KingdomHearts3 2,591 Posted March 7, 2013 That was amazing! It's like in BbS when Ventus and Vanitas fight each other and Kyle's Feral Form is like Ventus's Last Word. Awesome! 1 The Transcendent Key reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
The Transcendent Key 12,109 Posted March 13, 2013 Hey everyone, how are you all!? I hope you’ve all been okay! Here’s the latest chapter of The Keyblade War Saga! Sorry for the delay, but as always, school is a pain!(I had to do a frickin oral report in Spanish class. It was irritating, but I got a 90% A, so I’m satisfied, lol.) So anyways, without further delay, here is Chapter 47. Enjoy!!! Chapter 47: The Final Battle- Part 7 of 10: The Mysterious Figure, The Enigma Of Twilight Now having defeated Xylek, the party continues to cautiously wander the halls of The Master’s Lair. Everything seems to be quiet…maybe a little too quiet. Then they make their way to the second floor via the spiraled stairs, and they search around for any signs of Unborn or any of The Master’s cohorts. They continue marching through the halls of the second floor until they reach a strange chamber, in which a considerably giant statue of The Master is placed right in the center of the room. The gothic style mirrors radiate an eerie blue light that shines down upon our heroes. They investigate the corridors of this chamber and see if they can find any kind of compartment or anything that might give them a clue as to where The Master is hiding. Then, on the top of the statue, The Mysterious Figure appears, looking down on The Keyblade Wielders silently. Everyone looks up and prepares for battle. Dexeres: You! Mysterious Figure: Before saying anything, keep in mind that The Master is not here. He awaits you at the Dungeon of Darkness. He has prepared himself for the imminent battle he will have with all of you. Donald: Huh? Why are you telling us this? Why are you warning us? King Mickey: Gosh, come to think of it, he has helped us out a lot of times, and he’s gotten us out of very tight situations! He’s sure been a reliable ally, even though he’s the enemy! Riku: But I still find it strange. Why would he help us if he’s with them? Mysterious Figure: I myself do not know the course of my actions. Maybe I am doing this out of amusement, to see just how far you are all willing to go to save the worlds from darkness. Or maybe I am doing this for my own personal gain, hoping to gain the secrets of your abilities. Or maybe I’m doing this out of repent…to atone for past sins…to atone for all the wrongs I’ve ever made. Dexeres: Right. Well, I’m not falling for this! You betrayed me long ago, and after all the horrible things you’ve done, you think you can just earn our trust just like that!? You have some nerve! Mysterious Figure: Your anger is understandable. I shall not object with all of your claims. Sora: What is it that you want from us!? What do you hope to gain!? Mysterious Figure: I seek hope. Hope for a better future. I seek a reason to believe in you. Sora: Huh? (Start Song Here) And with that, The Mysterious Figure slowly floats down to the ground and he summons his Keyblade. As he lands gently to the ground, he walks towards the Keyblade Wielders, but Dexeres pushes forward and summons his Keyblade, then looks back to his allies. Dexeres: Guys, let me take care of this. I have to settle my score with him. Terra: Good luck. Dexeres nods then turns around to face The Mysterious Figure. He makes a barrier to make sure that his friends aren’t harmed, and then he charges towards The Mysterious Figure. He starts clashing blades with him, sidestepping and parrying and counterattacking each other’s attacks. Then he dashes and uses his Twilight Skyrider attack to impale The Mysterious Figure, but he simply dodges the attack, as if it was nothing. Then Dexeres rushes towards him and tries to find a weak link in The Mysterious Figure’s defenses, but he finds none. Dexeres: Die already! You’ve caused so much suffering for everyone, die!!! Mysterious Figure: Ah, so you do wish for my death. Hmph, and here I thought we were friends. Dexeres: How dare you!? They then clash blades and from ripples of light and darkness in the air, and then they land on opposite sides of the room. Then Dexeres looks at The Mysterious Figure angrily. Dexeres: I trusted you, I thought that you would always be there for me, but when I needed you most, you abandoned me! I thought that you were my friend! Tell me why!? Mysterious Figure: I don’t have to answer to you. My reasons are my own, and that’s all I have to say. Stop dwelling in the past and focus on the task at hand. Dexeres: Shut up! The rest of the party witnesses the battle and watches each attack carefully. The Shadow Seeker and Xion approach Riku and King Mickey and they look on to the battle. Xion: They’re both very strong. It seems they’re evenly matched. Shadow Seeker: And the most intriguing thing is that neither of them has made a scratch on the other. Their swordsmanship is amazing! King Mickey: Yeah. But gosh fellas, I know that The Master is watching us. He may not be in the room, but I can feel his eyes coming down upon us. We’re so close to getting to him! We’ll have to be prepared. Riku: The Master has been watching us for more time than you think. He’s been watching our every move. Why do you think we’ve been outsmarted by the enemy all this time? They know of our strength, and they decided to devise a plan to strategically weaken us. King Mickey: Well, one thing’s for sure. We have to count our blessings, because we’ve come this far. Riku: Yeah. They look on towards the battle, and The Mysterious Figure starts to launch orange slashes, that when combined, form the letter x. He then teleports and runs quickly then summons four pillars of fire and then he charges towards Dexeres. Dexeres tries to backflip his way out of the attack, but he is hit by the flames and sent rolling to the wall. He then stands up and brushes off the debris and starts to pinpoint The Mysterious Figure with his Twilight Zen attack. He jumps up and starts running along the walls, and then numerous phantoms having the appearance of knights with silver dragon armor start raining down on The Mysterious Figure until Dexeres leaps high into the air and strikes him down. Mysterious Figure: Impressive. You’ve become stronger. Dexeres: Shut up and die! Infuriated, Dexeres summons Nobody Samurai Warriors and then they help him dispatch The Mysterious Figure, but he just simply kills them off with not even the slightest bit of effort. He then leaps above Dexeres and summons two blue Ethereal Blades, and then he morphs them into an Ethereal Lance. He then backflips and throws the Ethereal Lance at Dexeres, and in the time he throws the lance, he quickly disappears and reappears behind him and strikes him right in the back. Dexeres screams in pain and then he falls to the ground. The Mysterious Figure then looms over him and points his Keyblade to his neck. Mysterious Figure: Stay down. Dexeres: N-never! Mysterious Figure: Don’t strain yourself. You’ve already worn yourself out. Let one of the others spar with me. You’ve done all you can. Give up. Dexeres: No! This fight is between you and me! Mysterious Figure: Then…perish. Dexeres: No, you will perish! Suddenly, Dexeres’s eyes flash a golden yellow color, and then he leaps up high, and slowly, a Nobody Dragon starts to form behind him. He then charges his energy and then he unleashes his anger and fury with all his might, and the Nobody Dragon launches a powerful crimson beam, and then sends Dexeres plummeting towards the ground, and he deals the finishing blow to the Mysterious Figure. After a few brief seconds, The Mysterious Figure simply unsummons his Keyblade and turns to face Dexeres. (End Song Here) Mysterious Figure: Very well. You have defeated me. It looks like I did right in placing my hopes in you. Dexeres: What the heck do you mean!? Mysterious Figure: Go now. Ahead lies the throne room, and behind The Master’s throne, you’ll find the entrance to the Dungeon of Darkness. Go, for time is short. Dexeres: ….You don’t deserve any recognition, but thank you… Mysterious Figure: Hmph, don’t smother me. I was merely a piece of the puzzle. Now the final pieces are yours for putting together. And with that, The Mysterious Figure fades away, and the barrier dissipates. Everyone checks on Dexeres to see if he’s okay, but Dexeres smiles and simply shakes his head. Dexeres: Guys, don’t worry. I’m fine. Come on, we’ve got work to do. And with that, he walks ahead of them, walking towards The Master’s throne room. And so, in what seems to be a final parting warning to our heroes, The Mysterious Figure has helped them yet again. His purpose for doing so might perhaps never be known, but now, our heroes must prepare for their greatest battle yet, as they finally confront The Master! Be ready for Chapter 48: The Final Battle- Part 8 of 10: Entering The Seeping Darkness… 3 Omega15, KHLegendIII and Kirie reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
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Weiss 8,279 Posted March 13, 2013 Epic battle against MF! Nice work on this chapter! The finale's getting great. Can't wait for the next one! 1 The Transcendent Key reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
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KingdomHearts3 2,591 Posted March 13, 2013 This is just great! I am loving this! This is getting really great! If this were KH6 or KH7, it would sell 7 billion copies in the world and everyone in the world would have a PS4 or PS5 and have this game. 1 The Transcendent Key reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
The Transcendent Key 12,109 Posted March 13, 2013 Haha, thanks for the comments guys, they really mean a lot, and trust me, it's because of all of you that I was able to write this story! And for that I thank each and every one of you! And so guys, in anticipation of Chapter 48, I want to ask you all, what do you expect out of the final 3 chapters? And what are your opinions on how far the story has come? And who is your favorite character of the story, be it hero or villain? Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Weiss 8,279 Posted March 13, 2013 Haha, thanks for the comments guys, they really mean a lot, and trust me, it's because of all of you that I was able to write this story! And for that I thank each and every one of you! And so guys, in anticipation of Chapter 48, I want to ask you all, what do you expect out of the final 3 chapters? And what are your opinions on how far the story has come? And who is your favorite character of the story, be it hero or villain? Final 3 chapters I pretict an epic battle that probably takes most of the three chapters and some big reveal at who the master is. My opinion is it's pretty great. Turning Vanitas into a hero was pretty awesome and the music choices are pretty great. My favorite character is probably Kyle. 2 KHLegendIII and The Transcendent Key reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
The Transcendent Key 12,109 Posted March 14, 2013 All right guys, this is it! The final three chapters are finally upon us! I hope you enjoy the climax of my story! And so everyone, I give you Chapter 48! Chapter 48: The Final Battle- Part 8 of 10: Entering The Seeping Darkness The party ascends the second floor of the castle, and upon arriving to the third floor, they see a giant hall and an enormous door at the end of the hallway. Just as soon as they step towards the hall, swarms of Unborn appear and block their way. Everyone prepares for battle and they charge towards the Unborn. They sweep and dodge and cast spells at them, and the Unborn quickly duplicate and swarm themselves around them, rendering them incapable of escaping. Terra: We should have known as much! The Unborn have been waiting for us here! Aqua: Seeing as though The Master’s throne is just ahead, he’s placed all the Unborn here as a last line of defense. Ventus: Well, it’s not going to work, because we’ll plow through them! Kyle: Right! We’ll defeat them all! And so the Keyblade Wielders coordinate their attacks and they gracefully take out the Unborn one by one. They are almost overrun a couple of times, but they push through the swarms of Unborn and defeat them. Just as they make their way to the end of the hall, a giant Unborn blocks their path and sweeps them off their feet. Vanitas and Ventus then run ahead to face the Unborn and they combine their attacks into two slashes of light and darkness that form the letter x. When they deal their devastating attack, the Unborn dissipates and fades away. They look around, and as they see that there are no more Unborn remaining, they open the door to the throne room. They look around and don’t see The Master anywhere in sight. Then Dexeres urges the others to stand back, and he charges the energy of his Keyblade and blasts the throne to bits. After a few seconds, they notice the wall that used to house the throne is seeping pitch black darkness. They all stand still, as if taken hold by the darkness. Sora: Well guys, this is it. From here, there’s no turning back. Are you ready? King Mickey: You betcha! Goofy: Yep! Dexeres: Let’s finish this once and for all. They all nod and go through the wall, and in an instant, they all start falling down what seems to be an endless abyss. They keep falling until they hit the ground, and then they regroup and stay close together, making sure that none of them are caught by surprise by The Master. A few seconds pass, and they suddenly feel an immense and powerful aura, and the ground rumbles below them. Then, The Master appears before them and laughs mockingly at them. The Master: Hehehehehe, so it seems that you’ve finally come. I was expecting this moment to come. You’ve done well. You have all braved many dangers and many obstacles, and you’ve gone through many ordeals to come here. I congratulate you on this achievement, but now you must all face reality, and perish. Kyle: No! You’re the one that has to face reality! Light and Darkness are of equal strength, and they are meant to be in balance! But people like you are the ones that prevent this balance! But we’re here to stop you! The Master: Stop me? Hmph. Hardly. For as we speak, Kingdom Hearts is feeding me all of it’s power, and I grow stronger and stronger by the minute. Riku: What!? How is that possible!? The Master: Don’t you see? Right now, we are in the Dungeon of Darkness, and this realm houses the entity knows as Kingdom Hearts. King Mickey: What? How can this be!? The Master: As you know, in the age of fairy tales, after the great Keyblade War, Kingdom Hearts was consumed by the darkness, never to be seen again. For years, many tried to find it and claim it, but seeing as their search always failed, they had to resort to creating artificial versions of it. But I found this, the true Kingdom Hearts, and so built my fortress here. I thrived and rose in power while you were all off taking care of Xehanort. My plans came into perfect fruition. And now, I shall swipe you all down with my power, and no one shall stand in my way! I will conquer all the worlds! Trish: Your wrong! Your not going to triumph, your not going to get away with this. We’ll stop you! The Master: You can try…but you won’t succeed! Mowahahahahahaha! (Start Song Here) And with that, The Master summons his two Keyblades, which are large arched blades with sharp edges and a silver shine. He smirks and then he rapidly strikes down everyone and impales them with Zero Graviza. The Master: Ha! Is that all you have? You can’t even manage to dodge my simple attack? How pathetic. You will all die!!! Everyone tries to get on their feet, but The Master simply starts to strike them and throws lances and axes of darkness at them. He then kicks them and launches them high in the air and strikes them down. Then the Keyblade Wielders finally manage to dodge one of his attacks, and then Kairi and Aqua and Xion cast Curasa on the party, and then Dexeres and Riku leap forward to attack The Master. They quickly slash The Master and clash blades with him, and then they combine both of their attacks and unite their powers. Riku: All right Dexeres, now! Dexeres: Let’s do it! They combine their powers and Keyblades and they perform the Twilight Aura attack, in which Riku and Dexeres attack The Master at opposite sides with darkness and twilight waves. They keep attacking until they both perform Zantetsuken and finish their attack. But The Master is not even scratched, and he brushes off the attack and looks at them, looking quite amused. The Master: Are you done? Now it’s my turn. He then disappears and everyone is on high alert waiting for him to appear. Then they all look up and a giant guillotine starts to swoop down on them. Xion: Look out! Everyone quickly dodges the giant guillotine, but then giant scythes swipe on them, and they keep jumping and dodging, and they almost get cut severely. But then Aqua and Kairi and Xion are able to get solid footing, and they unite their Keyblades and fire a beam of light that eliminates the guillotines and scythes. Then they summon Ixion, and Ixion attack The Master with wind slashes and thunderous hooves. The Master then falls hard to the ground, and everyone dashes towards him, as he unleashes a giant wave of crimson blue flames. Donald dispels the flames with his Blizzaga attack, and Goofy throws his shield to The Master. Then Sora and the Shadow Seeker perform Ars Arcanum and Ragnarok, but The Master blocks their attacks with quick precise swordsmanship. The Master: You have done well to last this far. And for that, I congratulate you. Sora: Shut up! The Master then backflips and kicks Sora and the Shadow Seeker away from him, and then he unsummons his Keyblades and starts drawing energy to his hands. The Master: Winds of Fledgling Darkness, give me your energy! Everyone goes and attacks him, but he simply laughs and absorbs their attacks, causing a silver aura to eminate from him, which starts to slowly grow as he absorbs more attacks. They all fire powerful magic spells at him, which only makes his aura even more powerful and greater in strength. Terra: Guys, he’s going to unleash his power, brace yourselves! Everyone nods and creates barriers to protect themselves. Then, The Master looks down on them and he simply smirks in amusement. The Master: Dark Orion! Give me your power! And with those words, he unleashes a shockwave of darkness so great and powerful that he breaks through the Keyblade Wielders’s barriers and sends them hurling. Then purple rays of light envelop him, and just as it looks like an explosion is about to occur, The Master disappears before their very eyes. Just when they think that he’s going to reappear behind them, the surrounding environment cracks and starts to shatter slowly. The darkness dissipates from the Dungeon, but then they start falling through a strange abyss that’s surrounded by silver spirals that seem to take the form of a heart, in which the center is colored pitch black. When they are able to get a good enough footing, they realize that they are now in… The Master: Kingdom Hearts! Witness it’s glory and splendor, and feast your eyes upon it, for it shall be the last time that you ever see it! (End Song Here) The battle against The Master has begun, and now the fate of all worlds rests on this climatic battle! What will happen next? Will our heroes be able to survive? Will The Master’s plans be foiled? Find out in Chapter 49: The Final Battle- Part 9 of 10: The Master’s True Form Revealed, Dark Orion… 3 KHLegendIII, Weiss and Omega15 reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
KHLegendIII 709 Posted March 14, 2013 Awesome job!!! 1 The Transcendent Key reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Weiss 8,279 Posted March 14, 2013 Dayum. Another amazing chapter! Lots of action. Looking forward to the final two chapters! 1 The Transcendent Key reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Kirie 3,489 Posted March 14, 2013 Gabriel!! Why you make this chapter awesome as ever?? 2 Weiss and The Transcendent Key reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
KingdomHearts3 2,591 Posted March 15, 2013 THAT WAS JUST INCREDIBLE!!!!!! I hope Forze dell'Oscurita is used for the next chapter and the last part of Darkness of the Unknown is used for the last chapter. I CAN NOT BELIEVE HOW AWESOME THIS IS!!!!!!! I......I......I......*once again passes out from the epicness of the story* Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
The Transcendent Key 12,109 Posted March 15, 2013 (edited) Awesome job!!! Thank you very much Tom! Gabriel!! Why you make this chapter awesome as ever?? Haha, thanks honey, I'm very flattered! THAT WAS JUST INCREDIBLE!!!!!! I hope Forze dell'Oscurita is used for the next chapter and the last part of Darkness of the Unknown is used for the last chapter. I CAN NOT BELIEVE HOW AWESOME THIS IS!!!!!!! I......I......I......*once again passes out from the epicness of the story* How did you read my mind in terms of music choice for the final chapters? O.o LOL, but I'll use Forze dell' Oscurita for the final chapter. ^_^ Dayum. Another amazing chapter! Lots of action. Looking forward to the final two chapters! Thanks very much! Thank you all for commenting on my story! It’s thanks to all of your comments that I’m able to keep writing more! Now then guys, enjoy the semifinal chapter of The Keyblade War! Without further ado, keep on reading, my fellow readers! Chapter 49: The Final Battle- Part 9 of 10: The Master’s True Form Revealed, Dark Orion Everyone looks up shocked at The Master, as they see that the purple rays of light enveloping him start to swallow him whole, and then his hood is taken off, but to everyone’s surprise, they don’t see his face, they only see a dark silhouette. Then he laughs mockingly at them and he is swallowed completely by the purple rays, and after a few seconds, he burst out of his cocoon-like shield, and he emerges, clad in purple armor that resembles a giant dragon. Then, he looks down upon the Keyblade Wielders, towering above them with mighty force. “Now you shall all meet your end, for you have seen my true form! I am Dark Orion, gatekeeper of darkness, and the sealer of your doom!” Kyle: We’re not going to back up now! This is it guys, it’s now or never! Ventus: We can do it! We just need to believe in ourselves, and the light will guide us to victory! Trish: Everyone, charge!!! (Start Song Here) http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZQbfTCV1yhY Everyone nods and they run towards Dark Orion, with courage and fiery determination in their hearts. They make their way through the giant silver spirals, and they start attacking him, trying to chip off his armor. But Dark Orion simply summons pillars of darkness, rising upward from the ground, with a simple wave of his hand. He knocks down several of the Keyblade Wielders, but the rest keep attacking him, trying to deal sever damage to him. Then he raises his hand upwards, and several of the silver spirals surrounding Kingdom Hearts turn into sharp blades that he unsheathes to strike down upon them. He then creates massive explosive shockwaves that send the Keyblade Wielders hurling back violently. Then the Shadow Seeker and Xion start climbing over the blades and chopping them off, and then they start to attack rapidly at Dark Orion’s head. Sora, Donald and Goofy perform their Trinity Limit attack and fire a beam of light at him, and Kairi and Aqua both unite their powers to summon Phoenix, the mighty fire summon, and it uses it’s Flames of Rebirth to strengthen the party and then attack Dark Orion. Dexeres and Riku both shoot darkness and twilight shards at him, and Ventus, Kyle and Trish all hurl their Keyblades to Dark Orion’s shoulder pauldrons. Terra then unleashes the power of his Keyblade and shoots rock spikes, and Vanitas boosts the power of the spikes with his darkness, towards Dark Orion’s chest, and then King Mickey shoots five pearls of light and combines them with the dark rock spikes to form a devastating attack. But it’s not enough, as the silver spirals make the battlefield even more narrow, and Dark Orion then closes in on them. King Mickey: Look out fellas, he’s closing in on us! Vanitas: Keep a sharp eye out, his attacks are very powerful! Aqua: Everyone, run! They look back, and they see a giant silver beam approaching them, and then they all start running for their lives, as the beam disintegrates everything in it’s path. Dark Orion simply laughs maniacally and picks them off one by one as if they were nothing more than ants. Dark Orion: You cannot hide little ones. Give up any hope of defeating me, for my darkness is all consuming and all powerful! You are all beneath me! Terra: Guys, use your most powerful magic spells against that silver beam! Everyone nods and then they all use their most potent spells, and in a glorious display of colors and devastating magic, they manage to deflect the beam right towards Dark Orion, which causes his left arm to disintegrate. Dark Orion screams in pain, and he retaliates by swooping down his right arm to them and causing them to fall harshly. He then starts to swoop his Keyblade from side to side to impale the Keyblade Wielders, but they all dodge and counterattack. Vanitas then seeps into the ground and rises up and shoots spheres of flames towards Dark Orion’s chest armor, and Kyle summons the power of the Dark Light and he makes a giant circle which covers most of the battlefield, and then he concentrates all his energy and makes pillars of light to surround Dark Orion. Ventus and Trish then jump high up in the air and hurl their Keyblades at Dark Orion’s head. They keep fighting him off, but no matter what they do, Dark Orion keeps getting stronger and stronger, as he makes dark acid rain on them. They are barely able to get cover from the acid rain, and after the rain dissipates, more dark pillars take them by surprise, and two Zero Graviza spheres start to draw them all in. Riku: Guys, hold on to something! He’s going to charge his attack! Dexeres: Brace yourselves! They all stab their Keyblades to the ground so that they can retain their footing. Then Donald and Goofy are almost drawn into the attack, but Sora and King Mickey manage to grab them by their feet. Goofy: Gwarsh, I thought we were goners! Donald: Thanks so much! King Mickey: You betcha! Sora: Right! Dark Orion: What is it that you all hope to gain by defeating me? Even if I perish, darkness will continue to exist. You will not be able to do anything to stop me, and all your efforts shall be for nothing. Your sacrifices will be in vain, and everything you’ve hoped to accomplish will crumble right before you! Give up and face reality, and face the fact that you cannot win this battle! Give in to the mighty power of darkness!!! Sora: Never! We’ve been through too much to give up now! We’re not going to give in to the darkness, and we’re not going to give up! Darkness will always exist, that’s true, but it can exist in balance with the light, and as soon as we defeat you, that balance will be restored! Your not going to cause suffering for anyone anymore! Dark Orion: Brave words, Chosen One of the Keyblade, brave words indeed. Now, face your doom, and die by my hand! And with that, Dark Orion unleashes the power of his Zero Graviza spell, and he attacks all of the Keyblade Wielders with a powerful wall of darkness that makes them struggle to keep hold of their Keyblades. The attack seeps everyone’s power, and they all fall to the ground, weak and helpless. Then, Dark Orion is about to perform his final attack, and everyone is helpless to stop them. Kyle looks up and slowly stands up. Dark Orion then strikes with all his might, but his attack is stopped short by Kyle…who is now in his Feral Form! Dark Orion: What!? You have mastered the power of the Dark Light!? Feral Kyle: Surprise! Dark Orion takes a step back, and Feral Kyle smiles dementedly and backflips and draws energy from Kingdom Hearts, and then he starts to slash and pierce and pummel Dark Orion effortlessly, and he chips off his armor to bits. Dark Orion is taken by surprise, and he can’t believe what he’s seeing, as Feral Kyle continues to mercilessly pummel him. Everyone looks up in surprise and amazement. Ventus: Kyle…our power is yours! In that instant, everyone raises their Keyblades to the air, and their power transfers to Feral Kyle’s Keyblade, and then he roars triumphantly and performs three consecutive Zantetsuken attacks, and then he uses his Dark Light Splicer attack to decimate Dark Orion. Suddenly, the silver spirals dissipate and Dark Orion’s armor is completely destroyed. Then everyone is swallowed by the darkness, and they fall into what seems to be an enormous battlefield inside Kingdom Hearts, covered in black by dark clouds and a dark forest, where the trees don’t have leaves, and the wind is harsh. They all look up, and they see Dark Orion, weak and scarred, but just when they think that he’s going to fall, he simply screams and he is cloaked by an even more powerful armor, this time colored silver and black. And then, six more Keyblades appear behind him, serving as wings. He then laughs mockingly and points his Keyblades to the Keyblade Wielders. Dark Orion: You have not won yet. Not by a long shot! You will perish! Riku: Not this time! Xion: You’re done for! Feral Kyle: It’s time to play! (End Song Here) Dark Orion has proved to be a lethal opponent, and he has tested The Keyblade Wielders’s wits and skills. Will everything that our heroes have worked for be fulfilled? Will they be able to finally put an end to Dark Orion? Will the light triumph over the darkness!? Stay tuned for the climatic final chapter of The Keyblade War! Prepare yourselves for Chapter 50: The Final Battle- Part 10 of 10: Searing Might Of Pure Darkness, Light’s Last Dance… Edited March 15, 2013 by Sesshomaru 2 Omega15 and KHLegendIII reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
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Keyblade101 526 Posted March 15, 2013 This story's awesome! I can't believe it's almost over. P.S. Is Riku going to find Dawn locked up in a dugeon by the Master or something? 1 The Transcendent Key reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Weiss 8,279 Posted March 15, 2013 Epic! Can't wait for the final chapter! 1 The Transcendent Key reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
The Transcendent Key 12,109 Posted March 17, 2013 Well guys, this is it! The moment you’ve all been waiting for! Everything has led up to this! The story that began on June of 2011 ends today, March 16th! Before you read the final chapter, I just want to sincerely thank you all so much for taking the time to read my story. I’ve truly enjoyed writing it, and from what I’ve seen, all of you have enjoyed reading it. I give thanks to my Dearly Beloved girlfriend Inori, my good friends Tom13, MasterNahi, and to all of you for contributing to the story. It’s truly been an honor writing this story, and I’m glad to see that it’s the most viewed on this site, which for me, is a huge honor. I guess you could say that this is my love letter to Kingdom Hearts, and I hope I’ve been able to do the series justice as it deserves. So, from the bottom of my heart, I thank you all! Now then, welcome to the finale of my story, keep on reading! Chapter 50: The Final Battle-Part 10 of 10: Searing Might Of Pure Darkness, Light’s Last Dance The Keyblade Wielders now face their deadliest battle yet, as Dark Orion has one more surge of power left in him. He stands before them, clad in his black and silver armor, with Keyblades behind him serving as wings. He then looks at them and laughs mockingly at them, and he looks towards them and waves his hand to the horizon. Dark Orion: You have all teetered into the edge of insanity. This is the last you shall ever live to see of Kingdom Hearts! My reign of darkness shall finally take root, and the doom of everything shall be finally realized! Sora: That’s what you think! But we’re not going to give up! We’ve come this far, and now we’ll finish what we started! Everyone is depending on us, and we won’t let anyone down! The worlds will be free from your tyranny! Riku: Darkness may be powerful, but that doesn’t mean that you’re the mightiest being to exist. We will defeat you! If anyone’s going to be destroyed, it’s you! Dark Orion: Your final words are indeed brave and inspiring, but they will serve you for nothing. Now, sink into the eternal darkness, and give in to despair! (Start Song Here) And with that, Dark Orion seeps his way into the ground, and the dead trees suddenly start growing to massive size, and the ground below the Keyblade Wielders rumbles violently. The wind blows even harsher, and thunder starts to crack, lighting up the dark sky. Then Dark Orion starts to launch dozens of Keyblades that materialize into his hands towards the Keyblade Wielders. Everyone dodges and begins to run towards him. Vanitas and Ventus both surf on their Keyblades and start drawing the power of wind to them, and then they boost themselves towards Dark Orion, and they start to strike him quickly. Kairi summons Bahamut and Aqua channels the power of her Keyblade to Bahamut’s wings to create beams of light that go straight to Dark Orion. But he simply dodges and then disappears then reappears behind Kairi and Aqua and knocks them out. Sora and Terra see them fall, and they quickly rush to their side. Terra: Aqua! Sora: Kairi! They try to make their way to Kairi and Aqua, but Dark Orion simply unites multiple trees into a giant blade and he swipes them, sending them flying across the battlefield. Feral Kyle and Trish cast Firaga and Thundaga, and then, at the corner of Feral Kyle’s eye, he notices something, and when he turns around, he sees an overwhelming army of Unborn seeping out from all corners of the battlefield. Feral Kyle: We’ve got company! Everyone turns around and they see the immense army multiplying by the second, and they all gasp in shock. But Dexeres looks towards them and he grips his Keyblade tightly. Dexeres: Guys, we have to take care of those Unborn. Sora, Riku, you two take care of Dark Orion. The rest of us will ward off the Unborn as best as we can. Sora: Wait, what about Kairi and Aqua? Terra: I’ll take care of it! Riku: Right! Go for it! They nod and charge towards the army of Unborn. Donald and Goofy furiously plow through them, and the Shadow Seeker and Xion take out numerous numbers of Unborn with their combined attacks. Dexeres strikes the Unborn with all his might and power, and he summons Nobodies to help turn the tide of battle. Terra runs quickly towards Aqua and Kairi, who are still knocked out, and he stabs his Keyblade to the ground furiously, causing many dozes of Unborn to flail up high into the air. He then dashes his way through the battlefield until he’s right next to Aqua. He’s then surrounded by Unborn, and he’s not able to cure Aqua and Kairi without losing sight of the Unborn. Terra: Both of you, please hang on, just for a few seconds. Aqua: I believe in you Terra… Kairi: Be careful… Terra nods and then he starts swinging his Keyblade and cuts through numerous Unborn swarms, and then he channels his power to the earth and makes giant rock spike columns that strike through many of the Unborn’s ranks. He fights with much bravery and fiery determination. Elsewhere on the battlefield, Dexeres and Ventus and Vanitas run quickly to disorient their opponents, and then they leap up high into the sky and strike quickly down with the Sky Diver attack. King Mickey hops through some of the Unborn’s heads and he slashes them quickly and mercilessly, casting Pearl towards a great number of them, and then he somersaults and darts through the battlefield at lightning fast speed. Feral Kyle and Trish fight side by side, taking out Unborn as fast as they can blink. Feral Kyle then uses the power of Dark Light to amplify his Keyblade’s powers, and he then mauls through the swarms of Unborn, while Trish hurls her Keyblade, amplified by Thundaga. Dark Orion laughs amusingly as he sees everyone desperately trying to stay alive. Sora and Riku attack him relentlessly, but he is not even damaged, as it seems that there’s an invisible barrier protecting him from any harm. Sora and Riku keep attacking, but then Dark Orion stops them short and grips them tightly and throws them to the ground. Dark Orion: How pathetic. You are truly worthless worms. Riku: Shut up! Riku leaps up and uses his ShadowBringer attack to try and break the invisible barrier, but to no avail. Then Sora uses a quick Reversal and then use his Ragnarok attack, which only bounces off of Dark Orion, causing the rays to ricochet towards Sora. Sora manages to block all the rays, but he is then struck down by one of Dark Orion’s Keyblades. He then falls unconscious to the ground, and Riku gasps in shock. Riku: Sora! He then lands on the ground and summons Gilgamesh, and urges him to go help Sora. Gilgamesh: You can count on me Master! Riku nods then turns his attention back to Dark Orion, who almost cuts him clean in half if Riku wasn’t fast enough. He then leaps up and starts to use his Dark Bravery attack to strike the invisible barrier even harder, but then he’s caught in a bad predicament, as Dark Orion’s Keyblades surround Riku, and they start to eminate a powerful darkness that starts to close in on him. Dark Orion laughs, but then he is caught by surprise, as Riku breaks through and shatters Dark Orion’s Keyblades. He then swoops in and slashes Dark Orion violently, showing precise and deadly swordsmanship. Dark Orion: What!? Impossible! How did you break through!? Riku: I’ve mastered darkness, so I’ve learned to resist it. Surprise, surprise. Dark Orion: No matter, I shall simply defeat you, and you will die!!! He then roars, and his Keyblade clashes with Riku’s, causing a radiant and dark light to eminate, lighting up the entire battlefield. Meanwhile, the Unborn are attacking even more relentlessly, and they try to overwhelm the Keyblade Wielders. Feral Kyle and Trish meet King Mickey in the middle of the battlefield, and they nod and fight with all their might. Dexeres shoots Lances of Twilight that pin the swarms of Unborn, and then his Nobody allies dispatch them. Donald and Goofy run towards Terra, who’s being overwhelmed by the endless warms of Unborn, and they lend a helping hand and cure Aqua and Kairi. Terra: Am I glad to see you two! Donald: We’re glad to help! Goofy: Now let’s take care of these bad guys! Goofy charges forward with Kairi, and he throws his shield to strike the Unborn as if they were bowling pins, and Kairi quickly takes them out with her Aerial Slam attack. Donald and Aqua combine their powerful spells to cast Blizzaja and Aeroja, and they decimate all nearby enemies. Terra continues to battle the swarms of Unborn, and he takes them out in one fell swoop with his Zantetsuken. Vanitas rushes through the battlefield, using his most powerful attack and gracefully taking out the Unborn as if they were nothing more than playthings. Vanitas: Now this is a battle! At the far side of the battlefield, the Shadow Seeker and Xion are being pinned down by numerous Unborn Behemoths, but then Xion comes up with an idea. Xion: Roxas, I’ve got it! Strike at the trees and morph our power with the trees to make them bigger! Shadow Seeker: Got it! And, in a split second, they concentrate their energy and unite multiple dead trees and use them to slam the Behemoths down to the ground. Then the Shadow Seeker darts through the Unborn and throws shurikens at them, while Xion attack relentlessly. Everyone fights with determination and fiery courage. Dark Orion keeps clashing blades with Riku, and he sends him reeling down. Dark Orion: Perish now, and stop resisting! Riku: Not on your life! He then notices that Sora is conscious again, and then he and Gilgamesh jump high into the air and they strike at Dark Orion’s barrier, which slightly cracks. Riku smirks and then he charges his darkness and then he points his Keyblade at the tiny crack on the barrier. Riku: I got you now! He shoots at the tiny crack, causing the barrier to shatter completely, now finally leaving Dark Orion vulnerable. He then growls in fury and then he seeps his way into the ground once again. Gilgamesh: Huh, where’d he go to now? Sora: Keep your eyes out for him! Then everyone notices that the Unborn start to flail high up in the sky, as if a giant magnet was pulling them. Then, to their horror, they realize that all the endless swarms of Unborn are uniting with Dark Orion’s body, making him bigger and bigger until he towers over them. He grows as high as three skyscrapers combined. Dark Orion: Now, witness the might of true darkness!!! Terra: Damn! He’s united all his power with the Unborn! Feral Kyle then reverts back to normal, and he urges them on and gets everyone’s attention. Kyle: Guys, I have an idea! Throw all your Keyblades, and unite them with the one’s Terra and Aqua and Ventus have, and that way, all our Keyblades can form a giant cannon that can take out Dark Orion for good! Everyone nods and they hurl their Keyblades to the sky, and then they witness the spectacle, as all the Keyblades start to transform and form into place, and when the Keyblades land, they form a giant cannon the size of a building. But there isn’t enough power to activate the cannon, and they all start to desperately pour all their energies towards the cannon. Riku: We can’t die! Not now! Not like this! Then, he hears a familiar voice. Dawn: It is time. Use the Anthrax Meteor Shard. Riku: Dawn? Dawn: Now is your darkest hour. Use the Shard, and bring light to Kingdom Hearts! Then he looks up, and a giant Keyhole materializes, shining with bright light, and then he places the Anthrax Meteor shard in the cannon, and then the overwhelming surge of power unleashes a mighty beam of light that deafens the Keyblade wielders, as it pierces through the Keyhole, and it strikes Dark Orion right in the center of his body. Dark Orion: N-no. This cannot be!!! I cannot be defeated! Nooooooo!!!!!!!!!!! With a giant roar, Dark Orion screams of agony, and all the Unborn fade away, and Dark Orion slowly dissipates, causing an explosion that makes it’s way through the entire battlefield. Everyone braces themselves as the explosion continues for five straight seconds. Then, after a few seconds, the darkness in the battlefield dissipates completely, and then the Keyblade Wielders witness the most beautiful sight they’ve ever seen. (End Song Here) A lush and marvelous countryside unravels before them, with a beautiful lake and an immense amount of forests stretching wide across the horizon. The sky is as blue as can be, and the grass rustles softly with the wind, and then everyone smiles and realize, that they have won, and that they have just witnessed just a part of what is Kingdom Hearts. Donald: Woohoo!!! We did it!!! Goofy: Hooray! We’ve won! Everyone sighs of relief, and they all celebrate their victory. They hug each other and run through the grasslands in joy. Then everyone goes to hug Vanitas. Vanitas: Uh, sorry, I’m not really the hugging type. Ventus: Oh come on Vanitas, you deserve one! Vanitas: Oh, what the heck, bring it here. Everyone laughs and Vanitas hugs them all, and they enjoy their moment of triumph. Then King Mickey smiles and looks up to the sky. King Mickey: Well fellas, we have to go back to Disney Town. Oh, and we have to make sure that Kingdom Hearts stays sealed, so that no darkness may enter it ever again! Sora: Right. Everyone nods and they point their Keyblades to the sky, and a giant Keyhole materializes in the sky, and they fire beams of light that ensure that Kingdom Hearts remains safe. And after a few seconds, they are all transported one by one to Disney Town. After a few minutes, they all arrive to Disney Town, and they are greeted by Queen Minnie and the rest, who are overjoyed to see them. She kisses King Mickey on the lips and she hugs him tightly. Queen Minnie: Oh Mickey, how I missed you so! King Mickey: I missed you too Minnie! Everyone smiles and they happily enjoy the reunion with their friends. Kyle smiles and then he starts to walk away. But then he’s stopped by Ventus and Trish. Trish: Kyle sweety, where are you going? Kyle: I…was just leaving….because I don’t have a home, and besides, the war is over. So I just have to go. Ventus: No you don’t! You can stay with us! Me and Trish can be your parents! Kyle: What!? Trish: Of course! We can be your parents! Kyle: You’d really do that? Ventus: Of course! Kyle then looks at everyone and they nod at him, urging him to say yes. Then a very happy smile makes it’s way to Kyle’s face, and he cries of joy. Kyle: Okay! I’ll be your son! Everyone applauses and cheers of joy, and they all happily embrace the heartwarming moment, as Ventus and Trish hug Kyle. Then King Mickey smiles and gets everyone’s attention. King Mickey: Gosh fellas, this calls for a celebration! Everyone agrees, and after a few hours, a giant tent is placed in the center of Disney town, in which a feast and a party is being made in honor of Kyle’s adoption, and for congratulating the Keyblade Wielders for their valiant efforts in The Keyblade War. Everyone takes part in the activities. Sora has an eating contest with Donald and Goofy, in which Goofy wins, and Kairi giggles while watching them, and King Mickey smiles and laughs and enjoys the moment. Vanitas wins a contest of swordplay with one of the guards of Disney Castle. Terra and Aqua happily kiss each other and watch everyone with a smile on their faces. Dexeres plays with the local children, the Shadow Seeker and Xion gaze at the sky happily, holding hands, knowing that now the future holds endless possibilities for them. Gilgamesh serves as the cook, and he delightfully brags about how he’s the best cook in any of the worlds. Ventus, Trish and Kyle happily hug each other and they enjoy the party. Riku smiles and goes outside the tent and looks towards the sky, and then he hears Dawn’s voice in his head. Dawn: I knew that you would all triumph. I’m glad that everything turned out okay. Riku: Yeah, it sure did. I just wish we could be together now. Dawn: Don’t worry, we will see each other. Everything happens for a reason, and now that peace has been restored, who knows what will happen? Hehe, I look forward to the day when we finally meet. I hope to see you soon. Riku smiles and looks up at the sky once more and sheds a tear, and he nods. Riku: Yeah, we’ll see each other. Real soon. It’s a promise. (End Credits) --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- THE END Well guys, once again, I thank you all for reading my story! I hope that you enjoyed the finale, because I certainly had a thrill writing it! Please comment on what you thought about the ending, and if there are any questions you guys want to make of the story, feel free to ask! Well then, this was a huge honor to write this story, and I hope you all enjoyed! Thank you for making my story the most viewed on KH13!!!! 3 Omega15, Joker and KHLegendIII reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
KHLegendIII 709 Posted March 17, 2013 Amazing finale!!! 1 The Transcendent Key reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Sikota Urinakano 876 Posted March 17, 2013 (edited) Oh no... Partings... But smiles... Promises of reunification... The feels! Edited March 17, 2013 by Sikota Urinakano 1 The Transcendent Key reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Weiss 8,279 Posted March 17, 2013 Amazing ending! The final battle was epic, the adopting Kyle was both sweet and funny and just wow. Amazing job on this story! 1 The Transcendent Key reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
The Transcendent Key 12,109 Posted March 17, 2013 Amazing ending! The final battle was epic, the adopting Kyle was both sweet and funny and just wow. Amazing job on this story! Thanks very much. As you can see, this story is like my love letter to Kingdom Hearts, and from what I can see, you all liked it very much, which is a huge honor for me. ^_^ Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Keyblade101 526 Posted March 17, 2013 That was an AWESOME final chapter! Are you going to make a sequel so Riku can meet Dawn? 1 The Transcendent Key reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
The Transcendent Key 12,109 Posted March 17, 2013 That was an AWESOME final chapter! Are you going to make a sequel so Riku can meet Dawn? You never know. Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
The Transcendent Key 12,109 Posted March 17, 2013 (edited) Hey guys, here's a special treat for all of you. Consider it a little present for being such big fans of my story. Enjoy! Two Hearts, United by Love Thanks to the efforts of the Keyblade Wielders and many others, Radiant Garden was restored after its destruction. In a beautiful chapel, where the light shines down upon all, and all the corridors of the chapel are painted white, everyone is celebrating a joyous occasion, as Terra and Aqua get married. Everyone is with hopeful smiles on their faces, as they see the happy couple embrace each other. Terra is dressed in a fine tuxedo, and Aqua is clad in a beautiful bride's dress. And so King Mickey smiles and stands before them and says: "And so Terra, do you accept Aqua as your loving wife, to have and to hold, in sickness and in health, until death do you part?" Terra nods and says: "Yes, I do." King Mickey then turns his attention towards Aqua and says: "Aqua, do you take Terra as your loving husband, to have and to hold, in sickness and in health, until death do you part?" Aqua smiles and nods: "Yes, I do." King Mickey smiles and says: "Then, by the power vested in me, I pronounce you husband and wife! You many kiss the bride!" And so, with those words, Terra and Aqua kiss each other with love and passion, and everyone cheers for them. It is a wonderful day for them indeed. A Return Soon Anticipated (Start Song Here) The wind blows gently over a giant castle located in what seems to be the middle of nowhere. At the castle's highest tower, Master Eraqus is leaning against the wall, with his arms folded across his chest, as he looks towards the horizon, as if in a pensive mood. Then Maleficent and Pete appear along with Guardian Xehanort. She looks at him and then laughs: "So, that fool Dark Orion was defeated after all. You did splendidly in aiding Terra and his friends. Now, we wait patiently for the right time to appear again." Pete looks at Maleficent, rather confused and he says: "But uh, Maleficent, Kingdom Hearts was sealed by them nitwits! So what are you going to do now?" Maleficent glares at Pete then turns around: "Fear not, you buffoon, for there is always a way to find what I desire", she then laughs and disappears along with Pete and Guardian Xehanort, and Eraqus remains looking to the horizon, as silent as ever. She That Awaits A Fateful Reunion Dawn looks up at the sky, and she sighs of relief, knowing that Riku is safe and sound. Then, she walks towards what looks to be a Citadel. She then walks down a spiraled staircase once inside, and then she enters a chamber, which looks to be like a counsel room. Ten armored individuals surround her, and she looks towards the one with the golden and sapphire armor. She then gets on her knees and says: "Riku and the others have done their mission! They've restored balance to the worlds! Now please, let me go meet him! I need to be with him!" The armored one nods and then says: "You cannot leave this Citadel, for you are a vital part of our counsel. We cannot have you wandering about with him." Dawn protests and shouts: "But it's not fair! Why can't you let me be happy!?" The armored one waves his hand, urging her to get out of his presence: "We are done talking about this. Do not bring up the subject again." Dawn looks down in disbelief, and she sadly says: "Yes, as you wish Elder..." and then she exits the counsel chamber. A Lone Soul, Traveling The Worlds In The Keyblade Graveyard, the wind blows harshly and a sandstorm is brewing up on the horizon. As far as the eye can see, millions and millions of Keyblades are stabbed in the ground, evidence of a great struggle that took place long ago. People called it the first Keyblade War. But any records of that war are now lost. In the silence of the desert, Ethan slowly walks through the many Keyblades, examining the area around him. He takes off his hood and he looks towards the sky, and then smiles and says to himself: "So Ventus, I'm sensing that your keeping my sister safe. Good. For I have work to do." Then, he keeps walking towards the endless horizon, walking for hours and hours. An Outcome Not Quite Expected A cloaked figure stands upon the edge of a cliff, and behind him there is a cave which is considerably big. It's night time and the area is quite and calm. Then, another cloaked figure appears from the cave and then walks towards the cloaked figure standing on the edge of the cliff. "Master, are you sure that your plan will work? You do know that the Keyblade Wielders will do their best to stop us." The cloaked figure then takes his hood off, revealing himself to be none other than...Xylek! He looks at the cloaked figure with a smirk, and then he looks up to the sky and let's out a laugh. He says: "Worry not. Let them think that they've won. For during that time that they are off guard, we can formulate, and plan and regroup, and we can finally take down those fools once and for all." The other cloaked figure then asks: "What will you do Master?" Xylek smiles and looks at him and folds his arms: "It's quite simple really. They thought that Dark Orion was their main target, but what they don't realize is that I am the true mastermind behind all this. Let them think that Dark Orion was their real threat. We shall strike them when the time is right" The cloaked figure nods: "Yes, Master Xylek" Then Xylek looks up to the sky and thinks to himself with a smirk: "You fools may have won the battle...hehehe...but the war has just begun." He laughs and then goes into the cave.... (End Song Here) RECONNECT Kingdom Hearts ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Edited June 2, 2015 by Shigehiko 3 Omega15, Sikota Urinakano and KHLegendIII reacted to this Quote Share this post Link to post Share on other sites