Unborn. Trish: No one messes with us! Ethan: Good work sis. Ventus: Uh-oh, soldiers are coming our way! Hide! Ethan: Over here! They hide behind a cannon while the soldiers pass by, and Ventus thinks -I wonder who were those people?- What is going on here? Why are there so many soldiers? And what dangers lie ahead for Trish, Ethan and Ventus? Find out in Chapter Eleven: Quest for the Compass... 1 doom reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Hunter Hawk 392 Posted June 24, 2011 Keep up!!! Can't wait for the next chapter! :) Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
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The Transcendent Key 12,109 Posted June 27, 2011 Thanks for your comments! I hope you like chapter eleven! Chapter Eleven: Quest for the Compass In the dark of night, by the sound of the waves, screams can be heard from a prison. Screams of condemned people that might not see the light of day again. Nearby, soldiers throw coffins into the sea. Then, as one of the coffins slowly drifts away, a crow comes to look for it's meal, but is shot with a bullet. Then out of the coffin comes Jack Sparrow, the infamous pirate. He sees a skeleton by his side, and thinks of using it's arm to row the coffin. Jack Sparrow: Mind if I use this mate? He rips off the skeletons arm. Jack Sparrow: Guess not. He slowly rows the coffin until he reaches his ship, the Black Pearl. Jack Sparrow: Ahoy there, Mr. Gibbs. Mr. Gibbs: Did you find any treasure Jack? Is that a key you have there? Jack Sparrow: No, much better. It is a drawing of a key. Come, gentlemen, tell me, what do keys do? Crew Member: Keys unlock...things? Mr. Gibbs: Ah, and whatever it is this key unlocks, we have to look for it. Jack Sparrow: No! For what purpose will we look for the thing this key unlocks, without having the key what unlocks it? Mr. Gibbs: Then we have to look for this key! Jack Sparrow: Your not understanding me at all, mate. Mr. Gibbs: So, do we have a heading? Jack Sparrow: A heading... He takes out his compass, trying to make out where they should go. The compass just spins and Jack himself is unsure of which direction to take. Jack Sparrow: We go in a that way direction. Come on, snap to it! After this he goes into his cabin. Marty: Is it just me or is the captain acting weirder? Er? Mr. Gibbs: Trust me when I tell you this, what bodes ill for Jack bodes ill for us all. Back in Port Royal, Trish, Ethan and Ventus think about what they should do next. Ethan: Look, we don't have much time. We can't stay here, the soldiers might come back. Trish: But we have to help those people. Ventus: I agree. That Lord Beckett guy looks like bad news. We have to do something. Ethan: No, we can't meddle in their affairs. Trish: Why can't you stop thinking about that at least for once!? Ventus: Shhhh!!! Someone's coming! Soldier: Who are you? Stand back! Ventus quickly follows the sound of the voice when he sees The Mysterious Figure standing there, as the soldier is stricken with fear. Soldier: Answer me!!! Who are you!? Mysterious Figure: I am but a stranger, passing by, but if you must know, I'm the one who will bring you death. In a moment's notice, The Mysterious Figure pierces his dark blade at the soldier, instantly killing him. Mysterious Figure: Ah, I sense someone nearby. Suddenly, The Mysterious Figure appears right behind Ventus. Mysterious Figure: You carry inmense power within you. You should prove to be of valuable use. Trish: Stay away from him!!! Trish strikes The Mysterious Figure with her keyblade. Mysterious Figure: Hahah, you really thought you could kill me just like that? How pitiful. I shall have to kill you now. Ventus: No!!! Before The Mysterious Figure strikes Trish, Ventus gets in the way and both of them vanish in a blinding light. Trish: Ventus!!! Ethan: Why did he!? Trish: No, he's gone! It can't be! Ethan: He sacrificed himself... Trish: Now do you see? He loves me and I love him! Ethan: ... Will Turner: Excuse me, who are you two? Ethan: You were one of the people that was handcuffed earlier. How are you free? Will Turner: I made a deal with Beckett, that I would find Jack's compass, but wait, that still doesn't answer my question. Who are you two? Trish: He's Ethan and my name's Trish. Will Turner: You two wield strange baldes, it reminds me of a friend I knew. Ethan: You mean Sora? Will Turner: Yes, that's him. You must be his friends. It's nice to meet you. But anyways, I have to go, I must not waste any more time. Trish: Can we go with you? We are searching for a friend of ours. Will Turner: Of course. The more the merrier. They leave in a ship to go find Jack Sparrow, and Trish hopes in her mind that Ventus is alive. Meanwhile, The Mysterious Figure and Ventus arrive in The Realm of Darkness. Ventus: I won't let you hurt her! Mysterious Figure: How touching. Too bad you can't see her now. You are trapped here. Ventus: If I have to fight you forever, I will. Mysterious Figure: I see you have much determination, I only wonder, how to unleash your inner darkness. Ventus: No, I won't let you! Mysterious Figure: Already your darkness is calling me. It is only a matter of time that you succumb to it. You can't escape your fate. Ventus: But I can fight it! Mysterious Figure: So that's how it's going to be... Ventus: Strike Raid!!! Back in Port Royal, Trish, Ethan and Will Turner prepare to search for Jack Sparrow. Trish: So, where are we going? Will Turner: Wherever Jack was last seen. And Trish wonders -Where could Ventus be?- She hopes she can find him, while Ethan thinks heavily on something. What will happen next? Will they find Jack Sparrow? And will Ventus be able to escape The Realm of Darkness? Stay tuned for Chapter Twelve: Battles That Must be Fought... 1 doom reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
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The Transcendent Key 12,109 Posted July 4, 2011 Okay here is chapter twelve. Sorry for keeping you waiting, I was taking care of my nieces and playing 358/2 days. Enjoy! http://kh13.com/forum/public/style_emoticons/default/happy.png Chapter Twelve: Battles That Must be Fought In the serene calm of The Realm of Darkness, Ventus and The Mysterious Figure continue to battle. While Ventus battles valiantly, The Mysterious Figure simply mocks him. As both of them confront each other, Ventus feels the darkness getting a stronger grip on him. Mysterious Figure: Give in to the darkness, let it consume you. The more you resist, the more pain you must endure. Ventus: No, I won't listen to you! I won't give in! Mysterious Figure: Hahaha, this is amusing. Ventus: Stop laughing! Mysterious Figure: This is proving to be a good excersice. Ventus: You're going to regret this! All of a sudden, Ventus hears Vanitas's voice again. Vanitas: You are truly a pathetic excuse for a person. You are holding your true potential away, just because you don't want to let me out. How much more pathetic can you possibly get? Ventus: No! Stop it! Vanitas: You are nothing but a weakling, a puppet that doesn't know how to pull it's own strings. Ventus: I hate you! Vanitas: Yes that's it, let your heart fill with anger. Ventus: No!!! As Ventus tries to hold Vanitas back, The Mysterious Figure stands in amazement and thinks -Interesting, he has enough willpower to hold Vanitas back. His will is admirable, but I must not waste time. He must release Vanitas.- Ventus: Must control my power! Ahhhhh!!! In instants, Ventus feels an amazing power eminating from him. Ventus: This power! It's incredible! Mysterious Figure: What!? Ventus: Now I can defeat you. Lightning strike!!! In the blink of an eye, Ventus strikes The Mysterious Figure with a mighty slash. Mysterious Figure: Ahhhrgh! No! It cannot be! Before he says anything else, Ventus is nowhere to be seen. Mysterious Figure: He escaped! It cannot be! Meanwhile, Trish sits in a corner of the ship, thinking about Ventus. Ethan sees her and goes to her. Ethan: Sis, I'm sorry about what happened. Trish: I just hope he's allright. Ethan: ... Trish: I couldn't bear losing him. Ethan: Don't worry, Ven will be fine. He's gone through much worse. Will Turner: Is everything allright? Ethan: She is worried about our friend. Will Turner: We are almost on the island, maybe he is there with Jack. Trish: I hope so. Shortly after, they arrive on a mysterious island. They see a giant ship. -Jack must be here, this is his ship the Black Pearl- says Will Turner. They don't know where to go, so they tread deep into the jungle. Ethan: So, Jack is supposed to be here in this island? Will Turner: Yes, now come, we can't linger. Trish: Guys, I hear something. Be quiet. They follow the sound of the noise and they see natives preparing to burn a sacrifice. Trish: I see a man tied to a pole. Ethan: I think that's Jack. Will turner: Come on, we have to get to him. They rush to rescue Jack but are captured by the natives. Ethan: Oh great. What now? Trish: We have to find a way out of here. Jack Sparrow: Oh bugger, you people might have been my only way out and here you are, captured. Funny how luck treats us. Will Turner: Jack, I need your compass. Jack Sparrow: Let's just see if we can get out of here alive. How will Trish, Ethan and Will escape from the clutches of the natives and why is Jack being sacrificed? And where is Ventus? Find out in Chapter Thirteen: Escape From The Pelegostos Island... 1 doom reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
riku1123 11 Posted July 4, 2011 I really enjoy this PotC part of a very good story Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Omega15 12 Posted July 23, 2011 really good script. cant wait for the next bit Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Dark Memories 47 Posted July 23, 2011 Ohmy Blubber Nugget this is Great!!!!! This is EPIC i couldnt stop reading its great lovee ett Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
The Transcendent Key 12,109 Posted July 25, 2011 Hey guys chapter thirteen will come soon, sorry i havent written it yet, ive been busy. Don't worry ill write it as soon a s I can. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Corrupted keyblade 64 Posted July 28, 2011 I vote for a hurry up I haven't read it since chapter three and I just re read it all and forgot how good it was Chapter thirteen should hurry, but will we ever see Dexeres again? Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
The Transcendent Key 12,109 Posted July 30, 2011 Okay guys, here is chapter thirteen. Sorry I took so long. I hope you enjoy! http://kh13.com/forum/public/style_emoticons/default/happy.png Chapter Thirteen: Escape from Pelegostos Island Trish was looking all around and the only thing she could see where the strange natives. She was wondering how they would get out of this predicament. Ethan struggles to break free of his restraints, as Jack and Will argue over the compass. Will Turner: Jack, Elizabeth is doomed to hang in the gallows because of helping you. She is sentenced to be hung by the rope. Jack Sparrow: Ah, it seems once again you are in need of my help to save your bonny lass. But clearly as you can see mate, we are stuck. Will Turner: Jack, the compass, that's all I need. Please give it to me. Jack Sparrow: How do you think I can give it to you if I'm tied up. Ethan: Guys stop arguing! We have to focus on getting out of here alive. Trish: I think they want to cook us. We have to find out a way to escape and fast! As they try to think of a way to escape, Ventus wanders in the Lanes Between. He remembers that he wounded The Mysterious Figure and then he appeared here. Ventus: Great! How am I supposed to get out of here? In an instant, Dexeres appears at his side. Dexeres: Well, aren't you a ray of sunshine. You have unlocked your true power. I'm impressed. Ventus: You were watching me? Why didn't you help me? Dexeres: I wasn't watching you, I sensed your energy. Ventus: Oh... Dexeres: Come on, we have to get back to Radiant Garden. Ventus: Wait, what about Ethan and Trish? I can't just leave them. We have to find them! Seeing Ventus's determination, Dexeres opens up a portal. Dexeres: Then let's go find them. Ventus: Right! Back in the Pelegostos Island, Jack comes up with a plan. Jack Sparrow: Hey, you, boy with the attitude problem, create a diversion. Ethan: Attitude problem! Grrr... Trish: Listen to him, I think he knows what he's doing. Jack Sparrow: Now that's a smart lass. Now then just scream and shout and kick a little. Ethan: Ok? -What is this weirdo thinking to accomplish?- He screams and shouts and kicks and draw the attention of the natives. They find him amusing and start imitating his screams. Jack laughs and then squirms, struggling to break free. Trish: That's your plan, squirming? Will Turner: He knows what he's doing. Trust me, he'll get us out of this mess. Jack Sparrow: What fine judgement you have Will. Darn these restraints. Trish: Your almost free! Just a little more. Suddenly all of the Pelegostos hear a noise coming from far away, and so decide to find the source. They leave Jack, Will and the others alone. Ethan: Now's our chance! Trish: I sense Ventus is near! Just as Trish thinks that, Dexeres and Ventus appear on the other side of the island. They see all the Pelegostos going towards them. Ventus: What the heck are those things!? Dexeres: They must be the natives of this island. Our friends must be near. Ventus: It looks like we are going to have to fight. Dexeres: Don't worry, we can avoid these guys. In the blink of an eye, Dexeres and Ventus dissapear before the very Pelegostos's eyes. They stand there in awe wondering where they might have gone off to. Meanwhile back at the burning ground, Jack still hopes for someone to come free them when he suddenly falls on the dirt. Jack Sparrow: Haha, im free! Well, i'm still tied but i can walk. Good day lass and gentlemen. Ethan: Hey, don't leave us here like this! Trish: Jack, help us! Will Turner: Oh, i'm not surprised. This is how he usually is. Hmph, once a pirate, always a pirate. Jack runs off far away from the burning ground, but then encounters the entire tribe of Pelegostos on the way. He runs off in panic trying to outrun the tribe. He reaches a cliff and he sees two native women beside it in a little house. Before the slightest noise, Jack throws a coconut at one of them. They get furious and start throwing coconuts and fruits at him. Jack Sparrow: Stop it!!! The women stop throwing at him, and Jack quickly jumps so he can reach the other ledge. But then he loses balance and falls off the cliff and lands on the ground. Jack Sparrow: Bugger! Back in the burning ground, Dexeres and Ventus reach Will, Ethan and Trish. Dexeres frees them of their restraints. Dexeres: Come on, we have to go! Ventus: Hold on, he'll teleport us! Everybody holds on and in an instant they are at the shore of the island. Ventus: Let's go on the ship. Will Turner: Wait, what about Jack!? Ethan: Why would we wait for him, he left us! Will Turner: But he-- Then he suddenly sees all the Pelegostos tribe following Jack. Will Turner: Never mind, let's go! Jack reaches the ship and boards it. Jack Sparrow: Alas, my children I must leave you. But always remember that this was the day you almost-- Water splashes over him and he says in a grim tone- Captain Jack Sparrow... They go away from the island and are now on open sea. Trish: So, what now? Ethan: Well, we already found Ven, so let's go back to Radiant Garden. But before they even think of it, Jack interrupts. Jack Sparrow: Now then, Will, you said you wanted my compass? Will Turner: I need it to save Elizabeth! Jack Sparrow: If you help me find this key, I will help you save your little strumpet. Will Turner: This will save Elizabeth? Jack Sparrow: Of course. What's in store for Ventus, Dexeres and the gang? Do Jack's words speak the truth? Find out in Chapter Fourteen: Encounter with the Deadman Davy Jones.... 1 doom reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
!Kairi/Aqua! 0 Posted August 20, 2011 it so awesome can't wait for chapter 14!!!!!! Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Corrupted keyblade 64 Posted August 29, 2011 good as allways man Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites